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Hina

@samratrocks

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

awesoooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeee

well just loved it!! do continue and write more and more..love ur imagination..and lovely writing skills dear!!

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Rafa.LunaPotter

@Rafa.LunaPotter

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Muskiii...it was excellent!

Loved it :))

Keep writing more...:))

Love

Aranya

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

hey Muskan,

its awesome

keep writing more nd more

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

hey musky,

awwwwwwwwww that was sooooo sweet and sooo MN. I loved it and i loveddddddd how you portrayed the growth in nupur's character though mayank made it sound funny to make her feel lighter but he knows that she has become more strong and mature.

But he might not be appreciating the fact that she is more strong now as she knows she has mayank with her so she need not worry, don't know where am i going in here musky and if you wanted to even explore this aspect but this is how i felt musky, impactful writeup and i simplyyyyyyyyy loveddddddddddddd it. please write more na musky.

love you loadsssssssssssss.

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lilithblack

@lilithblack

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

supurb.........................too good

plz write more!!!!!!!

😃 u should be part of mjht creatives

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ZARA

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Hey loved ur OS

It was awesum

Plz add me to ur pm list

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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muskan19

@muskan19

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Thankyou very much guys....... 🤗

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Mayank and Nupur had settled down perfectly in their new house................and was juggling between married and college life.....................

One day as Mayank was working late, checking on sme work for the new prof. ...........Nupur decided to wait for him.............Mayank didnt want to Nupur to wait, as she had been doing lots lately and he was afraid she will fall sick......and they were arguing...........

Mayank - Nupur, plz dekho tum subah jaldi uthti ho, aur phir ghar ka saara kaam, college..............to tum ghar ja ke aaram karo, mein aa jaunga.............

Nupur - Mayank, tum bhi to uthte ho jaldi, aur phir college ka kaam , padhai............to agar tum kar sakte ho to main bhi.........

Mayank - Nupur, har chiz mein meri barabari karna zaroori hai...........

Nupur - Haan, morena mein tai kehti thi, ki patni ko pati ke padchihno pe chalna chahiye...........to main wahi kar rahi hun......

Mayank - acha?...........aur ye nahi kehti thi ki patni ko pati ki baat manni chahiye...............

Nupur - kehti thi shayad, par mujhe yaad nahi.........

Mayank "with a sigh" - very smart Nupur..........dekho main aakhri baar keh raha hun..........tum jao...........college mein bhi koi nahin hai, mein tumhe akela nahin chod sakta..........

Nupur "full on nautanki"- By god, Mayank, ghar pe akela chod sakte ho..........socho agar bhoot aa gaya to...........

Mayank "smiling"- To tumhari baatein sunkar bhaag jayega.............

Nupur - Mayank..........tum tum........jao mein tumse baat nahin karti......and acts upset..........

Mayank smiles - 'acha hai, baat mat karo, aur ghar jao........., Nupur plz.........samjho

Nupur - "Mayank tum samjho na, dekho mein tumhara wait karungi to do fayde hain...........pehla ki hamara ek taraf ka fare bach jayega...........

Mayank.with a sadu face..........- aur doosra..................

Nupur, smiling and holding his hands...........- "tumhe ghar jate waqt apni beautiful wife ki company mil jayegi......."

He smiles back at her and nods his head saying........"tumse jitna mushkil hai............, thik hai tum wait karo, par libraray mein hi rehna........."

Nupur smiles and say - thik hai mere aaka............

and Mayank smiles,touches her cheeks and walks off..............and she walks towards library, with a smile on her face............

Edited by annie07 - 15 years ago

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Mou.

@Mou.

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

Annie........ur chotu OS to bada cute hai! i loved it...😃....
how much time it will take to show such small & sweet scene for MN? but no, cvs will give us loooong scene of MN with all other gang present there..........newly married couple deserve some time alone & sweet things like this should happen with them........but whose listening to us?