YOU INSIDE ME(AR) 34 or last pt updated - Page 41

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janu1610 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heaven plz AR ko is janam mein b itni saza mat do .😭Yaar they had already suffered a lot .😲Not again ...plz let them be together.Seriously my eyes r still moist .I can.t bear tears in his eyes.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Simple words cannot convey
All the love that I hold for you
More brilliant than any sunset
Sweeter than the morning's dew

You are each beat of my heart
Every single breath that I take
The last thought in the darkness
The very first when light awakes

You are my life and essence
Together we'll face each trial
Walking the path God has chosen
Embracing each blessing and mile

This love for you surrounds me
Within its beauty I often hide
The very moment I first held you
Forever in my heart you will reside

thanks for pm.

love

ritu



Edited by janu1610 - 15 years ago
searchoffriends thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
you knew what you have taken my peacefull sleep here
MUJHE NEXT PART MEIN ARMAAN AND RIDDHIMA SAATH CHAHIYYE , AT ANY COST , I DON'T CARE , TU US SHAAN KA MURDER KARRENGEE , YAA AARSHIII KE MANAGERS KAA OK
I WANT ARMAAN AND RIDDHIMA TOGETHER IN NEXT PART
kyonki i can't cry anymore reading this , this is actually giving a very bad time to mee you knew , i m like feeling soo soo soo soo anoyyed and sad for ar , here , i don't want to see them like this away from each other
i don't get it why the hell you make them suffer like this haa
i want them together at any cost ,
and ab aggar tu vo aarshi ke contracts yaa vo stupid idiot shaan ko unkee beech mein laaye naa
then you better wait and watch ok , main kya haal karte huu yahaa
and as per you must have noticed that maine last part per comment nahi kiyya tha , hai na , you knew why i didn't ,
cause i soo hatted that part ki meraa coment karne ka mood nahi tha , itana mood off hoo gaayaa tha , after reading that part ki kya bataaoo , and moreover maine vo part padda bhi night time mein , and i was not able to sleep for soo long after that you knew
do not dare to play with our emotions more then this , and update with happy happy part , in which ar r together soon
warna you very well knew that what all i m capable of doing
and haa mere dhamkiyoo ko lightly lene ki galti mat karnaa ok
i hatted this part a lot , i hate this , i hate the way story is going , i hate to read armaan and riddhima getting separated ,
and per still i love you , 😉😉😉 , you knew that ,
and here i m hatting this part , hehe 😆😆😆😆😆
ab mere itane lectures and itane dhamki de di hai , inmee se aggar kuch bhi lightly liyya na , to you knew what
remember naa , next part mein , ar and ar together FOREVER ,
waiting for that
love you lots , but still hatted tha part 😆😆😆😆
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago
love how u portrayed their emotions
plz dont seperate armaan ridz
con soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey ... very beautifully conveyed emotions. The song is also very good and the way you tied AR moments with the song, loved it.
Shaan is truly a creepy person. And appreciate Armaan for not burdening Riddhima and asking her to change her decision. But feeling very sad that their love will have to suffer again and they still will not be with each other forever. I hope you would take the story on a happy and positive note again.
Thanks for the PM and update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey..
Nice part... Pls get dem together.. They meant to be together..
I can imagine ridzi 's situation..she is so brave nd they both r lovable..
Pls continue soon nd thanx for d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely, great part.
too good.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey Heaven

finally i've finished reading all da parts of this ff

n i must say its mind blowing

im eager 2 read d anext update

pls armaan riddhima ko alag mat karna

they r destined 2 be together

pls cont soon as possible

n pls pm me

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey heaven...very well written update...gud work...cont soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Heaven...

Where did you disappear all of a sudden dear. How are you, hope you are doing good. No update for more than a week. Anyways, coming back to part 29...

The initial portion of the update was very sad and gloomy. The mental battle Riddhima is fighting is heart-wrenching. The way you have portrayed their pain was very nice.

You know what I think, if the base of your story is Armaan-Riddhima's love story, then Arashi is its strength. They way they stand by Armaan in all times is wonderful. I hadn't expected that they will tell the truth to Armaan so soon. Armaan's reaction after knowing the truth isn't something I had expected, but I still feel he took the right decision. His love isn't selfish to put her on trials... emotional trials. His decision not to push Riddhima to come back shoes the purity of his love for her. Atleast she doesn't have to fight with herself to take a decision. But after this I feel its gonna become more difficult for Riddhima now that she knows that Armaan still loves her and is ready to sacrifice his love for her decision, to save her from any indecisive mode. The realization that he will have to live in pain of separation for another life will hurt her more.

The firefly song fitted in the situation very well. I just wish someone can do this to bring them together once again. Hope Shaan is just a pretending jerk. Whatever it is, I just want Armaan-Riddhima to be back together again.

Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey!!!

sry for late comment..

but this was anything man...

why fate have keep them apart....

plz update soon

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