Ehsaas...Part 8-- Pg 15....01/02

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Pooja

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Posted: 19 years ago

#21

aww its ok...believe i understand lol....i dont get a chance to cont my fanfic either...rite by ya sis!!....lol...great job...cant wait

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Pooja

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Posted: 19 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: bollygirl87
thanx for understaning guys!!!

o come on....we all go through that kind of situations!!..lol....take your time..till then i hope u enjoy my fanfic

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Dipti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#23

AWW NO PROBLEM!!!....WE ALL CAN UNDERSTAND!!!....AND BTW HOPE U DID WELL ON UR EXAMS!!. 😃

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Vanita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#24

Hey man!!! Please Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

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Pachu.P

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Posted: 19 years ago

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Originally posted by: guli444
Hey man!!! Please Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

hey dude!!!!..will b posting 1st part 2day!!

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Pooja

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Posted: 19 years ago

#26

plz plz hurry.....i can no longer wait....beeeenn lonnnnnnngggggg time!!!

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Pachu.P

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Originally posted by: Pooja922
plz plz hurry.....i can no longer wait....beeeenn lonnnnnnngggggg time!!!

ya..it has been long time..but..kya karein...exams na!!...will be posted in next 45min

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Taniya

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Posted: 19 years ago

#28

kool...i'll be waitin to read the next part...gr8 story btw...

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Pachu.P

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Posted: 19 years ago

#29

IM CHANGING SOMETHING…KARTIK-MISHTY,DK-DISH, JASSI-ARMAAN,N AMIT-SHILPA LIVE IN THE SAME HOUSE IN INDIA…ITS ONLY KRIPA-ANGAD-N AALIYA LIVE IN AUSTRIA N UK RESPECTIVELY!!

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Pachu.P

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Posted: 19 years ago

#30

sorry 2 make u wait guys...here is the first part:

As the sun rises, we see a beautiful house…n camera takes us inside the door, up the stairs, 4ront somebody's room….and door is opened n we go inside.. n…we see a room soooo nicely decorated yet so simple….then all of a sudden,

A: Kripa, Kripa get up…don't u have oppoinments today???
K: Kya hain Aaliya…let me sleep…n no…I don't have any appointments today…
A: Why's that?
K: Because Angad is coming today!...n she gets up in a shock!!
A: Ejjactly!!!...n madam..u know what time he is coming?
K: Ya…his plane is to arrive at 10am
A: oh really??
K: ya..why u sayin like that?
A: Because..its
K: its…
A: 9!!!!!!
K: What??? Oh shit!!...crap!!! stupid me!! N Aaliya…can't u wake me up early??
A: Excuse me Kripa…I tried 2 wake u up like at 7..but u wouldn't.. by this time…Kripa was in shower!!

Kripa hurriedly takes a shower n comes out wearing white short pants…w/strings on sides w/short pink sleeve t-shirt…w/hair straightened n puts on her white-ankle-high heel boots on and starts her car

Kripa driver her car fast…n…keeps lookin at her watch..it was 1015

K: Oh shit!!...Angad is gonna kill me!!!...hopefully his plane is late!!

By the time Kripa reach Airport….its 1045…she parks her car right outside the gates(she isn't going in to receive him b/c he said he will come out) n she searches 4 Angad…n she spots him coming to her…looking very mad!!

K: aaj to tu gayi kripa!!!
K: Hi Jaan…sorry mein late ho gayi…actually kya hua na…(interrupted by Angad)
A: Kya hua na jaan..ke…I woke up late..n..that Aaliya wouldn't stop talking to me….right?
K: Ya….but how do u know?
A: C'mon Kripa…that's what u tell me everytime!!
K: Really??...am sooo sorry Angad….makes a puppy face
A: Its ok…but..it shouldn't happen next time
K: Pakka!!!...promise!!
A: Kripa…isi baat ke liye…you have to give me a treat n something else!!
K: Sure….but what is something else?
A: You will know soon!
K: Ok…so…where would Mr.Khanna like to eat lunch?
A: Um….Mrs to be Khanna….Mr.Khanna would like to eat @ Carabbas(Italian)
K: My pleasure…chalein n puts her hand out…
A: Sure…n puts his hand on top of hers n they head 2 car

After putting Angad's baggage in car…

K: Mr.Khanna…would you like to drive?
A: No..its ok Mrs would be Khanna….im tired
K: Awwwwwwwww….my sweeto is tired
A: Sweeto??...its ok…its good!!

They reach Carabbas in 15 min….

A: Kripa..drop me here..n I will go reserve our table..by then u park the car
K: Ok
Saying this…Angad gets out..n…goes in..n comes out after 2 min…meanwhile Kripa is roaming around finding a parking

A: (stopping Kripa's car n getting in)….Lets go
K: Kyon??..Kya Hua?
A: Oh nothing…its 45 min wait…but…its full inside..so..i thought why don't we just stay in car until its our turn
K: Ok

Saying this…Kripa parks her car a little away from the restaurant…since..there is no parking near restaurant

A: Aur Kripa..yeh to hui meri treat…
K: Ya…haan Angad..what was that special something?
A: Hold on..hold on..im getting there..that special something is a kiss!!
K: Ok…What??...r u crazy…tum pagal to nahin hue ho na?
A: No…n its not like we haven't kissed b4
K: Ya..but still
A: C'mon Kripa..only 1!!
K: Ok…but not now…after lunch
A: Ok…as u say so…makes a puppy face n starts searching for cd's
K: Awwww…
A: Kripa…you don't have any good Cd's
K: No Answer
A: Kripa..
K: No Answer
A: Kripa…n looks towards her..n…Kripa gives him a kiss on his lips…n it becomes their most passionate kiss ever!!!...but….after like 2 min…something vibrates on Angad's lap n it breaks their kiss…

When they look…it's time 4 them to go inside…their table is ready…n Angad gives Kripa one quick kiss on lips n…

A: Lets go Kripa…table is ready
K: -
A: Kripa?...shaking her
K: Huh??...ya..lets go
A: Where were u lost?
K: Umm nothing….just wondering
A: That it was the best kiss ever..right?
K: Ya…um No…Angad!!..n hits him on his hand
A: What?
K: Nothing…lets go!!

Guys do tell me how it was!!..will write 1 more part tonight..b4 goin 2 bed

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