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Posted: 15 years ago

oki guys here is the next part n guys from hereon real bizzare things r going to happen i just hope u guys will like it

pari is making a new banner for me i requested her too
n well guys if u feel confused or don't like this pls feel free to critisize n bash me hee hee bee
n last but absolutely nt the least thanks guys for being sooo much generous n reading this stupid story of mine
loads of love
dolly
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LOVE BEYOND BOUNDARIES

Part14>>

(BY SAMRAT)(present)

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N= samrat tum…. U r bleeding..

S= no .. no I am not….

Nupur was sitting besides me on the rooted forest floor….. both of us had no idea abt what were we doing here or abt why were we pulled back away from them…

The wind blowing was quiet fiercer n cold….but more cold was the realization that both me n nupur were able to feel it…

We both were dead n so we were no longer bounded, controlled or affected by earthly elements…… n yet today in this strange n dark place it appeared as if we were not as detached from earth as we thought..

N= yes samrat .. you r.. tumhare sir pe kitni gehri chot lagi hai aur dekho to sahi kitna khoon nikal raha hai…….

S== off ho nupur yeh khoon kahan hai.. kabhi tumne itne dark colour ka blood dekha hai??? moreover we r dead remember?? so………..

She still looked confused n worried abt me…

I sighed n then brought my fingers to touch the gash over my forehead..

It stung ..

N I shuddered ever so slightly by the pain of it….

N then I brought my fingers in front of her eyes for her to see..

S== dekho nupur this is surely not …….

Of course I wanted to say blood but instead of that a gasp came out of my mouth…

The sticky fluid on my fingers was no longer the dark dirty n almost black red that I had seen b4…. it was a deep red just like……….. just like blood…..

N(smiling now)= see I told u ..u were bleeding..

I didn't answer,all my energy was getting soaked up in fighting the little hope that had been rekindled in my heart on the sight of my own blood…

Were we…. Coulod we be alive????

Were we humans ….. mortals again??????

Nupur stripped a piece of her white dupatta n tried her best to siphon off n stench the bleeding from my wound…

It stung much badly this time so I closed my eyes n absorbed the pain n the happiness that accompanied it…

N= samrat

S= hmmm??

N== mujhe lagta hai k we … that we r..

S== alive again???

Saying so I opened my eyes n met her stare with a tiny smile of mine…

I could see that she too was fighting hard against this sudden hope of turning human again…..

We both kept sitting there silently…..for abt 15 minutes or so…. during which nupur stripped another piece of her dupatta n tied a crude bandage across my forehead…..

After she had finished tying the stuff over my head she started searching for something on the ground…

S== kya dhund rahi ho???

I got no answer but after a few minutes she looked up at me from her frantic search smilling…

It looked as if she had found what she needed..

N then she held her hand up for me to see what she had picked up..

It was a rough jagged stone having a sharp edge….

N b4 I could even think of stopping her nupur sliced her wrist with it…..

I heard her stifled gasp… the cut was deep ,, n she did feel the pain of the wound..

Well that made the two of us now………

We both saw as a strange dark colored liquid started oozing out from the cut…..

This was the colour my blood had been when I had first seen it….

We both kept staring at it in anticipation….

It looked as if the dark substance was simmering…little bubbles of it were forming right along the edges of the cut…

Then slowly we could see the colour of the dark simmering liquid changing…

N by the time its first drop fell over the ground it was deep red…

The colour of human blood………………

I looked at her n she looked back in me.. n I saw that we both were finally accepting that may be.. just may be we were humans again…..

the small ray of hope that had been seeded in our hearts just a few seconds ago was now glowing throughout our bodies……

Ok now enough experimentation for the day..(or well for the night)….

If we both were actually turning humans then loosing any more blood wasn't a good idea..

N well it would really suck if we both died AGAIN just because both of us were being to eager to see human blood flowing again through our veins……

I took out my handerkercheif n tied it tightly just abv her cut to stop it from bleeding any further…..

It started to rain then.. n it was a real heavy drizzle……the leaves of the numerous trees abv us rustled violently as the rain came crashing down on them n us….

Both of us sat more closely to each other.. it was freezing cold out here….

N== samrat yeh sab kyun ho raha hai humare saath???

S== mein nahin jaanta nupur .. aur mujhe kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha hai ….

Yeh sab … aur agar yeh sab hona hi hai to yaha is jungle mein kyun???

N= samrat . gunjan kaisi hai???

I felt a sudden chill running down my spine….

Gunjan, my chashmish was alone again n I was here stuck up between these stupid trees…

N== kya hua samrat??

S== meine kuch der pehle hi chashmish se kaha tha k I won't leave her ever again n now this….

I took my head in my hands… suddenly the pain in the gash over my head was too much to endure….

Nupur kept her hand over my head n moved it through my hair…

N= ismein tumhari galti nahin hai samrat.. na hi meri .. meine bhi mayank se yehi kaha tha k we will be together again 4 ever aur ab mein yahan hun….

Her voice cracked up in the end….

I looked up at her.. she was looking on the other side into the vast depths of the forest…I knew she was crying … silently..

S= by god nupur mujh se kehti ho k ismein humari koi galti nahin . aur ab khud tum aise ro rahi ho??? Miss morena express yeh baat theek nahin hai ji..

She smiled still looking in that other direction…

N== tum bhi na samrat .. mere saath reh reh kar kaafi bigad chuke ho…………by god..

N then she turned back to me smiling n wiping off the tears from her eyes..

N then she winked at me.

N= to mr badmaash mein achi tarhan jaanti hun tumhein.. kya kiya tune gunjan se mil ke???

S= mein .. ab bb b meine kya kiya kuch bhi to nahin bas bas use hug kiya n then us se baat ki n …

N= of ho samrat .. achi tarahan jaanti hun kaunsi baatein ki hogi tune…

S== baat to aise kar ri ho jaise khud dudh ki dhuli hui ho….. mayank k saath kya kya kiya tumne pehle vo batao….

N= hmmm good question sabse pehle meine uski pitayi ki apni sandle se..

S= WHAT???

N= by god samrat us sadu ki vajha se mujhe us se milne mein itni der lag gayi ,, abhi to be happy k mere paas sirf sandle that frying pan nahin..

S== tub hi na nupur….. vaise mein jaanta hun mayank tumhari marr khaane k baad bhi bahut khush hoga na ??

N== haan.. aur samrat vo….vo mujh se aaj bhi bahut pyar karta hai n anshu mein aaj apne bte se milli samrat….

She stopped there ..a silent tear ran down her cheek . I caught it b4 it fell down on the ground

S== hmm agar mayank ko pata chal gaya na k meine tumhe uski morenna express ko rulaya hai to vo mujhe kahin ka nahi chodega..

N= samrat

S== hmmmm

N== humari zindagi iss tarhan se kyun badal gayi??? Aisi kya galti ki thi humne jo humko itna dard sehna pada…

I kept silent .. what was I too say to this anyway????

She looked towards me n then hugged me… crying silently on my shoulders.

I didn't stop her from crying this time

Hell I didn't have any idea how to stop my own tears …

There was too much pain here………………….

N then things changed again…

A sudden , acrid n burning stench reached us… fire there was fire some where…really close….

FOREST FIRE?????

IN THIS HEAVY RAIN???

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thats all for now guys doo reply pls

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Posted: 15 years ago
yeah
1st one to comment
nice part dear
Edited by cutekins - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cutekins

yeah

1st one to comment
nice part dear

hee thanks 4 being the first one dea
n lov u for liking the part
lov
dolly
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeee ud dear..
mindblowinggggg...
luved it..
pllzzzzz do cont soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
great heavens ........first they are in a jungle and now forest fire??? gosh seriously unhone aisa konsa paap kar diya ki unhe itni badi saza mil rhi hai........... and and thank god they are alive (hope so)... loved the update..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
😆😆

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

great heavens ........first they are in a jungle and now forest fire??? gosh seriously unhone aisa konsa paap kar diya ki unhe itni badi saza mil rhi hai........... and and thank god they are alive (hope so)... loved the update..........

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patani ni pari kaunsa paap kiya hai in dono ne m still thinking that lols
kher thanku so much dear 4 liking it n replying
loads of lov
dolly
@jyoti awww meri jaaan mm so happy that u liked it .. loads of lov
dolly
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Posted: 15 years ago
marvellous update dolly
liked it very much
continue soon dear
thanx for the pm..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wwwwwwwoooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!
luved it- fab update dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dolly, it was rocking as usual.............. great work!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon............
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome updt..
loved it..
plzzzzzz cont soon..
n thanx for d pm..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
*edited* - dooly dear dis is not the reply for part14-i hope u got it)

1st of all - simi darling plzz accept my friend request yaar. kab se main wait kar rahi hu. Plzzzzzz jaldi kar.

2nd of all - again for simi (sorry dolly ji 😆) the title is amazing. It sounds much much lively than the earlier one.

Chal dolly, ab tere baare mein shuru ho jaati hun. 😉
Ab kuch naya kahne ko to bachne diya nahi tune. Hamesha ki tarah waise hi likha hai. 😉😉

Ok ok....now seriously. U have written sooooo well tht now i m scared ki aage kya hoga.\?? Aage ki chod what the hell is happening with SaNu. Plzzz dolly hamare SaNu ke saath kuch aisa waisa mat karna. Poor MaJan. Already they are heartbroken ab aur takleef mat de. And plzzzzz jaldi se update kar. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha ki kya hone waala hai. & Dia part was unexpectedly amazing. Whats this secret behind the diary?????

And haa,, mujhe bhi zara add kar lena apne pm list mein. i know tht u know that but still confirming myself 😆

loads of love
vinu
Edited by mjht_admirer - 15 years ago

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