'I Can Never Forget U'AR FF completed 14/10 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: aati1429

hey it is interesting concept...............

continue soon



heyyy dear,
thanks for ur comment
thanks for liking the concept.
will update soon


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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: dipu

hey!!!

nice intro dear....

conti soon...




heyyy dear,
thanks for ur comment
thanks for liking the intro.
hope u like the parts also.
will update soon


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Posted: 16 years ago
#53



heyyy deat,
watting for ur comment


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Posted: 16 years ago
#54


heyyy dear,
thanks for commenting


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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
heyyy freds,
thanks for commenting.
& sorry for dealy in update.
i thought that i will be ending this FF.
in intro itself
but thanks for wonderful comment

& sorry if i have done any mistake
it's my first time so plzz bare with me



PART -1

many people are standing in line

infornet of a big get in line. which is closed.

most off the people are youngster or we can say teenager in which girls are more then boys.

all are in hurry to go on.

the want to go first so the can see the show properly

or we can see there Fav. star properly.

in the line there are a group of girl they are where happy & exited

because the get a chance to came to the show &

can see there Fav. actor.

the girl are gossiping .

what will the do when the will see there FAV. actor DR.karan or Armaan mallik.

(lets here what the girls are saying)


girl1:i am dieing to see my super hero.


Girl2:i known yaar me too.

but don't known when they will take us in

& we can see Armaan.


Girl3:i hope he just came out & give me a big hug & his autograph.


Girl2:i just wan't to take a picture with him.


Girl1 to other girls:

i don't think so u will get his autographs or pic.


other girls: yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?


Girl1:we all most be busy looking at him then how will we remember to give his autograph.


Girl4:ya that's right.

i just hop i will not faint looking at him.

then came a loud noise

the girl turn to see the noise

& they are just standing like a status.

we can see a young handsome boy is coming

he is looking like a graic good(sorry for spelling mistake)

he has perfect look, style & personality.

which can make any one make fida on him.

he is talking to some of the crew member.

the group of girl: ARMAANNNNNN

he turn & look at the direction from where the noise have come.

Armaan:hiiiiiiii girls,


Girls:hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

can u Plzz give ur autographs to us.

Armaan: sure, it's my pleasure dear.

all the girls are going ahead for autograph in that process there are many ruses.

all the crew member are trying to Handel the people.

but the just wan't to go first & take Armaan autograph.

same girls are also taking his pic in there mobile & camera.

Armaan: girls, I am not going any where.

u all will get hurt(in sweet Voice)

hearing Armaan voice,

all the girls clamed done

all the girl came one by one & take his autograph.

in between the autograph his partner(Nicole) came & say something

to Armaan in his ears.

which he nodded in Yes.

after same time giving the autograph to the all girls

Armaan: ok girls bye bye,

thanks for loving me.

& giving me so much love.

ARMAANNNNNNNNNNN

all the girls say in union.

ARMAAN turn & give them a flying kiss

one of the girl ask:

Armaan Plzz give us a answer of one question

Armaan :sorry girl go to go.


Girl: Plzz it will not take a time PLZZZ

Armaan: ok dear,

ask.

but only one.i have to go also

Girl: plzz tell us the girl name whom u love so much.

all the girl :PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZz

after hearing this question Armaan face change to happy to sad to angry

but he become normal.

Armaan: sorry girls no comment on that question

bye bye.

Girls:

Plzz Armaan



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heyyy freds,
thanks for ur Comment
i hope u will like this part


plzz do comment & press like button


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Edited by Riddss - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

hai dear 😊

really an awesome one!!
KARAN IS THE BEST
but can u plzzzz give a bit larger updates please!
will be waiting for ur updates
takecare😊
Edited by k_anjali12 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
nice part Ridss..
Armaan is really very sweet with all the girls!..n they're all drooling over him..hu wud'nt?
btw u make a lot of spelling mistakes..no prob..but u shud def try n improve der..n also try n make the parts longer..
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-Aish
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
WELL.. BIGGER UPDATE PLEASE... IT WAS NICE AS HE IS GETTING FAMOUS
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
wow good one
really like armaan as a super hero
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60

hey!!

that was really nice one...

so whoes the lucky one ha...

update next one soon....

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