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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

nice part

cont soon
thanks for the pm!


thnx a lot
sure will
yw
Ashna😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy i love your part 1 plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

heyy i love your part 1 plzz contuied soon


thnx a lot! I sure will
Love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
hiiiiiiiiiii
nice starting
waiting to know how will nupur ends up marrying mayank
plzzz update soon
n plzzzzzz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
hey waiting for next part for long time please cont. soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

hiiiiiiiiiii

nice starting
waiting to know how will nupur ends up marrying mayank
plzzz update soon
n plzzzzzz add me to ur pm list


thnx a lot!!
dont worry matyur will meet soon and the way they get together is very suprising!!
i sent u a friend request
thnx again
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharma.nat

hey waiting for next part for long time please cont. soon


i am sorry just had a lot of testing!! so hopefully i will update tomorrow!
srry again
Ashna😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1 B broken Heart

Sorry guys I forgot to mention two most important things:

1) Mayank and Ranvijay hate each other

2) Gunjan and Samrat already know that RV wants the money but are helpless because Nupur is too into him to really take their warnings seriously.

Gunjan's phone rings and she glances at it to see Samrat as the caller. Gunjan says to Nupur that she will be right back and runs to her own room in the big Mansion.

G (answering the phone) - hello Samrat! 😲

S- han Gunjan mujhe neeche milho paanch minute mein😕

G (worried) - sab thik to hai nah Samrat!😕😕

S- nahin! Sab galat hogaya! 😡😡😡

Gunjan hearing that shuts the phone and runs down stairs.

G (trying to catch her breath)- kya hua? S-Samrat?! 😕😕😕

She looks at him and sees Samrat there frozen, but tears are forming in his eyes.

G (worried) T-Tum kuch kyu nahi bol rahe?! 😲

S (using all his strength so try and talk)- Ranvijay..

'' Ranvijay🤢🤢🤢

G (her face turning pale)- kya hua use???!!! 😲

S- W-Wo missing hai!!!!!!!!!!😭

Samrat says that with tears in his eyes😭😭 and he looks up at Gunjan. Gunjan is shocked😲😲😲, she is unable to comprehend anything.

S (grabbing gunjan's shoulders,looking into her eyes and letting a few tears slip)- Gunjan?!😭 Gunjan!! Tum thik to ho??!!😭 (More worried) tum kuch kyu nahin ke rahi ho?????!!!!!!!!!! Gunjan!!!!!!!!!!!!! Answer me god damit!!!!!!!😕

G(coming out of the shock, starts crying and out of nowhere grabs Samrat into a hug)Nupur Nupur usse kya kaho mein???!!! Mein kya-😭

S (cutting her off and holds her at arm distance and looks into her eyes) - Gunjan! Relax! Hum kuch sochte hai ok? (He tries to say it in a tone where it sounds as if it is no big deal.)😊

Just then Samrat's phone rings Samrat and Gunjan reluctantly let go of each other and glance at the screen. The name on the screen is none other than Ranvijay's. They share a shocked look😲😲😲 and Samrat hesitantly answers the phone. Gunjan indicates him to put the phone on speaker and he does.

S- Hello? Tu kaha hain?? Kyu gaha tha?? Kab araha hai?? Tu thik to hai na Ranvijay??? (He says this all in one breathe)😡

RV (laughing) - wow!!! Hold on a sec bro (he literally spits out the word bro as if it were poisonous)😡😡 itne sare questions (he says this with a smirk in his voice😈😈) meine isliye phone kiya tha kyunki meine shaadi ke bare mein apna mind change karliya😈😈

Samrat and gunjan share a blanl and scared look

S- T-Tumara kya matlab hai ??!!😡 ( he knows what he meant, but wants to confirm it)

RV- bro bro bro tum bhi na 😡😈( he says with a disapproval in his voice) sidhi sadhi baat apki samjh mein nahi ati??!! 😡😡( he says with annoyance) ok fu=ine let me make it simpler... mein...Nupur... se... nahi ...Shaadi ... karna...chata ...aur...mein ....shaadi...pe.. nahin...aunga!! do you get it??!! 😡anyways mere pas in sab bakwas ke liye time nahi hai so bye😡😡.

RV hangs up the phone. Samrst and Gunjan stay still for a moment in shock and anger😡. Then they glance at each other and gunjan starts to cry😭😭😭.

Seeing her cry like that emotions over take him and he wraps Gunjan in a hug. In the hug he tries to show her how much he loves her and cares for her and that he will always be there by her side.😳

Gunjan could feel his love, care, concern, and his protectiveness toward her in that hug. She smiles because she is happy that she has him as her life partner, but she still cries because her sister's life is ruined.😭

Just then Mayank walks in wearing a suit but has a bag in his clothes that contain clothes for the wedding.

He and Samrat were to stay there and help manage the work. Mayank had work so he said he would come later.

M(smiling and looking at them coughs)😃😃😃- ummm sorry apke romance ko disturb karne ke liye lakin humhe tyaariyan nahi shuru karni chayian??!😳

Samrat an Gunjan break out of the hug quickly😳😳😳 and look at Mayank standing there then at each other.

S- Look Mayank there is a problem 😕😕😕( Samrat starts with hesitation)

Mayank's smile slowly turns into a frown then his eyebrows fury, his eyes narrow and he is scowling.😡

Mayank can't believe what he just heard...

-thanks that is it for now!! And I would like to apologize for not updating sooner. We just had a lot of tests so I didn't get time

Sorry and love lots

Ashna😳

Edited by tvgirl21 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowowow ireally love your part 1A & 1B plzz contuied soon

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