'The Truth Within' ( Short Story) Part V (Ends)

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

just awesome

this story is just show the truth of the world

i can say everyline is true

only i doubt that a boy can trust a girl

but this story toatlly rocj and yes contain true meaning of truth

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
just awesome
this story is just show the truth of the world

i can say everyline is true

only i doubt that a boy can trust a girl

but this story toatlly rocj and yes contain true meaning of truth

Hi ,

Am glad that u liked the story and felt a lot of it was closer to truth . Ya its not easy for a Guy to trust the girl na.. actually more than that to accept the truth which is in front. I guess with changin times somewhere the Sudhir knows trust her charcter the truth reveald by her must have made him feel uneasy but certainly he wants to give her second chance to get closer to him... i wish people like him exist but certainly people like him shoudl have Dhruti like partners too or else survivial for such people is also difficult with the dirt around...

It makes me feel really happy that u liked this story... and flet it had meaning somewher to what truth is and can be.. its nto simple, its not complex but its never easy to speak or to hear as well...

Bhoomi

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sanjh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Finished reading it in one go...was getting very restless while reading it...wasn't getting the link between Dhruti's rvltion infrnt of her frnds with her parent's past..was wondering why she tuk such step... finally, got her... i must say, it's very thoughtful of u Bhoomi.. the way u delt with it, i clearly understood what dhruti must have gone thru..what she wanted to see and do..why she did that...a very brave girl...n the thought is really courigious...well done yaar!!

loved the line when nidhi says,
U can be against them by ethics not by affection… amazing!!

I wish all guys starts feeling like sudhir, think like sudhir...hope everyone realise trust is most imp.. but the prb is, its very rare , nd a bit tough to find such understanding person.. sare ladko ko tumhare stories ke lovers se sikhna chahiye how to care, how to behave, how to trust,what to say nd newly added how to face the truth...

love u dear.. n btw, my nick name nearly sounds like dhruti's...H aur R ko nikaldo to pronounction same hoga..lol!!!!

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: nisisanjh
Finished reading it in one go...was getting very restless while reading it...wasn't getting the link between Dhruti's rvltion infrnt of her frnds with her parent's past..was wondering why she tuk such step... finally, got her... i must say, it's very thoughtful of u Bhoomi.. the way u delt with it, i clearly understood what dhruti must have gone thru..what she wanted to see and do..why she did that...a very brave girl...n the thought is really courigious...well done yaar!!

loved the line when nidhi says,
U can be against them by ethics not by affection' amazing!!

I wish all guys starts feeling like sudhir, think like sudhir...hope everyone realise trust is most imp.. but the prb is, its very rare , nd a bit tough to find such understanding person.. sare ladko ko tumhare stories ke lovers se sikhna chahiye how to care, how to behave, how to trust,what to say nd newly added how to face the truth...

love u dear.. n btw, my nick name nearly sounds like dhruti's...H aur R ko nikaldo to pronounction same hoga..lol!!!!

Hi Sara,

I was wondering to know how u felt reading the story.. I posted it in one go.. and u read it in one goo looks like it wasnt that lonngg.. chalo that means good i posted all the parts in at once.

So u were gettign restless readign it... hmm even while writing i had a heavy heart soem how.. i mean i was feelgin weird while dhruti's lines were there... its not our life but when u take a stand to uderstand them..u feel so weird that u just cant take this in ur life at least.. and somewhere we can never be that composed as well may be.. but i had to write what dhruti is and shoudl be..

I have to mention it to u sara.. when u n me had discussion on Virginity question i had already written this story and was waiting for himani for her baner... so there were so manyt higns i wanted to share keepign in mind this story.. it was a good co-incidence i guess ... may be inspiration from sach ka samna which is goign off air soon..

Yup those lines are mine too i mean i feel any anyyy child even if angry upset .. in their heart soemwhere they still will be caring for the fact that what their parents have given them loong years..its not easy its not possible to start hating them.. but u can hate urself for lovign them even afetr all this..

Guys liek Sudhi ya they r hard to find...but they are..and they are found only when such difficult situatiosn come up.. we dicover a Sudhir.. and its Gods kidnnes to have found and have met suh a person. i belive such people r there.. its our fortune whether we meet such peple in our lfie or not.. The world has them whther we get to that part of world is our destiny... liek i am forutnate to have me tu alll... U all r my fortune..:)

yup ur pet name... heheh Dhruti is a very common name ... luv u Sara..tc.. and hope u liked the banner HImani made wihtout any info or request from me... :D

luvu

Bhoomi

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pickytg

@pickytg

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

That was a good and interesting read! :)

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: missypatel

That was a good and interesting read! :)

Hi ,

Feels good to hear from u that u felt it was a nice one to read.. hope u enjoy more of my writings in future. thanks for replying.:)

Bhoomi

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amazingneira

@amazingneira

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

it is a very beautiful ff!!

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: aati1429
it is a very beautiful ff!!

Thanks u so much... I really didnt think anyone would find it beautifully.. was wondering if confusion, grimness.. and may be whether the readers may accept the story as it is or not.. so glad to get some encoraugign response... :)

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