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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Borna - Hey sorry for the late reply....Awww I'm glad Komz was right! Wow I'd never considered Anjali's wit to be unique but I'm guessing you're an avid FF reader so I do take your views in to account! I've not read many FFs out there purely because I'm too intimidated and the pressure would probably just make me hit delete on my story so far! lol
Oh I love the fact that you consider Atul a man in my FF...he's realyl tricky to write up which results in a lot of editing and deleting his dialogues to fit his character. Again, having not read many FFs I wouldn't be sure as to Atul's characterization in them but I can definitely guess why he's portrayed as childish and immature....because it's easy!! Even when I had started my FF I couldn't imagine him being very masculine after endless DMG episodes so it's just easy to give him a few babyish dialogues here and there.......but there was no way I was going to have an overgrown baby in my FF...nuh uh!! lol
Oh I've definitely come across a few witchy Anjali's in the few FFs I've read and I think it's such a shame that everyone considers her a villain. I'm a bit of a softie for the tough girl front with the soft mushy centre thing....it adds depth to her charatcer instead of being this one dimensional evil person.
You've just inspired me to make Anj and Atul more amazing!
Ramblings?! Are you kidding me....I love your comments and they better keep coming!! Thanks alot lovely I really do appreciate it! xxx

@ kd_luv - Aww I feel the same way! I like AN but LOVE AR...i can't wait until the story progresses as well! lol

@ Nadz - Woott...yay another round of applause lol!! Sorry for the late comment honey...I read it straight away but hadn't had the chance all weekend to sit down and reply!
Oh I thought you'd like RM! lol....no no I didn't make up the story....my mind isn't so morbid lol....I'll stick to the romances and leve the horrors to someone else!
The AN situation in a nutshell is basically their so comfortable after 6 years and they both know they're waiting till they get married so they both trust each other to kind of be intimate but in an innocent way aka sharing a bed. So yup they both know where to draw the line!
Yup atleast Armaan gets grossed out by other people's sex lives lol...
Yup Armaan was really messed up....I don't blame you for hating him....poor Riddhima....let's see what happens next chapter! lol Thanks honey! I'll try updating soon!! Love you xxx

@ hira5431 - Hey it's nice to meet you!! I've already added you to the PM list and I sure was happy to do it! I'm glad you liked it honey and hopefully I'll see more of you!

@ AbhiNikiLuver - Yup AN secret is out! Glad you liked it...I'll try to update soon and you're welcome for the PM. Thanks for commenting lovely! xx'

Sorry for the late reply guys! Normally I'm pretty good with replying fast but I've not had time all weekend! Though rest assured I always read (and reread) every single comment and reply to each one! Love you guys and thanks so much for the support! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
btw.. did u edit the part????
as i was going through the part again, i saw some thing that i hadnt seen the first time!!!!!! 😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ AbhiNikiLuver - Lol...no I didn't edit the part....that's funny! What did you see that wasn't there before?
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Posted: 15 years ago
i missed the middle of AN! i got the beginning and the end, but not abt them sleeping together or anything!!!! lol- maybe i wasnt reading right or what????that is sooo wierd!! 😲
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Shrina: No worries, I was super-stressed all weekend long! It happens...
I'm not really an avid FF reader since most of them are AR-centric and I'm an ardent AA fan...Most of the stories that I've glanced at seem to categorize Atul as a childish person and Anjali as a villain/vamp, so those are automatically not ones that I want to stick with. Basically all of the stuff that I end up rambling about is my own analysis from the show. If I can visualize Pankit and Sunaina as Atul and Anjali in your FF (which I effortlessly can, btw!) then it's guaranteed that I'll be commenting a lot.
I don't know...I just think Anjali is just different from all of the stereotypical characters in shows. There are witty women characters, but I doubt any of them are as openly sarcastic as Anjali is. I say that Anjali has this "caustic wit" in reference to all the times she would snap at Atul or say something sarcastic; but Atul was always on the same wavelength during the early days, and then again towards the end of season 1. Their banter sessions were the most natural ones I've ever seen onscreen.
Atul...Yes, I do feel that he's a man in this FF. I was going to say he's bordering on being this cool dude at times, even. And I LOVE that! I can see Pankit as Atul so easily; it's almost like you've mixed in qualities from his characters in Special Squad and DMG, and I've always wished that Atul was more self-confident and assertive in season 1 of DMG, but oh well.
It is incredibly easy to write up some kiddish dialogues for the sake of "comedy" but I just hate how a character can be degraded that way. I just can't write that way, personally. Innocence is one thing - it's hard to convey it without making it sound immature, but it can be done. I think you've definitely got that balance so far!
Anjali is the perfect example of someone who is soft-hearted and emotional, volatile, even, but doesn't want anyone to see that side of her. Hence the "tough girl" front. It's a defense mechanism of sorts. It's hard to break the wall that she puts up around herself, but it's not impossible.
You know something? I'm kind of curious to know why Atul behaves the way he does around Anjie, especially after the amazing Truth or Dare parts! Atul is still a bit of a puzzle for me...Multidimensional characters are always so much fun to read about!
Can you tell that I'm enjoying this discussion immensely?
I think I'll stop spamming your thread now!
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Posted: 15 years ago
have u written any other fics w/ AN???
if u hav, pls send me da links, thx
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey!

so i already left my bada mota sa long comment but i am here to remind you to update soon!!
I know you updated 3 days ago but i NEED more... hahah just please try and update soon!!
~anjie
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
plz update soon
waiting eagerly to know the next part
plzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Borna - Aww I'm totally with you on the babyish Atul vs vampy ANjali deal....I'm glad you can visualize the characters because that's what I'm going for when I'm writing it up!
I actually don't remember Atul being on the same wavelength as Anjie...I always saw him as her punching bag but that's probably because the episodes were so long ago.
I've never watched special squad but that's crazy that you think that I've mixed the qualities....maybe I should check the show out!
Oh I definitely agree that it's a cheap shot to give the characters babyish lines to make them look 'cute'.....it makes me cringe. You just can't claim the characters to be in their 20s and give them lines a 10 year old would say! Thanks for the balance comment...I do try!
I think I've tried my best to make all of the characters slightly mutlidimensional...it's more fun that way because there's always an aspect of each character that surprises you...
Oh I'm enjoying the discussion just as much!!!
Spamming?! Stop talking crazy girl!!
Thank you so much for your lovely comments!! I love reading them! xxxx

@ AbhiNikiLuver - lol..that part was in there from the beginning....This is actually my first FF so I don't really have any others...sorry! Thanks for commenting lovely!

@ lovebapu18 - Thanks!! I'll try lovely!

@ anjie - Awww I read your lovely comment! Lol I love the enthusiasm!!! I'm trying and trying but I've got an exam in 10 days which I'm cramming my ass off for!! I'll try my best but chances are I'll only be able to update after the exam! Sorry!! Don't kill me!!

@ Pooja - Hey! Awww....I'm really sorry to break it to you but I don't think I'll be updating till my exam which is in 10 days! I'm really sorry but trust me as soon as that exams over I'll get straight on it!! Thanks for the enthusiasm...it fuels me!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Aphrodite...

@ Borna - Aww I'm totally with you on the babyish Atul vs vampy ANjali deal....I'm glad you can visualize the characters because that's what I'm going for when I'm writing it up!
I actually don't remember Atul being on the same wavelength as Anjie...I always saw him as her punching bag but that's probably because the episodes were so long ago.
I've never watched special squad but that's crazy that you think that I've mixed the qualities....maybe I should check the show out!
Oh I definitely agree that it's a cheap shot to give the characters babyish lines to make them look 'cute'.....it makes me cringe. You just can't claim the characters to be in their 20s and give them lines a 10 year old would say! Thanks for the balance comment...I do try!
I think I've tried my best to make all of the characters slightly mutlidimensional...it's more fun that way because there's always an aspect of each character that surprises you...
Oh I'm enjoying the discussion just as much!!!
Spamming?! Stop talking crazy girl!!
Thank you so much for your lovely comments!! I love reading them! xxxx

Hey Shrina, I'm back again!
Yeah, I can visualize them effortlessly, so give yourself a pat on the back! 😃
The episodes that I'm referring to are from the very very beginning of the show, before he fell in love with her. So basically all of the Atul-Anjali scenes before Sapna's dandiya party had some sort of tension in them. On day 1, Atul called her "nakhrewaali," and then when they all went to that medical camp, he teased her about how she couldn't cook daal properly (hence the nickname "Jali Anjali"). There were a ton of other scenes - very, very small details that almost everyone probably overlooked - both old ones and more recent ones, too. I remember those scenes because those are the times when the original Atul made a comeback of sorts, and I love how he stands up to Anjali! I guess Atul has been shown as Anjali's "punching bag" for so long that people who don't really think to look any deeper gloss over the subtle things that make their relationship so realistic and meaningful. *shrugs* I live off of Atul-Anjali interactions, so naturally I pay attention to everything.
Special Squad is an awesome show! I still haven't watched a few of the final episodes yet, but I plan to do that very soon. Pankit was seriously awesome. Atul in season 2 reminds me of Ajay (Pankit's character in SS) a little bit - he's strong, sensitive, willing to stand his ground, even aggressive at times. And that makes me feel so happy, although I still wish Anjali was here with him! There'd be so much potential for an amazing love story! (*sigh* That's just me being the PaNa fan that I am again)
Yes, all of your characters are mature and multidimensional, which makes them all the more intriguing! 😃 Your point about giving a 20+-year-old childish lines...That pretty much nails my own view. Making an intern seem like a kid...That just seems ridiculous to me. That's why I tend to ignore all the OTT comedy that Atul has been used for. I just focus on his personality from the beginning of season 1, which came back every now and then...Now in season 2, it's here to stay, thank goodness.
Okay, that's all I have to talk about today! It's still one heck of a comment...An essay, really...
Hope to see an update soon!

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