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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nadz_J



Awwww Thank u😃 U reli liked it that much😛

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😆😆😆😆 lolz if that had to happen to me, i wud die with emabarssment😆😆😆

Yup they are shooo shweeeet😳😳

Thank u😳

Luv
Nadz😳




Yes Nadz, I really liked it that much😃 Koi shak???😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cezzuprerna

awesum!!!!aly soo romantic part.....rahul in towel gosh😳...and why did the knock knock come there😉



Awww😳 Thanks a lot Prajna for liking it!!!😃. Well i dont think im good at writing romantic parts, but gave it a short😆. And as to why the knock-knock came there, thats for the next writer to decide😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nadz_J



haan haan pari karlena decide but after her its u okay😈 and u cant say no😉

nadz sorry lekin mein cont nahi karsakti, have so many assignment and exam due on Mon😕
lekin will cont later😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Aly
Updated my post on Pg 39
apna score padlena😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

As Rahul goes to open the door.. Muskaan shouts "Wait!!"

Rahul turns back towards Muskaan giving her a questioning look "Kya hua" he says..

Muskaan comes closer to him and whispers "zor se mat bol.. pehle mujhe yaha se jaane do" saying that Muskaan exits Rahul's room through the connecting door..

Rahul slips on a shirt and track pants quickly and goes to open the door..

A guy notifies him saying that all students are eating dinner now.. if they would like to join..

Saying ok.. Rahul closes the door..

Rahul goes up to the connecting door.. and knocks lightly "Muskaan" he says quietly… hearing no response.. Rahul slowly turns the knob and let's himself in..

He sees Muskaan fast aleep on her bed.. she did not change or anything.. she just kind of fell onto the bed and slept..

Rahul keeps looking at her as she sleeps on.. looking angelic.. he sees that a loose strand of hair was bothering her.. so he slowly tiptoes his way to her bed.. as he reaches to move her hair.. Muskaan turns around.. entrapping his hands in her hands.. Rahul not wanting to awaken her looks around the room.. wondering what he can do.. finding no way.. Rahul slowly pulls a chair close to him with his leg and settles down in it..

Soon thereafter Rahul dozes off.. and Muskaan opens her eyes.. she was awake the whole time.. she smiles looking at Rahul's sleeping figure..

"Rahul.." she starts of softly.. "tumne mujhe uss din I don't love you keh diya.. and that broke my heart.. and uske baad I tried to forget you.. I really did.. but jo kaam na munkin hai.. mai kaise kar sakti hoon.. but ever since the past week.. we have been having constant interactions with each other.. that day in the library.. when I fell into your arms.. I felt something.. and I know you did too.. and just now when we were soo close to each other.. I felt a shockwave going through me.. all the times you looked at me lovingly.. I was confused.. why do you tell me that you don't love me.. but then you do everything with love for me.. I still don't know the reason kyu tum mujhse chupa rahe ho Rahul.. but I want to find out.. I want to find out why you love me .. but refuse to tell me" Muskaan says this all blushing and smiling at Rahul.. Rahul did not hear a word of it.. as he was sleeping…

Saying all this Muskaan kisses Rahul's hand that is within her own hand.. and saying a sweet good night to his sleeping figure.. Muskaan drifts off into sleep with Rahul's hands in hers..

**Next Morning**

Rahul wakes up.. looking around the room.. then his gaze falls on Muskaan.. "Gosh how can someone be sooo breath-takingly gorgeous??" he moves her hair off her face with his free hand..

Muskaan stirs.. looking at Rahul.. and whispers a sweet "good morning" to him.. Rahul is slightly taken aback by this sweet gesture of Muskaan's.. he says good morning and leaves to go to his room.. little does he know that Muskaan has it all figured out!

After they are both ready.. they have breakfast and head to the bus.. Muskaan takes a seat.. expecting Rahul to sit next to her.. disappointed.. Muskaan turns to look out the window.. soon after she feels someone next to her.. thinking that Rahul has changed his mind.. she turns around with a huge grin… but the grin soon turns into a look of horror.. who would sit next to her but..

DA DA DA!!! (this is the suspense sound theu have in movies!!) 😆


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Will post next part after a while.. 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
Shilpz di amazing part👏
totally loved it. Awwww the sleep scene wasso cuteeeeeee
muski loves rahul and wants to find out why he doesn't declare his love aur waha rahul loves muski but
wants her to change back to her bubbly self😆😆
Part suspense main end kardiya😉
jaldi cont karo, want to know who sat beside muski😉
oh and loved ur suspense music😆😆
Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great parts nadz, cezzuprerna, aly and shilpz!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok Another short and boring part 😛
Im making Mohit a total creeper.. like how SRK was in Darr 😆
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Mohit!!

Muskaan gulps.. looking at him.. he slowly turns around.. giving her an evil grin.. almost mad! (like SRK gave Juhi in the movie Darr)

The last few years after Muskaan escaped his cluches.. Mohit has deceived many girls.. he has fooled them with his sweet talk and taken advantage of their gullibility and took their money.. but for a few weeks now.. his target has been Muskaan.. ever since he heard that Muskaan is coming back to India.. he has been planning to get her back.. to get her money…

Muskaan is gripped with fear.. this is the exact reason she did not want to come back to India.. and the thing she most dreaded is happening..

Muskaan turns around.. as she catches Rahul's eye.. she tries to signal to him that she needs his help.. but Rahul had picked the wrong time to ignore her… he was tired of her constant show of attitude… so he decided he would not give her any bhaav..

Muskaan's heart hits against her chest.. what can she do??

As the bus comes to a halt.. everyone gets down.. but Mohit does not move.. in turn blocking Muskaan from leaving the bus..

But lucky for her.. Mr. Sanjay comes back to check the bus and makes Mohit and Muskaan leave the bus.. as soon as Muskaan is out of the bus.. she runs to Rahul's side..

R: Muskaan tum..

M: uh.. Rahul.. wo.. *she kind of isharas back at Mohit with her eyes*

R: kya Muskaan..

As Muskaan continues her isharas.. Rahul thinks she is upto something stupid again and walks away from her..

Once in the building.. the teachers tell all to choose a partner..

Muskaan runs upto Rahul.. "Rahul.. please be my partner" with a shiver in her voice..

R: um.. Muskaan I was going to..

"Rahul please.. " Muskaan begs.. with the utmost fear in her eyes..

Rahul has never seen Muskaan like this.. so he agrees.. "Theek hai Muskaan"

Muskaan gives him a slight smile and stands very close to him.. that is the only place she feel safe.. only place she feels protected..

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There is my part!! 😳
off to bed now.. I wanna see something written by the time i get up please 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Shilpz di loved this part tooo
us Mihit ka tho kuch karna padega😡
bichari muski is so scared. mohit is a creeper and u described it very well😆
thanx for cont
so who's cont next?
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok guys this is the next part. Sorry I don't think it's going to be very good. I was actually meant to study but couldn't resist myself from writing a part😆😆
After their first task, all the students were given a half an hour break. So rahul decided to go the park nearby. All this time muski was just staying close to rahul,not letting him get away from her sight. Rahul noticed this and was a bit worried and annoyed at her behaviour.
R(thinking): Ab isse kya hogaya hai, ek min mein kehti hai ki mujhse dur raho aur ab khudi mujhse glue ki tarah chipak gayi hai. R: Muskaan, muskaan...... Muskijust didn't pay attention she was looking around to see if mohit follwed them to the park. when suddenly she felt an arm on her shoulder,she turned around and was relieved that it was none other than rahul. But she could tell from his face that he was confused abt her change in behaviour, but she just didn't know how to tell him abt Mohit. R: Muskaan kisse dhood rahi ho, kabse bula raha hun tumhe. aur yeh tumhare chehre pe pasina kyun hai, tum theek tho ho na? M: main...woh...woh kuch nahi sirf ... R: Muskaan I don't understand you, tumhi kehti ho mujhse dur raho, tho tum kyun mere itne kareeb ho ab? Muskaan now realised that they were really very close, only few inches away from eachother. Rahul started going closer, muski's heartbeat started rising again, she was not scared anymore, but there was a new feeling inside her, didn't know what it was, but she felt very good. She just kept on staring at rahul' eyes. Rahul slowly went near her ear and whispered R: Mujhe ghurna band karo, log kya sochenge? Muski came back to realty; Main tumhe ghur nahi rahi hun and moved away from him R: thike tho main chal raha hun.. M: kaha jaa rahe ho, main bhi tumhare saath aati hun (she was overcome by fear again) R: tum nahi aasakti muski, main washroom jaaraha hun M:oh, ok abhi jaana zaroori hai kya (asked in a tensed voice) Rahul just looked at her blankly Is ladki ka pagalpan din bhar din badtha jaaraha hai M: mera matlab hai ki, jaldi ajao, mein tumhara wait karungi.
Once rahul left muskaan started remebering yesterday night's events when she slept peacfully after a long time knowing that rahul was right beside her. Someone called her name MUSKAAN. She knew that voice, the voice which haunted her. she slowly turned around and found mohit approaching her with an evil smile.
Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago

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