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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana866

more long i cant do it as i was very slow in typing sorry for it

hope u will understand
next part in 1 hour i will post or tonight
till enjoy part 1
sana

its al right but that was really good story plz cont😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome its fabulous yaar continue soon i hope samrat does some thing fast

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey lovely part
i really want to knw what samrat will do now
plzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Part 4

Samrat was thinking a plan to stop gunjan marriage then nupur words struck his mind he thought to stop the guy who is coming from morena to Mumbai . he made a plan and called benji and said a plan in mute benji said ok. Samrat said to himself now how will u come to gunjan house by saying this smiled . meanwhile in gunjan house she was feeling something strange with her bauji he not talking t her at all not a single word. She thought some thing is wrong but what .

Next day at station benji was searching for that guy he knew the name it was rohit nupur said to him he searched the whole station but no lalu he got as he thought he would be some champoo type one but all his strength went in vain no one was there like that he came out of station and standing a auto and was thinking what to do now then suddenly some on patted his shoulder 2 ,3 times he got annoyed and turned & asked him what he want he said he want to go on this address he said he cant help him but the guy thought he is a driver of auto and asked him again to drop him to this address by saying he have given the chit to him. Benji unwilling taken the chit and read the address he was shocked and see the guy the guy was non other than rohit he was smart handsome he thought because the chit address was gumjan house.

Then rohit sat in auto and said chaliye bhai sab is address par le chaliye he said then benji got he asked him his address because he thought he is auto driver he took the chance and sat in auto & drive as fast as he can the real auto driver start shouting and running for his auto rescue but his try all in vain benji speeded auto and went off from there then rohit asked y the nam was running back of auto then benji said in Mumbai there many mental he is too a mental that's y he running back of my auto.

Benji had taken him 50 km away from station and gunjan house and left him there on road where he will get no auto till 10 km by saying the gunjan house will be more in. benji now came back to gunjan house happily as he made him a big fool he was really happy.

Meanwhile samrat too went to gunjan house nupur opened the door he came in and greeted all of them just then gd came he greeted him too but he staired towared him in anger and wet of from there. All where shocked specially samrat he thought y he behaved too strangely towards him as he have met him first time whats the matter he thought just then nupur said gunjan is up stairs she will bring juicefor him u go and meet her he gave ok look and went upto gunjan room.

He opened the door and sees that gunjan is sitting on bed and is in her own thoughts world and by seeing her any one can figure out that she was crying all the night.to light up her mood he said

S:hi chashmish

G:hi samrat

S: chashmish tum itni pareshaan mat ho mai koi na koi hal nikal hi longa tumhe mujh par bharosa nahi hai kya

G:apni jaan se bhi zyaada but she stopped she thought how he got to know all about this by seeing her face expression he said

S: nupur ne mujhe bataya aur chashmish tum fikar mat karo mai yeh shaadi nahi hone donga

By hearing smarat word and his concern toward her h. her eyes got wealing up and she was about to cry . samrat notice hat and came near to her and he was about to hug her when their door bell rang by hearing the bell rang he steped back wards just then they hear nupur screams they see each other face and ran downstairs and see a guy came in and then gd came out of his room and said welcome welcome ''ROHIT BETA'' . in hall all were stunned to hear rohit name especially samrat because

*flashback*

Samrat was about to get in gunjan room his cell started ringing he picked the phone up it was benji

B: dude works is done 10 janam mai bhi he will not reach to gunjan house

S: gr8 dude

B: ok then im coming home it will take 2 to 3 hours to come ok bye

By saying this he kept the phone

*flashback end*

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Rohit greeted gd and then he asked him to freshen up and went in his room rohit came towards samrat hi im rohit and u

S: hi im samrat

R: oh but who r u im means r u gunjan cousion or

S: no im nupur and chashmish I mean gunjan friend

R: oh then u know who im . im gunjan would be by saying this he turend towards gunjan and winked to her she was shocked then he turned towards samrat and said how well do u know gunjan

Samrat did not listen his question as he is too shocked because when rohit winked her he want to slap him very hard on his face but he control his anger and said in his mind that only he can wink towards gunjan like that no one else should not wink towards her liked that he thought and said that only he has right to wink to her in that way he thought

R: samrat

He snap out of his thought and sees towards rohit

R: kaha kho gaye tum kab se mai tum se kuch puch raha hoon

S; hai who mai tum kya keh rahe the

R:khair I will talks with u later as im very tired of long journey I will freshen up and then we will talk at dinner by saying this he was walking when he turned back and see gunjan and than nupur and gave a evil smile and went of samrat did not notice this as he was in his own thoughts.

In nupur and gunjan room

N: pata nahi rohit yaha phir kyun aaya hai

G: pata nahi di mujhe is ke irrade thik nahi lag rahe hai something is wrong di

N:ha yehi toh hame pata lagana hai

In hall samrat wa on sofa thinking all what just happen then suddenly some one patted his shoulder he lifted his head sees it is non other than benji

S: thank god u came benji u liar u said all lies

B: mai kuch samjha nahi

S: ab zyada bhola mat ban tune kha tha ki mai rohit ko 50 km door chod araha hoon who kab nahi pohanch paye gah

B:ha toh

S: toh kya who abhi abhi yaha achuka hai

B: what

S:ha

b: par mai ne toh

samrat kept a hand on benji shoulder and said something is wrong benji. Rohit he not a good guy something is going on in his mind but what we have to make it out.

B: par samrat who yaha itni jaldi aaya kaise jaha maine use choda tha waha se aane mai utni hi time lagta hai jitna mujhe lage aur agar who Mumbai mai kafi time se reh raha hai to hi short cuts ka istemal kar ke utni jaldi aa sakta hai par who toh aaj hi morena se aaya hai woh bhi pehli baar.

Samrat was thinking the same thing but how can he find out all of his questions answer he thought.

Y was gunjan father behaving strange with gunjan and samrat ? y gunjan and nupur were too shocked to see him ? y he smile evilly towards gunjan and nupur what r his plans ? how rohit know Mumbai roads short cut as he came to Mumbai first time ? what is the mystry towards all this question ?

To know the answer wait till next update

Guys hope u all like this part if u all liked it plz comment if haven't liked it then also let me know

Do u guys want me to continue or should I stop it plz reply guys.

Sana

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Guys I want to only focused on their married life and their marriage. So I want to finish this mystry in 2 ,3 parts and 4 part will be their marriage and then I will show their married life because due to this mystry and all I cannot focused on sajan and if I write mjht all character in my ff then I will cannot show sajan more scense and then the parts goes too long and then u have to wait for their marriage too long as it goes long long .what do u guys say I want ur suggestion and opinion on topic as I have to write my next part reply soon guys then only I can update the parts soon .

Note: don't say that what ever I want do it do because im really confused so I want ur opinion

sana

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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx guys for all of ur comment it give me strength to write next part of ff so so plz guys keep commenting or just press like button
love u all
sana 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
nice update Sana
continue soon and please reveal all the mystery sooon
Waiting for next update eagerly
update soon
and do pm me

regards

Nabeeha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
gr8 cute nice sweet lovely post sana
keep it up
my best wishes with u
love
maham

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice one
definably different from all i have read till now
do continue dear
bye sumi

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