He Is Really Something Mayur OS+P420SALABC- Pg. 41

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Wow Lina,
It was short but really very nice.👏
Loved it.
thnax 4 ur lovely shot.

Awwwwwwwww thanks Fariaa

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#102

Originally posted by: mjht_fan
awww!
nice os

that was so cute Thanks

i wish i could write my life like that Yeah you can, infact better.😳

lol

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#103

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever
AhHhhh! Desi girl, what can I say? Hmmmm... Maybe...
Awesome
amazing
excellent
fantastic
kamal
sweet!
Perfect

so many more...

Thanks Desi girl

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#104

Originally posted by: myownarea
it was a very sweet OS 😃

Thanks Divya di

really

thanks

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#105

Originally posted by: Senny
Lina wowwwwwwww i am impressed, you are a deep thinker somewhere and your OS shows that soooooo clearly.

wonderful work man.

keep it up CB hehe.

hugs.

🤗

Thanks Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: zoya_me
awww lina how cum YOU wrote such sweet and cute stories?? 😆....loved it...

😆

Thanks

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#107

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A
ahhah!!
awesum idea yaar...
Lina dear...dis iz ur first thing i've read yet...
well...maine socha to hai ki main baaki bhi padhungi...
but a always hav a hell lot of wurk pending...huh!!
so...m gonna read 'em l8er!!
now...cuming bak to ur OS....
twas soooo nice!!!
i liked ur idea...or rather luvd it!!
pls do rite more soon...
thanx 4 d pm... =)

Thanks

you are so nice Ashika😳

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#108

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

ohhh....to it meanzzz u dunn rite so nice....
hmm...kuch to gadbad hai...
hmmm....sochte hain!!

YEA!!!

i got it!!
u hav cheated it...
tch tch tch Lina...
itne bure din aa gaye???
😆😆😆

ha!
just kiddin'!! pls dunn mind... (waise u dunn hav one!)

😆

Nice one

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#109

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

awwww how sweeeettt linaa..... dis was one of the cutesstttt mayur os... awwww
i loveddd it linaaa!!!! you did a awesomeee job!!!! plz do write moreee!!! 😳

loveee loadsss

xxxxx

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww thank you so much

for likeing it.

Really like ur comment.

And that chicks

saying

u r so cute

awww

thanks Zoe

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Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Not Fantasy

Mayank-Uffff kitni traffic hai.

It was raining outside. Mayank look at his watch.

Mayank-God, 8pm ho rahe hai, agar Gunjan ki birthday party mein late hogaya toh woh mujhe chorre ge nahi.

Mayank start looking out his window. He saw a girl holding an umbrella, but he couldn't see her face. Then her friend tried to convince her to go. She turn and he saw her face. Beautiful. She was beautiful.

Girl-Nahi Dia, mujhe woh hi wale chips chahi ye, aur woh bhaiyya keh rahe hai ke woh katam ho gaye hai.

Dia-Nupur come on, katam hogaye hai, meaning katam ho gaye hai.

Nupur-Nahi!

She faces the guy selling the chips.

Nupur-Please please please bhaiyya zara check toh karre, please please please.

Mayank smiles. She sounds like a little girl who wants lolipop. Mayank tried to look at her face again, but he could only see half of it.

Nupur-Bhaiyya niche toh check kare.....nahi hai toh....upar....haan upar check karre.....fine then unn chips ke packets ke pichhe check karre.....

Mayank shakes his head, laughing.

Mayank-Woh bhaiyya soch raha hoga, ke kisse pala par gaya.

Mayank keeps looking at her. She finally gets the kind she wants.

Nupur-Yes!!!!!!

Dia-Ok Nupur lets go now.

Nupur-ok

They turn to leave, when they see a little girl. Nupur bends down and smiles.

Nupur-Kya hua hai beta?

Girl-Ummmm, woh actually mujhe woh wale chips chahiye teh, par unn bhaiyya ne kaha ke woh katam ho gaye hai.

Nupur looks at Dia.

Nupur-Ummm, woh sahhi keh rahe hai.

The girl looks dissapointed.

Nupur-Par mera pass hai. Chahhi hai kya?

Girl-Please please please.

Nupur-Ok tum toh bilkul meri tarah sound kar rahi ho, toh mein mana kaise kar sakati hoon? Here.

She takes it, and then hugs Nupur.

Nupur-Ok abb yahan se jao, warna tumhari mummy soche gi ke mein tum ko chorri karne wali hoon.

Nupur smiles.

The little girl kisses her in her cheeks.

Girl-Thank you.

She runs off, and waves bye.

Nupur smiles and waves back.

Mayank smiles seeing this.

Dia comes.

Dia-Acha Nupur, abb toh challe na?

Nupur-Sure. Lets go.

Dia-Don't be sad, hum tumhe raaste mein wohi wale chips dhudh de ge.

Nupur-Ok then lets go.

Mayank sees her leaving. He has never seen anyone like her. He is lost in her thoughts. She is so cute and innocent. And so nice. She is.....

PEEP PEEP

Mayank realizes that the traffic stopped

and that he has to drive now

to Gunjan's b-day party.

Hey everyone, I know long time hogaya hai, meine update nahi kiya ek new OS. But here it is. And yeah one more thing iss OS ka part 2 bhi hai, and I will update that tomorrow. Because I think that this part is already long. Anyways, do comment.

-Lina-

P.S. Pakka promise will update tomorrow.

Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago

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