EHSAAS (AR version) pt 57-end pg 53 10/27 - Page 25

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

hey Sangeeta

have been reading the story and writing so far
a few bits cracked me up
i'm liking speed at which u're posting the updates
wonder how much long it will take for Armaan to realise things
cant blame him entirely,its the wrong stituations and the evil ppl in their life,lets see how u make this a happy end(hope that is what u're intending to do)

oh and the choice of songs is great

cheers
Hina

Originally posted by: bheegi

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for not cometing earlyer

i was bit bussy n also bit lassy

but comming to all the part

they were fantstic

just loved it

i cant belive u already posted 36 parts now

they r fantastic

poor ridhima

i hate nothe abhimanyu n anjali for ruining their 1st anywersery and also that Dr modi

stupid guys was only interest in the money

serously speeking there are very few girls or to be honest there are no girl out ther like ridhima but all the bioys are just like armaan thats for sure

looke for only their interst

got a car and all was because he was felling guilt for how he behaved with her

and putting it as a gunerous hubby

my foot

thier wedding naya had strted to waggel a bit

hope it does not break n sink in to a deep see from where it cant return

loved the mvery much di[/quote]

please no sorries Nruti. I know ur busy with college...so no problems. Yes, this ff of mine shatters the image of an ideal lover armaan that we all have. This is a more realistic man...ur right most men are like this😕 DMG type armaan sirf fictional hota hai.

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ok di no sorries

i m glad that u understnad me

so true that DMG armaan is total fake

its true that this armaan in ur ff is what reality most of the boys r like him

thats true n also getting attention form all the cilabrity he feels he can get anything

ya they r perfect

loved it

Originally posted by: dmg_fanatic

heyy bheegi di

just read the whole fic......ofcourse not in one go but within 2-3 days and i am wondering ki kya itna acha sach much koi likh sakta hai....

o god i mean u r the best writer i have ever come across

such perfect timing of dialogues and expressions and packed perfectly with all the emotions...

love the romantic scenes and how clearly ur characters emerge from within the story....anyone can give pages of charactersketch reading ur clear language

sach EHSAAS ne mujhe ye EHSAAS karaya ki sach much realistic fics bhi ho sakti hain....fairytales are not the only cup of tea for beautiful couples

they too have their shres of ups and downs......

o god di.....i just cant stop speaking about this fic

just too fantastic to be exprssed in words

the entries of new characters are all so much in place.....the roance is not overdone nor understated........the dominance of armaan and ridhima's tolerance portrayed so perfectly that at places sympathetic tears flow down my eyes.....anjali's and abhimanyu's wickedness making fear run inside me even though i know AR are tied for eternity with the thread of love but still.....i know relationhips will become stronger by suffering through this weak phase.........but still i do not want them to separate

everything described so well ... i can see it happening in front of my eyes...cannot get over the charisma

pls pls pls continue soon

and pehchaan ko mat bhuliye....usi fic ne meri nazron mein aapki pehchaan IF ki best writer ki pehchaan banaayi hai...lolzzzzz

i promise to comment this time...and make up for all the updates i reserved spaces for but cud possibly not comment due to my exams

love

kavya

Originally posted by: ammy-ridz

Hi di,

Nice parts..but really saddy saddy too. I can see Both Armaan and Riddhima slowly Drifting apart.

The couple who once found the qualities lovable in their better-half now do find them annoying . Couldn't believe Armaan said that chote shehar stuff. Power and success has definitely gone to his head badly.

Feel really sorry for Riddhima...she din't deserve all this atall.

Omg!!! So That Witch did manage to spoil their Day...I just feel like ..arghhhh....

Now Abhi and Anji both are playing Dirty Games with AR. Hope AR soon can uncover the truth and the Mask from the faces of their Respective 'Friends' as they claim themselves to be.

I think Armaan hasn't still understood Riddhima...she needs to know that she has No interest for Materialistic happiness...but it is the emotions which matter the most for her.

Thanx.Continue soon.

Hey Bheehi

Anyways back to the point it is only Ridz who actually loves the real Armaan. I think I've given enough critical analysis for the day. Let's look at some positive things, I loved the way he manaffoyed her, his never fails to work! The making up session is always far more interesting after a fight!😳

I know I keep saying this but it is true that you are and excellent writer. You have described every emotion so perfectly from their argument to the making up.

Btw I see you've updated your step child. Now please pretty please update few more parts I really want to find out what happened next!

Tc

Nahida xxXxx

Originally posted by: khahani

Hey Bheehi

Hmm 6 parts to comment on, this is going to take a longggggggggg time lol. From part 30 ' 36 there has been so many ups and down in AR's life. When one let's a 3^rd person into their relationship it automatically turn sours and such is the case with Armann Riddhima and of course Armann has his fair share in the breakdown. The way he humiliated her saying the "small town mentality", it was no excuse even if he was angry, she gave up everything for him and this is how he repays he by lies and more lies just to get fame and money. Does he not realise that Anjali and the other so called celebrity are only prising the delicious doctor (sorry couldn't help it, as much as I'd love to hate him but the adorable dimple smile melts my fragile heart and I think such is the case with Ridz).

Anyways back to the point it is only Ridz who actually loves the real Armaan. I think I've given enough critical analysis for the day. Let's look at some positive things, I loved the way he manaffoyed her, his never fails to work! The making up session is always far more interesting after a fight!😳

I know I keep saying this but it is true that you are and excellent writer. You have described every emotion so perfectly from their argument to the making up.

Btw I see you've updated your step child. Now please pretty please update few more parts I really want to find out what happened next!

Tc

Nahida xxXxx