FF: LNMDJ Gyaaneer-PriDa! NEW UPDATE-pg33 - Page 23

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Part 14

GyanEer

"pehle mangalsutar to pehenlo" he says taking it in his hands and goes towards her and puts it around her neck and she feels a tickle in the tummy, he feels sumthing too with the touch but cant decide what…

he gets swayed away and moves his hand through her hair… she turns and stares at him blushing, he puts her hair behind her ear, they stare at eachother lost for a long time… until…

**Knock Knock**

Both get embarrassed and move away, gyan looks around confused at his behaviour… he looks at her then at the door then back at her embarrassed while she was smiling, he goes to the door.

"Hi bhai, kya ho raha hai??" it was prithvi.

"kya hai prithvi??' gyan closes the door and sticks his head out, prithvi smiles nodding his head.

"bhai chill main aapko disturb nahi karne aaya… infact main to… main to yeh kehne aaya hun ke aap…"

"chill, main aur heer aaj raat dinner ke liye jaa rahe hain akele samjha, to tu yahan ghar pe behet kar t v dekh" gyan tell him and prithvi is jumping with joy in his heart but makes a face and leaves.

******

Heer is finally dressed in a beautiful blue and pink saree, her hair clipped in half, she looked stunning, gyan was standing at the door waiting for her.

"god girls ko itna time kyun lagta hai???" he thinks aloud and heer smiles.

"im ready" she says with a smile, without looking at her he opens the door "chalo ab jaldi warna ticket milne me problem hojaayega…" he says and turns to see her and gets stunned… he just keeps on staring at her, he starts walking back to her… she was just blushing and standing, he goes right close to her, he admires her for a moment then removes the clip from her hair, she looks confused, he smiles.

"You look gorgeous" he compliments her, she jst looks down blushing.

He gives his arm so that she could put in her's through his **lolz dunno how to explain that** she blushes and puts her arm there and they walk out.

They finally leave bidding goodbye to prithvi and damz… damz goes to her room to get dressed.

*******

Prithvi is walking around the garden and looking at his wrist watch "god why are girls so slow???" he was pacing up and down… up and down… damz comes and he bumps into her coz he was looking down, he catches her waist to save her from falling, he sees how beautiful she looked, she was dressed in a black knee length dress. They stare at eachother for a little while then move back awkward… they stand there looking everywhere embarrassed.

"uh… chalein???" he asks and she noods her head, they jump on his bike and leaves.

On the bike, damz is feeling reli awkward coz of her dress… she is sitting sideways and trying hard to save herself from falling without holding him, he smirks and looks back at her.

"pakar lo warna neeche giro gi"

"im okay" she says with attitude.

"as u wish" he grins and takes a turn, she gets worried and almost falls but saves herself, he smirks thru the rear view mirror while she takes out her tongue showing she wont hold… he smiles and turns again, she tries hard but finally puts her hands around his waist… as soon as she puts it there they both get conscious… he slows down and looks at her slowly with love… he stops the bike and looks at her with a smile, she blushes and tries to look away but he turns her face back to him from her chin,

Finally they reach the movie house.

"yahan kyun aaye hain??"

"maine socha movie ke baad coffee ho jaaye"

"accha to ab naye naye plans ban rahe hain?? Gud gud" she smirks and he smiles, he gets off the bike and offers her a hand, she gets off smiling they both head to the counter.

********

Heer and Damz head to the popcorn corner and Gyan-Prithvi go to the ticket counter.

Prithvi is casually standing at the ticket counter, he turns to see damz and smiles seeing her staring back at him, they smile and eachother and turn back… prithvi see's gyan, he tries to see carefully and realizes it is him.

"Shit bhai ko aur koi movie house nahi mila?? Oh no aaj to gayi meri date" he thinks hiding his face with a brochure of new moon lol he turns to see damz, she was ordering the popcorn, he realizes he cant turn back or else she would get angry, he turns back and looks if gyan had left, gyan takes his tickets and with a huge smile leaves, prithvi signs in relief…

*********

Damz waits on one corner after getting the popcorn, Heer-Damz didn't see eachother and left on opposite sides… GyanEer head to the movie house.

"Chalo…"

Prithvi also gets his tickets and they also head to the movie… they take there seats… PriDa are talking and laughing before the movie starts, gyan hears the voice and looks around when he notices two seats ahead of him prithvi, he looks shocked/annoyed/angry.

"Isse issi movie house me, issi movie ke liye aana zaroori tha??" he thinks irritated then notices damz, he wonders whats going on, while heer was talking to him.

"kya hua??" she asks and he turns distracts her from looking there.

"wo kuch nahi, main bas… uh popcorn??" he offers her from his hand, she looks confused, he looks at her cutely offering the popcorn so she smiles and eats it, he offers another and she eats it blushing, an old couple is sitting in front of them staring at them smiling.

"wow kya jori hai na rustam??"

"haan ekdum perfect" rustam smiles and Gyaaneer look at them, then at themselves blushing.

********

The movie starts,

GyanEer

"awww so romantic" heer comments on one scene, gyan looks at her confused, then back at the screen trying to figure out what was so romantic, he looks at her and smiles at her cute expressions at each scene, instead of the movie he kept watching her, she notices that and asks him with a smile.

"kya hua??"

he nodds his head "nothing, just… apni wife ko dekhna koi paap hai kya?" he winks and she blushes, she looks back in the front… a thrilling scene comes and she gets scared so holds his hand tight, he just stares at her when she does that, she gulps worried, he smiles and puts his arms around her, she looks at him surprised and they share a eyelock.

A sad scene comes and heer's tears start rolling down, gyan stares at her then rubs her tears, he makes her look at him "I hate tears" he smiles and she smiles back with a blush.

PriDa

"wow aajkal aisa pyar hona is so not possible" damz says, he smiles and looks at her.

"Kyun nahi ho sakhta?? People still love people like crazy"

"accha give me a live example"

he smiles and looks at a couple in front who were holding hands "wo dekho, there so in love, movie se zyaada ek doosre ko dekhrahe hain" he tells her and she nodds her head.

"larka naughty cheezein soch raha hai and larki samajh nahi paa rahi ke wo kya kare"

"tumhe kaise pata??"

"unke expressions se"

"no way they look so in love" he claims.

"Wanna bet?? Abhi larki irritate hojaayegi" she bets, they look at them carefully… the girl gets irritated and starts arguing with the guy taking away her hand, damz smirks and prithvi looks annoyed, the girl leaves and the guy behind her.

Damz grins "see, hum girls ko sab cheezein saaf saaf dikh jaati hain"

"accha?? To mere baare me kya khayaal hai" he raises his eyebrows and she blushes, then smirks at him.

"hmmm sochna parega, tum ek complicated case ho na" she smiles and hits his head slightly.

The thrilling scene comes and prithvi just keeps looking at damz who is not reli scared or thrilled, he puts his hand around her shoulder and she looks at him angrily so he removes it, she laughs at him and he stares at her.

The sad scene comes and damz also has tears stinging her eyes, she tries to not let them down but one falls and prithvi gives her a smile, she looks embarrassed but smiles back.

After the movie;

They all land at the same coffee shop… prithvi sees them and hides his face behind the menu, damz and heer see eachother and end up together, the much gyan and prithvi are burning they all have coffee and dinner together and go home.

Heer-Damz go inside the house while Gyan-Prithvi;

"Tujhe poore Mumbai me aur koi movie house, movie aur coffee shop nahi milli kya??" gyan asks annoyed.

"main bhi yehi keh sakhta hoon, aapko aur koi jagah nahi milli bhabhi ko lejaane keliye" he asks annoyed.

They argue a little then leave.

*******

Few Days later, its Valentine day:

Prithvi is busy planning a surprise for damini while gyan is unaware of vday… Heer chooses a gift for him. Damz is too busy with her classes and doesn't have a moment to even think about Vday as it is she has never celebrated it.

On Vday after noon:

PriDa

"Chalo na tum sawaal bohot poochti ho" he says taking damz with a blindfold.

"duh meri aankhein band hongi to sawaal to poochongi na, kahan jaa rahe hain hum??" she asks again, he just smiles and nodds his head, finally they stop and he removes her blindfold slowly, she looks around they were at the stable, she looks confused then looks at him.

"Prithvi???" she gives him the questioning look and he raises his eyebrows at her then turns his sight, she turns and sees a different look…

The place was lighted up with colourful lights… the horses (five of them, two white and three black) were dressed in the royal style… the white horse looked like a princess one and the other white one the prince one… she smiles and looks at him, then looks back… behind the horses there was this stage like area with a table and Happy Valentines day written behind, it strikes her now, her mouth is open… she smiles and looks at him with appreciation.

"wow… this is… its beyond everything she says as she walsk over the red and white rose petals that lay on the floor… prithvi joins her and then helps her up the horse, he takes the other… they both start riding looking at eachother with love every second, they get deep in and then stop at a place… it was a colourful garden, with all kinds of flowers and birds-butterflies, damz is amused seeing the beauty of the place, she gets off and rushes to the butterflies, she plays around for a while and he stares at her… he goes close to her and gives her a red rose, she blushes and takes it, they dance for a while with soft music… he pulls her close to him (her back facing him but reli close) and whispers in her ear "I love you"

GyanEer

Heer is waiting for gyan to return, finally he comes back home… he doesn't have a clue about VDay she tries to remind him but no chance… they both sit in the room, he was busy on his laptop while she kept hoping he wud say sumthing, finally she goes to him and gives him the gift, he looks confused.

"happy valentines day" she smiles and he looks at her surprised, he takes the gift.

"mere liye??"

"hmmm"

He opens it, it's a silver watch, he smiles and wears it immediately "thanx this is fab" he smiles at it, she smiles seeing him happy… she realizes he didn't get her anything so she just smiles and goes to take a shower… she cries a little and then comes out… she sees the room was decorated with candles and diyas… she looks confused but smiles… she looks around to see gyan holding a bouquet of… of WHITE LILLIES??? She was a lil disappointed seeing that but just smiles and walks out, he was mesmerized as always… he gives her the bouquet.

"sorry bhool gaya, ab se yaad rakhoonga, Happy valentines day" he tells her and she smiles and takes it.

"thank you" she says, she has tears in her eyes… he smiles and nodds his tears… he rubs her tears and makes her sit on the bed.

"har cheese me rona zaroori hota hai na tum girls ke liye" he laughs, she just smiles.

"aap jab mereliye kuch bhi karte hain to mujhe patanahi kuch hojaata hai"

"oh to humaari wifey ko kuch kuch hota hai" he teases and she blushes.

"don't worry tumhaari life me bhi wo mr perfect aayega, so yeh sab kuch kuch uskeliye bachaakar rakho, im sure wo tumhe bohot khush rakhega, I can already seee it" he smiles and she looks upset, she gets up angry.

"agar aap mujhse pyar nahi kar sakhte its fine par mere liye kissi aur ko chunna ya kissi aur ki baat bhi karna paap hai, aap mere pati hain and aap hi meri life, agar aap mujhe pyar de ya naa dein ye aapki choice hai lekin kissi aur ke baare me mujhse please baat matt kijiya kariye, aap bhale hi mere jaise larki se pyar nahi karsakhte lekin main aapse pyar karne lagi hoon aur hamesha karoongi" she says angrily and leaves gyan shocked.

PriDa

She looks at him shocked…she blushes and moves away, he goes in front of her and makes her look at him.

"I love you ka jawaab bhi hota hai" he smirks, she looks away and he feels bad so he just moves to his horse, he jumps on his horse irritated, she runs towards the horse.

"I love you too" she says with a blush, he looks surprised/excited… he offers his hand, she takes it and jumps on the horse, without a word they leave on a long romantic close ride… finally when they reach the entrance of the stables, he goes close to her cheek touching it with his "mazaa aaya??" he asks in a hot voice she smiles.

"bohot" she says and pushes him back and gets off.

He follows her to the table, they have a romantic dinner…

"I love you" he tells her again with a smile before they enter the house, she blushes and looks around, she hugs him "I love u too" she replies and he smiles, hugs her back.

GyanEer

Heer is in the garden crying, gyan finally recovers his shock and comes finding her, she was sitting on the swing in the garden, he goes and sits next to her… she rubs her tears looking away, he makes her look at him.

"tum mujhse… mujhse???" he asks confused, she looks annoyed and embarrassed.

"look heer mujhe nahi pata tha ke tum mujhse pyar karne lagi ho… look im sorry… uh lekin kabse??" he asks confused, she rubs her tears.

"jabse humaari shaadi huyi" she tells him and he looks surprised.

"kabhi bataya kyun nahi??"

"aapne kabhi poocha nahi, maine kabhi bataana zaroori nahi samjha, kyunki kuch baatein kahi nahi jaati"

"okay… uh look heer, maine pehle bhi kaha tha, maine kabhi socha nahi hai pyar aur shaadi it was never in my dictionary… maine kabhi nahi socha tha ke main shaadi karoonga lekin hogayi…" he tells her she looks at him confused "pyar I dunno lekin ab jab mujhe pata hai tumhe kismet khushi milti hai to I will look at this relationship in that way, shayad maine kabhi apne aap ko yeh choice hi nahi di, I never tried" he says and she looks disappointed.

"Pyar kiya nahi jaata bas hojaata hai, main ye nahi chahti ke aap zabardasti mujhse pyar karo, main aapse pyar karti hoon wohi kaafi hai, bas phirse kabhi aisi baat matt karna" she says cutely, he smiles and rubs the remaining tears in her eyes, he pulls her closer and hugs her.

"sorry"

"dosti me no thank you aur no sorry" she says with a smile and he smiles back.

In there room

Gyan sets his bed on the sofa while heer lies on the bed… they both stare at eachother for a while and she gets up.

"aapko neend aarahi hai??" she asks and he refuses jumping up, they both decide to play cards… they play and chat for a long time… then finally gyan falls off to sleep on the bed, heer smiles staring at him sleeping he looked so cute and tired, she also sleeps… both on there own sides, far from eachother.

Next morning:

Gyan was on heers side and basically hugging her… hes eye opens and he looks at her beautiful face, he smiles and stares at her face for a while, then realizes where he was, he looks around and jumps up "main yahan??" he recalls them playing then chatting and him sleeping here… he turns to see heer fast asleep, she slept late watching him sleep… he just stares at her for a while then realizes she was shivering so he puts her blanket nicely and goes to the bathroom… he comes out but heer was still fast asleep. He comes out a little worried and touches her head, it was hot, he gets worried.

Sorry guys I knw this was toooooooo delayed, im reli sorry will update the next part sooner… was gonna do it on Wednesday but then had sum probs and cudnt so doing it now, hope u all like it!

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