Tumse mera AASHNA(on rajeev)(epi 6 pg16)

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Achha maine phir se comment kardi....(I knw u can see that well😆😆)...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

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nice ff

deepika

hii deepika..

thanks for reading and commenting..

love nandini and sanna😃

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samrah

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Posted: 15 years ago

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heyy i hve just read ur fic...............................its superb n nice........................i love the character of sur and raj.........................raj is soo joylly and masti men............................

plz con't soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: cute_samrah
heyy i hve just read ur fic...............................its superb n nice........................i love the character of sur and raj.........................raj is soo joylly and masti men............................

plz con't soon

hii samrah..😃 thanks for reading and commenting..😃

love
nandini and sanna..😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

#95

Epi 4

raj ne jaldi jaldi sara kaam khatm kiya aur tulsi ko phone kiya(coz they have to go for shopping and dinner..)

raj - mumma agar aap free ho gayi hai to main ghar aa jau aapko pic karne.. hum shopping karke phir dinner pe chalenge..

tulsi - wo beta actually.. (tulsi was hesitating..)

raj - kya baat hai mumma?? Aapko dad ke saath kahi jana hai kya??

tulsi - haan wo unke dost hai na Indrajit Mehra jee unhi ke yaha jana tha dinner pe..

raj - mumma ismein aap itna kyu ghabra rahi thi.. maine aajtak aapse kabhi shikayat ki hai kya?? aapko aap se jyada janta hoon aur phir hum dono phir kabhi ja sakte hai.. aap jaiye dad ke saath..

tulsi - raj tu kaise mere mann ki har baat jaan leta hai.. main uljhan main thi ki tujhe mana karu ya tere papa ko par tune to khud hi samjhauta kar liya..

raj - mumma app bhi to mere bina kahe mere dil ka haal jaan leti hai na maine yeh aapse hi to sikha hai.. aur rahi baat aapki uljhan dur karne ki aur samjhauta karne ki to mumma iss duniya main abb sirf aap aur arjun hi hai jinke liye main kuch bhi karna chahta hoon..

tulsi - main dil se tere saath hi ana chahti hoon beta par..

raj - i know mumma.. bye..

raj ne phone cut kiya aur arjun aa gaya.. arjun jab bhi ata hai raj ko bahot khushi milti hai use dekh kar.. raj use bilkul palko pe bitha kar rakhta hai par iska yeh matlab bilkul nahi hai ki raj ne use bigad rakha hai.. arjun bahot samajhdar hai.. sahi galat main farq janta hai.. kabhi kisi ka dil nahi dukhata.. arjun apne bhai ko apna bhagwan manta hai.. mihir ne kabhi raj ko samjha nahi par wo arjun ko bahot laad pyaar karta hai par arjun hamesha mihir se apne bhai ki khushi mangta hai..

arjun - bhai wo main keh raha tha ki..

raj(smiling..) - tu kab se mujhse kuch bhi kehne main jhijhakne lag gaya?? bol kya kaam hai??

arjun(blushing) - bhai wo main aaj aapke aur mom ke saath dinner pe nahi aa paunga.. main.. wo.. bhai main aaro.. umm.. main wo kisi laddki.. umm bhaiiiiii.....

raj ko kuch kuch to samajh aa raha hai..

raj - yaha aa..

arjun raj ke paas gaya..

raj ne arjun ke sir pe haath phera aur uske kandhe pe haath rakha..

raj - main tujhe jane ke liye mana mana nahi karunga magar dhyan pyaar mazak ya khel nahi hota isliye kisi ki bhawnao ke saath khelna mat..

arjun - thanks bhai.. main kabhi aapka sir jhukne nahi dunga.. aapka bhai nahi aapka beta hoon main.. maap baap ka sikhaya hua bhul sakta hoon magar aapki har baat mere dil aur dimaag main chap jati hai jante hai kyu.. kyunki aapki har baat aapke dil se nikalti hai..

both hugged each other..

arjun - bhai jaldi hi main aapko usse milwaunga.. byee...

arjun chala gaya.. raj khidki se bahar ki duniya dekh raha hai uski aankho ke saamne uska ateet hai wo ateet jo kehne ko to beet gaya magar wo hamesha uska saya banke uske saath chalta hai.

tabhi ek employee knocked on door..

raj - come in..

emp - sir woo salary milne main abhi kafi waqt hai par kya mujhe advance salary mil sakti hai??

raj - advance salary dena hamare rules ke khilaf hai.. aap kahiye aapko kitne paiso ki zarurat hai main aapko apni taraf se de deta hoon company ka isse koi lena dena nahi hoga..

emp ne raj ko amount bataya.. amount kafi kam tha aur raj ke paas itna cash tha to usne emp ko cash de diya..

emp - thanku sir aaj aapne mujhpar bahot bada upkaar kiya hai.. jaise hi salary milegi main yeh chuka dunga.. sir darasal meri ..

raj - mujhe wajah nahi janni aur rahi baat paiso ki to main yeh deke bhul gaya hoon.. aap ja sakte hai..

emp chala gaya..

raj apne room main baitha tha apna fav song sunn raha tha..

Allah...........................
Aani Jaani Hai Kahani,
Bulbule Si Zindagani
Banthi Kabhi Bigadthi
Tez Hawa Se Ladthi Bidthi
Ha Reham Ha Reham Farmaaye Khuda
Ha Reham Ha Reham Farmaaye Khuda
Mefuz Har Kadam Karna Eh Khuda Eh Khuda
Mefuz Har Kadam Karna Eh Khuda Eh Khuda…..

Allah...........................

Saanson Ki Sukhi Door Rooti Jal Jaayegi Jal Jaayegi
Bandh Jo Laayethe Haath Ki Mutti, Khul Jaayegi Khul Jaayegi
Kya Ghumar Karen Kyaa Yeh Ujli Mitti Mein Mil Jaayegi
Chaahe Jithni Shamayein Roshan Kar Le, Roop To Dhal Jaayegi Dhal Jaayegi
Ha Reham Ha Reham Farmaaye Khuda
Ha Reham Ha Reham Farmaaye Khuda
Mefuz Har Kadam Karna Eh
Khuda Eh Khuda
Mefuz Har Kadam Karna Eh Khuda Eh Khuda…..

Sone Chamak Mein, Sikko Kanak Mein Miltha Nahin, Miltha Nahin
Dhool Ke Sadko Mein, Dhunde Koi To Miltha Wahin Miltha Wahin
Kya Majaal Teri Marzi Ke Age, Bandhon Ki Chal Jaayegi
Thaane Ugli Jo Tu Katputhli Ki Chaal Badal Jaayegi Jaayegi
Ha Reham Ha Reham Farmaaye Khuda
Ha Reham Ha Reham Farmaaye Khuda
Mefuz Har Kadam Karna Eh Khuda Eh Khuda
Mefuz Har Kadam Karna Eh Khuda Eh Khuda..

Ha Reham Ha Reham… Ha Reham Ha Reham….Allah. Ha Reham Ha Reham…Allah….
Ha Reham Ha Reham…Allah…. Ha Reham Ha Reham…Allah…. Ha Reham Ha Reham…Allah….
Ha Reham Ha Reham…Allah…. Ha Reham Ha Reham…Allah…. Ha Reham Ha Reham…Allah….

yeh song raj ke dil ke behad karib hai.. jab bhi dard bardasht ke bahar hoo jata hai tab wo yeh gana sunta hai.. use aisa lagta hai jaise uski hi zindagi par hai yeh gana.. ise sunke aansuo ke saath dard bhi beh jata hai..

kal rajeev ka birthday hai aur iss fic main bahot kuch special hone wala hai..😉

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Ahem ahem....To kal Rajeev k Birthday special pe kuch special hoga?? W8ing for that eagerly....hehe.

Waise UD badiya tha....Raj kitna unerstanding hai...😳😳....kitne achhe se samajhta hai apni Maa ko....and then Arjun ko date pe jana tha...😆😆....and Raj ne kitne pyar se samjhaya kisika dil na todne ko....And Arjun k liye Raj ki kahi hui baat Bhagwan k adesh barabar hai....kabhi nahi talega....😳😳....so sweet!!! usne kaha wo Raj ka bhai nahi beta hai.......awe!!!😳😳

And Raj ne uss employee ki apni taraf se madat ki....itna achha hoga to main to aise girungi (fall for him) k uth nahi paungi.....waise uthna bhi kisko hai??😉

Song is of course wonderful.....par pata hai main kabhi ye song nahi sunti.....mujhe bahut dad hota hai....aur rona ata hai.......and Raj bhi to dard me hai....

Ab ye nahi kahungi "wanna knw abt his past"....wo itni jaldi aap log thodi reveal karoge....hehe.

Kal k intezaar me hu....for the special UD...😉😉

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samrah

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

sooooo nice part.........................raj itna udass kyun rhte ho har waqt................................feeling soo bad for raj............................

plz con't soon

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Deepa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Raj is so very sweet.....................he had plans to spend time with his mum n also with arjun but both had different plans n raj os spending his time alone....................felt very sorry for him..................hes very loving.................n also understanding................raj n arjun bonding is very good.....................wonder what special thing is gonna happen........cant wait for that........cont soon dear...................

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

grt part dear

pls cont soon

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Sanna

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Posted: 15 years ago

#100

Epi - 5

mihir aur tulsi Indrajeet Mehra ke ghar pahuche.. Mr and Mrs mehra dono ne kafi taiyaari ki thi mihir aur tulsi ke welcome ke liye..

indrajeet mehra - arey aiye aiye aap dono ka hi intezaar hoo raha tha..

vasundhra mehra(indrajeet's wife) - welcome Mr and Mrs grewal..

indrajeet aur vasundhra mihir aur tulsi ko ghar dikhane le gaye..

mihir - ghar kafi bada hai aapka aur bahot hi behtarin tarike se banaya gaya hai..

indrajeet - haan aur phir 3 logo ke liye to yeh kuch jyada hi bada hai..

mihir - arey haan aapki beti nazar nahi aa rahi..

indrajeet aur vasundhra ek dusre ki taraf dekh rahe the.. dono chup the..

tabhi awaaz ayi.. papa mumma..

indrajeet aur vasundhra ki khushi ka thikana nahi tha unki beti unke saamne khadi thi..

bholi masum surat.. kisi baat ki koi kami nahi siwaye ek ke..

muskurahat..

indrajeet - beta aap aa gayi.. inse milo yeh hai Mr mihir grewal aur yeh unki wife Mrs tulsi grewal..

she didnot say anything.. bass sirhilakar namaste kar liya..

vasundhra - aiye na baki baate dinning table pe kar lenge..

on dininig table..

mihir - beta aapne kaha tak padhai ki hai..

indrajeet - isne MBA kiya hai..

mihir - phir to business main tumhara haath batati hogi..

indrajeet - haan kabhi kabhi..

yeh log apni batein kar rahe the.. woh ladki chup chap baithi thi.. kuch nahi kaha.. bass sabko dekh rahi thi.. tulsi bhi use notice kar rahi thi..

tulsi (tulsi to herself) - kitni pyaari ladki hai.. ek dum shaant swabhav ki.. aajkal ke bacche to ek pal bhi chup nahi rehte aur yeh ekdum shaant baithi hai..

10:30 baj gaye the..

mihir - acha to indrajeet abb hum chalte hai kafi der hoo gayi hai..

tulsi -
aaplogo
se milkar bahot acha laga.. abb aplog aiye kabhi hamare ghar..

vasu and indrajeet - jee bilkul.. aaplog bhi ate rahiyega..

mihir aur tulsi jane lage.. phir mihir ne uss ladki se kaha ..

Mihir - yeh bolti nahi hai..

yeh sunn kar uss ladki ke chehre pe muskaan aa gayi..

girl - nahi uncle aisi koi baat nahi hai..

tulsi - chalo iss bahane tumhare pyaare pyaare dimple to dekhne ko mile..

mihir - waise beta aapne apna naam nahi bataya..

girl - jee mera naam nandini hai..

mihir aur tulsi chale gaye par achanak gate pe jake mihir palta aur nandini ki taraf ishara kiya smile karne ke liye..

she again smiled..

mihir aur tulsi chale gaye..

indrajeet - thanks beta aaj hamare kehne pe tum aa gayi..

nandini - papa main itni buri bhi nahi hoon ki apne papa mumma ki koi baat na manu.. maine aapse hamesha se kaha hai jab bhi pyaar se kahenge main aapki har baat

manungi..

nandini apne room main chali gayi..

indrajeet - mujhe yakeen nahi tha ki hamare kehne par yeh aajayegi..

vasundhra - hum shayad apni beti ko kabhi samajh hi nahi paye..

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Nandini mehra indrajeet mehra ki iklauti beti hai.. bachpan se use apne maa baap se sirf akelapan hi mila.. indrajeet aur vasundhra business ko agey badhane main apni beti ko pyar dena hi bhul gaye..
indrajeet aur vasundhra business parties main jate aur nandini ko aaya ke saath chod jate.. jab nandini badi hui to uske uppar status ka bhoj daal diya gaya.. aisa karo aisa mat karo.. inse baat karo inse mat baat karo.. nandini tang aa gayi thi inn formalities se.. usne dhire dhire apni alag duniya bana li.. woh duniyaa jaha kisise kisika koi rishta nahi tha magar sabb ek dusre se behad pyaar karte the.. uss jagah ka naam hai "aasara".. yeh ek vridhashram bhi hai aur anaath ashram bhi..
nandini office jane ki bajaye yaha ana jyada pasand karti hai par "aasara" main rehne walo ki zarurate woh apne paiso se puri karna chahti hai isliye office jana uski mazburi hai..

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car main tulsi aur mihir baat kar rahe the..

mihir - bahot pyaari bacchi hai na nandini..

tulsi - haan mihir.. kuch to baat hai usmein..

mihir - to phir main baat agey badhau..

tulsi - ek baar raj se bhi puch lijiye.. iss mamle main uski marzi ko nazar andaaz nahi kiya ja sakta..

mihir - thik hai tum bata dena use mera faisla.. dekhta hoon iss baar wo meri manta hai ya nahi..

12 bajne main 2 min ki der hai.. koi chori chupe kisi ke kamre main ghuss raha hai..

jiska woh kamra hai woh insaan soya hua hai gehri neend main ya phir sone ka natak kar raha hai..

ghadi main 12 baj chuke hai.. 12 bajte hai sare kamre main zor zor se shorrrrrr hone laga.. chor chorrrrrrrr nahi Wake up birthday boy..

aaj raj ka birthday hai.. arjun, tulsi, angad, daddaji, badimaa, armaan sabhi raj ke kamre main hai..

raj ne tulsi, daddaji aur badimaa ke peir chue..

raj - thanks..

badi maa - thanks se kaam nahi chalega aaj to hum party lenge..

raj uthkar badimaa ke paas gaya..

raj - aaj meri pyaari badi maa ne mujhse kuch manga hai main mana kaise kar sakta hoon..

daddaji - mujhe pata tha isliye aaj shaam ko tere janamdin ki khushi main party rakhi hai humne..

aaj raj ka janamdin hai..

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par kahin aur koi aur bhi apna janamdin mana raha hai bombay se kahi jyada duuur dehradun main..

Dehradun main purohit ji jo ki bahot hi ache vaid hai apni patni aur bete ke saath rehte hai......

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In da morning

in raj's room..

tulsi - raj uthja beta 10 baj gaye hai..

raj ne dhire dhire aankhe kholi..

raj - good morning mumma..

tulsi - good morning beta.. chal jaldi se nashta karle.. sabb tere pasand ka hai..

tabhi arjun came der..

arjun - haan sare laad bass bhai ke hi hote hai..

tulsi - chal chup kar..

raj - mumma main nashta kar lunga aap yahi rakh doo.. aur iske liye kuch banadoo kyunki jo aapne banaya hai woo yeh khayega nahi..

tulsi arjun ka kaan pakad kar le gayi..

thodi der baad raj taiyaar ho raha tha apne room main.. tulsi ayi..

tulsi - jaa raha hai??

raj - maa main har sunday jata hoon beach pe.. aaj kuch naya nahi hai..

tulsi - haan aaj bhi kuch nahi badla.. kam se kam teri zindagi to abb bhi wahi hai.. 20 saal beet gaye uss hadse ko.. sabb apni zindagi main agey baddh gaye par tu wahi ka wahi hai..

raj - maa kaise agey badi.. kaise bhul jao wo din.. bhulna chahu bhi agar to koi mujhe bhulne nahi deta.. aaj tak dad mujhe uss galati ki saza dete aa rahe hai jo shayad maine ki hi nahi.. maa jo hua usse sabse jyada maine khoya hai.. apni aatma kho di uss din maine, khud ko kho diya.. apna saya kho diya maine..

raj chala gaya beach pe.. jaha woh apne aap ko dundhne jata tha....... sochta tha aakhir kya ho kya gaya hai uski life main...... ki uske papa aaj tak usse maaf nahi karpaaye....... woh jaanta tha ki uski koi galti nahi....... phir bhi aakhir mihir to mihir garewal hi rahenge........ kisis ki sunte kaha hai......

jo jagah usse dusro ki aankho mai nafrat ka karan dikhti thi....... woh aur raj kya jaane ki wahi jagah uske sapno se bhi zyada khubsoorat raah par usse le jaayegi....

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at sanna's home..

zaina - choti maa ......... choti ma chalo na mere frndshh park main mera intezaar kar rahe honge..

sanna - haan betu bass 2 min.. haan chalooo .. papaa bye we r going..

sanna ne zaina ko park main drop kiya ...use ek kiss dia .. park ke paas hi beach hai.. sanna waha tehalne lagi..

raj har sunday beach pe jakar waqt bitata hai.. raj apne khayalo main khoya hua kuch jyada hi pani ke andar chala gaya..

idhar sanna bhi apne khayalo main khoyi hui hai aur woo raj se kuch jyada hi agey tak chali gayi hai, ek dum se sanna ka peir fisal jata hai aur wo bass girne hi wali hoti hai ki tabhi......koi uska haath tham leta hai.. aur usse sahara deta hai...... dubte hue suraj ki halki halki roshni dono par padti hai....... sanna jisne apni aankhe girne ke dar se band karli hoti hai woh apni aankhe dhire dhire kholti hai.........lekin woh insaan to sanna ko dekhta hi reh jata hai ........dono ke bich bahot khamoshi hoti hai.. aur sirf nazre hi baate karti hai khamoshi main kuch chupke chupke se ishaare

dono bass ek dusre ko dekh rahe hai..

(Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai
Kuchh Duriyaan Najdikiyaan, Kuchh Hans Padi Tanhaayiyaan
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Kya Yeh Bahaar Hai, Kya Intjaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad)

Kuchh Saanz Hai.., Jaage Se Jo Kal Soye
Alfaaz Hai.., Chup Se Nashe Mein Khoye
Nazar Hi Samjhaaye, Yeh Guftgu Saari..
Koyi Aarju Mein Hai, Angadaayi Pyaari..
Kya Yeh Khumaar Hai, Kya Aitbaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Na Inkaar Hai, Na Ikraar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Kehna Hi Kya.., Tera Dakhal Na Koyi
Dil Ko Dikha.., Dil Ki Shakal Ka Koyi
Dil Se Bhi Meri, Ik Shart Yeh Aisi..
Laage Jeet Si Mujhako, Yeh Haar Hai Kaisi..
Kyun Yeh Pukaar Hai, Kyun Bekaraar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Jaadu Sawaar Hai, Na Ikhtiyaar Hai
Shaayad Yeh Pyaar Hai, Pyaar Hai Shaayad

Pyaar Hai Shaayad
Kuchh Khaas Hai Kuchh Paas Hai, Kuchh Ajanabi Ehsaas Hai..

Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Pyaar Hai Shaayad, Yahi

phir kuch der baad woh insaan sanna ko sidhe khade hone main support karta hai..

sanna - thanks..

ladka-- umm thnks kiske liye yeh to mera insaaniyat ke naate farz tha

sanna -- shayad isliye kyunki main doctor hoon aur logo ki zindagi bachati hoon par aaj apne meri zindagi bachai.. i owe my life to you..

ladka - aap doctor hai?? chalo to phir abse aap jiski bhi zindagi bacahengi uska credit indirectly mujhe milega..

both laughed..

sanna - umm.. am Dr.sanna..

raj - hii.. am Raj..( yes guys hes raj ... i know u all knew lolzz)

sanna - umm.. raj??

raj - well isse jyada mera apna kuch nahi hai..

sanna - jee??

tabhi zaina comes der.. sanna chali jati hai.. raj use jate hue dekhta hai..

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daddaji aur sharma ji bahot hi ache dost hai.. daddaji ne raj ke liye bday party rakhi hai.. daddaji ne iss mauke pe apne sabse ache dost sharma ji ko bhi party main invite kiya hai unki sabhi bacchiyon ke saath.. sharma ji aur 4 sisters jati hai garewal house.. waha acahnak se sanna ki nazre raj pe jake rukti hai.. sanna ka dil zor se dhadak raha hai.. wo raj se baat karna chahti hai par darr hai ki raj use pehchanega bhi ya bhul gaya hoga.. raj ki nazre bhi sanna pe padhi.. both smiled.. sanna itni khush kabhi nahi hui.. usne na idhar dekha na udhar bass raj ki taraf ja rahi hai.. tabhi bich main armaan comes..

armaan - hii dr. sanna..

armaan ko sanna se baat karta dekh raj waha se chala jata hai.. sanna armaan se baat kiye bagair raj ki taraf jati hai.. armaan kuch samajh nahi pata aur chala jata hai dusre guest se milne..

sanna raj ko bahot dhundti hai par wo kahi dikhayi nahi deta.. sharma ji apni charo betiyon ko daddaji ,mihir,tulsi aur badi maa se milate hai lekin sanna ka waha bhi mann nahi lagta.. sanna ki nazre abb bhi bass raj ko hi dhund rahi hai.. abb sanna ne socha raj shayad bahar hoga.. jab wo bahar ja rahi thi tabhi wo zaina se takrai.. zaina bahot khush lagg rahi thi..

sanna - kya hua zaina??

zaina - u know choti mom aaj main bahotttttt khush hoon.. kyunki aaj mujhe
mera boyfriend mil gaya.. aur main kal school se uske saath date pe
jaungi.. aur aapko pata hai yeh uski hi birthday party hai..

sanna was shocked..

sanna - beta yeh aap kya bol rahi hoo?? kaun hai wo??

zaina - wo waha baithe hai.. wo chair haina waha..

zaina shilpa ke paas chali gayi..sanna uss taraf jane lagi aur jaise jaise nazdik ayi wo uss insaan ko pehchan gayi..

sanna - acha to aap hai hamari zaina ke boyfriend..

person - ji haan.. aur aap hai meri zaina ki choti mom..

sanna - ji Mr. raj.. khair yeh bataiye ki mujhe dekh kar baat karna zaruri nahi samjha aapne..

raj - wo actually i thought aap busy hongi..

sanna - aapne apni marzi se hi aisa soch liya aur aap achanak gayab hoo gaye to maine Dr. armaan se baat tak nahi ki aur aapko dhundne lagi..

Raj (shocked + happy)(directly looking in her eyes..) - aap tabse mujhe hi dhund rahi thi??

sanna - aur nahi to kya.. jab sanna ke mann main koi sawal reh jata hai to sanna uska jawab jankar hi rehti hai..

raj - sawal?? kaisa sawal??

sanna - apne uss din beach pe mujhse kaha ki apne naam ke alawa aapka apna kuch nahi.. to main yeh janna chahti thi ki aapne aisa kyon kaha?? par mujhe pata hai aap jawab nahi denge.. aabb aap yahi bata dijiye ki aap yaha kaise?? i mean yeh party grewals ki hai to kya aap unhe jante hai??

raj - abb yeh to obviuos hai na ki main yaha unki party main hoon to unhe to janta hi hoon.. waise kahin aap mujhe muft ka khane aa jane walo jaisa to nahi samjah rahi na..

sanna laughed and raj joined her..

raj - yeh party mere liye hi di gayi hai..

sanna - happy birthday..

sanna ne apna haath agey badhaya.. raj ne usse haath milaya ..

raj - thanks..

dono ne ek dusre ka haath abb tak nahi choda..

tabhi tulsi came der.. dono ne haath chod diya..

tulsi - raj beta yeh kya hai tu yaha baitha hai?? sabb andar tere bare main puch rahe hai aur tere papa phir se (tabhi tulsi ki nazre sanna par gayi..) arey beta tum yaha kya kar rahi hoo?? lagta hai tum dono ek dusre ko jante hoo..

sanna - ji aunty wo..

raj - mumma main aapko baad main bata dunga philhal hame andar chalna chahiye..

tulsi gayi aur raj bhi jane hi wala tha par sanna ki taraf muda aur kaha "tumse milke acha laga pata nahi kyu.."

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here u go guys.......... hope u like it........ waiting for ur comments as well as criticism

love

sanna& nandini

Edited by REDnBLACK - 15 years ago