He Is Really Something Mayur OS+P420SALABC- Pg. 41

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Everyday a girl walks to the clinic, and comes back, and a group of of guyz bothers her.
Boy 1:Chalti hai kya?
The girl ignores them. A guy always sees her do this.
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Two days passes. The same thing keep happening.
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One day, one guy from the group holds the girls hand.
Guy 1:Chal humare saath.
The boy that always watch her gets up now.
Boy:Dekho tum loogo ko kuch shamram nahi hai? Yeh itni achi hai ke kabhhi kuch nahi bolti, aur tum loog.
Guy 2: Dekho ek aur iss pataka ka aashiq.
The boy gets very angry now, and starts beating them. He punches them, and hit them, and they all run away from there.
The boy looks at the girl.
Girl:*Smiles* Thank you.
Boy:No prob, hi I am Mayank, Mayank Sharma.
Girl:Hi I am Nupur, Nupur Bhushan.
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In the night, Mayank keeps thinking about the girl. It is 3am.
:Mayank's POV:
Woh ek ladki, itni achi kyun laagti hai mujhe? Itni special, uss jaise koi nahi dekho. Usski baal, ankein, and usski smile.
Mayank smiles now. He gets up from his bed, and looks out the window.
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Nupur gets dress in white kamis/frok and chorri daar pajama. And goes out to go to the clinic again.
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Mayank sees her pass by.
M:Itni raat mein yeh yahan?
He goes outside.
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M:App yahan?
N:Woh meri mama ki tabiyat karab hai, toh mein unn ke liye dawayi le ne ja rahi hoon.
M:Dekhiye Nupur, itni raat hu gayi hai, mein bhi appke saath chal ta hoon.
N:*Smiles* Theeke.
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Many days passes. They go to the clinic together, and they become very good friends.
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One day, Mayank goes to the clinic alone.
Compounder: App bura nahi maane toh ek baat poochooon?
M:Ji
Compounder:App har ross yahan aate hai aur dawayi le ke jaate hai, woh kiss ke liye?
M:Woh jo ladki mere saath aati hai na, usski ma bimaar hai
Compounder:Kyun mazaq kar rahe hai? Koi ladki appke saath nahi aati.
M:Haan woh ladki-
Compounder:App acha mazaq kar le te hai.
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The next day Mayank goes with Nupur to the clinic. They are sitting down in the bench, talking. The compounder comes.
Compounder:App kissey baatein kar rahe hai?
M:Wohi ladki se.
He looks at her, but she is not there. The compounder starts laughing.
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In the night, Mayank is restless. He notices someone sitting right beside him. It was Nupur.
N:Mayank plez mere saath kahin challo.
Without a word, he goes with her.
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She takes him to the graveyard. In the graveyard, there is a stairway leading to a room. He finds a women sitting there.
N:Mayank yeh meri ma hai.
Mayank greets her.
N:Mayank, mein ek ghin hoon. Meri ma bimarr thi, toh mein ross clinic jaati thi. Par koi faida nahi tha, kyun ke , koi mujhe dekh nahi suckta tha, ek din meri ma ne bolla ke humko sirf ek aisa insaan dekh suckta hai jiska dil bohat acha ho. Toh mujhe tum miley,
M:Par woh loog jhin hone tumhe cheera tha?
He sees the guyz behind her.
N:Yeh? Yeh bhi ek ghin hai, meri help ki inn hone.
The guyz seemed to admire him.
M:Par-par.
N:Mayank tum bohat ache ladke ho, tum jo bhi maago ge, mein tumhe doon gi.
M:Nupur, mujhe tum jaise ladki chahi hai.
Nupur smiles.
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Mayank wakes up.
M:It was all a dream?
Something pinced him, he looked under his pillow. It was Nupur's earing, she was wearing last night. Mayank kept starring at it. He goes outside to work.
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He bumps into a girl. He papers starts flying. He bends down to pick them, and wow, she looked exactly like Nupur.
They got up, Mayank rubbed his eyes.
Girl:Thank you.
M:Your welcome.
She leaves to go. Mayank waits for her to stop, for her to look back, and smile. She keeps walking, and walking. And finally she looks back. Ans smiles.
Mayank smiles back, showing his cute dimples. She looked like an angel. That moment Mayank will never forget.
Hey guyz, I was so bored, so thought why not start a one shot.
Love Lina.😉
What A Relief- Pg. 4
Wind's Direction- Page 22
Hey guyzz, I know havn't written anything in ages, but really didn't feel like writting anything, I prefer reading more. 😉 I am sooo sorry for not contiuing any of my FFzzz, they all r stupid so why bother contiuing them.😆 And haan this OS is for Sabrinaaa. Hey Muskaan, ur kankajura wrote something for you, by gawddd🤣
Hey guyzzz, this is short n simple, do tell me wat u think about it.
do comment, bhale hi critize karna,😆 par plezzz do comment.
This is for u Sabz.......
Today seems like a good day. With the aroma of millions of roses that seems to fill the atmosphere. You see valentines day is getting closer, and everyone busy buying their girlfriend or boyfriend a gift. I always wonder how it feels like to be in love. You might be thinking that I have never been in love before, but to tell the truth, you are right. It is not that I don't believe in it, it's just that I havn't found the right guy yet.
Anyways, I continued walking past the little shops, looking for a perfect gift that my best firned Gunjan begged me to get for Samrat, her boyfriend. She says I have good choices. I search for some minutes, then finally I see a really cute white teddy holding a box of chocolate. It was placed beautifully on the window of a shop. I smile, and start walking quickly to the shop. And by accident, I bumped into someone. (Since he was holding coffee in his hand, some dropped into his t-shirt.)
'Agrhhhhh, it burns!!!!' he screamed. 'Oh my god, I am sssssoooo sorry' I said in a panicked voice. 'It's cool, I was just exaggerating,' he mumbled. 'Oh.......' I blushed as I look away. 'Hey, it was just a bad joke,' he smiled. I felt my cheecks burn. 'My name's Mayank, Yours?' His hair glowed in the sun, while his deep-chocolate brown eyes studied my. 'Ummmm, Nupur,' I replied. He smiled again, this time I noticed his dimples.
'Mayuuuuu???!!!!' 'Yeh maa bhi na,' he says to himself, then calls out 'Ayya maa......' He looks at me again. 'I think I must go now, nice to meet u Nupur, hope we meet again' 'Yeah smae here, bye Mayank.' After watching him go, I take a deep breath, and head towards the shop to get that teddy.
Next day
'Abhi toh yahin rakkhi thi, paata nahi kahan gayab ho gayi' I kept looking for a book I just picked out, in the librerary. 'Is that the book?' I said to myself. A girl seems to be reading it. God I need that book to make notes. I decide to go up to her. 'Excuse me.' Startled she looks at me from that book. 'Hey, it's you,' I said excitly. I must say she looks beatiful today, wearing a hotpink chooridaar, with her hair open. 'I never knew you were in Excel before,' she said with a smile. 'Well, it's a preety big collage.'
I have only known her for two days, but it seems like I have known her for ages. I love spending time with her. Love to see the smile on her face. Love to hear her irratating yet adorible laugh, when I tell her my lame jokes. She is truly an amazing friend.
Today I had a great time with her at the Valentines party at Samrats house. She looked like an angel, with that white glittery chooridaar on.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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how cute lina nupur gini 😆😆😆mayank gini founder 😆😆😆loved it too nice
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Posted: 15 years ago
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WOW YAAR !!!!!!! SO SWEET ONE SHOT!!
SHE WAS A GHIN!!.....
LINA PLZZZ WRITE MORE!!!PLEASE PM ME😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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ha ha Lina.... Diff hai yaar....
Mein soch rahi thi, booth hai.... LOL... Par its sweet n diff....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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such a sweeet one-shot lina..!!
and you made her a ghin..not a ghost..! lol..i guess that's better yeah....hehe
Mayank is so chivalrous in this...awwww.....great job..!!
and they lived happily ever after...! hehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yaar seems lik u hv a strong liking 2wards ghins n ghosts,huh?😆😉

i nevr evr xpected ki ismein bhi tum spirit thing use karogi.........

bt iit ws truly a vryyyyyyyyy vry sweeeeeeeet OS dear........

yaar ek req hai i want u to write an OS or FF onli wid normal ppl......u knw wht i mean.....😆😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lina sweety this OS is as sweet as you😳

I just loved it

keep writing more and more

lots of love

🤗🤗🤗🤗

Nabeeha

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Posted: 15 years ago
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bahut hi acha os tha.......
tum kya kabhi hi normal logon ke beech pyaar nahi dikha sakti ho?????
i think tumhe bhooton se bahut pyaar hai........
i loved ur os.......
keep it up!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤗Heyy sweety🤗

Awesome part yaar!👍🏼
You rite so well!😃😍
Haayyyeee loved the way you portray it!
Thanks a lott for the PM & Update more suupperr ssooonnn!!!😍
Love,
Niky😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sis
sho shweet huni
loved it!

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