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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ---ishita---

marvellous update dolly

liked it very much
continue soon dear
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thamnks ishu so much 4 liking the update n replying .. i'll update soon or so i hope
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lovely, nice part.

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thanks so much dear 4 liking the part
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hey guys mm reall sorry m not being able to reply to u all individually actually mm going loads n loads of busy these days
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awesome update pleaseeeeeeeeeeee update sooooon 😳
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this is the best mjht ff i've ever read............justtt <3 ed it.........pls pls pls continue soon......🤗
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its awesome........ marvelous......
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanku u soo much guybs
i know i have been terribly late in updating
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Posted: 15 years ago

not a longer update

sorry abt that again

guys i promise from next update flashbacks n logic will be back in the story

hope u guys wont get bored

do comment n critisize too

u guys r the inspiration i always need

lov ya all

Update>>

Love beyond boundaries>>

Scene 1>>

(by mayank)

I felt it, when gunjan finally gave it up completely in my arms..

I knew she was no longer conscious as I could no longer feel her shivering hard'

I was the only one shaking now'

U== mayank pls tell me what is this ?? yeh sab ho kya raha hai??

I looked up startled and just for a tiny second I forgot about the excruciating pain that I was in'

Uday no longer sounded mad as usual ' he sounded frightened..

He sounded like the old dumb uday we knew'

My heart squeezed a little bit as I saw a flicker of our old uday behind his eyes'

He was kneeling besides me n was patting gunjan's head rather awkwardly ..

I was sure that his eyes were red too.

He was looking at me , waiting for my answer..

N I forced my self too speak..

M:= mujhe nahin pata uday, yeh sab kya ho raha hai n kyun???mujhe' mujhe kuch bhi nahin'.

My voice was hardly more then a whisper n it cracked down completely in the end..

I looked up back at him helplessly,

Not knowing what to say or what to do..

Not knowing anything any more'.

SCENE 2>>

(BY NARRATOR)

(DIA'S ROOM)

The voices from the other room had gone down in magnitude..

She could no longer hear uday shouting or gunjan wailing '.

She just heard faint sobs of anshu now'

Yet still instead of feeling better dia felt more vulnerable.. she looked at samrat's diary again n something inside her made dia to lean forward n wrench the diary of the bedside table'

She placed the diary on her lap n willed her heart to stop going crazy by beating so hard against het chest'

The wind roared outside as dia opened the first page of dsamrat's diary with shaking hands'

Empty it was completely empty..

Not a single drop of ink smothered any of its pages..

Another shoker????

Great just terribly insanely great!!!!

Dia ran her fingers over the blank pages,,,

They felt damp, as if the diary had been kept soaked in water for a long time'

Confused She looked at her bedside table again in order to check if a glass of water had fallen over it ??

Nope there was no glass on her bed side table neither full nor empty..

Shocker part 2???

Such things were becoming their daily routine..

Dia turned few more pages all of them were damp'n something abt those empty wet pages made her insides cringe n increased her heart beat to a crazy frequency again..

She turned some more pages'

The next page she opened was burned'

Shocker part 3???

There was something very sinister with that diary .. so sinister that it made dia freeze with a horribly numb fear..

She jerked the numbness away n threw the diary at the floor at once..

The diary crashed on the marble flooring without even making a single sound..

The cold icy fear worked up its way throughout dia's body

Suddenly terrified beyond limits she got up from her bed in an instant n ran out of the damm room..

And the terror had taken over her so completely that she didn't even once noticed that she was back on her feet again..

SCENE 3>>

(BY MAYANK)

In the background I could still hear anshu sobbing n benji trying to quieten him in vain..

I saw uday getting up n going to benji , he took anshu from him n tried calming the boy down..

I got up then , picking an unconscious gunjan in my arms ,,,though my legs felt weirdly like jelly I willed them to move,,

Gunjan was hot with fever ,, I had to take her back to her room ..

She needed rest'

Carring her on my arms gingerly I moved towards the door, but b4 I could reach it n turn the knob

It was wrenched open by dia..

She came in running n hugged benji tightly..

She looked damm scared ,, I could see faint wett lines made across her cheeks by tears..

Me uday n benji had turned into live statues'

Dia , our diva was standing on her feet .again. period.

I had no idea what to feel ..

Basically I just felt numb..

I moved forward towards the bed n made gunjan lie there n I moved towards benji n stood beside him looking at dia skeptically'

Benji>> d'dd'dia

Dia>>benji vo vahan mere room mein.. samrat uski diary .. benji uski diary .. vo diary'

She wasn't making much sense n just kept on crying..

I for one had stopped believeing in anything happening around me..

Everything seemed fake

Good ,bad, everything was being woven n rewoven in our lives at such a fast pace that things had stoopped looking real a long time ago..

Just hallucination .. mere hallucinations..

I had gone insane finally..

Edited by dolly18 - 15 years ago

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