Aarzii.....SujalnKashish.....Last Part..12/03

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#571

That was a very cute part !

The coffee part was nice !

Aur ye kya baat hui...Kashish made Sujal wash his mug but khud mug ko sink me rakhke chali gayi !! Lol !!

Continue soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#572

mindblowing part

the scene were kashish heard sujal rehearsing his dialouges was too good because finally kashish got really jealous and it seems slowly she is getting feelings towards sujal.When sujal and kashish were rehearsing together i really liked the way u described the scene.I really enjoyed the scenes were sujal and kashish both worry about each other after seeing each other in pain.Finally anisha is out of sujal and kashish's life cant believe she could be so evil killing her own children but it seems her bad deeds have destroyed her future.The coffee making scene was amazingly described i really liked the way u showed the comfort level between SK and the last scene were kashish says 'my sujal' was mindblowing and these words actually bought a smile on sujals face.

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Priya

@pinky901

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#573

grt prt dear

u 2 r jus superb.u both r very good writers.i appreciated u both frm my heart.

pls cont soon

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ravikaran2009

@ravikaran2009

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#574

ohhh...thats so cute...lovely update...arey dumbo bas 'my sujal' sochte rho raat bhar aur khus hote rho..ye nhi ki jakr i love u bol den..inhe raat ke 2 bje kashish ko uthakr bs unke haat ke baare me puchna hai,subah nhi puch skte the..lekin man me to kuch aur hai aur ye kashish bhi kuch kam nhi...baat bhi kr rhi hain,phn pr coffee bhi bn rha hai aur kehti hain "itni raat ko ladki ko call kiya jata hai kya?" mauka dekhkr aap bhi flirt kr leti hain..arey tumko samajh nhi ata ki ek 'dost' raat ko kun phn krta hai...tum dono ka kuch nhi hoga..duffer ho dono.. 😊..lovely update..plz continue..

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#575

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kashish heard sujal rehearsing his dialogues too good because finally kashish ko jalan huye aur ab slowly she is going to get feelings towards sujal.I love the scene sujal and kashish were rehearsing together i really liked the way u people described the scene very well written Dear I love and enjoyed the scenes where sujal and kashish both worry about each other after seeing each other in pain.

Finally anisha is out of sujal and kashish's life 👏i can believe she could be so evil killing her own children . woh kisi bhi hadh ko paar kar sakti thi.

The coffee making scene was amazing i really liked the way u show the comfort level between Sujal & Kashsih & the last scene kashish says 'My Sujal' mind blowing and make sujal more Happy ..

👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏 Awesome👏👏, Mind Blowing👏👏 , Perfect👏👏 , Amazing .👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏 Awesome👏👏, Mind Blowing👏👏 , Perfect👏👏 , Amazing .👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏 Awesome👏👏, Mind Blowing👏👏 , Perfect👏👏 , Amazing .👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏 Awesome👏👏, Mind Blowing👏👏 , Perfect👏👏 , Amazing .👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏Thank you 👏👏 Awesome👏👏, Mind Blowing👏👏 , Perfect👏👏 , Amazing .👏👏

Thanks a Ton For Pm & This Part Dear.Thank you 👏👏 Awesome👏👏, Mind Blowing👏👏 , Perfect👏👏 , Amazing .👏👏

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sania_58

@sania_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#576

awsome part

loved the update

superb

mindblowing

cute part

great going

plz continue soon

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#577

Wow.....achha sabak sikhaya Sujal ne uss Anisha ko....she definitely deserved it....hehe. Main to bahuuuuuuuut khush hu.....par isse bhi zyada isliye khush hu kyunki Sujal ne raat k 2 baje Kashish ko phn kiya....and they had a wonderful tym on phn.....so sweet. Kashish said 'my Sujal'.....gr8!!!

And btw at the starting Kashish ko kitna gussa aya tha ye sochke Sujal kisiko propose kar raha hai....haha. Everything in the part was nice.....just so gud!!!

Pls continue soon.