'Three True Words' (Two Shot story lol) - Page 2

this is such a beautiful fic sweety!
i love it!
adore it!
it is sooooo cute n sweet n amazing!
wonderful!
tc
sonia

am speechless huni!

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Oh.....I luv all the three words Bhoomi. Awesum two shot!!! Vishesh was always matured enoughto realize his feelings....but Tarani was not. N she took her immaturity as his...hehe. She cudnt realize her feelings but thought he didt understand his own feelings....hehe. That was a really funny characteristic of her....actually I knw its not a funny thing....but her sweet stupidity brought a smile to my lips.

Well, I need not say that u again described the feelings so beautifully.....but I felt this tym the lines were extra nice....and I guess I may keep saying it everytym.

Btw, I was just thinking of u n ur one story....here u r wid another beautiful shot. Dear u always make me smile....coz ur stories hav sumthing in them that forces to bring that smile....no matter how sad I am.

Anyways, gr8 work Bhoomi as always....or may be even better. W8ing for another one from u.

Hi Sumaiya,

Wow!! ur comments make me smile i always feel.. and here when i read that u smiled reading the story..made me feel awesome.. there is anythign more I could want from my story.. a beautiful smile across the face of a much more beautiful girl.. 😃..chalo mera kaam hoga..😆.. So liked reading the three true words.. hehehe it was just an idea and thought for timepass let me type and post it... never knew so many of u woudl enjoy n love it so much..

heheh Ya tarani wonderign why vishesh is immature n why he says he loves her.. nevr she thinks whether she has any such feeligns.. ehhe we girls sometimes tend to be like that.. not wantign ourselves to feel we love someone.. we want to ignore htat thought as we cant later get out of it.. we r more sentimental in that respect.. ya the stupid thought brought a smiel on ur face.. lovely lovely.. i will keep in mind that sumaiya will smile only when i have stp\upid thoguths in the mind of my story charcter...😆 tumhare liye unee thoda buddhu rakhun kya😆😆

As u know my comp is down .. one story is half done and cant retrive that data.. will see when i write one more.. may be short stories.. one shot ones i may write.. as time n mood prevails.. akhir itnaa mast readers hai to i have to na.. hope u enjoy whatver i write next.. thanks a lot for encouragin me so much.. 👏

tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: NabeehaFS

Ok now I read the whole story

three words for it

Full of Love

I just loved reading it

and u left me speechless

SO u read the story.. and found it full of love.. awww thats so swet of u.. The three words u mentioned . Are ROCKING>> three words for u.. " U SURELY ROCK' as the font style the colour the way u replied qutie creative.. enjoyed readign that .. am touched. and feels great ot have such great readers to my story.. 😃.. thansk for u encoruagemnt..

Originally posted by: ammy-ridz

Great!!! shot.

A very different concept indeed. Loved the idea behind Three true words. The proposal, pearl, watch...felt like small props used to define a much deep feeling and emotion.

Very well penned. the lines below too were really expressive.

Thanx.

Hi,

U liked the concept.. it was pretty simple and yet i felt i had to try this out.. as in my stories i had not touched with such a situation line.. ehhehe Yup the three true words... awww u liked that whole thought behind the pearl, watch.. I think it was that thought which made me to post this story ..and made me to write it very soon.. and it was in no time I posted it.. Ur kind words really encoruaged me so mcuh.. the depth and emotions which i was trygin to get the story in ..u felt it makes me feel so good.. feels good that u appreciated the lines below which i wrote... 😃.. thanks n tc..
Bhoomi

Originally posted by: lilsunshine_rav

heyya bhoomi.... so sorry m late... i had an afternoon class in college so i went soon after....anyways... jus read it now and wow dids... it was awesum.. i mean really.. the reality yet dreamlike feel of the story... very well dun... might i add a cliched out of the world... lol... jus awesum... the three words were carried out effortlessely.. another ovation for that.. write more soon please....P:S: although m a big fan of reading fictions/oneshots with characters from shows like Armaan riddhima etc.. i found your style really refreshing.... just off point.. i dunno if its just me but when reading names of characters i automatically link their traits in the show to the story which isn't always good.. lol... so the way you chose different names for them brings a breath pf fresh air into the forum.. hehe... sorry i kno its off point but oh well... would love to get to know you more... pm me... hehe....take care dids... rav...xx

Hi Rav,

Hey .. we r friends.. so no need to say sorry.. i obviously can undersntadnu must have been caught up with work. its ok .. class college.. its more important.. SO u read it now.. and u enjoyed.. it brough tsmile ot ur face na. thats all i want.. u read and replied makes me awesome abotu it.. i mean wanting to let me know how the story was. the thoguht itslef makes me feel touched.. The three words....ehehhe u thought the concept and the story was good.. 😳awww so sweet.. yup i try and write .. i have free time in this week . lets see.. the concept has to strike for that..

Hey u r not off point.. i so very much enjoy reading the point of view of enjoying readign serial based charcter or non serial based.. Yup for me as well when i write non serial based i find it very easy to write I am not distracted but can enjoy my flow. with hcarcter from serial i have to be careful with the mind set the character from that serial their style their attitude and u cant be untrue with ur emotions... there is a speciafic graph and u cant go out of it.. hey u enjoyign the hcarcter names . i try to have some new found names that goes with the feel.. 😃 hope to see more of u .. have a gre tim eenjoy...

tc have fun..
Bhoomi

Originally posted by: sparikh

Hi Bhoomi,

I'm slient reader of ur ss'. I don't have words to describe ur writing! Can u tell I love ur stories? 😊

I am always amazed at the work u come up with, all of 'em with special message.

-Sona

Hi SOna,

Oh Ok.. so u are one of my silent readers to my ff... Aww so sweet of u to think to write down ur feelings here abotu my written stories.. its wodnerful to haev my silent readers speak up... U can say u love my stories.. and when i hear that I love writign more of them... 😊 I try to write with simplicity and more of feeligns of reality to it and make it look interstign in a certain simple way.. good to know u like the message behidn it and enjoy reading... thanks for ur kind words of encoruagment.. 😃tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: ksg_sonia

this is such a beautiful fic sweety!
i love it!
adore it!
it is sooooo cute n sweet n amazing!
wonderful!
tc
sonia

Hi Sonia,

Am really happy to know that u enjoyed this storya ns felt it was beautiful... U adore it .aww thats so sweet of u .. to say.. Really feels amazing to get such a great response from u all... thanks for it.. it surely helps me in writing more.. tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

am speechless huni!

truly beautifully written!

do write more!

Hi, am so happy to know u liked it so much.... all the appreciation makes me more thrilled to write more for sure... great to know hte story was liked and enjoyed by so many .. i wrote it for atimepas sake as silly concpet striked. me 😆.. thanks for ur reply..tc

Bhoomi

bhoomi loved this one its just amazing do write some more

and plzzzzzzz a raj and swetha or raj and amna one

and a lamba one yaar plzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

bhoomi loved this one its just amazing do write some more

and plzzzzzzz a raj and swetha or raj and amna one

and a lamba one yaar plzzzzzzzz

HI Jyothi dear...

How r u doing... hope doing good... Am very happy to know u liked the story and enjoyed reading it.. Will surely try and write some more.. no concept or ideas yet.. for a long one i really need the idea to click... until now aisaa kcuh nahi.. and if the idea comes than also i will take my tiem .. u know i post after a large chunk of the story si ready and start posting.. let see.. i will keep ur request in mind for sure...

luv u dear.. tc have a great time...
Bhoomi

dekh lo di......maine aapki story ke baare mein apne frds ko bataya and they loved it.....
nabeehafs and ansh~arti ko yeh pasand aayi........

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

dekh lo di......maine aapki story ke baare mein apne frds ko bataya and they loved it.....
nabeehafs and ansh~arti ko yeh pasand aayi........

Hi Mahak,

Ok wow!1 u informed ur friends too .. and chalo good they liked it warna they would bash u naa key kya pdhadiyaa aur tiem waste to huaa dimaag ka bhajiya bhi bangaya...😆😆😆.. good they liked tum bhi bach gayi aur main bhi😆😆😆... so Nabeehafs and Ansharti are ur friends.. aww so sweet of u dear to recommend my written ff to ur frineds.. Hope u all friends have a great time together.. and hope i can write some more and make u all more entertained.. 😃..
luvu dear.. have rest.. take good care of urself haan..!!
Bhoomi

Originally posted by: kshanikaa

👏

u liked it.. 😃