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Posted: 15 years ago
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contted....

while they were moving with the beautiful nature .....

train achaanak ek station par kaafi der ke liye ruk gayi..

Emma: "kya shimla aa gaya"

SK: "no ,,ye to solan hai ,shimla would be the next station,,"

Jai: "to ye train yahan kyon ruki hui hai,,main abhi dekh kar aata hoon"

jai get out of the train,,or bahar jaakar station master se poocha "ye train yahan kyon ruki hai?"

station master: "ye train aage nahin jaaegi,,track par kaam chal raha hai,
agar aapko simla jana hai,,to taxi ,,ya bus dekh leegiye"

he ran towards ,the train ,,and entered the boggie..

jai: "chalo yaaron,,ab train ka safar yahan tak hi tha"

SK: "kya hua?? "

Jai: "aage track par kaam chal raha hai,,train aage nahin jaaegi"

SK: "wow!!ab mazza aaega,,get up guys"

Tom: "now how we will go from here"

Sk: "dekhte hai,koi taxi mil jaati hai ,,otherwise we hav to see for lift"

wo sab train se nikalkar main road par chalne lagte hai,,taxi ke liye try karte
hai but koi baat nahin banti..
now they see for the secon option,,,soooo finaly they see a truck ,and they ask
for lift..

truck wala: "kee hue puttar,kithe jana hai"

Sk: "sardarji wo humme shimla tak jana hai"

truck wala: "puttar shimla to nahin jaanda ,,magar haan thoda pehle tak chod doonga,
chalna hai to aa jaao"

koi doosra option nahin tha ,,isliye wo log truck main beth gaye.

it was a bit sophasticated for those forigners to sit in a truck
,but wo kehte hai na
museebat padne par gadhe ko bhi baap banana padta hai.
so somehow they managed in the truck,,

SK: "kya hua tom,...ye indian sawaari hai,,ohhh abhi to tumhe ek or cheez main
sair karaanee hai 'bell gadhi' i mean bullak cart"

Jai: "SK mujhe lagta hai ,tum aj tom ka band bajaa kar hi rahoge"

Tom: "well its not that bad,,..just it seems that ki mujhe electric shock laga hai
,,its shaking me tooo much"

all started laughing on this. ;😆

truck wala: "lo bachoon,ab tum sab ne yahin utarna padega,,yahan se shimla kareb 4-5 km hoga
pedal,,pahaadi ke raste se jaaoge to,,3-3 1/2 km padega"

they all get down from the truck...

"thank u sardarji" replied all.

Sk: "chalo,is taraf se chalte hai" he pointed towads a hill

Angel: "wat are u saying we hav to climb that hill"

Sk: "yaaa,bas ye hill hi cross karni hai,uske aage we will be there in shimla."

Tom: "okk,now no other choice,lets go"

Emma: "yaa why u all are sounding soo low ,its mountain climbing,,hav fun"

they all start mountain climbing ...thoda thakaane wala kaam hai,,but they were enjoying

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the turist bus in which khushi n group was travelling ,..was also approching
shimla...suddenly...somethingh happened...and bus stoped

miss kriti: "what happened; bus kyon rok dii"

dirver: "madam ,wo bus main kuch kharaabi aa gayi hai,dekhna padega"

girlss: "ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"

mr dayal: "are bhaii shant ho jaao,,ya phir aisa karo ,sab niche aa jaoo
yahan bhi pahaadh to hai hi,yahin shuroo ho jao"

mr dayal to driver--bhai ye bataoo ,yahan se shimla kitna door hai

driver: "sir bas 4-5 km hoga."

mr dayal: "acchaa ,jaldi repair karo......ok girls get down"
infact mujhe bhi aisa hi lagta hai ,,shayad pichle
sab log bus se niche utar aate hai ,,,or wahan ki haseen wadiyon ka mazaa
lene lagte hain,,tabhi wahan baarish hone lagtii hai.

Diya: "wow ye haseen wadiyan ,or baarish ,ye sab to bilkul filmon jaisa ho raha hai."

khushi ko bhi baarish main bheegna bohut pasand tha,,so she was also enjoying..

************************************************************************

SK: "aaj kitne time baad , baarish main beegne main mazza aaya hai.."

Jai: "ya sk apne desh ki mitti ki khusboo hi alag hai,,ye baat wahan london main kahan"

thodi der main baarish band ho jaati hai....or wo sab hill ke top par pohuch jaate
hain.


Emma: "wowwwwww so beautiful" wo bas us jagah ko dekhti hi rah jaati hai..

Sk: "yaaa it is,,ise jaanku hill kehte hai,,yahan se poora shimla nazar aata hai..
abhi to kuch nahin ,,jab snow fall hota hai ..to it looks like heaven"

Emma: "tum to aise kah rahe ho jaise hummesha se yahin rehte ho"

Sk: "infact mijhe bhi yahi lagta hai,,shayad pichle janam main yahin rehta tha."

Emma: "what??? u belive on this stuff"

sammer just passed a smile and said ,,"ab chalo warna raat hone se pehle nahin pohuch
paayenge"


they started walking...

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diya: "yaar ,kya baarish thi ,,but ab to mujhe bhook lag rahi hai"

khushi: "are bus main khana hai,,main abhi lekar aati hoon...neha(a friend)
mere saath bus tak chalo"

neha: "yaa sure"

both of them walked to the bus...
wo bus main chade..

Khushi: "wo bag nahin mil raha ,jisme khana rakha tha"

Neha: "khushi ,yahan aage diver seat ke paas bhi kuch bags hain ,main yahan dekhti hoon"

khushi: "yaa dekho,,black bag hai"

Neha: "yaa its there,,,but bohut niche hai"

neha pulled the bag to take it out..and unknowingly bag ke saath saath
bus ke brakes bhi upar ho jaate hain
as bus was standing on a slope,,or baarish ki wagah se soil kafi slipery ho gayi thi,,bus peeche
ki taraf slip karne lagti hai..

Khushi: "ye kya ho raha hai,,ye bus peeche kyon ja rahi hai"

isse pehle ki wo log kuch soch paayen..bas khaii main girne lagti hai,,but
ek tree main jaa kar aatak jaati hai.

they start shouting...HELP!!! HELP!!!

even jab troop ke sab log ye dekhte hai..wo log bhi pareshaan ho jaate hain ,or help
dhoonne lagte hain..

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SK: "hav u heard someone shouting..for help"

Emma: "yaa shayad peeche se aawaz aayi hai"

SK: "chalo chal kar dekhte hain"

Tom: "if we will go back ,,than we will not be able to reach before night..
so pleasee go ahead,,"

tom ke kehne par wo log aage ki taraf chalne lagte hain..

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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
all the updates are nice dear 👏👏👏sorry 4 late reply nivi i was not heer all are very nice waiting 4 sameer to reescue our khushi😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
ur welcome dear 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Superb update.It's too good.Khushi is in trouble now, sameer kaya usse bachayaga,

tumne aacha suspense create kia.
Wait for the next part dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Superb update.It's too good.Khushi is in trouble now, sameer kaya usse bachayaga,

tumne aacha suspense create kia.
Wait for the next part dear.

thanks rakhi..
keep on roll because all suspences will flew of when they will actually meet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: maria_awan

all the updates are nice dear 👏👏👏sorry 4 late reply nivi i was not heer all are very nice waiting 4 sameer to reescue our khushi😉

thanksa lot maria..i m glad that u all are liking it..
well i m sorry but i will make u wait a bit more for it..because i will be posting the next part after diwali.
and one more thingh...rajat's pic in ur profile is suparb..
i really loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
hey sweetie
sorry for the late reply
bahot busy thi
i had 2 deadlines...workin me ..... off for that
anyways ur update was awesome
aur ye kya khushi is in danger....sammeeer kaho ho tum
anyways...awesome and lovely as always
jaldi se nxt update kar do plzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

hey sweetie

sorry for the late reply
bahot busy thi
i had 2 deadlines...workin me ..... off for that
anyways ur update was awesome
aur ye kya khushi is in danger....sammeeer kaho ho tum
anyways...awesome and lovely as always
jaldi se nxt update kar do plzzzzz

thankss dear..
well don be sorry i can understant..
even i was too busy in this festive season..so couldn't post the part..
but today i m posting it ..enjoy..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

contted...

they moved few steps ahead..tabhi unhe phir se help ki aawaaz sunayi deti hai..

SK: "listen guys,,i can't go like this,,.ho sakta hai ,kisi ko hummari zaroorat
ho..at least humme ek baar dekhna to chahiye..or rahi late hone ki baat to
hum ek raat yahan bhi bita sakte hain...lekin wahan pohuchkar main chan se nahin soo
paaounga.."

Emma: "i think u are right,,at least we should go n see,shayad hum koi madad
kar paayen"

SK or Emma ko jate dekh ,sab unke peeche peeche calne lage.


IN THE BUS

khushi: "neha ,,please don't move ..koi bhi movement se bus ka balance bigaarh
jaaega ,"

Neha: "but,,hum aise khade bhi to nahin rah sakte,,nahin hilenge to bhi thodi hi
der main ye bus neeche gir hi jaaegi,,ye pedh ise kab tak roke rakhega"

Khushi: "mujhe kuch samajh nahin aa raha ,,what to do;;neha tum gate ke paas ho bahar nikalne ki
koshish karo"

neha jaise hi apne kadam gate ki taraf badhati hai,,bus hilne lagti hai..
to wo wapas apni jagah par aa jati hai.
everyone was shouting,,"khushi ,naha..are u ok"

from somewhere mr dayal has arranged a big rope...but unki samajh main nahin aa raha tha ki
how to save them#######

tabhi wahan sameer or uske dost pohuchte hain..."oh my god " Emma said.

"see that bus has fallen" she added

they get more closer to the place..sameer asked a girl standing over there
"is there someone in that bus?"

the girl replied "yaaa ,2 girls of our group are their in it..please do somethingh"

sameer or uske dost mr dayal ke paas jaate hain;or sameer unse wo rope le leta hai
..he took out his jacket...aur us rope ke ek end ko apni waist par tightly bandh leta hai..

Jai: "ye tum kya kar rahe ho?,,pagal ho gaye ho kya"

sameer smiled and said
"don worry jai,itni jaldii marne ka mera koi iraada nahin hai,,bus tum
log rope ke doosre end ko kas kar pakardna..ya phir aisa karo tie it to that tree,,
or jaise main kahoon waise ise upar niche karna"

while they were disscussing the stratagy ,diya wahan rote rote aati hai

Diya: "pleasee meri behan us bus main hai ,aap use bacha lijiye "

Jai: "yaar ye ladkiyaan itna roti kyon hain"

SK: "dekho ,dont cry.i promoise...main poori koshish karoonga,bus aap rona band kijiye"

sameer or uske dost road ke us side jaate hai ,jahan se bus neeche gayi thi..
sameer wahan se neche utarne lagata hai,,

Emma: "sambhal kar ,,pleasee,don't hurt urself"

SK: "u just take care of this rope,,main jab kahoon ise uupar kheenchna"

sameer ,slowly slowly neeche utarne lagta hai,holding the rope..or us tree tak
pohuch jata hai jis par bas atki hui thi..
every one on the raod ,was keenly observing him and keeping their fingures crossed
were praying for their well being.

jab wo bas ke kareeb pohuch jata hai,,he screemed "please aap log dheere dheere

is bus se bahar nikalne ki kosish keejiye"

IN THE BUS

Khushi: "neha lagta hai ,there is someone too help us..tum baahar niklo..jaise jaise tum
baahar ti taraf jaaogi main aage bardti hoon,,i think it will make up the balance"

neha (as she was nearer to the door)reached the door ..very cosiously

SK: "good!!ab hold my hand" sameer ne uski taraf apna hath badhaya..

she holded his hand tightly ,,


SK: "see,,u please try to get up by this rope,,,try it ..its not so tough,,i will support u ,,or uupar jaaker
is rope ko thoda or loose karne ko kehna"

neha ko uupar ki taraf chadhate hue,,sameer realised ki uski waist par jo rope usne bandhi thi,wo dheele
hoti jaa rahi hai,,so he just rolled his left hand in the rope for the proper grip..and again came near to
the bus

SK: "dekhiye ,,aap bhi please baahar aane ki koshish keejiye..i know thoda difficuilt hai..but try it"

khushi jaise hi aage ki taraf chalne ki koshish karti ,bus ka balance kharab ho gata,
isliye use move karne main bhi darr lag raha tha.

SK: "dekhiye aap agar baahar nahin aayengi to phir i can't do anythingh"

Khushi: "mujhe bohut darr lag raha hai,,"

SK: "dekho main is bus ke door par hi hoon ,tum bas yahan tak aa jao..pleasee"

khushi badi mushkil se door tak aane ke liye raazi ho jaati hai,,and very slowly she aproached to the door
while she was standing on the edge sameer use apna haath deta hai

SK: "hold my hand"

khushi hesitatly uska haath pakad leti hai..
but jaise hii khushi sameer ka hath pakadti hai,,he feels something ;;something
very different..he turned his head towards khushi..........and...........
"nandini"

he wassssssssssss in a complete shock......

it was a moment for which he was waiting for last 23 years..use pata tha ,ki wo ek na ek din
usse zaroor milegee ,but usne kabhi nahin socha tha 'is tarah'
this was the most happiest moment of his life..in a complete shocking situation

for a second he just became blanked...his whole body get loosen up..
or uske haath se wo rope chut gayi....and..... both of then fall down from there.

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ek pal ke liye sab kuch ruk gaya ,a complete silence...

Emma : "o my god..sk" she screemed

diya also started crying,,

tabhi jai ,(he was holding the rope) rope chod kar wahan aaya and said "relex guys,,kuch nahin hoga
un logon ko,,,maine khud dekha hai,neeche paani hai..i mean must be a kind of lake,,
wo log paani main hi gire hain"

Angel: "thanks god"

Diya: "but khushi doesn't know how to swim"

Emma: "don worry,sk is a very good swimmer,he has promised u ,to save ur sister na..then he will do it"

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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: rajatrangini

thanks rakhi..
keep on roll because all suspences will flew of when they will actually meet

Welcome dear.Ok, I'll wait.

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