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Posted: 15 years ago
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Emotional Promo
Thanx for pm Jana
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh god yaar agar promo itna painful hai to actual part to mujhe rula hi dega....................but pls update soon.I am not able to wait now.And yes take care!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx guys 4 liking it i'll update soon promise
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very emotional promo ....... cant ait for da next part ...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i read all the parts just now.......the theme is very unique.......sam's diary.....mayu's b'day......and the mystry of last 1 year......all sounds so interesting.......but.....tell me 1 thing......are nups and sam dead......

plzz add me to ur pm list.....and keep up the gud work......
luv yaa.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey thanx people 4 replying sorry me bit busy right now with all these assighnments. i know u'll say that i am always minting bahanas but that's me then
i'll update soon though
pakka promise
lots of love
dolly
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Update 3==

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Flashback 1(continued)==

Scene1(continued)==

Nupur== achacha samrat tum benji ka murder baadmein krlena n gunjan tu baad mein sharmalena , abhi pls jao aur gifts le aao

Samrat== ok

He turns to go but bangs head first into gunjan , who was just standing behind him,

Gunjan n samrat in unison== ahhhhhhhhhhh

Nupur == by god !!! kam se kam dekh k to chala kr samrat!!

Gunjan== tum theek ho samm.. rat samrat ..

Samrat mutters "I am fine" after suppressing a giggle…

Nupur== gunjan tu rehne de , mein jaati hun smart k saath , tum dono gaye to bas milgaye gifts mayank ko… samrat aate vaqt anshu ko bhi mummy ji k yahan se lana hai , ab tak to mummy ji ne use vaccination dila di ho gi …

Nupur== chalo samrat ,, gunjan ko baad mein dekh lena plssssssssss

Scene 2==

Mayank is at his mom's home playing with his 2 month old son, anshu ,, he was smiling to himself ,he knew very well that at there hostel or there home ,currently preparations 4 his birthday party were going on.. his friends n beloved wife wanted to keep it a surprise bt he was too smart 4 them .. any one would be , if u get a surprise birthday party constantly 4 five years ………

He laughed out aloud at the stupid ness of his friends ,, bt there was no argument that they were the most adorable people of the world……

Thinking of his friends his thoughts slowly n slowly started concentrating only n only on nupur.. how beautiful she looked in the morning with her messed up hair n giddy eyes ,, how blessed he feels when he sees her playing pee ka boo with their son ,

Yes their son , that was the word ,, the word that made his life all the more like heaven…

I am missing her ,, its been 3 hrs , I 'll call her. Bt she would be busy with the preparations, so what ?????

Scene 3==

Nupur== eh tu dekh k ni chal sakta??? Abe ghurta kya hai , nikal yahan se

Samrat=( joining her from behind)== kya hua nupur??

Nupur== samrat dekho na ise , yeh gunda kab se mera peecha kr raha hai , aur abhi mujh se yeh jaan bujh kr takraya, mayu ka birthday cake bhi neeche gir gaya ..

Samrat glares back at the already bearded man, he was strange , not even once 4 the past 3 minutes has he blinked his eyes ,, his face was so serene n yet so repulsive …… he was constantly staring at the pair of samrat n nupur . as if he was getting absolute pressure in irritating them ………

Samrat didn't knew what made him do this , bt he slaped the bearded man right across his face,, the passer byes in the crowded bazaar stopped at the scene 4 just abt few seconds n then they moved on………

Samrat was stunned at himself ,, he has never been so violent but he had no idea what made him do that . what made him more stunned was the reaction from the bearded man who just smiled menacingly n walked away…

Samrat== ajeeb insan tha ,, achacha nupur dia ka phone aaya tha , she is just at the koutons shop ,,at the end of the street she is buying a shirt 4 mayank , lets go to bakery n pick up another cake

Precisely at the moment nupur's phone began to ring

It was mayank……

Both of them smiled

Samrat== chal tu is se baat kr I'll go n pick up the cake bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ok friends this is the next update , I have written the next chapter too bt I did n't post it as I wanted to ask u people an important question,,,

What now happens in the story is totally unexpected n illogical may be.. can u allow me to do it???

U people must have guessed till now that nupur n samrat died in the bomblast that I'll describe in the next update ..

The next update in it has the complete description of the bombblast n the starting of the illogical part……

Pls do comment

Love dolly

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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice update!! 😃
waise to im used to illogical stff...i mean look at the serials nowadays...they dont even bother with logic so im fine with that!! im sure it will be a great next update!)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow wat gr8888 part
myaur married 👏
awesome part yaar
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm
update next part soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
im eagerlyyyyy waiting
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
thanx 4 replying guys i'll update soon

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