FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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Ananya

@ananya_s

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#591

hey that was such an amazingly sweet part!......i totally loved it.........the ministry woman totally reminded me of umbridge in HP........Mayur dialogues were as always too good......overall id give u 11/10.....lol.......plz update soon......the suspence usually kills me......that is so cliche....update soon

luv
Ananya

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hasiii

@hasiii

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#592

Awesome apdate, as usual. :) Loved it. Thanks for Pm.

Hasi

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priya

@lopli

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#593

WOW chapter 18 was great and the way you describe nupur and mayanks argument over teh toy was so sweet you are a great writer. I reallt liked the part where Mayank asks neev to give the toy away and how neev gave it away because nupur didn't like it was so chweet.................this wat i called a perfect family except mayu and nups hate for each other i hope they fell in love again.........
Please update soon

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x.Heena.x

@x.Heena.x

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: archieeps

Thank you soo much! I'm 23, originally from India, lived in London for sometime and now in S;pore :D...I'll try to update soon!

hmmm...yeh i thought u must be around that age...ur writting is just too good! and london? i had a feeling..just sensed it from ur writting style! but wow were? i live in london! u shud become an author!

ps...i read in some1 post that that stupid ministry women reminded them of professor umbridge from harry potter....sooooooooo true....it reminded me of when she was interogating hagrid and doing her inspections of all the teachers...made me wana thump her just as much as i wanted to do umbridge when readin HP!!!!

also 1 request...can we see a nice mayank neev seen...we havnt had a nice father son scene for some time!!!...:) asin without nupur...actually have her watching from far!!!

Edited by xOxMwahxOx - 16 years ago

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raveenamc

@raveenamc

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#595

omg! whta an awesome fanfic!!!!

i am soooooo addicted!

plz add me to your pm list and do explain why mayur seperated in the first place!

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XAiShBaBy08X

@XAiShBaBy08X

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#596

I love that you give long updates! It's starting to get really really interesting! Update soon!

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#597

hey!!!

sorry for the late comment.

awesome update. loved it.

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#598

please update soon,
will comment properly later.... !

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#599

hello............day seems incomplete without ur update? wen will u do that?

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archieeps

@archieeps

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#600

I'm writing it right now...about halfway done...but feeling incredibly sleepy right now, so I'm sorry guys but will have to continue tmr...hopefully will be done by then :)