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PLZZZ Sana contuied soon your part of Hogi Pyar Ki Jeet ff one
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Part 6

Samrat and gunjan were in car gunjan was in deep thought sam noticed that

S:chashmish ya hua

G:hmm tumhe nahi lagta kid r armaan kuch strange behave kar rahe the

S:ha mujhe bhi aisa laga pata nahi kya baat thi

G:anyways chodo yeh batao mayank hamare ghar sa kab wapas jar aha hai

S:well usna kahana 1 week ka baad woh chala jayega

G:huh she signed and said pata nahi yeh ek hafta kab khatam hoga

S:itna nafrat karti ho

G:samrat mujhe jhoot bolna walon sa sakth nafrath hai aur jo jhoot bolte hai woh kabhi bhi bharose ka layak nahi hote

S:par ho sakta hai jhoot bolna unki majboori ho

G:plz samrat mayank ki taraf dari karna bandh karo woh tumhari dosti ka layak nahi hai

S:par

G:jo dost apni dost ki sari life maang le woh dost nahi hota

S:par mayank na mer saath koi zabadasti nahi kit hi shaadi ka liye

G:samrat asal maina tum accha ho isilye sab ka bare mai accha socte ho

S:tum bhi acchi ho cchashmish bas thodi si naraz ho mayank sa just than th car broke down

G:kya hua

S:pata nahi lets see they got down after checking the car sam said lagta hai ab yeh thik nahi hogi mai dosri car mangwa leta hoon he called at home and said to driver to bringe the car

G:hmm car aayi tak kya kare

S:chalo waha chalet hai he should a dhaba little away from their they went their and sat kya khaogi

G:hmm kuch bhi sam ordered

G:samrat yeh sab log hame aise kyun dekh rahe hai

S:kyun tum nahi janti kyon dekh rahe hai

G:nahi janti isiliye toh puch rahi hoon na but before he could say anything some girls came upto samrat and asked some question regarding business and etc in which sam got totally engrossed that he forgot gunjan gunjan gotup from their and went where their were cooking and all was going on gunjan seeing continuously Sammy and than the girl how the girl were drooling all over him and than how they r trying to come near him but gunjan was upset because Sammy was paying no attention to her and not saying anything o girl ultha Sharma raha hai ullu ka patha she thought and in so much anger sh went near the reseption area and their was a glass of water she drank it and stopped in middle and started coughing than looked in the glass and pani toh accha lag raha hai par itna kadwa mazza kyun aa raha hai she thought and again started drinking whole glass she drank than called the dhabe wala he came

Dhabe wala : ji boliye madam

G:mujhe iss glass mai jo pani tha waisa hi pani aur chaiye

DW :par madam

G:jitna kaha uthna karo she shouted sam was sooooo much engrossed in his work that he did not noticed what gunjan is doing

DW :ha ha ek min abhi laya

G:suno 10 glass le aana nahi nahi 20 nahi nahi 25 hmm nahi nahi 20 I thik hai ab jaldi jao warna

DW :ji ha ek min abhi laya he ran in and brought more glass of what she was drinking

G:she drank 2, 3 glass at a time now she is totally out of control because she drank VINE

She started walking towards where sam and girls were discussing about business she went near sam and sat beside him but still sam did not saw her and gunjan was totally out in anger and stood up and said

G:hey u she said to sam ,sam turned his face to find gunjan standing beside him

S:arry gunjan tum toh waha baithgi thin nay aha kaise

G:huh tumhai agar in ladkiyon sa baat karna sa fursat mili toh dekhoge na she said still slightly shaking she was not able to stand because she drank more enough

S:gunjan r u all right

G:gunjan nahi chashmish kaho mujhe samjhe

S:ok ok chashmish r u alright I mean

G:no no no im not kyun ki tum in she said showing finger towards each girl ladkyon sa baat kar rahe ho isiliye im not fine

S:chashmish dekho

G:hey girl get out from here now she said seeing here and there am thought what y she is seeing here and there than she spotted a stick which was lying near their seats she went upto their and picked it up sam got shock seeing at her strange behavior on other hamd gunjan started running towards girls.girls got scared they too started running it was really funny scene ladkiyan itni ghabra gayi thi ki kya batao woh log toh aisa bhage ki nazar hi nahi aaye gunjan than turned towards sam

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G:aur tum,tumhari biwi ko chod kar In chudailon ka saath tum kya kar rahe tha

S:chashmish clam down dekho tum tumhe kya hua hai tum aise kyun behave kar rahi ho r u fine dekho sab hume dekh rahe hai lakdi chod do plzzzzzzzzz

G:no mai lakdi har giz nahi chodungi no no no she said samping the foots one after another

S:ok ok fine hmm pehla khana khalo phir phir stick pakad lena sam said in scared voice

Just than a guys passed thought from their she grabbed the glass and started drinking the vine again sam don't know she was talli and drinking the vine too he singned in relief thinking thank god yeh maan gayi warna anyways lets have dinner

S:chalo chashmish lets do our dinner she came sloly slowly and sat opposite to samrat ,samrat already started eating but gunjan was eating she was only drinking the vine sam saw it

S:chashmish pani baad mai pi lena first khana toh kha lo

G:no mujhe aur chaiye waiter she called out loudly the waiter came their in her one shout scared kahin usse bhi lakdi sana maar de sam got confused what the hell is she drinking he too took the glass from the waiters tray and smelled it and after smelling it he shouted OH SHIT and stood up and grabbed the glass

G:arry meri glass do she said making cute faces

S:nahi chashmish tum tum tumhari tabiyat kaharab ho jayegi aur pi lit oh

G:maina kaha na mujhe aur chaiye

S:no plzzzz chashmish try and understand plzzzzzzz yeh tumhare liye accha nahi hai just than the waiter came and said to him to pay the bill over on counter he nodded and than came near gunjan

S:dekho chashmish yahi bathi rehna mai abhi bill pay karka aaya ok

G:ok she nodded smling she was blabbering something.

After sometime sam came back to find no gunjan he got shock oh no yeh chashmish kaha gayi she started seeing here and their when a voice came

G:samrattttttttttttt he started seing here and their again the voice came arry samrat idhar udhar kya dekh rahe ho hirthik roshan ki tarah woh gana than a idha chala mai udhar chal

S:chashmish tum kaha ho

G:idhar dekho upar upar yaha dhabe pa yes guys gunjan dhabe ki chath par chad gayi this am was sooooooooooo shocked to see here there

S:arry chashmish waha kya kar rahi ho plzzzzzzzz nichai aa jao plzzzzzzzzzzzz

G:nahi mai niche nahi aungi she started her drama hey dhabepa sare kahana khane aye hai na woh log sab meri baat suno aur jo dhaba chalta ta haina woh bhi meri baat suno aur just by their a guy was passing on cycle she shouted hey cycle chalane wale bhai sab aap bhi thodi dair rukh kar meri choti si nanhi si baat sunlijiye he did not stopped so she throwed a small stone on him but missed it she said loudly ghada kahin kaaaaaa just she said hai toh mera pyare dhabe walon yeh jo admi hai na jo black colour ka coat mai khada hai all started seeing sam

S:chashmish dekho plzzzzzzz nichae aa jao he was really dam embaressed today

G:nahi mai niche nahi aaungi ha toh dhabewalooooooooooo yeh jo admi haina mujhe pani ka glass tak nahi pina deraha hai she was still thinking that she is drinking water

S:lekin woh pani nahi vine hai

G:I don't care mujhe who chaye warna I will suside suside

Just than a guys who is also drank equally asked

Guy : yeh suside kya hota hai

G:arry tumhe suside ka matalab nahi pata upar aao mai tumhai bata ti hoon she said

Guy :accha mai aa raha hoon sam holded his colar from back and said

S:arry rukh kaha ja raha hai pehla woh hi niche nahi aa rahi tujhe kaun layega

Guy :nahi jaunga tum bata do suside ka matlab kya hota hai

Another drank man said

Guy 1:arry bhai suside ka matlab side mai jaa kar su karna hota hai aise he was abut to show sam slapped him in frustuation gunjan giggled the guy fall down on ground and got unconscious and other guy went quit

S:gunjan dekho it is not good for ur health

G:no no no I want it bas

S:par

G:thik hai ma yaha sa khud jati hoon

S:nahi nahi nahi ok ok fine mai ek glass tumhe pina donga plzzzzzzz ab toh nichae aa jao plzzzzzzzzzzz

G:nahi who waiter wala kaha gaya agar usna dena sa mana kar diya toh

Waiter shouted : nahi nahi but before he could complete

G:dekha maina kaha than na yeh nahi dega so im doing suside suside mera marna ka baad yeh waiter jail mai chaki pissing and pissing and pissing waiter socha ki kya kharab kismath hai mujhe bhi isi jagah par kaam karna tha huh he joined today only as a waiter here in this dhaba

W:nahi nahi mai yeh keh raha tha ki maina mana kab kiya tumha vine dena sa arry pura dhaba tumhara hai jo chao woh le lo he said in scared voice sam was really scared too she was standing on edge of terrace

G:thik hai phir agar samrat aur waiter raji hai mujhe vine dena ka liye toh marna cancel hey waiter tub ach gaya jail jane sa warna mai tujhe jal mai aisa chaki piswati ki kya batao she said smiling

S:ok ok chashmish bate nichae aa kar bhi toh kar sakti hona plzzzzzz nichae aa jao

G:ok im coming she came down

After she came down she have drank three four glass she was really dam talli now she cant stand too so she requested sam to pick her up he picked her

Now they were walking on road gunjan was seing sam continuously and smiling sam noticed that

S:kya hua chashmish kya dekh rahi ho

G:yehi kit um kitna handsome lag rahe ho tum muskura kyun nahi rahe ho he smiled ha toh ab lag rahe hona aur bhi handsome like my darling husband she got shock hearing all the words from her

S:kya kaha

G:darling she said moving her face too other side she spotted ice cream wala and started making noice mujhe ice cream chaiye ice cream ice cream

S:thik hai thik hai plzzz chilana band karo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz he made her stand properly she stood than went upto ice cream and they buoyed ice cream and started eating it sam noticed how cute like a baby she was looking while eating ice cream now gunjan started singing in her sweet voice by hearing her song sam was feeling sooo delighted

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G:Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Re Na
g:Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Re Na
g:Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
g:Main Chali
Banke Hawa
gunjan ran from their

S:Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha

Than again gunjan sang

g:Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Re Na
g:Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Re Na
g:Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
g:Main Chali
Banke Hawa

Again gunjan ran from their too


s:Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha

suddenly it started raining gunjan too started singing


Mausam Bhi Be-imaan
Masti Ka Ye Saman
Roko O Logon Zameen Pe
Girne Laga Aasmaan
Thumak Thumak Ke Jhuloongi
Main Udke Gagan Ko Chhuloongi
Main Chali
Banke Hawa

Again she ran from their


s:Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha

they stoped near a bus stand and gunjan started singing

g:Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Re Na
g:Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Re Na
g:Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Baba Na

just than a cold wind passed from there gunjan sang these lines


Dhandi Dhandi Pavan

She said shwing her figure


Jalta Hai Ye Badan

Than she said hugging sam


Jee chahta Hai Bana Loon
Tujhko Apna Sajan
Hua Nahin Ye Pehle Kabhi
Meri Jaan Badal Gayi Abhi Abhi
Main Chali
Banke Hawa

S:Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha

g:Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Re Na
g:Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Re Na
g:Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
s:Arre Na Re Na Baba Na

Now sam got frustuated and he started singing after he saw his car came with the driver

s:Jaati Hai Tu Kahan
Jaaneman Jaanejaan
Ladki Hai Tu Khoobsurat
Ladka Main Naujawaan

He sad coming near her and like trying to hug her
Tujhe Gale Laga Loon Aa
Palkhon Mein Bitha Loon Aa
Ho Gaya
Mujhe Nasha

G:Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha

s:Zara Sa Jhoom Loon Main
g:Arre Na Re Na Re Na
s:Zara Sa Ghoom Loon Main
g:Arre Na Re Na Re Na
s:Aa Tujhe Choom Loon Main
g:Arre Na Re Na Baba Na
s:Ho Gaya
Mujhe Nasha

G:Rabba Mere
Mainu Bacha

She started running and sam was back of her

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S:Chashmish plzzzzzzz rukh jao mai toh bas mazak kar raha tha just nat that time gunjan was about to fall sam holded her by waiste he thought she was looking so cute he cant express in words he thought

He took her in his arms to their car and they get in

S:driver chalo

D:yes sir

Now sam was continuously seeing gunjan he was In love for sure but he don't know he was feeling really happy today as he have seen gunjan jeoulysy just than gunjan hugged sam's arm and smiled and said

G:SAMRAT MAI TUMHAE BAHUT PASAND KARTI HOON I REALLY LIKE UBY SAYING THIS SHE WENT INTO DEEP SLEEP

Sam was sooooooo shock to hear he cant belive his own ears is he heard right than after some time he thought he was dreaming or imagining the things bechara Sammy she confessed just now that she like him aur usse yeh sab dream lag raha hai fool they reached home

Next morning gunjan got up holding her head tightly her head as paining like hell just than sam came in smling and saw gunjan up

S:so madam uth gayi aap

G:ha kyun

S:nahi kuch nahi yeh lo peelo

G:yeh kya hai

S:well lemon juice tumhara sir dard ho raha hana thik ho jayega

G:tumhe kaise pata

S:bas pata hai tum sawal bahut karti ho yaar plzzzzz pilona

G:ok she drank and felt better and went in to washroom to get change

Sam did not say anything as he don't want gunjan to embaress herself in front of him after sometime they were on breakfast table were mayank was waiting for them

M:good morning gunjan sam he was looking happy becausetheir marriage date was fixed(mayor)

S:good morning gunjan did not reply she was really feeling not so well After bf sam gunjan left for hospital

On other hand armaan was standing near door of sanjeevni seeing weather gunjan and sam are coming or not just than ridz came

R:kya hua armaan ab kab tak yaha khade raho ga

A:woh aata hi hoga na

R:kaun

A:koi nahi

R:kya baat hai armaan tum mujhesa kuch chupa rahe ho jab sa dekh rahi hoon tum kisi ka intezaar kar rahe ho par kiska batate nahi

A:kiska bhi mai intezaar nahi kar raha basket he said sill seeing at the door

R:phir baar baar yeh door ki taraf kyun dekh rahe ho

A:bas aise hi before she could say anything armaan said woh log aa gaye

R:kaun she turn to find gunjan and samrat coming in

S:hi dr armaan hi dr riddima

A : r: hi

S:gunjan ab mai chalta hoon

G:ok

R:gunjan come I will show u ur duties and ur cabin

G:ok they went

A:bye sam by saying this armaan was about to go hen sam called out

S:armaan bhai he stopped on dead track he took the words in he closed his eyes feeling really gr8 than after sometime he turned

S:mai ko armaan bhai toh bula sakta hoon na

A:sure hmm koi kaam tha

S:yeh will u plzzz take care of my wife plz she is new here in Mumbai and she know no one here so

A:don't worry sam mai uska khayal rakhunga trust me

S:I trust u armaan was really feeling happy today

S:bye

A:byeeeee sam went arman was on cloud 9 today awwwwwww sam called him bhai and said that he trust too.

On other hand gujan was in her cabin when ammy came in

A:so gunjan kaisa laga tumhe yeh cabin

G:nice

R:yeh sab armaan na h karwaya hai khud

G:thank u so much armaan

A:ur welcome

Just than a person came in he was non other thannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Any guesses guys no gusses ok he was non other than RV a.k.a ranvijay

A:hey RV come here meet new dr of our sanjeevni dr gunjan and gunjan he is dr.ranvijay. gunjan is dead shock like hell.

Ok guys need to stop here I know u all want to read more but I have to study for my upcoming exams which r from thrusday

Rv na ki hai gunjan ka zindagi mai entry kya hoga sajan ki shaadi shuda zindagi ka iss entry sa ? armaan kya lagta hai samrat ka ? kya armaan gunjan ko bacha payega rv sa ? kya samrat jaan payega rv kya mahatva rakhta hai gunjan ki zindagi mai ? kyun gunjan hai pareshaan rv ko dekh kar ? kya samrat yeh ridz pata laga payenga ki armaan samrat ki zindagi sa kaisa relate hai ? kab batayega mayank gunjan ko apni shaadi ka bare mai ? kya nupur bata payegi sach ?in sab ka jawaab jaane ka liye wait till my next update.

Note:first of all I did not got time to reply last update comments really sorry for that but this update comments I will try to reply for sure.and sorry again as I promised a long update but I couldn't do so as I busy sorry really sorry kya karun yeh exams mera jeena haram kar dera isilye yeh hua im sorry guys I think this part is too boring too sorry for that too.guys as I told here is my hpkj update next update will be rnbdj till than enjoy this part byeeeeeeeeeeeeeee tc guysssss.

Love u all

Sana.

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hey sana its just awsome yaar
loved it a lot dear
keep it up...
do keep on writing...
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Originally posted by: ridhima1_gunjan

hey sana its just awsome yaar

loved it a lot dear
keep it up...
do keep on writing...

thanxxxxxxxxxxx dear 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb ,brilliant update.I loved it , u wrote it brilliantly.keep it up and thanks for the pm.
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great update sana... totally luved it..!!!
keep it up...
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Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

great update sana... totally luved it..!!!
keep it up...

thanxxxxxx jyotika 😃

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