'The Ghost and Mrs.Khanna...epilogue/pg103,Dec.2

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ritu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

pallavi Enjoyed this part .quite scary.

feeling bad for Kripa .

i don't think Angad is going to believe on these supernatural powers so soon .

A Red Rose...

Do you know how much I love you?
I love you more than the heaven,
more than the stars.
Your beauty is greater than one thousand red roses.

And I want to thank you
for bringing the splendor of a
garden full of roses to my life.

When you're near I forget all my strife...

You changed my life for the better,
and I treasure you
and our love.
I truly believe you
were sent to me from above.
I know it's not nearly enough,
but here are one hundred and four roses for you.
In celebration of our love.

Wherever you go;
No matter what you do,
Remember that I love you!

thanks for pm.

love

ritu

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Jannat

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Awesome Part Api

AK are soo cute. Their very hot and romantic

Angad is too logical and totally dismissing those eerie noises.

I hope Kripa is safe in this gigantic house and those moaning noises is making me jump form my seat

Jannat

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Vijaya

@vallanki

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Hmm.. intensed story...eager to know the story from the fisher man...will kripa hear any useful story??

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pallavi25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: nadz_J
 No way im nothing close to u man, love the way you explain situaions etc its sooo good... i read few parts of the haunting of kripa but then couldnt complete i need get back to it, i really wanna knw what happened next, btw is it completed??

Awww thanks nadz! Ur too kind! 😳
Yes, Haunting of Ms Kripa was completed. U can search on google with the complete title and u will find the link. 😃

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pallavi25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: nadz_J
<div align="center">Hey pallavi, finally managed to start reading😆😆 okay here goes my lamba lamba comments😆😆 Part 1: OMG i sooo love AK😳😳 loved how you explained there marriage and love and then kripa ataring at the hunk😳😳 awww i soo love them more😳 loved how they were excited to move in to the new house, that guy who gave them directions was also scared means he knew something😕😕 and then that howard dude was probably scared to come alone and waited by some alley so when they are they he can join them😆😆me too i didnt like this howard dude, selling them a house that was haunted luving it😡😡 but thats the story😉😳 i luved how angad thought of future kids😳 so sweet😳 awww i totally loved the "dole sholey"😳😳 and the kisshy😳😳 awww and then when he was like "raat ko vasool karloong"☺️ uh oh the smell😕 the start of the haunting😕 oh no she heard a moaning sound it was sending shivers down my body tooMindblowing part 👏 Part 2: Lolz i was wondering why the ghost was pulling her😆😆 but yeh to angad nikla😆😆 loved how he teased and she stared and admired him and then the bikini bit😳😳 and her muttering "raat ko sonay nahi deta"😆😆 loved how he troubled her at the beach, she cudnt swim so he carried her😳😳 soooo cute and then they played, but again kripz saw it wonder why angad cant see it😕loved the paratha making😳😳 shooo cute😳 and everything, his care, her fright😳 i hope she will be able to live here lovely part 👏 Part 3: Awww loved kripa shopping and then sitting by the beachside but denying that she was scared😆😆 finally cameras lag gaye but that wont help Gosh that smell i guess the ghost got sumthing to do with the kitchen thats why kripa is seeing it wow angad also heard it😛 cool and then nuthing on camera😕 obviously ghost cant be caught on camera😕😕 Angad ki water pipes me kaafi knowledge hai😆😆 he believes its the pipes but kripz knws there is sumthing wrong good girl kripa find out the mystery👍🏼 awww angad is sooo cute he made breakfast for her😳😳 luv him! Aww kool now kripa is off to get the mystery solved😉 im so happy for that😊 And there finally i read all three parts😆😆 now i can follow the story peacefully😆😆 OMG all i can say is you are too good pallavi, love your writing your explanations of scenes wow! love it love it and love it more font> 

Thanks nadz! 😃
Ur right abt the store guy and Howard. All of them know the house is haunted, thats why Howard was waiting nearby. 😆 That rat is leasing the house to unknowing desi couple but too afraid to go in by himself. 😆
I love naughty and cute AK too! Being a honeymoon couple they will romance naa... 😳
And ur right, security cameras wont help since a spirit cant be captured on film mostly.

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pallavi25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: monikaseth
👏Awesome , Mind Blowing , Superb & Fantastic .] Thank You For Pm & This part . Oh so now angad also heard tease crying voice , kripa very well sure now there is some thing in this house , and she is ready to find out cool , hope she got some clue , . Awesome ,hot and romantic angad so sweet he is very carrying hubby , he can make her fears clam but what is going next waiting dear pallavi 👏 Update Soon Ab Wait Nahi Hoga😆 Thank You For SO Romantic Angad 👏

Thanks monu! 😃
Kripa has an open mind, Angad is too logical and hes in denial too. 😆 He thinks it wont be macho to believe in ghosts. 😉

Originally posted by: johnangad
poor kripa! da ghost seems to be tageting her mainly..angad is such a jaaan!

Theres a reason why the spirit is targeting Kripa....but Angad can also hear the sounds but he wont accept its haunted.

Originally posted by: spvd
wow fantastic dear................when i read ur first two lines confess n warning i really braved myself but glad this time i didnt get frightened but dunno aage kya hoga...................but twas thrilling and very interesting...........poor kripa she couldnt tell angad that shes really scared even to go inside the house without him.............every person who hears about that place very mysteriously reply them....................the cabbie scared her with his good luck wish...................but angad too heard the sounds this time..............when kripa says something in the future he might understand to some extent..........angad is very sweet in this ff.........he has his own ways to make her forget everything but his love and care................cant wait for the next part..............cont veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy soon dear...............

Thanks Deepa!
Im glad u didnt find it too scary but I just wanted to warn u all so everybody knows what to expect. 😆 Angad is sweet and understanding hubby now but will he believe all her fears? Men can be quite obtuse sometimes.

pallavi

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pallavi25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: AKForever
hey Pallavi great part... continue soon... thanks for the pm..

Thanks AKForever! 😃

Originally posted by: ShelDev
Hey Pallavi:
Wow that was some update....thanks for the warning !! I was spooked myself after reading this part....

Whoa....I'd be freaked out living in a place like that.....geez that's scary....I wonder what's the past behind these strange things......

AK are awesome in this...I love the little romance between them & then boom the horror as well....😆...

Awesome dear....pls pls continue soon........eagerly awaiting next update....

Shel

Thanks Shel!
I would run away the next day from such a place but they have leased it for 6 months and Angad doesnt believe in ghosts. this story is a mix of romance and horror... 😉 its a romantic supernatural thriller.

Originally posted by: sweet_mittal
hey di awesome and great part

love the romance b/w AK but it was kind of scary

i hope somebody comes to stay with them as i feel sorry for kripa she is getting scared

i hope angad also find out all the truth soon

i hope kripa find out more info about the house from the town

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal

Thanks sweetie!
AK dont have relatives in NY. Who will stay with Kripa? All newlywed couples who move here have to live by themselves like AK. they have to face everything alone. kripa will find out the history of the house soon.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
fantastic part di
it was inded scary.

how could one sleep after that?

Thanks megha!
Kripa couldnt sleep after that but Angad did becuz he had a logical explanation for the sounds. 😆

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pallavi25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: QueenHinna12
lol in uni we learnt about phoolan devi .. indiaz bandit queen:P why is kripa going home alone??? she shudve waited for angad or gone after angad was homee why cnt the taxi driver tell her the truth??? omggg the windows open...hope nothing got stolen or went missing:O is this really angad or a ghost??:P does the security person know the house is haunted??? hahaha they dont want cameras in their bedroom:P theres no point of this whole security thing coz they wont see ghosts!!! awww pallu i love this ff i really missed ur romantic ffs after bhalobasha:D i think theres 2 diff spirits...one a woman n one a man...maybe husband n wife? maybe wife died in the kitchen...n maybe the husband fell out the bedroom window...suicide or something? just a wild guess lol~:p aaahhh this is making me hungry:p angad despo again:P:P howcomes kripa always hears this n angad doesnt wake up??? oh i think theres 3 ghosts...one must b the kidP: yayy for the first time angad heard it too:P i dont like the howard guy:@ yeh angad gaaliyan bohat deta hai:P i dunt understand how da security system works...wont it detect if angad n kripa walk by??? i dunt think the fish owner will tell her or even if he does angad wont believeee awesome part loved it make the next one scarier please :D

Thanks Hinnu!
yeah thats right phoolan devi was bandit queen. 😆
Security company guy doesnt know abt the house, hes from out of town, only Bayside ppl know abt the house. nobody wants to tell the desi couple the truth, they want them to find out for themselves. ur right the staircase camera wont catch any ghosts. 😆
theres certainly a husband and wife invloved here but we will know in part 5 and 6. Kripa is a light sleeper, Angad sleeps heavily after work.
security system alerts only when someone tries to break in, it wont go off when Kripa walks around inside, only if someone tries to open the doors or windows.
Oh God! U still want it scarier? Dont worry, it will be progressively scary .... 😆
yahan toh mujhey update likhtey waqt darr lagney lagaa hai. 😆

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#109

hey pallavi..just read ur fic..its amazing! ..

AK are newly married..and they're here for their honeymoon..hw cute..Angad asked the fish shack guy about the address and he gave him an odd reply..how strange!

So they reached the house and were pretty impressed wid it..so they took it!..hmm okay..but that Howard guy did seem in a hurry to give it off...

They both like the house and what can be better than that for their honeymoon?!..they made love..that was cute..i loved all their cute lil moments..

Angad wanted to go swimming in the morning..lol..but she dusnt noe how to swim?..aww..n he did scare her..really!..but then they had fun on the beach ;)..but who was that face that she saw?..

she had a shower with a him, cute..the bedroom windows were fluttering that time..but they did'nt notice?..

They brought blinds too..good..i hope Kripa is a bit less scared..she gets really scared when he goes to office..!

She heard strange noises and woke up Angad for that..but then when he went no1 was der..

That house is surely freaky...

n she went shopping..but the taxi driver seemed reluctant 2 go there..i wonder why...

Kripa saw the blinds were'nt there..so sat on the beach instead..tat was a gud idea..n then Angad came..n they had tea together..

they got the security system installed but i don thnk that will help...they again made love..hot!

Kripa heard that same noise and footsteps too!..omg that sure is scary..but again no1 was there..but atleast dis time Angad heard it..but he dismissed it as a pump..god.

m glad Kripa is gonna find out about this..i hope she gets to know something..

n thank god i did'nt read this at d night..but still m alone now..and sorta scared too..

update soon

-aish

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pallavi25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1
Aww, Angad and Kripa are just too sweet!! I totally love their...Love.. LOL

That was really creepy becuz im alone in my room so it creeped the hell out of me. Your awesome at thiese stories di.

Thank God!! Finally Kripa is going to find out the mystery. I wanna wanna wanna know!! LOL. Im being whiny today/ LOL

Update soon and dont forget to PM me!! Thanks for the PM by the way.

Love,

~JOT~

Thanks Jot and ur welcome! 😃
Im getting scared writing this story too, because I have to imagine the whole thing while writing it.
😆 Kripa will find out the history of that house soon.

Originally posted by: riddhzie
hey pallavi,
that was damn scary.i mean the way u have describes the sounds and the faces etc.is scaring me till the extent.and waiting for the mystery to release.pls update soon.sorry for late reply anf thax for the pm.

luv

oochita

Thanks riddhzie! Mystery will deepen with every part. Im inspired by "Grudge" and other haunted house movies.

Originally posted by: angadkripa_fan

thanks pallavi👏.... luv this part^^angad is soo carring &romantic he made breakfast for kripa

and kripa is so scared&she want to resolve this mystery

go detective kripa&angad beleive her and help her👍🏼

Thanks angadkripa!
Angad is definitely a caring and loving hubby now. Will he change later?
Kripa is already terrified, will he believe her fears?