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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Sanoooooo shanoooooooooo wanoooooooooooooooo 🤗 😆
Oops sorry for the delay!! I've been a bit busy recently!!
Beautiful update!! 😳 😛 😃 ⭐️ 👏
Aww such a sweet surprise!!! 😳
Haye oh so romantic!! 😍
Wow what a kool dad!! He told nupur tu go tu mayank and have fun?!! Woah!! 😉
Aww and i love the title tuu!! 😃 It's all so sweet and romantic...a perfect girl's dream!! 😍
Well Done girlie!! 👏
Keep writing! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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The Three Musketeers

part 1!


We had been friends-- no wait best friends, from grade 3 in North Hamiltion Elementary School.I remember the first day we met, i was afraid of catching cuties so i threw paint on them, yes i'm talking about me (nupur), mayank, and samrat. We the three musketeers as we were named by our teacher -- Mrs, Helen!. She had given me a long lecture on respect, after i had thrown the paint, asking me to apologize to the guys, but me being Nupur, my ego stood between, but having no choice at that age, I agreed. That day was the union of three friends and a friendship that would last a life time ---, or atleast i had thought so.


As we got older and reached middle school our friendship strength, we became more and more involved in each others lives, that is not to say that we did not have other friends we did, but for me, samrat and mayank stood before anyone.If i got hurt mayank and samrat would chide me with long lectures that i would be half asleep in, and if they did not do there homework, they would in for a "NUPUR BUSHAN NAUTANKI", or that is what samrat liked to call it. I guess we had formed such a strong bond that these little things never mattered.Our whole school was amazed by our friendship and i don't know somewhere i guess we felt proud too!.Though we were quite a handful too, when we combined our minds, our pranks begin from a slip on the banana peel to drawing a funny picture of our teacher, " Mr, Smith", the most hated teacher in our school, and in our story he played the role of a villain, because he would never let us sit together.Though there were other teachers we loved like, " Ms, Suhana", or mayank would say, " Ms, cutie", i didn't know why but his nick name for the teacher bugged me, not to say that the teacher was not nice to me - she was oh? she was hell of a nice teacher, but her favoritism towards mayank would bug, and samrat always chided me for feeling like that!.

Then came high school, which seemed like a big challenge for us, because we had different interest, different priorities, and different friends. It was not simple like middle school, oh no it was way more complicated, the classes,the teachers, the friends, and mostly the time, we would get less and less time to spend with each other.We missed each other alott, or atleast i did, because i would always wait for either to come oline or wait by my locker, but as always my eyes would be sad after seeing neither of them.Then came the dreadful day, " mayank sharma got a girlfriend", it was like he was a totally new person, with new image, while samrat stayed truthful to himself, mayank seemed to be a new person, a person i did not know at all. As mayank spended most time with his girlfriend, " Lina Chatterji", i had samrat,who would always be my side when ever i needed him, though he noticed the change in mayank he would never say anything about it.I would always see him smiling and laughing with her, i didn't know why but i felt jealousy, like, it was only my right to be the one to hold his hand. I guess i had always dreamed, that mayank would one day realize my feelings, but he never did!.

Though samrat saw the change in me, my constant nagging about mayank and lina, he could see i was jealous,and he felt bad.Then one day everything changed, when i saw him so close lina, i was so close to crying and shouting at him, but saving myself from the humiliation, i ran away but mayank caught me and running behind me, he saw me run into samrats arm, - and did i feel safe there!.Mayank watched but he did not dare anything, he left with out a word, and then we were back to out rountines the old one, where mayank would be with lina and i would be with samrat.

" tu smahjta kya hai apne aap ko", said mayank angrily as he grabbed samrats collar, i watched in fear, as to what they had become, from the best friends who needed to talk to each other before going to sleep, to enemies who hated the sight of each other. I asked samrat to stay calm and not to loose his temper, " sammy chill kar, and mayan....", and before i could finish my sentence, " SLAP", went on my face, and the world froze, as i looked over i saw the same " lina chatterji", i hated the most in this world!. While samrat was enraged by her act, mayank seemed confused, but soon his confusion was turned into hatered for me and samrat!. That was the day we the " THREE MUSKETEERS", broke apart officially, and i guess somewhere i blamed myself for it, but samrat was always there rigth by my side, with a cheerful smile never letting me be sad.


okay guys there is a part 2 to this one shot.........one a part no other parts kkk

pleasee doo commment!!!!!😛

Also nikkzz ur OS will be posted rite after this one is done..kkkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!

I just started writing it!!!!!!!😛

-Sanam-

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Awesome! It was amazing. Mayank, Samrat, and Nupur. But where's Gunjan?

Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
its great plz cont soon.
r u gonna cont it today or tmrw?
plz pm me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Awesome! It was amazing. Mayank, Samrat, and Nupur. But where's Gunjan?


thanxzzz nikki yaar its a one shot.no gunjan in this one..only about mayank sammy and nupur😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Premeer_01

its great plz cont soon.
r u gonna cont it today or tmrw?
plz pm me.


hmm prorbably tommorrow
and yea sure
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
true but now samrat also need a girlfriend and nupur need a boyfriend coz mayank as all ready girlfriend.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Shafoo

true but now samrat also need a girlfriend and nupur need a boyfriend coz mayank as all ready girlfriend.


hmm i think u r not getting the story , it s a one shot,..........its more about feelings then about gf or bf
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
hey sanam..this was one of the best i've read yaar..!..esp bcuz its not abt d couples..
SaNu-Mayank were really cute in this..!..the 3 muskeeters..hw cute.but m sure Nupur had some feelings 4 Mayank!
n evrytyn changed jus bcuz of lina..hw sad..i hate it wen dis type of tyn breaks frndship..!..
bt m glad SaNu were always together..n never left each other..!..dey were true frndz..
but then how can lina slap nupur?!..ugh she shud be guilty..!
thnx 4 d PM
do write more
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey sanam..this was one of the best i've read yaar..!..esp bcuz its not abt d couples..

SaNu-Mayank were really cute in this..!..the 3 muskeeters..hw cute.but m sure Nupur had some feelings 4 Mayank!
n evrytyn changed jus bcuz of lina..hw sad..i hate it wen dis type of tyn breaks frndship..!..
bt m glad SaNu were always together..n never left each other..!..dey were true frndz..
but then how can lina slap nupur?!..ugh she shud be guilty..!
thnx 4 d PM
do write more
-aish


finaly some1 who understands me...this story is not about couples...but more soo about friendship...and rough times u face through it
thanxzz aish for understanding!!!!!!!😳

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