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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
Hey Dolly! Plz update it soon yar!!! I m really havng tears in my eyes, thnkng of next part!!!! Plz yar!!! Thanx for the pm!!! By the way ths update wz very cute!!! Mayu's luv towards his wife nd son is so gud!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
atleast mayu cn wish some1 bday.he got manners atlest
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: sugar03

atleast mayu cn wish some1 bday.he got manners atlest

by god tu kabhi dhang se reply to kariya hi mat kher to others thans everyone 4 so much lov n bearing with my lateness
bt my pc crashed so couldn't update b4
bt i am doing that now within 1 or 2 hrs
just hope i get it through
lov u people loads ( n wishing maninder ever comes with a logical reply to my posts)
dolly
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74

Update 4>>

FLASHBACK (continued)>>

SCENE 3 (continued)>>

Nupur picks up the phone n the moment she says hellow it starts raining heavily, drenching nupur from head to toe within seconds …………

Mayank== hello nups ,, tu kahan hai ???

Nupur== mayank I …I …I haan I was coming to pick up anshu..

Mayank== u r in rain.. nupur tum abhi bhi fragile ho , aur baarish mein bhig rahi ho , remember what doc said , u need complete bed rest!!!!

Nupur== by god mayank , anshu k birth ko already 2 mahine ho chuke hain… ok ..I am fine now .. healthy as a horse ……

Mayank= you never ever listen to me nupur ….I am here with mom , I'll bring anshu n mom to the hostel,, u go back ,, I'll be reaching hostel in 20 minutes or so…

Nupur== ok……. nahiiiiiiiiiin.. tum abhi mat aana..

Mayank(smiling to himself , he knew ,as usual the party preparations have been delayed ..)== kyun??

Nupur== vo vo vo , mayank mummy ji ko subha headache than na , to vo travel kaise karenge . tum sham ko aana pls,,,

Mayank= she is fine now nupur , just like u she is healthy as a horse

Nupur is highly annoyed with mayank.. first the preparations were coming up so slow..n now the birthday boy is hyper eager to show at the party …

She turns around to face the bakery shop ,in which samrat has gone to replace the spoiled cake,, she was abt to shout to samrat , whom she has seen standing at the bakery door , talking to a child,, he was wasting time ,,

Nupur== mayank ek minute hold karo….

Nupur== samrat jaldi karo pls !!!!!!!!!!!!

Haan mayank, dekho pls abhi bearish bahut tez hai ,tum bearish k rukne ki wait karo ,phir aana pls

Mayank== nupur baarish ka to pata nahi kab band ho , I'll come now only..vaise nupur tu mujhe aane kyun nahin de rahi???

Nupur== kyun ki ghar pe mera boy friend baitha hai n I don't want u both too meet…

Mayank== nupur!!!!!!

Nupur== pls mayank waith 4 a hour then come ok…

Mayank== chal theek hai ,,

Nupur turns to locate samrat ,

where the hell was he!! They were running late, if only that bearded man hadn't banged in her n spoilt the cake ,, they would have been out of the market till now……

The moment this thought struck her, she saw the bearded man again. A chill ran through her , he was eyeing samrat menacingly ,, samrat was still standing at the bakery door talking to that child ,,

Nupur felt as if the man was abt to attack samrat,, such were the man's expressions ,,

she was about to shout a pointless warning to samrat when it happened ,,, the explosion rocked the street ,yellow flames engulfed the other part of the street completely.. she was away from the explosion range n so was the bearded man ,, but samrat wasn't..

she saw samrat n the little boy ,to whom he was talking soar into the sky n fell back … the little boy got lost in the flames .. but the impact of the blow carried samrat forward .. he landed up crumpled , broken n may be burnt too ,at the bearded man's feet…

nupur's heart was racing beating hard against her chest

mayank== nupur yeh awaaz kaisi thi ?? hello nupur r u fine ? nupur bol na pls…

what should she say ?? samrat wasn't moving n inch.. people were shouting everywhere n running here n there.. she wanted to shout too

no no no samrat get up pls pls , oh no gunjan . pls samrat get up..

bt samrat didn't move not even once not even an inch.

She looked at the bearing man he was smilling , he didn't even once glance at the body , samrat's body lieing few inches from his feet…

He was looking at nupur , straight into her eyes,, not even blinking once ..he opend the buttons of his tweed jacket , gesturing nupur to look at what was inside , there were wires ,,n there was a small timepiece , oh no it was a bomb..

He was a terrorist,, samrat was dead n she was going to be the next . the man pointed at the timer,, it read 15 seconds ..

15

Maynk will be lost ,she'll go away from him 4 ever …

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Gunjan , her sister , how will she face the grief of loosing her love n her sister in one go only??

12

Benji , uday,mummy ji , I'll miss them ,, dia oh no she's is here too ,, I hope she remains alive. Move nupur move away may be u'll remain alive….

10

Samrat is too near to the bomb ,nothing of his body will remain ,, will something of mine remain??? I wish they get some parts of us to cremate, else mayank won't believe I am dead…

8

The man the bearded man he wanted to kill me ,he wanted me daed ,, that's why he banged into me , knowing I'll go into shop n will die..

If he hadn't wanted me dead I would not have been here now ,,, he wants to kill me.. why though??? What had I done to him

7

Maynk .. he on the phone ,, I can talk to him one last time speak nupur speak

6

Nupur== bye mayank , I love u , n I'll miss u n anshu

4

The bearded man is still smilling at me

3

Mayank== hello nupur kya ho raha hai,, hello hello nupur ols kuch bol..

2

Nupur closed her eyes she saw clearly hers mayank n anshu's picture in her mind that'll be the last thing she'll ever see………

1

Mayank heard another loud sound n the phone disconnected ,,

Mayank== hello hello nupur nupur

But no one replied ,, the only sounds that he could hear were the beep in his cell n his pounding heart,,

Something had gone wrong very wrong he knew this

His heart knew this

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this is the 4 part .. i know it is a sad one ...bt can't help it

sorry 4 delay guys

lov

dolly

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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
doly yaar
vo adami just hate yaar
he is succh cruel
heartless well if i leave the cast who died in this
yaar such i feel sad
but yaar very nice part
i love it
but sad tooo
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: adi_gupta

doly yaar
vo adami just hate yaar
he is succh cruel
heartless well if i leave the cast who died in this
yaar such i feel sad
but yaar very nice part
i love it
but sad tooo

thanx adi 4 liking it
it is sad
not because samrat died or nupur died
but because this is not a fiction
so many actually died in these blasts or firings
so many with dreams , familioes , life die unexpectedly n painfully...
i hate to know what i wrote did actually happen with so mean people
all i can say is i wasn'tt one of them
not uptil now atleast
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
Hey Dolly!!! Wat a kind of man he is??? God! Ths is sooo true even wat u wrote! Nd Itz very very well written! I really lykd ur idea! Nd the thoughts which were going on in Nupz head wz really touchng! Do continue soon! Thanx for the pm!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
this part was so sad :(
the part where nupur was thinking through her last moments was really portrayed very well and i could actally feel the tension building up! update soooon!! i cant wait!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
yaar thank god you posted,I was dieing to read this.But today I can't say that it was good,it was worst,I was in tears.Your writing skills always bowl me over as they did today but this time something was even more impactful...the content and mystery.I can't beleive that
henous murderous bearded man he spoiled the cake so that samrat and nupur could become his victims...............god I feel like killing him.
And the line nupur said at the last 10th second,my heart broke , these things actually happen to ppl and there loved ones.And the way you described samrat's death,you made my eyes wet(moist would be a small word).I hated that bearded man more than any of ours MJHT villians like sheena and RV.But all in all this part was the most hitting,most painful,most impactful!!!
Edited by princessyashika - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

doly yaar
vo adami just hate yaar
he is succh cruel
heartless well if i leave the cast who died in this
yaar such i feel sad
but yaar very nice part
i love it
but sad tooo

yaar mujhe to starting se hi lag raha tha ki us bearded man mein kuch to gadbad hai.....i just hope ki nupur is safe....although..... i know that she isn't.....nice one yaar.....but too sad....cont. soon.....

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