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Posted: 15 years ago
awsomeeeeeeeeee part dear
loved it
cont soon
n thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great Update!!
Plzz continue soon
THX for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part yr
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome updt..
hayyy was so romentic..
sajan wer awesome..
plz cont soon..
n thanx for d pm..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
cool part
dear
nice song choice
loved it
cont soon
n thx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowow tht was soo good part
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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry wrong post just had t say amaizng and continue
Edited by pragya_luvsajan - 15 years ago
Mahiii thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
yiippie sajan proposed waiting to see their romance now...
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Posted: 15 years ago
part=5
later at night mayank dropped nupur at homee...
m=so..gud nite...mr nupur sharma...
n=by god mayank...tum bhi na,.....sachme kitne unromantic ho.........
m=kyu ab mane kya kiya???? gana gaya....late nite walking ki..aur ab????
n=mayank..jab ek girlfrend ko boyfrend ghar drop karta ha na....to...gharme janese pehle....
m=pehle????
n=tumse kuch nahi hone wala..mahi karti hu.......
then nupur slowly comes close to him....n gives a kiss on his cheeks....
n=gud nitee.........sweet dreams...
n then she was about to go...but maaynk holded her hand n bringed back to the position..
m=wase...tumhare sath rehkar thora bohot sikh raha hu.....
n=kya????
then mayank comes close..n gives a small kiss on her cheek..
m=gud nite..n sweet dreams..
n winkss....
n=by god...sachme asaar horaha ha...
m=rite....kaal milte ha...bye..
n=bye...
sajan....
they were at the general ward..patients were sleeping..n they were guarding...then samrat comes to gunjan
s=chashmish..chalo na...fireescape chalte ha...
g=samrat abhi nahi....abhi kaam karo
s=ufffoo chashmish peechle ek ghantese hum kaam karraha ha.thorato romance aj bantahiha na...akhir aj humare pyaar ki shuruad ha...
g=samrat.......tumbhi na.....
s=ab chalo bhi......pattients shantise soraheha..hum bhi chalo..kuch time spend karte ha...
g=samrat.....
s=agar abhike abhi tum nahi chali na to ma tumhe uthake leke jaunga...
g=kya????????
s=ha..chalo...
g= ok ok...
then samrat holds her hand n takes her to the fireesacape....n they sat on the stairs...
g=kya ha???esa kaunsa kaam ha jiske lie mujhe khichke ayah leaye?????
s=kuch nahi...bass kaam karke thak gaya...socha thora romance karlu..
g=sochna bhi maat....ajkeliye bohot romance hogaya ha......pehle...confession...phir gaana...no ways..no more..
s=tum bhi na.....bilkul nupur ki tarah nahi ho..
g=matlab?????????
s=matlab ke ye nupur kitni romantic ha...par tum....
he makes a sad face..gunjan smlies at him..n holds his hands..
g=hum teeno behene ek jaisi nahi ha samrat...riddhima di sabse acchi ha..pyaar bhi ha sharaarat bhi ha..aur caring bhi...nupur di..romantic bhi ha...aur acchi bhi...par ma....ma romantic nahi hu..kyuki ajtak kabhi kissisi pyaarhi nahi hua...riddhima di to pehlesehi jij se...aur nupur di sapnome pyaar karti ha...par ma...
s=isilye to tum mujhe itni pasand ho...kyuki tum sabse alag ho....aur sabse pyaari..meri chashmish....
n he kisses in her forehead..n keeps his hand over her hand........
next morning....
locker room.....
gunjan n samrat has changed clothes...n freshen up..they r in the locker room....gunjan is standing infront of her locker..n samrat is standing keeping his hand on her locker n staring her her...gunjan sees that..
g=samrat..
s=ha....
g=tum kya karraheho????
s=tumhe dekhraha hu....
g=kyu????
s=are bhai..ma tumhe nahi dekhunga to kise dekhunga???? aur wasebhi apni girlfrned ko dekhna kya buri baat ha????
gunjan closes the locker n samart was going to faal.....
s=chashmish..kya karrahiho...
g=samart ye hospital ha...romance ka park nahi...so apni spanoki aur romancing duniyase bahar ao....aur kaam ke lie chalo..
gunjan tries to go but samrat gets her elbow n makes her stand at the same position but a more closer..n slowly pulls her more closer...
g=samrat..tum kya karraheho..
s=sssshhhhhhhhhhhh..bohot bolti ho..chashmish....
they were lost in eachothers eyes.....just then mayur were coming there...they saw sajan n smiles at eachother...then nupur started to talk to maaynk loudly n both acted as they didnt see sajan wat were they doing......but sajan's romance broke...
n=mayank.....aj late to nahi hue na???
m=nahi nupur....
s=hi guyss...
n=oh hi.,......gunjan kaisi ha.kaal night duty kaisi thi?? acchhi hogi na..
sajan blushed,.....
m=ab nupur...ab tum humhe late karwadogi.....chalo..
four of them leave for brifeing....
nurse station...
they were standing n chatting..when AR comes...
all=gud morning sir..gud morning mam
r=gud morning....
a=morning......
r=dr samrat dr nupur ap dono general ward me rehenge...
n=yes ma'm
samrat feels sad as he was expecting gunjan to be with him....
s=ok ma'm..
a=dr gunjan ap mujhse surgery me assist karenge.....
r=aur dr mayank ap icu me rehenge.....
m=j ma'm...
g=yes sir....
a=get to work...dr gunjan after 10 minutes opt me..
g=yes sir...
s=chashmish...tum nupur ke sath apni duty replace kyu nahi karti..
g=not possible...
n=ab sam..chale???
s=ha chalo......aur kya kar sakteha hana????
m=nupur.suno to..
n= bye mayank....
AR...
armaan was preparing for his surgery..then riddhima comes..
r=so dr malik..surgery keliye ready????
a=hope so....
r=kya hua nervous????
a=ha..brain tumer ka case ha na isiliye...
r=armaan isse pehlebhi tumne ki ha na....to daarna maat aur ma hoo na tumhare sath???
a=ya..wasae aj mom ka phone aya tha...
r=accha banglore chali gayi aur bataya bhi nahi....
a=ha..unhone ek order dia ha....
r=kya????
a=yehi ke reception ki party kaal karni ha...
r=kaal???????
a=yes....
r=par kaise?????
a=chinta maat karo...gharpar dinner keliye sabko bulate ha....
r=ghar par nahi restuarant par...ok????
a=cool...shamko samrat aur mayankse ghar pe baat karte ha...
r=thik ha..ma undonoko phone pe baat dungi..
a=cool....
enjoy guyss...
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee ud dear...
mindblowingg..
luved it to d core..
plzzzzz cont soon..
n thnxx for d pm
Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago

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