He Is Really Something Mayur OS+P420SALABC- Pg. 41 - Page 25

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Lina dear............how are you my friend...........
look main kitni jaldi comment kar rahi hon
hats off to me.........hai na? šŸ˜†
well first of all i m so sorry as i could not comment earlier
actually now a days i m little bit busy so thats why
well first tell me who said you ........that you can't write well
tell me the name of that person yaar..............n if its you then i will definietly deal with you later
but seriously yaar
it was amaizing yaar............
loved it...............
well i really like its title yaar...........sachi mein
n now stop doing nakhrey n update ur all ffs
i m waiting 4 them..............ok
n also 4 a great os like this one
so hurry up............
n once again i m so sorry 4 so late comment yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey Lina dear............how are you my friend...........
look main kitni jaldi comment kar rahi hon
hats off to me.........hai na? šŸ˜†
well first of all i m so sorry as i could not comment earlier
actually now a days i m little bit busy so thats why
well first tell me who said you ........that you can't write well
tell me the name of that person yaar..............n if its you then i will definietly deal with you later
but seriously yaar
it was amaizing yaar............
loved it...............
well i really like its title yaar...........sachi mein
n now stop doing nakhrey n update ur all ffs
i m waiting 4 them..............ok
n also 4 a great os like this one
so hurry up............
n once again i m so sorry 4 so late comment yaar

Awwwwwww Rabi thanks a ton
you are sooooo sweet
np for this cute late comment
I really love it
thank again
love ya
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago
sry 4 d l8 coment Lina!!
btw...awesum OS!!!
i luvd it!!
twas gr8!
thanx 4 d pm.. =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyy lina
it was an amazing os
really loved it
u are an amazing writer
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

sry 4 d l8 coment Lina!!
btw...awesum OS!!!
i luvd it!!
twas gr8!
thanx 4 d pm.. =)

thanks a lot
Anshika
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

heyyyy lina

it was an amazing os
really loved it
u are an amazing writer
thanx for the pm

thanks Seema
so sweet of ya
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago

Valentines day

He looked at her, "How can someone look so gorgeous?" he thought. The stars in the dark beautiful night, seems to be all over the sky. The wind blowing, making her bangs to come up to her face. She seems irrated by it, and she keeps putting her bangs back. He just looks at her, admiring her beauty. He finally, touches her cheeks, making her look at him. She looks at him with those nervous eyes. He sees her like that, and smiles, with his cute dimples. She smiles back.

Mayank- I love you Nupur.

She blushes, looking down, then back up at him.

Nupur- Me too.

She puts her head on his shoulders, and they continue staring at the lake.

It is Valentines days , and they are together sitting over a lake, on a brigde.

Today he had finally told her how much he has always loved her. And what else? She says she always had loved him too, and was waiting for him to tell her first. And then they had shared a cute hug.

But wait a second, how had this whole thing started????????????????????

To find out, keep highlighting everything below.

Everyone was in collage, the gang (Nupur, Samrat, Gunjan, Dia, Uday, Benji) making plans for Valentines day that was coming up in 1 days. They were going to have a Valentines day party, they all so excited. The whole collage was talking about it.

In the canteen

Nupur- By god, sirf ek din baki hai.

Dia- I know.

Gunjan comes up to them, wearing a pink shirt with jeans, with a pink rose in her hand.

Gunjan- Dekhna this party is going to rock!

Samrat behind her.

Samrat- Exactly.

They continue talking, and then Nupur sees him. Mayank, Mayank Sharma, with his stupid books in his hands.

Nupur- Wow, loogo ke haath mein phool hota hai, par iss fool ke haath mein books hai.

She looks at him going to the library.

Nupur- Guys mein abhi aati hoon.

Gunjan- Ok.

She goes in the library.

Following him, he is looking for a book.

Nupur- Chit, chit, Mayank?

He looks at her, and completely ignores her.

She gets angry.

Nupur- Mein tumse baat kar rahi hoon. Sunaiyi nahi de raha hai kya?

Mayank- *Irritated* Kya hai?

Nupur- Tum Valentine party mein aa rahe ho na? Kal?

He looks at her.

Mayank- *Fake smiling* Dekho, tum he isse kya? Aur waise bhi, mujhe yeh project katam karna hai.

Nupur- *Shocked* Did I hear this right, tumhe project katam karna hai? Mayu tum he kab se collage mein interest ho gaya hai?

Mayank- Jab se, tab meri mom ne bola ke agar meri report card mein ache grades nahi aaye, toh woh meri saari fun cheezze le le gi, until 1 month.

Nupur- Mayank par yeh Valentine day party hai.

Mayank- Nupur leave me alone, kissi aur ko jaake bother karro.

Nupur- Fine!

She leaves.

Dia- Nupur, thank god mujhe tum mil gayi

Nupur- Kyun kya hua?

Dia- Woh actually tum he humara plan yaad hai na?

Nupur- Ohhh, yeah.

Dia- Ok bhool na matt.

Nupur- Dont worry, I wont
The next day
Valentines day.
In collage
Nupur- By god, are you sure?
Dia- Pakka sure, abb jaldi jaake ek laake aao, isse phele koi aa jae.
Nupur- *Gulps* Ok, I am going.
She looks at it, the principles favorite flower plant. Princi never let anyone go near it, he loved it dearly. He bought it from America, there is no flower like it. Not in Mumbia. And Nupur wanted one flower, since she have always want one. And Dia and she had made a plan, that on Valentines day party, she will come wearing that flower placed on her hair. She challenge Dia, that she will. And here she is, in collage, in Princi's office. He is on a lunch break.
Dia- Nupur?
Nupur- Haan?
Dia- Abb jao bhi, isse phele princi aa jae.
Nupur- Haan haan jaa rahi hoon.
She goes inside, Dia watching if someone comes, standing by the door. Nupur breaks one flower carefully, and gets out from there.
They go out from there.
Nupur- *Smiling* By god, I told you ke mere liye koi kam muskil nahi hai.
Dia- Theeke baba, abb mein chalti hoon.
Nupur- Ok.
She leaves, and Nupur turns around to find Princi coming.
Nupur- Oh shit, abb toh tu gayii Nupur Bhushan.
She walks, but bad luck, Princi seems to be walking after her in the same direction.
She bumps in someone. She bumps into Mayank.
Mayank- Dekh ke nahi chal sakati.
She looks at Princi who was behind.
Mayank- Meri books giradi.
Nervously she hands out the flower to him.
Nupur- Happy Valentines day Mayank.
He just looks at her, confused. He smiles and takes it.
Mayank- Thanks.
Nupur- *Smiles* No prob, abb mujhe jaana hai. Bye.
She walks away, fast.
Princi sees Mayank holding his flower. He walks up to him.
Princi- Mr. Mayank Sharma, meet me in my office.
Mayank- Sir, abb meine kya kiya hai?
He tells him about his flower.
Mayank- Nahi nahi, meine-
Princi- This instance!
Mayank- Ok.
He follows him to his office.
Mayu sits down. Princi sit down too on his seat, and fakes smiles at him.
Princi- So Mr. Mayank Sharma how are you?
Mayank- Sir, sachi-
Princi- I am sure you are fine, becuz you tell me this every day, becuz WE MEET EVERYDAY!
Mayank- Sir, meine appka flower nahi torra.
Princi- Tumne kaha aur meine maan liya?
Mayank- I am telling the truth
Princi- Really? Tum toh yeh humesha keh te ho.
Mayank- Par iss barr sach mein-
Princi- Well too bad, community service!
Mayank- No no anything but that.
Princi- You may leave now.
He stands up to leave, then looks back.
Mayank- Sir plez.
Princi- LEAVE!!!!!
He walks fast outside the door.
He sees Nupur standing there. With (SGDBU).
She felt guilty for what she did.
He walks up to her.

And to her surprise, acually everyones surprise, he looks at her and smiles. And walks away.
Dia- Am I going crazzy?
Gunjan- Did Mayank just smiled at di, and walked away?
Samrat- After all that?
Dia- Community service?
Samrat- Yeah.
Gunjan- Kahin Mayank toh pagal nahi hogaya hai?
Samrat- Shayad, who knows, haana Nupur?
Nupur lost in his thoughts..........................
Lol, sorry, just that I feel this is preety long, so I should just like make this a 2 part OS. So to find about everything just wait for the 2nd part.
Do comment na. All of ur comments means a lot to me. And don't even ask, why I put this OS in whitešŸ˜† I guess that Mayur were waering white on Valentines day epi, thats why. Plezz do comment.
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice OS dear šŸ‘šŸ¼
thnx 4 the pm
keep up the gr8 work!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely part Lina
mujhe abhi chahiye 2nd part *gives a sadu expression*
it was so interesting aur tada...khatam ho gaya!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
res
EDIT
Lina
You're so creative
highlighting?
to read
so smart!!!
I wouldn't have even thought of that
of course,
I'm not that smart
the os was amazing
I would feel guilty too
poor Mayu
cont. this soon Lina!
Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 15 years ago

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