'The Ghost and Mrs.Khanna...epilogue/pg103,Dec.2 - Page 13

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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG di this time u scared me unlike before.....................the last part was really very very scary.................i better dont read ur updates at night else main wahi behosh hojaungi....................that house is really haunted.................kripa somewhat came to know that and peggy was somewhat helpful..............angad is really very sweet...........he shouted at her when he couldnt get her on the home phone and when gary was checking kripa he got tensed and all protective............very nice.........will u include how they met and fell in love and got married too or just only continue with the present????????????it will be romantic without the ghost for once.......that black water and the song really got my nerves this time............kripa is now dead scared..........liked angad's wicked talk.............and by the way in ur replies u have said that angad is caring and loving now but will he change later and problems might come between them is it so?????????????????dunno what angad's reaction is gonna be now seeing kripa like that....................ohh cant wait to read the next part...................cont very soon dear...................
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Posted: 15 years ago
😛😛Awesome , Mind Blowing Pallavi , mein raat ko kabhi nahi read karne wali yeh ff 😆

I am happy at lest some one is there to help her , angad ka gussa jayaz hai bechara door baitha hai .last part kya woh aatma kripa ke andar enter kar gaye 😭 ya karipa ne kuch aisa dekha jo ussko hila gaya please kuch klue jaroor dena warna mera bhoot tum ko tang karega😆
I hope angad belives kripa aur unke beech koi problem na aaye 😭

thank you for update & pm looking for next update👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey pallavi..scary part..
Kripa got no info from the fish shack owner..but his wife came running after her..tat was sweet..n she also told her the tales about the haunted house..wow!..i hope Kripa finds Mrs.Reed soon..
so Angad sent a plumber..hmm..but then Kripa did'nt wanna return..so she waited for him 2 come..
n he was not a local plumber..no wonder he came there!..n he thought there was ntn wrong..tat was pretty obvious..but then he was checkin her out..tats weird..what were his intentions really?..n they found black water?!..tats totaly weird..!..
the sweet-nothings AK were whispering in the phone was sweet..n Angad got so concerned about her..aww..so sweet..
she heard an alarm?..n when she went to the room..she heard a lady singing when the radio was OFF?!..omg tat is freaky!..thank god she ran away from there..!..n Angad found her too..but what will she say?
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
ah u updated.....
Seriously, this part gave me the creeps!😉
So Kripa learnt a bit abt the the mysterious occurings & is on her way 2 unravel it completely......way 2 go kripa!
aww!Peggy's so sweet!
OMG!the radio was possessed!the ghost didn't even spare the radio!
i kinda freaked out at the end of part.......hmm......maybe that lady who died was a singer/related 2 music[jus a guess😊]
i hope kripa finds Mrs.Reed soon.....is angad gonna believe her if she narrates her experiences?🤔
awesome update!di, u really gotta think of publishing ur works u kno.....
Edited by bhavana2692 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
fab part di
u scared me
i dont think angad would believe kripa.
eagerly waitin for ur next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Pallavi:
Whoa that was an awesome update.....
The last bit was surely freaky😲......"She" was in the room with Kripa....wow....geez that freaked me out.....awesome though....
Now that Kripa knows the house is haunted, I don't think she will ever be able to sleep or be in peace...I do hope this does not affect AK's relantionship....
Awww....Angad is such a caring husband & a naughty one too.....😉😳......too cute...
Thanks for the PM....Hope your new job is going well....Pls pls pls continue soon...
BTW...when are you planning to start Deception?? Eagerly awaiting.....
Great update....
Thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
Pallavi,

I loved the concept, it is sooooooooooo awsome. The story is giving me creeps. Please continue soon. Am waitng for mystery to unfold.

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey great part.. continue soon..

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy pallu have u seen the movie Paranormal Activity? I loved it!!! even though i didnt find it scary really, i was laughing haha i only got scared at the end! u shud watch it coz ts very evry similar to this ff and it might give u some ideas!:P
why did u change the name of the house???:O
and howcomez angad isnt suspicious that there could be something wrong with the house...since its his dream house...n no1 wanted to live there...there must b some reason for it
why doesnt any1 wanna tell AK that its haunted? why dont they help them?
why does kripa wanna go to the beach?
and why was the woman sweating:O i wonder why frankie wont help kripa and why he told her not to go to the beach!
kreeeepa🤣
how did people manage to live there for 3 months :|
im sure ak will manage longer...maybe:P
break the record lol:P
i think this ghost maybe only haunts women to avenger her death?
i hate that howard guy:@
kripa is sooo brace still going inside the house after knowing everything!!!
omgggg black water:O:O maybe its coke:P
pooor kripa maybe she shudnt have asked people for info now shes even more scared:(
omg how can she stay in the house alone after knowing its haunted:O:O
wow this ghost sounds romantic:P
please cont sooon!!!! and start updating more often:(
btw can u recommend me anysupernatural novels? i fele like reading more scary stuff:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg..loved ur fan fic..cont soon..

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