~ My Life - Mini Fan Fiction ~ (Part 5- Pg 14) - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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such a adorable update!
loved it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey huni....

awww cute update.... i hope nupur is able to move away from her troubled past... awww its soo sad...
good thing mayank is such a good husband and fren to her....
lovely update darlin as usual... waiting for the next one
love loads
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
loved it yaar kanky!!!!!as usual superb update tha yaar!!!!!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey huni! Great update! Thanx for the pm!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
sorry for late comments thanks lot for u r pm jia really awesome part please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
it is a very very sweet and cute update
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow dear...luv it!!! why mayu comes 2 home???ha ha....grt part,funny actualy!! 🤣 vry nice...n d travel plan sounds cool!!
kp writing n rocking!!! ⭐️
luv mayur always!!! luv mjht... 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I caught up with you !lOVELY concept do continue :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part - 5

Sorry for the delay guys! Here's the part . . .


Mayank, Nupur, Dia, Shilpa and Mayuri set off to Goa. Nupur always wanted to go to Goa. She loved beaches but she never happened to visit Goa. On the way to Goa, Nupur observed Mayuri and she was indeed enjoying her dad and mom's company! She didn't like beaches much still she readily agreed to go with em. All the old memories were coming to Nupur's mind.


FLASHBACK -

N - No way Mom. I dun wanna go! Mujeh height se phobia hai, how can u even expect me to go to Solan?

NM - I dunno, tu chal rahi hai.

N - No,I wont go.

NM - Dekhlo! Dekhlo, apni beti ko! Abhi aisi hai pata nhn baad mein kaisi ho jayegi.

After innumeral argument sessions, Nupur had to go. However, she didn't enjoy nor did she let her family enjoy there. She hated going there. Her mother forcefully took her and the consequences were that neither did they enjoy nor did Nupur. It would have been better if they would have left her with her grandparents. Nupur was a complerte home hub. She simply loved Mumbai and didn't really wished to go anywhere else.


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Nupur had tears in her eyes. She had lived a very miserable sort of a teenage. It's not that her Mom was wrong, it was just that she never tried understanding Nupur's POV. Nupur lost her childhood long before she was 13. The family she lived in made her that way, may be. She was a person who could have died as well as killed others to put her point across.

When Mayuri was not around, Nupur went up to Mayank -

"Mayu . . . did u notice? Mayuri is happy today."

"Ya! That's cause she loves being with her family! And that's so unlike me when I was of her age."

"Not again Nupur! Look, we can't change all that happend in your past . . . we can only not let that happen with our daughter! Yehi chahti ho na tum!"

"Haan!" she said and pulled him in for a hug. Mayank was really the man she wished to have got all her teenage and all her life in fact, before she met him in college. He was the one cause of whom Nupur got so much happiness. He gave her a very good family, the prefect family she wished to live in. He fulfillled every dream of hers and was a perfect husband. Perfect father too.


To Be Continued . . .

How's it guys? Please comment and hit the like tab! =)

Love,

Jiah (Kanky)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey a very sweet update....plzzz continue soon

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