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Posted: 16 years ago
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well this is the third one shot of mine hope you like it,may be you seem it funny ,well i think for this shot a whole day and night and now im writing this hope you enjoy reading it.

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IN A DISCO

ther is some boy in groups,well there is one hot and sexy boy.if i say greek god than no one refuge.he is so sexy her smile and his phisqe .omg he make me wild.

think a girl wearing red color back less dress knee length ,she is looking sensational

ya the gial is too hot and hot stuff is only for me and no one can resist me,lets go. before i go there some one drag me to dance floor i dont see the face but the girl is same wearing red dress ,omg she and me dancing and my chest is touch her bare back well i never believe in one night stand,ya one smooch is ok and never go ahed of this ya,i m a virgin and i pround on this.
maynk the hot dude never do the physical relation ship with anyone ya
we r dancing the girl is too hot and the song is also too hot
the song is dedicated to me from that girl who is dancing with me


(Ride it) were all alone...

(Ride it) just loose control...

(Ride it, ride it) touch my soul...

and her hand touvh my chest becoz i dont close my upeer button i dont like to close this.
well yaar and she pull my hand and hold hit and touch her waist and our hands on her stomch

(Ride it, ride it) let me feel you
our hands moving from her stmoch too her *******

Ride it) turn the lights down low...

(Ride it) from head to toe...

(Ride it, ride it) touch my soul...

(Ride it, ride it) let me feel you...

(Ride it) we're all alone...
no wr r not alone we r in disco ,but yaar now im afriad of this girl mean yaar first time in my life .im fearing too loose that im vergin .no i dont want to loose it.i push her and free my hands

(Ride it) just loose control...
but before i go she held my hand .and her hands touching my face ,i can feel that if i dont go from there than something bad will happen ,but the girl,ya first time me maynk scared from a girl and i have to do something ,i lost in my thought but the girl not ,her lips touch my cheeks ,then nose and then she lip lock my lips with her.
i shoked with this sudden attack .i tried to push her but she dont want to lose control on my lips .and we r stand like we r doing fevicol advertisment.

(Ride it, ride it) come touch my soul...

(Ride it, ride it) let me feel you

and when the sond finish.i feel my self lossing control of my self.and i collapse their

and after 15 minute when i open my eyes then i find my self in some room ,i tried to get up but i feel their is some strong thing on my hand i turn to see,but not able to turn becoz my hands tied with a rope .well i feel the room is totally dark but their is much noise so i think that may be im in the same pub but why my hand is tied well im thinking on this question ,before i go further in my thoughts ,i hear the door open and saw the same girl walking their and now i can see the girl ,the girl is no other then dia which i refuse to go with ***
what she doing here, she come near to me and said ,darling maynk you look more sexy in this condition too, but today i feel you ,dont worry only one night and you will be mine****

and i plead her that plz dont touch me but in vain ,i feel very helpless im struggling and dia is now overe me
well no body hear my scream ,oh god plz help apne is beta ke help karo,plz save me from this monster no this witch dia ,but no body hear me,
her hand unbuttoned my shirt and than she ripped my attire with her hand and past some lust full *****
on my stomch this time im remeber the superman ,spiderman ,who all save the people from any accident but noone here to save me from the vampire.she make a love bit on my sholder
i cant take it i struggle but she has more power than me she cupped my face in her hand and forcefully place a kiss and i m crying she also lick my tears too.
this time i remember lord krishna who saves dropadi,but who save me
now her hand reach to my paint and her hand touc my z*****
suddenly their is knock on door before dia can do anything or do further i hear the door open with a bang
and i saw my best friend nupur,
i thx god for helping me ,nupur come and put a blanket on my bear body and then she slap dia and then dia arrested by police
im feeling ver helpless,she come and open the rope,well my condition is very bad ,she give me my shirt,and she give me assurnce hug
im stammring in fear,nups thankgod your here varna aaj mein kisi ko muhh nahin dikh pata
NUPU-dont worry maynk jab tak main hoon tumhari izzat ko kuch nahin ho sakta.
i will alwys there to protect you
MAYNK-thank you and she give him his dress

and after ome time they go from there in hand and hand

nupur today you own me

MAYNK-i think the day when you come in my life

NUPUR-its ok ,i will alwys there to help you

HERE we see someone splash cold water one someone and this is none other than nupur

NUPUR-what is this ,she yelled
MAYNK-itne derr se kya badbada rahi thi need mein,koi baat nahin, i will alwys there to protect you
kisse protect kar rahi thi,or vo bhi tum.

NUPUR-tumhe,nahin kisso ko nahi
NUPUR POV-to kya mein sapna he dek rahi ,ha sapne mein he maynk mujse theek tarike se baat karta hai.
by god maynk kitna hot lag raha tha shirtless ,ise to us dia se bachna hi nahi chaiya tha,karne deti jo kuch karna chati thi
ek to help karo uper se attitude bhi saho

MAYNK-oh ,kaha kho gayi,ya phir kissi ko help karne jaa rahi ho .jo ladki ek dog se darti ho vo kya kissi ke help kargi.chalo uth jao dreamland ke sarr se

NUPUR POV-ek din aayaga jab mein tumhari help karodi,saddu,or vo din jarror aayga,but know iget up varna early morning se he bad day start ho jayga

MAYNK pov-ye kuch change nahi ho gayi hai,well muje kya.

NUPUR POV-need mein he ek kiss kele lati nupu.kyoki real life mein to koi chance nahi hai
MAYNK-kya kaha tune kiss
NUPUR-omg
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friends ya this is another one shot ,perhaps you think why i end it here but .i want to add some funny moment so i will working on onther ,so this is the s\third hope you like it

love
aditi

Edited by adi_gupta - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg omg adi dear ha ha ha ha ha ha really funny...........mayu fearing because of dia....cant imagine really funny darling....nupur saves him huh...........nice...let me laugh,i couldnt control myself.........nice very funny one shot yaar...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey!
it was hilarious. it reminded me of some old mayur scenes. loved it. thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hahahahahhahahahhahahaaaha... 🤣

Fevicol wala was superb then mayank getting afraid and nupur's entry like a hero was fabulous.....
Then lolzzzz its all a dream...
Good work Adi i loved it...
Edited by preethis - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeniluvmayur

omg omg adi dear ha ha ha ha ha ha really funny...........mayu fearing because of dia....cant imagine really funny darling....nupur saves him huh...........nice...let me laugh,i couldnt control myself.........nice very funny one shot yaar...

thx for ur
comeent.i m very happy that you like it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome yaar
hilariousssssssssssssssssssss
do rite more yaar it awesome
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG that waz hillarious!!! Loved it! Thnks for the PM!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great job....👍🏼

really nice oneshots..


aisha..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This was totally hilarious! LOL...
Posted: 16 years ago
#20
that was hilarious😆😆
dia w/ mayank😆
n nupur's entry By God!
bilkul kisi film ke hero ki tarah
loved it

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