My Messiah! One Shot (AR) - Page 6

Originally posted by: aish_punk

Hey Saz..!..sweet one-shot..

Armaan proved hw mch he loves Ridz..😉..n now m glad that Ridz is safe with him..away 4m her step-mother..that lady was pretty cruel..!

Thnx 4 d PM
do write more

-Aish

Originally posted by: dmg_fanatic

gr8 one shot

loved it truely

kavya

Originally posted by: loyal-kashian

Fabulous one dear.. thanks a lot for the pm...

great one..

do write more...

luv

deepu 😃

Originally posted by: crazy_4_karan

hey saz awesome one shot.....loved it....thnx for the Pm...

Originally posted by: Tanyarox

nice story...quite different and innovative!

i never saw padma as being such #%#^$&%* in any ff...

gr8 job done!
but i wish u could add some romance b/w AR..and make it a bit longer...anyways..

ur rocked this time too!!
thnx for the pm..!

-Sanjana

Originally posted by: swamii92

hey saz
great story..................loved it.............Thnx 4 d PM.............do write more

Originally posted by: k_anjali12

reserved

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah dear its really an awesome one mind blowingso cute so Padma is Ridhima's step mom so cruel sorry for late reply plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


"Shilpa ka Innocent style, Karan ki Dimple wali smile,
Shilpa ka Chidna, Karan ki ladyi,
Shilpa ka Aloo ka Pratha bana, karan ka Payal pehna,
Shilpa ka Saree pehna, Karan ka Lonavala dance karna,
Shilpa ka Ruthna, Karan ka Mana,
Shilpa ka Confess karna, Karan ka Race karna,
Shilpa ka Shrmana, Karan ka Oye Hoye kehna,
OLD DMG Yaad ana, KASH ko MISS karna."

Nidha

Originally posted by: SuKaSh

hey sazz

that was really a sweet n cute story dear loved it....

looking forward for more dear

love ya pooja..

Originally posted by: krazy4kash

hey saz

it was veryyy sweet and romantic..........nice story

kj