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Piya Roy

@Piya_2009

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Hey Muskan

Amazing OS ....loved every bit of it..

This is what we want to see in d serial....

Edited by Piya_2009 - 15 years ago

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muskan19

@muskan19

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

Continued......

Mayank and Nupur are on terrace.....

M - ma se baat nahi hui Nupur....woh to jaanti bhi nahi ki hamari shaadi ho gayi hai.

N - agar unhone bhi bauji ki tarah..........

M - nahi nupur ......ma mujhse naraaz ho sakti hai par mera saath hamesha dengi.....mujhe poora vishwas hai. Aur fir bauji mujhe galat samajhte hain.....woh mujhe nahi jaante aur jitna mere baare mein jaante hain woh sahi nahi hai isliye naraaz hain. Ma tumhe jaanti bhi hai aur tumhe pasand bhi karti hain. Woh hamari majboori zaroor samjhengi. Is samay mera ma se baat karna bahot zaroori hai.
Mayank calls his mom and tells her everything that happened. After he keeps the phone down....

N - kya hua mayank aunty ne kya kaha....

M - Jo bhi hua usse ma khush to nahi hai Nupur lekin unhone kaha woh yahan aa kar bauji se baat karengi. Aur tumhe bahot saara pyar diya hai....

N - (takes a deep breath) Thank god Mayank..... ki aunty hamare saath hain aur shayad woh bauji ko bhi hamari baat samjha paayein.

M - Haan Nupur I hope ki sab theek ho jaaye....

They both sit quietly on the swing kept there........ feeling much relaxed. She rests her head on his chests and comfortably leans on him with her feet up on swing . He caresses her hair. They both just sit quite for few minutes. Then suddenly Mayank breaks the silence......

M- (In a little angry tone) tum shaadi ke immediately baad itna badal jaogi ye maine socha bhi nahi tha......

N - (sits up immediately worried)......kya hua mayank maine kya kiya.....

M - tum poore 2 minute se chup ho......tum theek to ho na Nupur....

And they both burst out laughing.

M - Nupur

N - Haan Mayank

M - Mujhe bhook lagi hai....

N - Mayank tumhe pata hai na mujhe khana banana nahi aata....

M - (laughs) jaanta hun.....tumhe bhi bhook lagi hogi chalo main kuch banata hoon.

They both go down to the kitchen. Benji, Diya, Gunjan and uday had already left and Sam had slept.
They both walk into the kitchen. Mayank picks nupur up and makes her sit on the countertop.

M - Ab batayiye Mrs. sharma kya khayengi aap....

N - Jo bhi aap khilayenge Mr.Sharma....

He smiles and opens up the fridge. He then starts making sandwiches standing right next to where she was sitting while she watches him. After a min. she leans a little and gives him a kiss on his cheek. Bread falls from his hand and he looks at her surprised.

N - Kya? aise kya dekh rahe ho .....ye bhi to mera haq hai......

And they both laugh.....remembering their sweet romantic moments in the library....
Then Mayank comes very close to her....and says...." Theek hai karo...."
Nupur smiles and goes close to his cheek almost kissing but then says in his ear....."pehle sandwitch" .....jumps down and is about to go when he pulls her back to him.

M - He holds her close to him and says......." madam agar aapko sandwiches khane hain to chef ko compensation to dena hoga"
Nupur smiles and kisses him on cheek again.....

M - hmmm.... not enough!

N - Mayank tum bhi na.....sirf sandwiches bana rahe ho puri baraat ka khana nahi......itna hi milega. Ab chodo mujhe.

M - Nupur jab tum nahi chahti ki main tumhe chodu to hamesha chodne ko bolti kyon ho.....
She blushes....

N - (she touches his cheek and says) pati dev aapki zimmedaari bhooki hai.....ya sirf pyar se kaam chalana padega.....

Mayank laughs and gets back to making sandwiches.

Edited by muskan19 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

awwwwwwwwwww that was adorable scene hun!

Loved it

x x

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Mou.

@Mou.

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#84

muski...u r getting multi-talented yaar.....🤗
what a cute OS!!!!!!!!! me loved it.....aisa kitchen romance i wanna c in mjht........but right now which seems impossible as MN r staying in classroom , where there is no kitchen...........
i just loved the 'Haq Hai".dialogue u used....haye sooooooo cute both of them........
thanks muski..lets hope MN shift to a house soon & we get a cute scene like this.

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tannvi

@Badtameez_Dil

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#85

muski that was sooooooo adorableeeeeeee haaye aapki zimmedaari bhooki hai

lolzzzzz shoooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeee

i loveddddd it tune mayu se pehle hi kaam karwane shuru kar diya apna os mein

aage kya hoga uska if this came up in real bechare khaane hi banta reh jayge

but still it was awesummmmm

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muskan19

@muskan19

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Posted: 15 years ago

#86

Thanks Ansh, Mou and Tanvi.. 🤗

@ Ansh ....thanks ....i'm glad u liked it!!!!

@ Mou - guess not muti-talented just inspired......😆 Thanks!!!

@ Tanvi....😆 what else....she doesn't know how to cook to hone to yahi waala hai....but i sort of like it this way it's cute and romantic......lol

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tannvi

@Badtameez_Dil

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

muski cute & romantic toh bahut hai par .......shaadi ki baad ladki pehle choka mein jati hai tune mayu ko bhej diya ...........

lol woh hi shaadi ke raat hi ........kya mindblowinggggg idea hai

i loveddd ur way😉

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muskan19

@muskan19

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Posted: 15 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: loving_bird
muski cute & romantic toh bahut hai par .......shaadi ki baad ladki pehle choka mein jati hai tune mayu ko bhej diya ...........

lol woh hi shaadi ke raat hi ........kya mindblowinggggg idea hai

i loveddd ur way😉

kaunsa inka apna ghar hai.....us kitchen mein gunjan pehle jaayegi....aur usko khana bhi banana aata hai.....sam ki kitchen hai na 😆.....so doesn't matter.....inke apne ghar mein nupur ko bhej doongi....ok....😆

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Mou.

@Mou.

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#89

nehi.nupur kiu khana banayenge??????? usse nehi aata na! abhi to Mayu use sikhayenge!!!!!😍
acha kia jo Mayu ko khana banane dia.......unique couple start their life in unique way!!!!!!!!

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Archana

@a-little-hope

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#90

Lovely OS Muskan.....what a cute and romantic scene.... I know you are good at writing Mayank's side...but this time you wrote good from Nupur's side too.... Nupur's dialogues were totally funny like Nupur... and chef ka compensation part....totally Mayank style... aapki jimmedari bhookhi hai.....LOL.... the whole conversation was totally MN.... Shaadi ke baad tum itni badal jaogi...poore 2 minute tak chup thi....that was hilarious... loved how MN are getting slowly relaxed from the tensed situation of their sudden marriage.... wonderful conversation.....lovely OS...

please continue soon.....

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