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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

heyyy bheegi...

nice parts...25-28...riddhima converting the bare walls into their cosy house...and the AR moments...muskaan and riddhima's bonding was really cute...loved the way she took care of riddhima...glad riddhima has a great friend in this new city :D
and riddhima and anji's face-off...glad that riddhima snapped back at anji...abhi eyeing riddhima...oh no thats bad...
and anjali..such a shrewd woman...the way she manipulated abhi to get what she wanted...urgh..she disgusts me...
hope armaan doesnt fall for it...
story getting interesting by the day...
awaiting the next parts...



thanks sunaina. Yes, ridz still has some of her spark- the way she shut anjali up! Anjali is unfortunately a very shrewd and manipulating woman😕...let's see if she succeeds in her mission or not

[quote=sweet_mittal]hey di awesome and great part
love the way muskaan and ridz become friends really fast
arrrrrrrrrrrrrrr anjali and abhi r such a jerk
i hope armaan don't go to far with anjali
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
mittal[/quote]

thanks Mittal! Wait and see😊...u know what happens😉😆

[quote=sassya]hey.......ur ff is just great.so many twists yet simple and good.i feel bad for ridhima's miscarriage,i hope abhi and anji wont come between them.
i love the bond between armaan and ridhima,its soo cute,i hope everything will go great.can't wait to read more and i am soo happy u update it daily.continue soon.[/quote]

thanks sassya...good to see new readers on board. I can update this one everyday as it is an old ff of mine😃
Edited by bheegi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kshanikaa

Hiiiiiiiiii dii
i feel like am a student and submitting my daily/weekly progress report to my teacher....😆
ur funny....2 more parts will come soon😆 make sure u write reports on them too😆
read 24 parts.........total fun and am loving this story sooo much. Its as romantic as definitely yes.....and their ooty trip has been fantastically mentioned.....even minute details were written specifically.

Thanks....i love writing romantic parts esp the nok jhonk ones😆


riddhima had grown as an excessive dutiful wife i suppose.......poorly devoted girl........didnt take care of herself and suffered baby's loss...........armaan has been acting dominantly and may be ignoring his pretty wife's internal desires oftenly under illusion of his loving and caring capacities.....

Ridz has changed from an independent woman to one who is getting more and more dependent on armaan. armaan on the other hand has started taking her for granted

anjali..........she is a real unethical social threat....armaan was so disturbed after his visit to her house.........i fear if he has been really disturbed by her action and doubts himself..........thatswhy he wanted to return to his comfort zone ASAP......

exactly! That's what i was trying to portray...Anjie's disgusting act probably did stir something inside him but being a faithful and impulsive hubby, he just decided to bring his wife back in the middle of the night!

lets see whats mumbai has in store for the two of them.....eager to read further....!!!

loving it......!!!!!! 👍🏼thanks kshanikaa



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OMG wasn't Anjali enough now Abhi is also involved in the little sick game! If Armaan falls for their trick I'll loose the little bit of respect I had left for him!😔

Sorry couldn't write a detail comment but enoyed reading after a long hectic day with the children at school! lol
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thanks nahida I am glad the ff could relax u after ur hectic day....i will post 2 more parts tonite!
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PART 29:



The party continued into the wee hours of the morning. Riddhima nudged Armaan to leave several times, but he kept delaying their departure on one pretext or the other.



As the night progressed, the level of sobriety of the attendees kept decreasing by the hour, making Riddhima extremely impatient. She was appalled to see Armaan refilling his glass repeatedly and enjoying the attention being showered on him. She was happy for his success, but not at the way it was being presented to him.


"Lagta hai ghar jaana chaahti ho? I don't blame you….these society parties can be a big bore!" Abhimanyu came up to Riddhima, "if you want I can drop you back…Armaan can get a ride from someone later."



Riddhima looked at Abhimanyu strangely, "Nahin Abhimanyu! Aisi haalat mein main Armaan ko akela nahin chhod sakti….he will go home with me!"



"OH….got it….I know Armaan ko zyaada peene ki aadat nahin hai…..if you want I will drop both of you…..let me get him," Abhimanyu offered his help. Riddhima was grateful to him, "thanks Abhimanyu."



"Any time Riddhima," Abhimanyu smiled back and walked towards Armaan. The two men were soon walking back; Armaan with a slight stagger in his gait. Riddhima held Armaan's arm to keep him a little steady. Armaan just mumbled and talked jibberish as they walked to the car.



Abhimanyu helped Armaan get into the car and then drove them back to their apartment. Riddhima was ashamed to see Armaan in an inebriated state. She blamed herself for letting him go so far, "kaash maine Armaan se party mein hi kuch kahaa hota….aakhir main uski patni hoon….mera farz hai usey sahi raasta dikhaana."

Abhimanyu helped Armaan back to their apartment, "Goodnight Riddhima….chalo achha hai kal Sunday hai…..make a strong cup of coffee for him tomorrow morning…BYE!"


Riddhima thanked him again and closed the door behind her.


Armaan was already plunked in bed when Riddhima got back to their bedroom. She took his shoes and socks off and went to change into her nightclothes.



She came back and lay awake on her pillow for some time. The events of the party ran through her mind like a movie; she was still disturbed by the whole evening. She knew that being a good Plastic surgeon was Armaan's dream and as a wife she needed to support him in his endeavors, but she was not able to reconcile to the fact that it was important for him to network and hob knob with the rich and famous as part of his profession. Was this the way to achieve success? Is this what they had both dreamed of?


She felt an arm around her waist as Armaan came closer, "Hi jaan…itni door kyon so rahi ho?" his voice sounded slurred.



Riddhima turned her face away from the strong alcohol breath. Armaan placed his hand on her face and turned it towards him. He bent over to kiss her face, but Riddhima pushed him away, "Armaan…please stay away!"



Armaan was furious, "Riddhima! What do you mean? I am your husband damn it! You can't say no to me! All the ladies at the party would die for me, aur tum nakhare dikha rahi ho?"



Riddhima got out of bed in anger, "Armaan….haan main tumhari patni hoon par aisi halat mein tum mere paas bhi mat aao!"



Riddhima's words stung him a little; enough to shake off some of his stupor


Armaan realized that he was a little drunk; he smelt his breath and got up to brush his teeth. He came back after brushing his teeth and a rigorous mouth wash, a little more sober and ashamed of his behavior, "Riddhima! Riddhima! Kahan ho tum?" He found her asleep on the sofa in the living room. He tried to wake her up, but she just turned her face away from him, "please leave me alone!" she said, almost tearfully.




Armaan did not have much patience to cajole her at this hour of the night, "Fine!" he stomped back to their bedroom and shut the door behind him in anger.


NEXT DAY:



Riddhima made a strong cup of coffee for Armaan and left it at his bedside. She did not wake him up in her usual way. She was still upset with him about getting drunk and then trying to force himself on her last night. She was a devoted wife, but her self-respect was more important to her than her dedication to her husband!




Armaan and Riddhima continued their cold war with each other all day. Both of them waited for the other to take the initiative. Armaan was annoyed and ashamed at the same time. He knew it was his fault, but his ego had suddenly become a little too big to apologize.



Being a Sunday, they had no choice but to give each other cold stares all day long. Armaan could not take it any longer and finally left for a walk. He was gone for 2-3 hours. Riddhima was a little worried about him, but her anger about last night was still fresh in her mind. She could tell that he was embarrassed about his behavior, but his pride was keeping him away from her. She continued with her housework routine as usual.



She heard him enter the apartment when she was folding the laundry.


She had her back turned to him as she put his clothes in the closet. She saw a hand with a rose in front of her. She tried to suppress her smile and pretended she had not seen the flower.


"Theek hai mujhse naaraz ho, par bechare rose ka kya gunah hai….is rose ne tho aaj paani bhi nahin piya, sharaab tho door ki baat hai," Armaan studied the slightly wilted rose.



Riddhima turned away without responding and walked towards the kitchen. Armaan followed her with the rose in his hand, "OK OK….please rose tho le lo…beshak is kaante ki taraf dekho bhi mat!" he pleaded.



Riddhima shook her head and giggled a little.



Armaan was elated to see some response from Riddhima. He ran towards her and stood in front of her, "I am really sorry about last night….I promise no more excessive drinking….tum chaaho tho bilkul sharaab bandh kar doonga….no social drinking either….par please mujhse naaraz mat ho…Basanti bolti hi achhi lagti hai."


"Tho Veeru se kaho, kal jaisi harkat kabhie na kare," she rolled her tongue and folded her arms in front of her chest.


"Veeru bahut sharminda hai, aur apni Basanti ko manaane ke liye aaj Chaupaati par bhel aur chaat khilaane le jaana chahta hai." He held his hand out for Riddhima.



Riddhima refused to take his hand and just turned around, "teekhi honi chaahiye!"


"Basanti se zyaada teekhi cheez tho bhagwan ne bhi nahin banaayi memsaab," Armaan laughed and put his arm around Riddhima.


Riddhima took the rose from him and placed it in a small vase with water, "theek hai chalo…par samajh lo main tumhare liye nahin, chaat ke liye jaa rahi hoon."



They both enjoyed their afternoon at the Chaupaati beach in Mumbai. They ate the spiciest bhel and chaat. Armaan's tongue was burning with all the spices, but Riddhima was unfazed. She wanted to eat some paani poori also.



They both found a paani poori stall and ordered a plate for her. Armaan had had enough of the hot and spicy stuff, but Riddhima had no problem.



Armaan enjoyed watching her gobble the big balls of paani poori in her tiny mouth.
As she put the last ball of paani poori in her mouth, Armaan pointed, "arre tumhari naak par kuch hai!"



Riddhima paused with the ball of paani poori still partially in her mouth. Armaan pounced on this opportunity and grabbed the other half from her mouth with his mouth and kissed her lips in the process. The hot spicy taste was soon diluted by the sweet taste of her mouth, "mmmm…..i like this paani poori….khatti meethi hai!," Armaan winked at her as he smacked his lips.



Riddhima shook her head, "Armaan..tum bhi na…..apni baaton se kisi ko bhi pataa lete ho…"


Armaan put his arm around Riddhima, "koshish tho karta hoon ki kum se kum ek ladki tho zindagi bhar pati rahe."



Riddhima could not help laughing and put her arm around his waist as they walked back.


They both reached home, having forgotten their little misgivings with each other. It was hard for Riddhima to resist Armaan's charm for too long. He had mastered the art of 'manaaofying' his wife.


"Accha yeh batao Riddhima, hamari 1 st wedding anniversary par kya karna hai?"
Armaan asked her as they entered the apartment.



"Kirtan!" she smiled mischievously and walked in.



"Kirtan? Yaani, patni pooja?" Armaan laughed and followed Riddhima inside.



Armaan could not wait to grab hold of Riddhima and take her to their bedroom.
"Abhi nahin Armaan…..mujhey bahut kaam hain ghar ke!" she protested



Armaan just lifted her on his shoulder and carried her inside despite her protests,
"ab bhaagne ki koshsish bhi mat karna…pata hai na registaan mein paani ko dekh kar pyaase ka kya haal hota hai?"


Riddhima giggled, "yeh tho tumhare haath mein hai….tum chaho tho registaan mein reh sakte ho ya samundar mein."




Armaan replied back with his lips rather than words. Riddhima moaned with pleasure as the two lovers were engulfed in their passions once again.



After making love to her, Armaan whispered, "Riddhima…tum hamesha mere liye samundar hi ban kar rehna."



PART 30:



As the days went by, Armaan got busier and busier with his work. Armaan's reputation at the center had gotten a big boost thanks to Anjali's surgery. All the senior doctors wanted Armaan to assist them in their major cases. Armaan was of course thrilled, as that meant more experience for him. However tired he might be, learning or assisting in a new procedure gave him an adrenaline rush and re energized him for his next case.


He felt indebted to Anjali for his recent recognition.



"Main Anjali ko galat samajhta tha….wo sach much meri achhi dost hai….uski wajah se mujhey kitna naam aur kaamyaabi mil rahi hai, warna training mein itna kuch karne ko kahan milta hai?" Armaan said to himself one day when he was reviewing some charts.



He had started accepting invitations from Anjali and her friends to drop by for coffee or a quick drink. He would often go to her house after work and spend an hour or so with them. They all would go ga-ga over his bedside manner, surgical skills and his looks. They massaged his ego more and more every day. Armaan really enjoyed hearing his praises and started believing in their exaggerated praises. He would often reach home late, although he made it a point to have dinner with Riddhima most days. Riddhima, of course, was an understanding wife-she knew how busy a doctor's life could be- she knew becoming a good plastic surgeon was Armaan's dream, and she wanted to support him as much as she could. She kept herself busy with housework, reading and listening to music.



Muskaan and Riddhima would often go out for lunch or little shopping trips whenever Muskaan was free from her busy schedule. Riddhima never complained about Armaan's long hours or not getting enough time from him. Muskaan had no reason to believe that Armaan was gradually drifting away from Riddhima.


Abhimanyu tried to coax Riddhima into joining their music group, especially since he had a movie contract now. Riddhima politely refused each time. Abhimanyu knew he had to come up with another solution; otherwise his future contracts could be in jeopardy.


A day before their first wedding anniversary, Armaan came up to Riddhima and hugged her from behind, "kal hamari pehli anniversary hai….yaad hai na?"


Riddhima, who was arranging some flowers on the table, said, "Kaise bhool sakti hoon wo din? Jis din tumney ek bholi bhaali ladki ko pataaya tha," she chuckled.



"Achha bholi-bhali? Suhaag raat par seduce kisne kiya tha?" Armaan teased her.



"Kya karti? Agar seduce nahin karti, tho tum raat bhar bacchon ki tarah mooh suja ke baithe rehte," she teased him back.



"Theek hai, kal bhi main wo hi karoonga….aur phir tum mujhey phir se seduce karna…OK?" he said mischievously, "main chahta hoon kal tum bilkul dulhan ki tarah sajo, aur wo laal waali sari phir se pehen na."


"kaun si laa waali?" Riddhima pretended ignorance

"arre wo hi waali, jo tum hamesha bahut kum time ke liye pehen paati ho," Armaan winked at her. Riddhima blushed at his comment.



"Theek hai, lekin tum kal der se ghar nahin aaogey," Riddhima ordered.



Armaan touched his ears and said, "promise! I will be home at 5 and then we will go out for a special dinner….just the two of us….kitne din ho gaye hain tumhare saath baith ke baatein bhi nahin ki hain," he held her by her waist and pulled her closer.


"Jab do log ek doosre ko achhi tarah samajh te ho, tho zaroori nahin hai ki baatein kee jaayein," Riddhima circled her arms around his neck.


"Tum kitni samajhdaar ho Riddhima….I am so lucky to have you." he kissed her and hugged her tightly.


That evening, Anjali suggested, "Armaan kal meri movie ka premier hai….you have to come with me!"


Armaan sipped his drink and looked up, "Kal? Nahin kal nahin aa sakta main."


"Kyon? Apni dost ke liye itna bhi nahin kar sakte?" Anjali complained.



"Sorry Anjali! Kal meri aur Riddhima ki pehli anniversary hai…..I can't go anywhere else."

That statement hit Anjali like a boulder. She quickly changed her expression from anger to a fake smile.



"Itna darrte ho apni biwi se?" Anjali chuckled.



"No way Anjali! Main kyon Riddhima se daroonga? Kitney baje hai premier?"

"Saat baje"

"OK…tho main Riddhima ke saath aa jaaoonga."



Anjali was not pleased, but pretended to be an understanding friend as her mind concocted an evil plan "don't worry Armaan! Spend time with your wife…..biwi ko khush rakhna bahut zaroori hai."



He just laughed and picked his bag to leave, "You are right about that! Bye Anjali! Good luck with the premier."

After he left, Anjali picked up the phone, "Dr Modi?"


NEXT DAY:



"Happy anniversary!" Riddhima woke Armaan with a kiss early in the morning. She knew he had to leave early today, so she had made sure she was ready before him. She had cooked his favorite things for breakfast and was dressed in the white and red sari he loved.

Armaan opened his eyes and pulled Riddhima over him, "aise nahin…..aaj special kiss dena padhega."


Riddhima giggled and lay on top of his chest, "kitna special?"

Armaan pinned her down to the bed and showered her with some prolonged and passionate kisses on her lips, neck and chest, "now those are special kisses for my special wifey on our special day!"



Riddhima had goose bumps as he kissed her. She was gasping and moaning in pleasure, but suddenly Armaan rolled out of bed. Riddhima was feeling a little aroused by his kisses, "kahan jaa rahe ho? Aise sataa ke kahan chal diye?"



Armaan picked his towel and winked at her, "enjoy the appetizer jaan….shaam ko main course milega!" and went to get ready.



Riddhima felt a little cheated- if it was the other way around, Armaan would never let her leave without getting his desire satisfied, "shayad yahi aadmi aur aurat mein farak hai," she sighed, wiped her brow, and straightened her clothes to get breakfast ready.



Armaan took a quick bite and picked his bag, "OK…shaam ko meri dulhan ban kar rehna…I will see you at 5 or so…BYE!" he gave her a quick peck on her cheek and left.


Riddhima was a little disappointed, as he had not even notice that she had prepared his favorite dishes for breakfast. She just shook her head, "hamesha kaam ka bhoot sawaar rehta hai."


She cleared up the kitchen and got down to her routine. She received phone calls from padma, Tamanna, Dr Misra, Keerti and Muskaan for their anniversary. Riddhima was in a very jovial mood all day.


She had a lady come home to apply mehndi on her palms and feet.


She dressed herself with her beautiful wedding jewelry, payal, bangles and bracelets.


As she got ready like a new bride, she hummed this beautiful song from "water"- "piya ho"


http://www.dishant.com/album/water.html

By 5 pm, she was all dressed up and looked like a princess, ready for her prince to arrive any moment. As she waited patiently, she took out her memory box with the dried rose petals and foil ring Armaan had proposed to her with. She remembered all the events of the past...how they had met, fallen in love, wedding, their first night...their honeymoon.......



…to be continued…

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Posted: 15 years ago
kya baat hai.. superb! i hope armaan comes to riddhima, but i have a feeling Anjali is gonna do something to make Armaan stay with her... plz do continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey di awesome and great part
i hate anjali and abhi and what they r trying to do is totally wrong
armaan is so stupid he can't see what going on around him
i am sure anjali is planning something to not let armaan reach on time to home and celebrate his anniversery
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
mittal
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

kya baat hai.. superb! i hope armaan comes to riddhima, but i have a feeling Anjali is gonna do something to make Armaan stay with her... plz do continue soon!



thanks lil desi goddess....yes a lot of people are trying to come between AR but id there love strong enough to overcome all these hurdles??
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Originally posted by: sweet_mittal

hey di awesome and great part

i hate anjali and abhi and what they r trying to do is totally wrong
armaan is so stupid he can't see what going on around him
i am sure anjali is planning something to not let armaan reach on time to home and celebrate his anniversery
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
mittal



thanks mittal. Armaan is getting too carried away by success, fame and false praise😡 but thankfully ridz is still grounded...let's see what happens
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Posted: 15 years ago

tht anjali uhh

wel ncie parts reallyz!
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Hi di,
Amazing parts as always. I enjoyed AR's romantic moments…but at the same time hated Armaan for his igronance towards Riddhima and his carelessness towards their relationship. He is definitely on the verge of loosing her. I think you don't realise the value of something in your life unless you loose it.
But here inspite of my Grudes towards Armaan and his unloyality towards Riddhima still I can see he himself is getting trapped in a web of a disgusting vixin…I just hope he doesn't get into any *ahem..ahem* relationship with Anji. I know it can't be ..but still I fear it as he is turning more and more callous day-by-day or may be she Tries to frame him which would be even more worse as that will cauz more pain to Both.😭
Oh no now is there any other trouble awating for AR . I bet anjali has a plan to spoil the day for AR AGAIN!!!…I sooo hate that Bi*** …and Armaan is soooo foolish and Stupid…The day she had tried to seduce him he should have never ever kept any contact with her as Once bitten is twice shy…..It sometimes make me doubt Armaan too…I feel like giving him some piece of my mind and knocking some senses in him.😡
If I m guessing right I think soon Riddhima is going to take a Big decision in her life…after all she can't keep on forgiving him every time..there is always a certain limit to something…It was good to see she never cared to forgive Armaan easily this time like always. I think I will soon get the Same Old Basanti Back(well she was always there ..just was on an elongated vacation I guess)… andit is the right time for her to do so…only she can Tame this Veeru…and not his string puppet which she had turned since her marriage.
Lovely songs. Enjoying this fic a lot .
Thanx.
p.s- plz look after your step daughter too…we are missing Pehchan😛…want to see the Good wala Armaan too.😃

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