cool dudes and morena probs-mn & sg ff pt 10 pg 31 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
mayank getting jealous.
lovely update

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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
amazing yaar
plz mjht creative team join karo
plz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
very good yaar..........i can imagine almost everything..........wow......u r tooooo good..........keep updating..........it was a damn good one........i know the boys drooling over nupur wud make mayank jealous for sure............and i wud love to see that in the show.........thanks for writing a grt ff.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey awesome part.....i now wish that nups should forgive mayu.....and samrat should confess soon......the terrace is a perfect place.......lol.....upd8 soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
zoya.....another awesome update!!! i loved it!!! awww....sayank jealous!!
thanks for the PM
plssss continue very soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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How romantic Zoya! Loved both the couples...
Keep going on!

Posted: 15 years ago
#67
awesoem ss..
do cont soon..

me waiting...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 4

A few days passed. Samrat and mayank had impressed everyone from the bhushan household. Samrat with his natural charm whereas mayank with his simplicity. They had almost become a part of gunajn and nupurs family. Bui was more than impressed with them. she knew about their feelings for her nieces.

Nupur was very busy with the wedding arrangements so she didn't get time to select dresses for herself. She went in her room where a few dresses were kept for the various ceremonies. She was deciding what to where for tonight's function when she heard someone come in. she turned to see mayank. Mayank quickly closed the door. Nupur looked at him giving a what-are-you-doing look.

"mujhe kuch baat karni hain tumse.", mayank said with urgency in his tone.

"mujhe koi baat nahi karni.", nupur said thinking that he will be apologizing yet again.

"nupur please woh mera kurta jo main aaj ke function mein pehen ne waala tha nahi mil raha hain.", he said.

Nupur looked at him for a moment and said, "toh koi aur pehenlo."

"agar koi aur pehen lunga toh kal kya pehenunga. Yeh problem bahut serious hain.", mayank said.

"offo mayank. Tum itne laaparwa kaise ho gaye. Tumhe dhyaan se rakhna chahiye tha naa.", nupur said.

"maine toh maa se kahaan tha. Par shayad who rakhna bhul gayi.", mayank said sitting on the bed.

"kya??? Tumhaare kapde aunty pack karti hain?", nupur asked surprised.

"haan!! Kyun?", mayank asked sheepishly.

"mayank tum itne bade ghode ho gaye ho aur abhi bhi apni mummy se bag pack karate ho. Tumhe sharam nahi aati.", nupur said giggling.

"shut up nupur!! aur ab iss problem ka solution nikaalo.", mayank said.

"Mr. genius tum khud kyun nahi nikaalte iss problem ka solution. Waise bhi duniya mein aisa kaunsa problem hain jo tum solve nahi kar sakte?", nupur said dramatically.

Maynk just looked at her a small smile playing on his lips and a mischievous glint in his eyes. Nupur noticed it and said, "hello? ab kuch socha kya pehen ne waale ho function mein?"

"main soch raha tha ki naye kapde khareed leta hun.", maynk answered.

"toh jaao naa mera muh kya dekh rahe ho. Jaldi jaao warna der ho jaayegi.", nupur said.

"tum bhi chalo. Main morena mein pehli baar aaya hun. Tum chalogi toh achcha hoga. Kaam bhi jaldi khatam ho jaayega.", maynak told her.

Nupr looked ta him and said, "nahi main nahi chalungi. Tum khud chale jaao. Waise bhi tumhe toh mujhse problem hain. Mere saath hone se toh shaanti kharaab hoti hain naa."

"nupur kya tum hameshaa uss baat ke liye mujhe sunati rahogi. Please chalo mere saath.", mayank requested.

"nahi.", nupur said sternly.

Maynk stepped towards her and pulled her towards him by her waist. she was stunned by his move. She looked in his eyes for a moment then realized that she was still angry with him.

"mayank chodo mujhe. Kya kar rahe ho? Koi aa jaayega.", nupr said trying to free herself from his embrace.

"ohh toh tumhe sirf yeh darr hain ki koi aa jaayega? Don't worry darwaaza band hain.", mayank said grinning.

"mayank chodo mujhe warna main chillaungi.", nupur said.

"achcha? Toh chillao.", maynk said.

"mayank chodo. Tum paagal ho gaye ho kya?", nupur said.

"tum chal rahi ho yaa nahi?", mayank asked coming back to business.

"nahi. Kabhi nahi. Hargiz nahi.", nupur replied.

"toh thik hain main nahi chodunga.", maynk answered.

"thik hain tihk hain main chal rahi hun. ab chodo.", nupur said.

Mayank freed her from his embrace smiling at her fuming face.

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It was time for the function. Everyone was in the hall except for samrat. gunjan was searching samrat in the crowd when bui called her.

"gunji jaa dekh ke aa samrat kyun nahi aaya abhi tak.", bui told gunjan.

"par bui main kaise?", gunjan asked.

"arre behes mat kar. Jaa dekh kea a.", bui ordered her.

"ji bui", saying this gunjan went to samrats room.

Gunjan knocked on the door. Samrat asked to come in. she entered to see samrat with only his jeans on holding a needle and thread. She quickly turned to the other side closing her eyes tightly shut. Samrat turned around to see gunjan. The white dress she was wearing suited her completely highlighting her simplicity and purity. Samrat was mesmerized at her sight. But then he realized that he wasn't wearing anything on top. He quickly picked the kurta kept on his bed and wore it.

"chashmish tum yahaan?", he asked.

"who bui tumhe puch rahi thi.", she said without turning back.

"tum mud sakti ho chashmish.", samrat said.

Gunjan turned to face samrat. he smiled at her warmly.

"who tumhe itni derr kyun lag rahi thi yeh puchne ke liye bui ne mujhe bheja hain.", gunjan said.

"who actually is kurte ka button tut gaya ahin. Wohi lagane ki koshish kar raha tha.", samrat told her.

"tumhe lagana aata hain?", gunjan asked amused.

"nahi par try kar raha tha.", samrat said.

"samrat yeh try karne ka time hain kya? Kisi aur din try kar lena. Phil haal kurta mujhe do main sill deti hun.", gunjan told him.

Samrat smiled and asked mischievously, " are you sure chashmish ki main apna kurta utaar ke du?"

Gunjan looked at him and reddened.

"nahi….mera matlab main aise hi laga deti hun.", saying this gunjan came towards him and took the needle from his hand started to sew the button.

Samrat just stared at her. what else could he do. She was so close to him. His heart was beating like crazy at her proximity and also the fact that she looked like an angel was enough for him to lose his senses.

Gunjans heart was beating madly. Being close to samrat always affected her but today she felt different. she felt that samrat was behaving differently. he wasn't goofing around as usual. He was looking at her intently and she refused to look at him.

She finished sewing the button and turned to leave but samrta caught her hand and stopped her. she turned to look at him. He was still gazing her with the same intensity. he came leaned close to her and whispered in her ears, "tum bahut beautiful lag rahi ho gunjan."

Gunjan blushed at his comment. She looked away. Her heart was beating like crazy. She wondered why samrat was behaving like this. He knew about her feelings. Then why was he doing such things. What was wrong with him? He didn't love her. had he not made it clear she would have thought that he felt the same way as her. but he had said they were just friends then why this? These thoughts were making her crazy.

Samrat smiled at the way gunjan blushed. She looked all the more beautiful.

"chashmish itni beautiful lagogi toh koi bhi kho jaayega.", the words slipped out of his mouth before he could help it.

She looked at him stunned at his words. She was blushing hard now.

"uhhh…mera matlab hain ki aaj toh saare ladko ki band bajne waali hain. Umm… chale….sab intezaar kar rahe honge.", he said hastily.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Waah wat an update bina manaye mayu aur sammy romance kar rahe hai😆
zoya i loved it, also im the first one to comment😆
plz update soon n pm me
Edited by -madhvi- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
wow nice update zoya
but plz pm me when u update
and plz plz continue soon



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