mayur and sajan ff- here to help- part 14- pg86 - Page 51

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

tj owesome ff i liked it all the part is was 2 read plzzzz pm me wen u update nest time thanks

samira

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Please update next part soon.We can't wait any long......

Originally posted by: kris97

Please update next part soon.We can't wait any long......

thnx for remiding😃
just updating now

Sorryyyyy!!!! For the late post, been too busy and our internet didn't work all of this days so
extremely sorry. Thank u very very much for those who remindeded us, we were
really happy when we saw those comments. Thanks to specially kris_97 who hav
always been reminding us for our updates. Also to the other people who reminded
us, we know who u r but we r in a hurry.

Anyways, this isthe update that u hav been looking for, the reception, so plz read it and speciallycomment on it. We r looking forward to this so much.

Thx to "SaJan_RaDevBest" who
gave us the song that we r using for the reception. Hope u all remember the
time we asked for song suggestions and we listened to all lovely songs, but we chose
this one coz we liked it and thought that it was easy song for reception, so
enjoy it Guys.

Part 13:

In the morning at 8:00 am

Nupur was crying badly and couldn't even dial Shilpa aunty's
number, but finally she did it

N: (crying) hello'.maa

Sh: Nupur, r u alright, tum theek tho ho na

N: maa'

Sh: beta, calm down, tell me what's wrong, r u alright, is mayank alright

When Nupur heard Mayank's name she started to cry even more.

N:maa' mayank' mayank'

Sh: what's wrong with mayank, is he alright

N: no maa' he is not'he had an'(cried and handed the phone
to Samrat as she couldn't continue)

S: hello aunty, it's samrat

Sh: yes, beta what's wrong

S: woh' Mayank had an accident

Sh: Kya?

S: yes, maa, this moning Mayank wanted to go to temple then
go out but Nupur told him not to go and he wouldn't listen and he met with an
accident

Sh: (tears in her eyes) where is he now? And is he?

S: we have admitted him in Mumbai hospital and the doctor
said'

Gunjan came near Samrat and put her hands on his shoulder to console him.

Sh: wat did he say'

S: that Mayank is in a critical situation (shocked to hear this) and he might even loose his memory if he doesn't recover in 24 hours.

Sh: (crying) don't worry beta, he would be alright, I will come there right now

S: ok, maa, book the ticket and let us know so that I can send someone to pick u up

Sh: ok, look after Mayank, Nupur and urself

S: k maa

Sh: ok bye (hung up)

.................................

In the afternoon 3: 00 pm, Benji was send to get Shilpa
aunty to the airport.

When they reached the airport, he saw a lady aged in her
50's with eyes which showed that she was crying. He thought this was Mayank's
mother and went to get her.

B: exuse me,

Sh: yes,

B: r u Mayank's mum

Shilpa aunty stood up immediately

Sh: yes and u

B: hello, I'm Benji, I'm her to pick you up....so....aunty should
we go

Sh: yes beta

They had to have a long drive from the airport.

Sh: how is Mayank

B: sorry maa, no improvement at all

Sh: and Nupur

B: she has been crying the whole day; she has not had anything to eat

Sh: I always wanted to see her, but I didn't know that God would lead me to meet her in this way

B: don't worry maa, he would be alright

And they got a phone call from Samrat

B: Samrat'

S: r u with maa

B: yes, we r coming to the hospital

B: how is Mayank, any improvement?

S: not at all dude, he hasn't even opened his eyes yet

B: ok, we will be there in an hour or so,

S: ok bye

............................

Sh: is it Samrat,

B yes aunty,

Sh: any improvement with Mayank

Benji thought for a while and thought of saying he's okay

Sh: plz tell me Benji,

B: he is doing fine maa,

Sh: no, there is something wrong

B: it's just that he still hasn't opened his eyes yet....

Shilpa aunty was crying

..........................

At 3:00 pm, while Benji and Shilpa aunty were coming

There was a knock on Mayank's mansion

Samrat went to open it and a lady of her mid 20s appeared

L: I'm here to do the make-up for the girl

S: sure come in

L: I'm Laila

S: hey Laila, I'm Samrat

Nupur shouted from the kitchen

N: who is at the door

S: Laila come in

S: Nupur, it's for ur make-up

Nupur came out, and smiled at the girl in front of her.

N: would u like coffee, tea or cold drink

L: umm...cold drink plz

N: sure

Nupur left to get the drink

S: nice job then

L: kya (confused and then realised) oh yes

N: I'm ready'. Should we go up?

L: sure

N: bye Samrat

S: bye'. (Murmuring) here to ruin my time

Nupur was on the stairs

N: did u say something

S: no...nothing'

Nupur smiled and went to her room with Laila

.............................

Nupur was in her green lengha where she looked beautiful
with the make up done but one thing was missing that everybody forgot. THE
JEWELLERY!

Samrat entered the room with a sardarji who looked handsome
in his sherwani. Nupur didn't know who the sardarji was and didn't bother to
ask

S: Nupur, this is my friend

Nupur smiled

As Samrat realised Gunjan, Benji and Uday entered

S and G: Jewellery!

Both of them looked at each other and smiled

N: I know, that's what I am thinking, we all forgot

U: what do we do now, it's a Sunday, and all shops are
closed

S; Nupur, don't u hav any green colour jewellery

Nupur shook her head

Samrat looked at Gunjan who shook her head

L: Hey bagwan! I am getting late guys, nice to hav met all of u but I hav to go to a wedding

S: It's ok Laila, hop to see u soon, bye

..................................

N: If only, Mayank let us buy yesterday, this would not have happened

G: it's k di, don't worry

S: Nupur, show me all of ur jewellery, I will see if anything matches ur lengha

Nupur showed but nothing worked

Uday called different jewellers but it didn't work

S: The last option is'

N: is'.

U: to'

G: wear gold'..

N: kya??

Sardarji=sar

Sar: arrey kudiye, don't worry... can I talk to her plz

All friends nodded their head and left

Nupur was facing the mirror

The sardaji put a necklace on her neck and by that touch she
got shocked

Nupur's POV:

I was left in a room with a sardarji who I don't even know,
has these ppl lost it.

Oh god, what's this. I know this touch from somewhere

N: excuse me, who r u

The sardar put the nexklace on and Nupur turned around and
the sardar took his moustache off

Nupur's POV

Maayaa... Mayank

What is he doing here and this necklace.....

Oh god it looks fabulous

N: Mayank... tum

M: Haan Nupur ....mein

N: Oh god... this is beautiful... I can't believe this

M: but... this is not looking nice

N: what!?

M: compared to my beautiful wife... this looks not that gud

Nupur blushed

Mayank's POV

Her pink cheeks went rose as I gave my comment. But my comment
was true as an opinion and as a fact. She just looks too beautiful for this
necklace. How much I can buy a necklace for,
but she would always look billion times better than anything.

Oye! Mayank! Is that u, talking like this. The hardworking,
smart, intelligent Mayank. What happened to me? No, nothing, I am only talking
about my wife's beauty, that's not wrong, is it?

Mayank was just staring at Nupur while thinking all of this
and she felt quite shy. To break the silence she talked

N: Thanks, it's just amazing, I love it. It should have been
expensive (Mayank cut in)

M: how expensive something can be but it would not be worth
or beautiful as u r to me

N: (smile) thx, this is something that I would never forget
in my lifetime

M: Nupur u r my wife, I can give anything that I want to my
wife can't I? So now wear these earrings

N: Thx

Mayank looked at her in full passion while she put the
earrings. Done! The jewellery just
matched her lengha.

Nupur noticed that Mayank's collar was not properly done so
she moved towards him and was doing the collar. She was really close to Mayank.
And Nupur's bangles got tangled with Mayank's sherwani and she couldn't take it
out then Mayank touched her shoulders and made her stop, he untangled when she was
staring at him. Both of them were lost into each other's eyes. Nupur's hands
were on Mayank's shoulder.

Ahem... Ahem....Uday coughed

U: sorry guys to hav disturbed u, but just to let u know,
visitors r coming so don't come down till we say so.(went to door) by the way,
plz lock this door

Nupur blushed

M: thx Uday for ur reminder!

Uday went out and Mayank locked the door

Both of them were sitting on the bed and Nupur was looking just beautiful and Mayank just couldn't take his eyes off her.

Nupur's POV

He is looking at me as a hero looks at the heroine in the suhaag raat. What should I do? Can should I something?

N: Mayank, so how r u

M: hmm (he looked here and there) r u asking me

N: yes...

M: Mrs, Nupur Sharma I have been with u the whole day long and how do I seem to u? (Touching her nose)

Both of them laughed

...............

Benji was bringing Shilpa aunty back home.

B: Aunty we have to go to house to get Nupur and then go to
hospital

Sh: sure beta

Benji called and said "we r coming"

................

Gunjan was greeting everyone but she didn't even know who
they were but these things were formality. On the other hand, Samrat was
talking to some of his and Mayank's friends.

Neil=Ne F =Friends

S: so what's happening these days Neil

Ne: Kuch nahi, tum tho London me the, hum yahan tumare bina
bore ho rahi the....

S: Don 't worry guys im back so, why don't we go out
tmrw....with Mayank.

F: Sure why not.....

Ne: Who's that.....(Looking at Gunjan)....she looks hot....

S: speak properly, she's not those type of girls...

Ne: Why not....I wonder how she is...

S: Just shut up...how dare you...(taking his collar)

Ne: Samrat, what the hell is wrong with u...why r u taking
her side.....

Samrat let go thinking why? Why was he getting possessive over
her? Was something happening? He left and went to the garden.

Gunjan saw Samrat going outside and she followed him.

G: what happened Samrat?

S: Kuch nahi...

G :kuch to hai....

S: nahi kuch nahi....

G: theek hai, mat bolo

S: meine kaha na bu asi he...

G: okay Samrat. Let's go inside.

Gunjan was wondering what was wrong but it was okay. While
Samrat was feeling something for Gunjan.

................

Mayank and Nupur had a long talk with each other

M: Nupur, r u scared

Nupur shook her head confidently

M: u r not

N: as long as u r with me, I'm not

M: thx Nupur, for trusting me soo much

Nupur smiled

M: I will just go downstairs and check the music

Mayank stood up and Nupur held him by his wrist. He turned
round.

N: Don't leave me alone here, I'm bored, what can I do, no
movies, no one to talk to, what should I do, stay with me

M: k baba, i will be back in a sec, don't worry, it wouldn't
take that long, I want to keep my wife as a surprise for now, until that, sit here and dream about me.

N: oye, Mayank, y am I dreaming about u

M: that's what u do most of the time (thought of teasing
her)

N: do u think I have no other work to do, other than that

M: oh, do u, u might be looking at my picture and talking to
it.

N: does he read my mind? As if u don't

M: I never denied, I do dream in my office

Nupur blushed

M: but not about u

N: kya? (Shocked)

M: hmm, ya, i don't dream about u but about Sara

Both of them laughed

N: Oh.. I never knew that Mr Mayank was interesting in Sara
and not his wife

M: I was just kidding.... but I know u do dream about me...

N; no I don't

M: u do

N: I don't.... (Mayank stared at her in her eyes which she
got lost into)

M: u do

N: I do...

M: yess... this is what I said

N: nooo I don't......uuuuu (running after

Mayank ran outside and closed the room.

...............

Shilpa aunty and Benji reached the mansion and Shilpa aunty
saw that the house was open

She entered

Many ppl were around her, all were talking to each other.

Shilpa aunty's POV

Are they here to see my son? Has something bad happened? Y
god punishes me like this? Where is Nupur? What happened to her? Mayank? People
look happy not sad and decoration, what's all this about?

A sardar was running on the stairs and stopped when he saw
Shilpa aunty

Sh: who r u

Sar: don't u know me

I heard this voice somewhere

Sh: Mayu.....???

The sardar smiled

Sh: y did u do this to me? I was really scared, Mayu...
(cried)

Mayank went down the stairs and hugged her

Sh: why r u like this, y r there ppl around the house

Samrat came from behind

S: maa.. we will tell u.... nothing happened to Mayank, he
is completely fine, it was just a prank to make u come here immediately as it's
Mayank and Nupur's reception

Sh: reception?

G: yes, reception maa. It was a surprise one

Shilpa understood the whole drama happening

Sh: oh god, y was this done (in tears)

M; it's fine maa, it's ur bahu & co's idea, I was just
cooperating

Sh: Nupur....

M: I will get her maa

.............

Mayank went to get Nupur and Samrat announced to the relatives that the couples are arriving, while Samrat was going he bumped into Gunjan and she nearly fell but he held her and was just lost.

Gunjan's POV

Oh my god....

Why is Samrat staring at me....

Why am I lost in his hazel eyes...there just so beautiful

What's happening to me....

Samrat's touch was just soo.....comfortable......

Gunjan what is wrong with you

Why am I feeling like this? Maybe......

No that can't happen

G: Umm...Samrat

Samrat let go and Gunjan just blushed. Samrat thought she
was just looking like an angel.

Then he went and announced.

..............

Mayank entered the room and saw Nupur looking at his picture
and smiling

Ahem.. ahem

Nupur jumped, she was surprised to see Mayank

M: so someone's doing whatever I told them to

N: no nothing like that and she put his picture under her pillow

M: Nupur... (he gave his hand forward and she gave hers in)

Mayank took her outside,

N: where r we going?

M: surprise for u

N: Surprise? What is it?

M: just wait a min, I will show u

N: u mean 60 seconds

Mayank stopped

M: Mrs Sharma, 1 min is exactly 60 seconds, but now don't
talk and just come, no more questions, otherwise no surprise.

Nupur smiled and stopped talking

Both of them went down the stairs and people clapped as they
came down the stairs

Samrat, Uday, Benji, Gunjan stood in a line. Mayank made
Nupur stand in front of them

Nupur's POV

The 4 of them moved to a side and I saw..... maa, I couldn't
believe my eyes, she was here, in front of me, in a shalwar which she looked so
young in, I looked back at Mayank who smiled at me.

N: (slowly) maa...

She nodded and smiled. I went and hugged her.

N: How r u maa,

Sh: Beta, u look lovely, u are too beautiful.

N: Thx maa, I can't believe that I saw u

Sh: when it's ur plan then how could I escape

N: no, maa, they told me that ur flight is cancelled and
that u couldn't arrive, it's y, I was shocked

Nupur went to Shilpa aunty's side

N: so who's plan was this

Sh: so it means they made a fool of both of us

The other 5 got together and smiled

M: didn't I tell u guys, that if these two get together then
the house would be full of questions

..............

They all talked and Shilpa aunty went to refresh herself,
when she was back they were ready to cut the cake and the cake was cut grandly.

Both Nupur and Mayank fed each other lovingly then to
everyone else.

And the dance started.....

(This is a vm we made plzzz have a look and comment tnx)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=652O7md76Qw[\YOUTUBE]

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Hey Guys

Again extremely sorry for this delay. Thank for those who reminded us, it was really nice of u.

Note we would like to tell u that we r going to have our GCSE's in the next two months so that means until 1^st july, we will not be updating as our exams r quite important to us so plz leave ur comments and we kind of tried a new style of writing by giving the POV of the characters, can u plz let us know if u would like us to cont or not, u r the readers so it's up to u.

Hope u enjoyed the
vm, it's only my second(Thanu) and Jasmin's 1^st one so sorry if it
wasn't the best one, but i always like to see a vm more than wrtting what
happens throughout the song so that's about the vm on the reception. We r really looking forward
for ur comments on the part and the vm sppecificlly so don't miss out plzzz.

And... finally....
wish us gud luck for our exams.

Bye

TJ

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comment

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=652O7md76Qw [/YOUTUBE]

awesome part yaar..loved it to the core.........

awesome part
loved it
loved their plan
and loved all parts of both mayur and sajan

Originally posted by: fanofmjht

awesome part
loved it
loved their plan
and loved all parts of both mayur and sajan

tnx
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Heyy AWESOME PART!!!!!!