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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#881

hey friends..........

i know that i am late..........

i guess i was too busy with chatting with my friends..........

so here i come with my update

and its a surprise to all of u........

u all wanted romantic updates...........

so after this update.........and some more..........

i will add full romantic updates 😳

i guess that will be fine with u........

this is short update.........

cause i had to update "kaun hai woh" too.........

i will update that tomorrow..........

and i will perhaps open a one shot gallery too...........

and one more thing to say..........

maybe i will not update it again for one week........

so next update on monday or before.........

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#882

At last the day came of their marriage.......

they were very excited about it.......

they had dreamt all about it.......

they had planned so many thing about it......

they were pretty excited, happy and nervous............

On their wedding-

Mayank was waiting for nupur to come down......

he was waiting for her down in the mandap.......

after some time.......

Nupur shyly and elegantly walks down……

she comes down and everyone just simply watch her…….

she was looking so tremendously beautiful that even moon on seeing her would hide herself in shame……..

she was looking like a beauty….

Mayank looked at her and his gaze fixed at her………

he could not remove his gaze from her……..

her orange lehenga complimented her beautifully and her jewellery looked like adding glory to her beauty………….

but mayank thought that she was complimenting the dress and her jewellery………..

she looked beautiful even when dressed simple………….

he knew that.....

he knew her so closely......

And now today, when he saw her, he could not believe his eyes…..

she was looking stunning…

and was going to be his…..

Tabhi Nupur also started looking at her…….

she was also stunned by her handsome personality….

he was wearing an orange sherwani which suited him perfectly……

he was looking very smart and impressive….

she thought…..

besides his dress matched her dress completely......

She then saw mayank who was all richly dressed and looking damn smart……

she had never seen him with so much of smartness and cuteness……..

he was looking like a rajkumar waiting for her to be his…..

the look on his face was the same that of Nupur…..

they were both shying and excited…….

they both were dressed very beautifully………

They started looking at each other at the same time…….

for some time, they could not remove their gaze from each other

but…

after sometime they realized what they were doing and they removed their gaze quickly……

because they did not wanted other people to notice what they were doing.......

Nupur sat in the mandap beside mayank….

They performed all the rituals…

Panditji- aaj se aap pati patni hain….

The moment he said this, Nupur and mayank experienced a shiver running down their sprine…….

They were confused,

excited,

puzzled at the same time.....

they were having a different kind of feeling......

a feeling very different.......

a feeling which one would only understand if they were going through that phase.......

The wedding was completed and now one thing remained........

their room.......

today they had broken the wall that separated them......

at least....

to be continued.............

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#883

i hope u liked the update!

well after marriage........

now u can think of the scenes........

u know abt the hatred they have for each other in present............

so wonder abt the depth of their love in their past.........

well u can't........

u can't measure their love..........

so now i sign off.......'

i know this update was short.......

but if i had stopped in their rooms 😳 😳

then u would have called me a cliffhanger.........

so better stop here........

some more updates.......

and then their intimacy follows 😳 😳

happy nikki028?

and many others who wanted this........

Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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zoya

@tingtingteeding

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#884

awesome update bachchi....loved it....u describe very well.....plzzzzzz comntinue soon...

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#885

Originally posted by: zoya_me
awesome update bachchi....loved it....u describe very well.....plzzzzzz comntinue soon...

haan main abse jaldi update karoongi...........

kyunki kuch dino baad mere bhi exams hain..........

tab main update nahi kar paaungi..........

so abhi kar rahi hoon...........

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#886

gr888888888888888888888888888 update

conti soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

thanxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#887

Only word to describe this : -

AWESOME ....👏 🤗

Couldn't get a font size bigger than this...

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Rabi

@rose.mn

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#888

it was nice update dear

bt tooooooooooooo short
itni dair baad itni choti update not fair
anyawys post ur next sooon

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#889

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25
gr888888888888888888888888888 update
conti soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

thanxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm

i will continue soon and then i will pm u............