He Is Really Something Mayur OS+P420SALABC- Pg. 41 - Page 28

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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely os
but why you write this in white it is diffcult to read but i love this
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hey lina amezing part thank u so much n i think u 4get 2 pm me but i forgive u coz i fond my in msn thank u
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Lovely OS!!!!
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lovely update dear.plzz continue soon.😊
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Hey everyone, how are you all doing? I know, I know, havn't updated any of my FFs for ages, I'm so sorry for that na. I prefer reading more thank writing these days, so if you have any FFs {Poorani FFs, nayi FFs, lambhi FFs, choti FFs, LOL} do pm me na. Would love to read them. But please don't tell me to update, they give me nightmares🤣, and I don't want anyone else to have nightmares🤣. So its good this way.

Anyways, I would like to thank Rumki, Samira, and Afsha, you all chooo cweeet, thanks for inspiring me to write.
And haan how can I forget, all my lovely sisters in MF
Maru, Hinu, Anu, Rabi, Susmi, Nidzy, Pallu, Ayesha, Affi, Daani, Yami, Sehr, Pebo, Mahi, Reemz, Nikki, Tapoor, Fairy, Sonia, Maria, Sanu, Varshu, and my mommy Bhavii😳🤣
luvvvv u all🤗
Please don't say I am forgetting someone, please dont say I am forgeting someone
Also, I would like to dedicate this first OS to none other than
Sabz(-Muskaan-)
Look Monkey, your kankajura wrote something for you🤣
Hope you like it Muskaan, your Nupur wrote it DiL SE😳
Ok baba, I'm done. Do read and comment on my two OSs below. No comments on my first one, but I am in love with the seond one.
He Is Really Something
All my friends seem to be busy talking with each other, while I, lost in my own thoughts, was walking besides them. By god, how I wish I were someplace else, any place would be nice, any place where all my friends would stop teasing me about him. Yes him, Shilpa auntys only son, Mayank Sharma. No I have never met him, and neither do I intend to. I wouldn't even agree to meet him, if he wasn't Shilpa auntys son. It's not that I don't believe in arrange marriage, it's just I believe in love marriage more. Ughhh, why do I even have to get married? I am happy, I am happy in the dreams of my only love, SRK. If only I didn't love Shilpa aunty like my mom. I continued walking, without a word, passing all the little shops, until I spot a little white kitty. I smile, I always wanted a little kitty. "Guys I am coming" without hearing their response I start walking towards it. The kitty is chooo cweeeet, in a little cage, that seems to be placed beautifully on the window of that shop. I continued walking, faster now, and by accident I bumped into someone. (Since he was holding coffee, some dropped on his t-shirt)
'Argghhhhh, IT BURNS!!!!!" he screams with anger. "I am ssssooooo sorry" I screamed with panick. "Oh, it's ok, I was just exaggerating" he mumbled. "Oh" I blushed as I looked away. "Hey, just chill, it was a bad joke yaar," he smiled. I felt my cheecks burn. "Myself Mayank, you?" he let out his hand. His brownish blackish hair glowed in the sun, while his deep chocolate brown eyes studied me. "Nupur" I said softly, shaking his hand. He smiles again, and this time I notice his cute dimples. And the nest thing I notice is that someone already left with that kitty. Not fair, I wanted it! I kept looking at that person, and after he was out of sight, I looked down with dissapointment. "Nupur???!!!" I heard one of my friends call after me, and I call after "Ayiiiii..." I look at him again, I guess he was still studying me (Do I look like a book) "I think I must be going now. Nice to meet you" "Same here" "Bye" I start walking back, to my friends.
Later in the evening.
I open the door to my house, put down my keys on the table, sat down, realxing. Couple of seconds later, I realized I had promised Shilpa aunty I would come to her house this afternoon. I get up, lock my house, and decide to walk there, since it wasn't that far away. When I reached there, it seems to be raining. I rang the bell, an she opens the door, inviting me in. She seems angry, alright.
"Aunty mein woh...." "Nupur kitni daffa bola hai aunty nahin, maa, aur mujhse baat matt kar, I am mad" "Par..." " Aur haan you look wet, Mayuuu zara towel lee ke aa" "Maa..." "Mein kitchen mein jaa rahi hoon, because I just remember I was mad at you" "Haan par..." Before I could say more, she left for the kitchen. She is very mad, I know that. "Towel?" I turn around. "App?" It was him, the same guy I saw earlier. "Umm, hi Nupur." "App Mayank hai? I mean Mayank Sharma?" I said still in shocked. "Kyun nahi ho sakata?" "Nahin, par you never old me" "I love giving people surprises" "Par app toh kal aane wale teh, US se?" "Did I mention I also love giving maa surprises?" I smile, and for knows why, blushed. "Nice to meet you Mayank jee. " "Come one, call me Mayank."
After some time, I made Shilpa aunty (Opps mom) made me forgive me. I know she can't be mad at for a long time. We chatted a little, then I decided to go home, since it was late. She said that Mayank will drop me, but I insisted going a lone. But she said that it was dark, and also raining, and I couldn't argue with her, so I agreed.
In the car, I kept on talking and talking, and Mayank listening to me. First time, someone listening to me without getting bored or annoyed. Thats really something to me. I didn't even realize when my house appeared in sight. I got out of the car, and said thank, and he said no formalities, and then we smile, and I ran to my house, since it was raining. After couple of seconds, Ting tong, "Ayiiii" I opened the door. "Mayank??" "Just wanted to say goodnight." I smiled. "Goodnight" We say nothing. "I think I should be going now" "Ummm, ok bye." I close the door, and then again the door bell rings. "Ummm also wanted to say sweetdreams" "Umm same to you" "Acha phir kal mil te hai" "Ok bye" I close the door again, and this time I hear a knock. "Mayank....." I said, quite irratated. I opened the door, no one there??!! I look down, the same kitty there, in a box. Then I look around, Mayank by his car, smiling. "Goodnight Nupur, hope you liked your surprise, tc, sweet dreams" Then he sits down, and drives away. I smile, this Mayank Sharma is really something.
Sorry na, I know you all havn't read the stupidiest OS ever, but congratz, now you have. 🤣🤣 Guys bhale hi, don't read the first one, but please please please bother to read the second one. It's for meri sabse special sis,(U all special to me, but her, I met her when I was new new in I-F) Shamsa. (ArtiTillTheEnd)
Luvvv you Sammy.😳 (I remember the time when we were little kids, we used to play in the playground. She used to give me swings, and couple of seconds later, she pushes me off it.😭😭😭She used to give me candies, then couple of seconds later, she took them away/😭😭😭She used to give me rides on her back, then couple of seconds later, drop me down😭😭😭And then one day, she went on my choti moti khashti, and never returned back!!!😭😭)🤣🤣🤣🤣
Prisoner 420 Sammy Aur Lina AB Chorr🤣🤣
Once upon a time, there were two mad girls named Sammy and Lina who used to catfight over a prince named Arjun Bijlani. They had their bad eyes on him. They had plans to kidnap him, and then one night they put their plans into action.
Sammy- Lina yaar, mera Arjun iss bag mein fit nahi ho raha hai.
Lina- Your Arjun??!! He is mine. Mine Mine MINE!!!!
They started to fight there, pulling each others hair. And the charming prince Arjun got terrified, and on his cell phone(Sorry no cell phone in poorana zamana, so he wrote a letter and gave it to his messager blue bird, who flew away, and gave it to the police station) The police came.
Police wale bhaiya jee- Arre kaun kisko kidnap kar raha hai?
Arjun - Yeh dono mujhko kidnap kar rahe hai!
Then kya? Lina made her cute innocent face, with a puppy dog wali look. And all she said was........
Lina- I am just a bhachi
........and the police wale bhaiyya jee ka heart melted, and he putted handcuff on Sammy, and took her to jail. Lina calls after.......
Lina- Sammy meri pyari behena, dekhna I will come to set you free, 1000000000 years later, (To herself- right now let me enjoy with AB😈🤣) Mera intezar karna.
..........after the police wale bhaiyya jee ki police car(Opps wagon) got out of sight, Lina gave a evil laugh, and continued kidnapping AB.
1 year later
One side we see the charming prince AB holding hands with Lina, and both were watching DDLJ, wating popcorn, holding hands, together, HOLDING HANDS! And the other side we see Sammy in jail.
Sammy- *Sigh, looking at calender* Only 999999999 years left until Lina rescues me.
And they all lived happily ever after
THE END!
Oyeeee someone tell Sammy to stop crying, thatz my job, if she takes my job, all I have is to clean bathrooms.😭😭 Sammy you better be laughing, warna I am coming with my chota mota dhandha.
P.S. Arjun is mine! Mine Mine MINE!!!N Ratizzz😳☺️more than mine☺️And everyones else too, but not Sammy's, she is the villian. She is Gabbar from Sholay🤣That's why she keeps asking "Kitne Arjun Bijlani teh?" and then I answer "Sarkar sirf ek" and then she says "Woh ek, aur tum ek, phir bhi khali haath ayii?" then I say "Sarkar meine appki candies khayi hai" and then she says "Abb goli khana"😭😭😭And she then made me eat goli😭😭
P.P.S Everyone plezz do comment. First time I love something I wrote🤣I think this is my favorite OS I wrote, I love the ending🤣
P.P.P.S. Guyz plez comment on AB's & RP's walls. I always dream them to be the first ones, I would keep on commenting, agar yeh nahi aata, "You have recently posted a comment from same IP. Please wait for 3 hours and try again. OR You are posting the same comment again."😭😭Plezzz comment na, would really love that.
-Lina-
Edited by rkmnsg - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Oye i have to killl YOU how come i am in the jail and u and A aree enjoyingg *Sigh* this cant be happens it's only u dream like u always did Dream and Dream and Dream and u always tell to peeplz that u are with Arjun u should be na notice it's not Arjun it's someone who is pretendng to be Arjun bc Arjun Is MINE MINE MINE and i told u na how many times shall i sayyy itt he sang for me Oh Girl U are MINE and I too Sanng for HIM Oh Boy U Are MINe and he was blushing☺️ and i was pluingg hiss cutee checkz hayee🤪 then he sang his fav song to me humein tumsi pyaar karti yeh hum nahi janti magar jee nahi sakte tumhari binaaa☺️ thats what u should call LOVE❤️ and AB IS MINE andddd For Rati Defo there is no arguuuuuuuu b/w them they are Rab Ne Bana De Jodi 😍 and then they will live happily togetherrrr afterrr Linz in the jail and I Spend some Awesome Times with Arjun then i will let ArTi Get Married Soo Linz Cant speend time with HIM😈🤣

Ohh yeah i rem one thing Love you Janu 🤗 and u wont attend ArTi Marrige DAY😈
Edited by ArTiToTheEnd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Both were fab
1st one was damn sweet n the second one was fulll comedy
Jus loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG! Linzy tu pagal ho gayi hai! u r NUTS!
the 1st OS was good! lol! sweet one.....Nupur 1st hates the thot of getting married 2 Mayank n then Mayank's 'surprising nature' akes her change her decision!😊

2nd OS.....gosh! what shall i say abt this! poor Sammy ko Gabbar banaa ke jail bhej diya!😲


P.S; y not write a sequel 2 P420SALABC!😆
Edited by bhavana92 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG....ur awesome yaar
i read half of it and i m loving it
lemme continue reading it
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww that was really sweet 😳


@Cuming to 420 wala OS 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
By God Sammy poor u 🤣 🤣
Linu chalak ladki escaped very well 🤣 🤣
wake up gals 🤣

wat is the mistry of Seher 😲 🤣
Maruuuuuuuuuu where ru 🤣
Edited by afshanafreen - 15 years ago

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