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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice start....
plot seems interesting....Looking forward to read more...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
awesome lina!!!!! pls bolo wo mayu nahi tha! anyways.....pls continue soon and pm me!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Lina, nice start cont soon : )
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HI Lina
Awesome promo.
Now i m happy that it was not Mayank.
But feel bad 4 samrat.,
Anyway update sson and PM me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you so much. Here is the next part.
Mayank was sitting in his office. Drinking coffee. Then he closed his eyes.
Flashbacks
Mayank and Nupur had had just moved to their new apartment. They were very close best friends. It wa not that they leaved together, Mayank had his own one-bedroom house. But he sort of lived with Nupur. Like he went there in the nights, slept there with her, he even had his clothes there. Then one day Nupur told him she was about to move, and that she wanted him to come there like he comes usually. And he said yes. And they continue to live together. Mayank was a detective, he solved cases, had his own office, and he went to conferences with all the other detectives, where they all disscused their cases. But that was before, when Nupur moved he resigned that job. Nupur on the other hand, got a new job as an editor when she moved to her new apartment. On her first day in her new job, she found Gunjan. She was new too. They became friend, and they tell each other about their lives. Nupur learned that Gunjan was married to Samrat, and that she was about to have a baby. Gunjan and Nupur became very good friends. Later gunjan invited Nupur and Mayank for dinner at "Maggies Restaurant". At first Mayank said no, that he wanted to look for a job, and he didn't have time, but with Nupur's cute face saying please, he couldn't say no. It was 8:13 p.m. Gunjan and samrat was waitting for Mayank and Nupur. They arrived, Nupur huggingGunjan when she sees her, and Mayank shaking hands with Samrat.
Samrat: Hi guys, hum lood toh tumhara hi intezaar kar rahe the.
Gunjan: Haan, itni derr lagadi.
Nupur: Woh.............
Interepted by Mayu.
Mayank: Sorry woh actually raaste mein bohat traffic thi, hum kya behat suckte hai?
Samrat: Sure, sure please sit.
Mayank: Thanks.
Nupur: App loog bhi sit karo.
They all sit down. The waiter comes and they order. It got quiet, then Gunjan looked at Nupur and then Mayank, then nupur, then Mayank, Nupur, Mayank, Nupur, Mayank. Samrat holds her hand, giving her a look "What are u doing?" Gunjan gives a sign "Nothing". Their food arrives. While they all eat, Nupur seems to be looking at Mayu. Gunjan looks at Nupur.
Gunjan: Ahem Ahem, waise tum aur Mayank kaise miley?
Mayank and Nupur: Hum??
Samrat: Haan tum. Tum toh jaante ho ke humari shaadi ho chuki hai, par mein yeh bata ta hoon ke hum beach pe miley the. Gunjan ki friend doob rahi thi pani mein, Gunjan parshan laag rahi thi, aur meine usski friend, Nati, Natu?
Gunjan: Natasha
Samrat: Haan Natasha ko bachaya aur jab Gunjan ko meine dekha, toh mein uss pe totally fida ho gaya. And then we begin our love story.
Gunjan: Nahi, love story mein humari bohat problems ayi, isske parents ne mujhe reject kardiya, kyun ke mein aanatt thi, aur woh chahate teh ke Samrat ke papa ke bussiness parter ki beti se shaadi ho. par Samrat said no, aur woh ghar se bhaad aya, mere liye.
She looks at Samrat, then smiles. He smiles back.
Gunjan: Abb tum batao na.
Nupur: Hum....................
Interepted by Mayu again.
Mayank: Hum sirt ache doost hai.
Nupur: haan
Samrat: OOhhhh, I didn't know that, Gunjan ne toh mujhe bataya ke tum dono saath rehte ho.
He looks at Mayank and Nupur. Both of them quite, looking down. Then he starts laughing.
Gunjan: Samrat?
Samrat: *Laughing* Relax, mein toh sirt mazaq kar raha tha.
They talk and talk. Nupur loved Gunjan and Samrat. But Mayank didn't really like Samrat. Samrat was drunked, and then they left. Mayank and nupur went and dropped Sajan in their apartment, it was at the top floor. Gunjan steading Samrat because he was drunked. They reached outside the door. Gunjan opened the door.
Gunjan: Guys come inside.
Nupur: Sorry Gunjan, soory yaar, par hume jaldi so na hai, kal job ke liye uttna bhi hai na?
Mayank: Haan.
Samrat: No come inside. Gunjan placed Samrat in the sofa. Mayank and Nuur sat down too. Gunjan getting cookies abd cold drinks, even if Mayur said no, but she still went to get it.
Samrat: Guys, chalo mein tumko ek special place dikha to hoon.
They went with him.
Will write later.
School just started so have to do a lot of work. Sorry, but I promise that there will be a lot of promos this week.
Lina😉😉😉
Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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By god that is Sonia and Rachna,
*Faint*
Edited by rkmnkp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome part yaar
update next part sooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzz
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woow.........gr8 updates yaar...just read two parts...thnxxx sooo sooo much for d pm....plzz continue soon n add me to ur pm list also...n btw wht made u send a pm to me???????😉..just wantd to knw....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
Hi Lina
Amazing part yaar.
just loved it.
feeling sad for gunjan.
So mayank is detective. good good......
Its sound interesting.
plz update soon.
Thanx 4 ur PM
Faria

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki028

woow.........gr8 updates yaar...just read two parts...thnxxx sooo sooo much for d pm....plzz continue soon n add me to ur pm list also...n btw wht made u send a pm to me???????😉..just wantd to knw....😃

I have no idea,
I have seen u in many FF,
and u seem to enjoy them,
and I just want u to read mine, so u can decide if mine is good or not.😉

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