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Posted: 16 years ago
#21
i jus read both of ur one-shots/...
adi mujhe pata nahi tah ki tum itne beautifuly sab expressions reveal kar sakthi hei..
loved them..
in the one-shot at page 1... i loved the last sentence by mayu,, tat the punch of the scene.... darwaaza bandh rakho... sooo cute..
and here in the next one-shot.. wow.. i loved the fevicol jaise hug and entire thing turning out to b nupz dreams...
areee mayur ko milaao khabhi toh,.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
promo of my next one shot
hey this is only for fun if any one dont like it then dont beat me with chappls beat me with hunter
ha ha ha


"what happen to maynk, yuck he say he love rv
omg this is only my dream ,any one plz pinch me.omg he kiss rv"

hope u like it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
hahahhahahaha RV any Mayank Dostana dream.. yah nupur bhi na... hope i gussed it right adi...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
Adi,
Enjoyed the one shot. Thoda alag aur maze ki thi, vo bhi connected to the previous one.
Nupur dreaming-🤣 Mayank kka izzath😆 vo bhi dia se🤣!!!!
Promo padi, seems very cheezy😲
Well jab u write the next on PM me.😃
Edited by luv-myur - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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one shot-maynk in love wid rv
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gunjan & sam sitting in the park**

GUN-samrat tum to jante ho ke di maynk ko kitna like karte hai.but maynk never show any signe of love and no friendship.alwys when i saw both of them they alwys fight and the result is this that i alwys find di in the pool of tears ,why he is like that,is he dont understand diiiii ,yaar then why he alwys call her his best friend, i dont understand this

SAM-well me and maynk are best buddy you know this,well i know he is different i mean with girls ya ,he is smart ,intelligent but yaar some confuison is still that in nupur case i cant understand his views,his feeling towards her ,when she was far frm mayunk then he is so different and when she is close to her then he alwys fight

GUN-samrat koi sach bolne vali medicine ho to why wouldnt we try this on maynk,then we will know his feling towards nups

SAm-sach bolne vali, police ke pass jarur hogi.to kyo ne maynk ko police station le chale

GUN-sammmmmmmmm

SAM-just kidding ,why r u angry baby,plz dont angry with me ,i cant bear this
[made a puppy face]

GUN_oh poor puppy ,no sona ,i cant angry with you, think some plan to help dii

SAm-why dont we kiddnap both of them and lock them in one room

GUN-ya ,after one day when we open the room we found one crying body vo bhi nups ke

SAm-ya ,u r right bad idea

GUN-college mein to tum love guru they and now you r not able to help your own friend,
hey i remember your profeeser uncle doc. shukla ,who alwys make some cure and alwys do some new experiment ,can they help us.

SAM-wow, ya i forgot this ,thx ,lets go there

[IN LAB OF PROFESSOR SHUKLA]

sam-gunjan you dont know benji assist uncle

GUN-wow, so actully benji get some job ,well they r benji uncle also

BEN-hey sam and gun wow ,well today god is very happy with me.so what happenboth you come here

[well they explain him that they need a powder or any thing to know the truth]

BEn-dont wory dude ,this is so easy, wait here if sukla see you here then you hav to listen his theory

SAm-yaar you r right ,we will wait

[after some time benji come with some bottle ]

Ben-yelo sam ,mix few drops in eatable thing ok.if any problem then call me

good luck

SAm-bye

SAm -gunjan ,ab dekho hamara kammal

[in nupur house]

GUN TO NUP-di plz today you hav to made kheer for me plz dii.

NUP-dont worry ,for u and maynk.ya he also like kheer

GUN POV-wow ab aayga mazaa

[after some time gunjan and sam put mix the poderin kheer]

GUN-di , you amde kheer for maynk so why donnt you d\go to his house and give him,today uncle is also outof town ,go di

Nup-ok

SAm-gun lets go we will watch from the backyard what happen

[well the trio go ther]

nup-MAynk ,weel this is for you

MAY-well what is this in bowl

NUP_well see it
MAY- wow kheer. you know i lov it and specially which is made frm your hand yummue,sppoon do jaldi,i cant control

NUP-i forgot ,i come with spoon ,wait

may-oh ,who waiot for spoon,and he put the bowl to mouth.

SAm -wow ,bus ye powder right ho,or effective ho

and this time rv come to maynk room

MAY-hey rv,what pleasent surprise,after a long time

SAm-hey rv is there in maynk room

GUN-well we both go and sit at the back door of maynk room

[after 5 minuts because of poder effect]

well the powder is not for telling truth the powder is for love, first sight love ,after having the powder the person we saw first we fall in love wid the person and poor maynk saw rv first]

may-rv where ru yaar ,you know i miss u so much ,i cnt liv without you ,why you leave me yaar and mayu
embrace rv tight

rv-hey maynk,i know we meet after a long time but i dont know that u miss me so much

MAy kiss rv s cheek

GUN-sam ye maynk aise kyo behav kar raha hai

SAm-dont worry ,well we r meeting him after two years

here in room maynk and rv

MAy-still in huging position ,rv dont leave me again ,i will not able to leave ,i will not
and he kiss rv forehead

RV POV-ye maynk ko kya ho gaya kuch jayda he pyaar nahi aa rah hai muje per

MAY-oh my drling why r u standing here ,dont baby your leg will be in pain ,lay on the bed ,take of ur shoes
i will massag your body ,jaanu u look very tired my soona

aand maynk cut his lower lip for a seducitive tone

RV POV- there is some thing rong wid amynk,college mein to ladika marti thi is per ,or yeh kissi ko bhaav anhi deta tha or ab ye

SAM-gunjan ,yaar yeh kuch or gadbad ho gayi hai

GUN-i also think so

IN ROOM

may -jaanu ,you know im thinking that this time we r two boddy but ,we should take advance step ya
and we will marry and we will one soul

RV-maynk mazaak band kar ,bahut ho gaya

MAy-rv tu mere pyaar ko mazaak samaj raha hai ,anhin rv ,mein tumhe apne pyar ka ahsaas dila sakta hoon,he take aknife and

Gun-sam ye jarur kuch gadbad hai catch maynk vo powder to kuch or tha plz help maynk. i will stop diiiiiii. agar usne yeh sab dekh liya to vo kiya sochge

SAm-ya gunjan ,and call benji tooooooooo

he turn and see benji standing with worried look

SAm-benji ye konsa powder de diya sach ke jagah ye to kaha maynk ko nups se pyar ka sach or kaha vo rv ke pyarr

BAn-oh sam ye sab us sukla ke galti hai, usne ek naya experiment kiya the guyes per or usne vo sam ple us poder mein mix kar diya ,when i know this i come here to help you and now they both went inside the rooma nd catch maynk and tide him with chair

AMy-banji tum jante nahin ke do pyar karne valo ko juda karna paap hai,tuje kabhi girlfriend nahin milege chodo muje ,muje mere rv se door mat karo .
there nupur engrosed in some work she totally forget to give spoon to maynk

NU-oh god mein to maynk ko spoon dena he bhool gayi ,abhi jati hoon or thodi kheer or lejati hoon
and she go to maynk home
gun-oh god di aa rahi hai ,she run towards nupur, diiiiiiiii arae vaao khir di meine bhi taste nahin kiiiiiiii

nup-tu ghar jakar kar le ye maynk ke liye hai

gun- nahin diiiiiii muje yahi chgayie
nupur got suspicious with gunjan face expression
muje ander to janne dey or ye awaj kyo aa rahi hai

G-oh di kuch anhin bus rv aaya hai or kuch nahin
n-per itna shor kasse
g-oh diiiiiii hume kya ,chalo ghar chale,chale she drag nupur

N-per gunjan
gunjan tu kya chupaa rahi hai ,leave me i want to see amynk

G-nahin diiiiiiiiii ,tum ander nahin ja sakte

N-kyoi

G-vo maynk kapde change kar raha hai

N-to tu yaha kya kar rahi hai

G- v0 maina
nupur went into maynk room and saw baenji and sam and rv running in room like they playing tom and jerry
she was shocked to see
and then sam and benji catch maynk
and tied him again
nupur - ye kya ho raha hai,the trio were shocked to see her ,and they hav no answer for his question

M-nupur plz tum to meri sab se achi dost ho ,plz help me ,ye dono bahut zalim hai muje mere pyar se juda kar rahay ahi,nupur tum muje se bahut pyar karte ho plz leave me ,you lov me na nup

Nup- she has tears i eyes,he know that i lov him
no he was just kidding with me

MA-plz nup mein rv ke bina nahin rrah sakta plz nupur

NU-cant believe her ears is maynk a gey oh my god

Gun-di their is some mistake plz dont believe

NU-gun mayn ,oh no he loves rv


BAn-nup no he is not gey this is just some misunderstandind

gun-diiiiiii plz come with me i will tell u

ben-sam i hav another poder which gave him back to real position

Sam-do u think this time i will trust you

Ben-you dont hav another choice ,ek din tak is poder ka effect rahga maynk per

Sam-no yaar agar uncle ke samne isne koi natak kiya to ,he take the poder

benji-mix it in water and hold maynk jaw and they frcefully put the glass to his mouth .

and maynk was dozzed
here gunjan tell the whole thnk to nupur,she cant beleive that her sister and sam love her so much that they can do this for her

SAm ,benji and rv come outside rooma and nupur run to sam and hug her
nu-sam your the best ,thnk u ,you think for me ,but now dont do this again

SAm touch his ear no way kasam kaata hoon aaj ke baad kabhi nahi

Rv-varn hishigness ke to aaj iiiiiiiizzzzzzzzzz******** loot jaati

and aalll laugh

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like it then plz comment

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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
it was very hilarious adi..but next 1shot write completely on mayur plzz.
i liked it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
OMG...........its hilarious!!!!!! I cant stop laughing.....awesome!!!!!!
thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
omg dat was really very funny.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
OMG ADI!
I READ THE 3 ONE SHOTS
AND THE 3RD "MAYU IN LOV WITH RV"
OMG I MAGIN THAT I HAV TEARS ON MY EYES
SERIOUSLY IM NOT JOCKING!
GREAT JOB YAAR!
SEE U IN UR NEXT
KEEP IT UP
LOVE UUU
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
hahahahahahahahahahaha...... loved it....... i enjoyed it dear...

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