~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54

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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

lovely update!

Sur n Raj beutiful! luv der jodi!

cont soon n thnx!

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Deepa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

very lovely part...................raj is finally falling for sur n feeling very differently for sur......................n sur too is attracted to him n the dance was very lovely....................raj n his imaginaltions.....its really gonna make him look like a day dreamer if he goes at this rate...............sur has given a high opinion abt raj's dream raj might think abt it...............only raj can make breakfast dressed in office wear.................n his reaction after seeing sur was very nice..............i loved their convo very much...................cont soon dear.................

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Raj n Sur danced so beautifully....complimenting each other.....awesum!!! Their thoughts abt each other were all the more fascinating.....luved the whole scene.

I luved all the sweet sweet things....like Sur adjusting Raj's blanket, both thinking abt each other, Raj feeling sumthing sumthing seeing her just after waking up.....all the things were toooooo gud. And the last line was awesum.....they r gonna hav many things in common other than just a destination....wow!!!

Pls continue soon.

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sania_58
nice update
loved it

too good

great going

plz continue soon

hey thnx a bunch sania

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: pinky901
grt prt
pls cont soon

wil try mah best dear

thnx fr commenting

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Raj n Sur danced so beautifully....hehe glad u liked complimenting each other.....awesum!!!thnq mam Their thoughts abt each other were all the more fascinating.....luved the whole scene. nice to c i cud portray my thoughts
I luved all the sweet sweet things....like Sur adjusting Raj's blanket, both thinking abt each other, Raj feeling sumthing sumthing seeing her just after waking up.....all the things were toooooo gud.hehe itna sweet bhi thik nhi diabetes ho jayegi And the last line was awesum.....they r gonna hav many things in common other than just a destination....wow!!!ab bas dekhti jao sumi

Pls continue soon.wil try my best

thanx a lot sumi fr ur precious comments

love

sur

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: spvd
very lovely part...................raj is finally falling for sur n feeling very differently for sur......................n sur too is attracted to him n the dance was very lovely....................raj n his imaginaltions.....its really gonna make him look like a day dreamer if he goes at this rate...............sur has given a high opinion abt raj's dream raj might think abt it...............only raj can make breakfast dressed in office wear.................n his reaction after seeing sur was very nice..............i loved their convo very much...................cont soon dear.................

hey deepa

nice 2 ur appreciation

u r ryte raj is soon going 2 end up in mental hospital if he doesnt control himself...m glad u liked d sequence...arre raj kuch bhi pehen le acha hi lagega na...even i lov writing d convos...

wil try 2 ud asap

thnx fr commenting

love

sur