He Is Really Something Mayur OS+P420SALABC- Pg. 41

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#151

lina!!!!! this is soooo sweet kaash inn dono ke saath show mei bhi kuch aisa ho jayee !!!!
once again you have done it

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#152

awesome job linu

arre!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yeh kya keh rehi ho!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

you're bad at writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

who's this idiot that said that?!?!
Mein toh uski jaan chordoogi nahi!
Sach mein, yeh duffer kaun tha?

Lina you better write more and more

Varna I'm going to come over to your house

and force you to write

nahi toh!!!!!!

You are amazing at writing

you're in my top 5 favorite writers

I'm not joking

I'm serious

like seriously serious

leken...

leken leken leken

agar tum chor deethi ho writing mein

toh mein tumko chordooygi nahi!
Sachi!

Continue writing these brilliant stories

Varna...

well you already know

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455394

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#153

Hey Lina

Who says your not a good writer

naam bata bas..........abhi jaa ke theek karti hoon usse

I love your writings

& i'm waiting for your updates

you write really nice dear

dont underestimate yourself

plz continue your FF's

kisi k liye na sahi mere liye plzzzz.......................

now coming to the OS

loved it dear

it was awwwsome

loved their POV

I'm very disappointed by what you said you should continue your work

I hope i'll be geting more updates soon

luv

Nidzy

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Mugda.N Khureshi

@Ninelives

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#154

so sweet and beautiful..what with the current track and now this ..lovely

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#155

Hey LIna 1st of all Thanks for the PM&ll say u wrote it

sooooooooooooo ll 👏its beautiful i didnt read it

frm the bginig but in this part i just get it tht Mayank&Nupur's

charecter'r r totally the opposite frm MJHT & ll say dnt write for those

people who dnt like ur writing write for yourself&write for those people

who really love to read ur OS 😊 Hope i did hurt u

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maryam

@rosse12

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#156

Aww i loved this os it is sooo sweeet..r u kidding tht u r bad at writing u write reallly nice...u r toooooooooo good....plz write more....n thnx 4 da pm...=D

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#157

u there u listen

i like ur stories a hell lot don't u dare stop don't u dare .........

n update this on too i loved it

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#158

Lina ..🤗

I love the stories u write, so plsplspls dont stop writing!!
This one was especially swet and beautiful 🤗
love ya!!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#159

hey lina,

i loved this os......

i guess i loved it more than any other........

i think this is the best os written by you..........

this was marvellous.......

thanks a ton for the pm.....

and i loved the title too........

and do write more..........

and do i need to tell u that u have to pm me everytime?????

i am already on that list!!!!!!

sis.....

again i am saying.......

this is marvelous........