Life in a movie - mayur ff - NTL on first page - Page 94

Originally posted by: nikki028

<br><br>uh oh.......2more updates???????????????is it related to present?coz i dnt c ny delay in showin tht part vich u r gonna show aftr 2 updates.......toh beech mein dikhaana hai toh i guess it wilb related to present....nywz....its all abt 2 updates na........i'l defo w8 for u.........😳😳<br><br>waise ek suggestion..........tum na apne do updates ek saath post karle.....n then this thread wil defo get ovr...n i really want tht ultra special romantic update se hi tere doosre thread for this ff ka start ho.....😳😳😳.......hws my idea?<br>

well i loved ur idea.......

lekin woh jo two parts hain.........

woh romantic na sahi lekin unki comfort level ko batate hain..........

its abt their pure love..........

aur next thread means.........

romance.........

and the two updates r only related to past........

no present..........

yaar abhi mayank bhi mjht mein nahi hai...........

aur uske bina main kisi bhi vajah se dukh nahi de sakti hoon

i wont update their terrible past until mayank comes back in mjht.........

vaise hi kya kam dard hai mujhe jo main tum logon ko bhi doon?

so.........

jo new thread hai uski shuruvat to naye rishte se hogi.........

their marriage life..........

isemein to ek baar promo de doongi........

and it will get over.........

and then unki marriage life ki romance.........

pure love.........

sab kuch new thread se..........

hope u liked it..........

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

<FONT size="3">array tu to senti ho gyi yaar😕,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, koi baat nahi .😛............. kya farak padta hai agar tune late pm kiya??? kiya to sahi na,,😉,,,,,,,,,, tention mat le yaar..,🤢,,,,, aur haan </FONT><FONT size="4">ITS OK.....😉.......</FONT>

thank god ki tune mujhe maaf kar diya.......

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#990000">hawwww!!!</font><br><br>
<font color="#990033">mahak d upd8 was awesum!!!</font><br><br>
<font color="#990066">realllyyy!!!</font><br><br>
<font color="#990099">but!! such a small one????</font><br><br>
<font color="#9900cc">kitna baatein karti hai tu yaar!!!</font><br><br>
<font color="#9900ff">he bhagwaaaan!! kam karo!!! huh!</font><br><br>
<font color="#9933ff">well...nywyzzz...</font><br>
<font color="#9933cc"><br>wow yaar!!<br></font>
<br><font color="#993399">i luvd d way u described the feelings of d going-to-be-married-soon couple!!!</font><br>
<font color="#993366"><br>d whole part was awesum!!</font><br>
<br><font color="#993333">but still i will col u cliffhanger!!!</font><br>
<br><font color="#993300">i mean....how can u stop here????</font><br>
<br><font color="#996600">u cant yaar!!</font><br>
<br><font color="#996666">pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls CONT. SOOOOOOONNNN!!!!!!!!</font><br>
<br><font color="#996699">thanx 4 d pm!!</font><br></font>

small one?????

oye yaar agar main unke rooms tak laa kar chod deti to tu meri jaan le leti.........

so i stopped it here only.......

thank god ki main unki feelings ko describe kar saki.........

i was very nervous.........

i am glad that i could bing out their pure emotions........

hey ab tu to mujhe cliff hanger mat bol..........

tujhe acha lagta kya ki main unhe unke kamre tak le jaakar

then stop kar deti???????

but i will continue soon...........

aaj to "kaun hai woh" update karoongi...........

hai mahak just loved this part...simply awesome yaar....great going....u have done this part very shot...i want a loonnnnng part....well upd soon

sorry mahak for the delay
today i read it
yaar mahak meri heart beat bhi moment ke barre mein soch soch ker tejh ho rahi hai
soon update

Originally posted by: kaldivya

<FONT color=#ff00ff size=4 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">I am going to call u "Angel"🤗 now.. U bought tears in my eyes... All the parts were just amazing... totally touched my heart...

You have got a wonderful talent... Don't ever stop writing... I have no words dear... I can really imagine all the parts... Thank you so much for updating.....😊

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how sweet of u!

thanks.........

i am glad that my writing could touch your heart........


😳

i have a passion for writing..........

so i will never ever stop writing..........

i am glad that u could imagine everything.........

u r always welcome.........

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav

loved it

continue soon

yup i would..........

Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

hai mahak just loved this part...simply awesome yaar....great going....u have done this part very shot...i want a loonnnnng part....well upd soon

i am glad that u loved this part.......

ohk........

next time i will give u a long part...........

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

sorry mahak for the delay
today i read it
yaar mahak meri heart beat bhi moment ke barre mein soch soch ker tejh ho rahi hai
soon update

theek hai.........

main abhi update to nahi..........

lekin haan sunday ko promo zaroor de doongi.........

i promise..........