DOORIYAAN-An AR ff (part 10 page 29) - Page 12

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

very nice part....continue soon.

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Originally posted by: aishar

aww ma nd flashba kis out of d world cont a s ap!

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Originally posted by: aati1429

very nice story..

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Originally posted by: ridzi830

hey ria
nice part..loved it..thanks 4 the pm...

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Originally posted by: REDnBLACK

hey ria........... sorrrrrrrrrrryyyyyy the late comment.................was busy due 2 my exams

well i just loved da part.......... & loved its each & every bits...........

loved da cute flashback & ridz niki commotion was soooooo cute............ hey dear will love 2 see ridhima & armaans coffee date lolzzzzzzz

cont asap

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HEY SANNA....

I AM SO GLAD THAT YOU'RE BACK ONCE AGAIN....N HOPE THAT YOUR EXAMS HAD GONE WELL....

AND NO SORRIES N THANKS YOU'S IN FRIENDSHIP.....YOU REMEMBER.....JUST ORDER OKAY.....

N YEAH....THE COFFEE DATE IS COMING IN THE NEXT PART....SO JUST WAIT N WATCH....OOPS I MEAN READ.....

AND I THINK YOU HAVEN'T READ MY NEW MINI FF 'ONE IN A MILLION'....DO READ IT N LEAVE YOUR COMMENT.....

TILL THEN TAKE CARE

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Originally posted by: ria020594

HEY SANNA....

I AM SO GLAD THAT YOU'RE BACK ONCE AGAIN....N HOPE THAT YOUR EXAMS HAD GONE WELL....

AND NO SORRIES N THANKS YOU'S IN FRIENDSHIP.....YOU REMEMBER.....JUST ORDER OKAY.....

N YEAH....THE COFFEE DATE IS COMING IN THE NEXT PART....SO JUST WAIT N WATCH....OOPS I MEAN READ.....

AND I THINK YOU HAVEN'T READ MY NEW MINI FF 'ONE IN A MILLION'....DO READ IT N LEAVE YOUR COMMENT.....

TILL THEN TAKE CARE

LOVE

RIA

Hey guys....really sorry for the late update.....here goes the 8th part

RECAP :

And then they both went towards the table n riddhima took out a chair n made aashna sit in her lap......

PART 8

Ridz " Ohhh.....aap toh kitni bdi ho gayi hai...."

While ashna giggled....

Nikki " Aur iske saath saath uske nakhre bhi bahut badh gaye hai...."

Ridz " What do you mean by that madam ???" She asked defending ashna....

Nikki " Dekho na.....jabse aayi hai tabse masi se milna hai.....masi se milna hai.....yahi bole jaa rahi hai..."

Ridz " So ??? Toh kya isse nakhre kehte hai ???"

Nikki " Pehle puri baat toh sun le.....you know na i don't know how to make aloo paratha n she wants to eat aloo paratha....otherwise she will not eat anything....."

Ridz " Isme kya hua....come ashi aaj masi aapko aloo paratha banake khilaegi.....okay...."

Ashi " Yayyy....." She got superexited on hearing that riddhima will make aloo paratha for her....n then they both got up ridz made ashi sit on the platform away from the gas.....n she stood with a bowl of flour....n started preparing the dough.....

Ridz " Nikki.....tu ja thoda sa aaram kar le...."

Nikki " Par ridz...."

Ridz " Nikki....go...tu subah se kaam kar rahi hai.....maine thoda aaram kar liya hai isliye main ashi ko sambhal lungi....okay....now go...."

Nikki " Okay....par ashi baby masi ko pareshan mat karna okay....."

Nikki went to ashi n kissed on her forehead....

Ashi " Okay momma.....promise...." she said so cutely.....

And then nikki went to her room to take some rest as she was actually tired.....

While riddhima was preparing the aloo parathas for ashi....she also asked ashi about her playschool....about her friends....n everything....ashi also loved her masi.....ashi met riddhima for the first time when she was just 2 years old n had just begun to speak some words.....but was soon able to speak masi....and riddhima even taught her to speak some more words....n ashi loved riddhimas' company too....while abhi n nikki were in sanjeevani ridz n ashi would have a lots of fun....n ashi loved the food made by ridz....she even sometimes said that ridz cooked better than her mama.....

And here also while riddhima was making the parathas...she n ashi had a lots of fun....ashi made ridz giggle on her funny but cute n adorable talks....for a moment ridz was taken back but soon came out of the thought on hearing ashi giggle....then she at last made the parathas n made ashi eat them while making her seat in ridz lap.....and ashi also can't say no to ridz as ridz would engage her in some cute talks n make ashi eat the lunch...then after the lunch for sometime ridz played with ashi in ashi's room with her teddy bears....n then told her a story so that ashi would go to sleep.....while in to time ashi closed her eyes n went to sleep.....even riddhima after a while felt sleepy n she also slept besides ashi.....

While here armaan was totally busy n reading the documents n files.....n was damn tired......he just put his head up n rest it on the chair.....n took a deep breath......
Armaan " Ohhh my god........i am sooooo damn tired........."

He closed his eyes for sometime n a smile spread on his face.....then he opened his eyes n took the photoframe from the table.....n looked at with a wide smile on his face.....it was his muski n rehaan's photo when rehaan was just 1 year old......n it was taken on his 1st birthday.....he was looking soooooooooooo ccuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuteee............n rehaan was teasing muski by streching her curly hairs........n armaan was laughing at the situation..........

Just then his phone rang up.........it was muski's call......again he smiled........

Armaan " Hey muski......what's up ???"

Muski " Everythings the same.....rehaan irritating me n i am getting irritated....."

Armaan giggled at this.....he knew rehaan was very naughty.....he would not leave a single chance to irritate muski......everyday there was a complain from muski.....n armaan would put it down saying that he is just a small kid......

Muski " Haas kya rahe ho......."

Armaan stopped giggling....."Bolo....aaj kya hua ???"

Muski " Woh mujhe apni favorite serial nahi dekhne de raha hai....."

Armaan " Kaun si serial ????"

Muski "Tujhe kabse serials mein intrest hone laga......any ways that DILL MILL GAYYE....."

Armaan " Dill mill gayye ?????" He asked with a shock......

Muski " Haan kya hua....."

Armaan " Tu toh woh serial nahi dekhti hai na ???"

Muski " Oh hello mister.....i am the greatest fan of dill mill gayye....okay.....aur tum ghar pe nahi hote na isiliye shayad tumhe pata nahi hai.....buddy....no don't do that.....nooooooo..............."

Armaan " Kya hua.....????"

Muski " Remote tod dala....(calmly)..........(now angrily) Ab main kya karungi ????"

Armaan " Okay....okay....i will bring a new remote okay.....ab rehaan ko phone do.....main usse samjata hoon......."

Muski " Thanks a lot mr.mallik.....apki badi meherbaani....."

And she gave the phone to rehaan.....he always talked to armaan whenever armaan called from the office.....

Armaan " Bacha apne aisa kyun kiya ???"

Rehaan " Chhhoooorrryyyy......"

Armaan " Awwweee.....it's okay......ab aisa mat karna okay.....pata hai na muski kitna gussa ho jati hai....."

Rehaan " Hmmmm....." He was saying all this because he was now understanding what armaan wanted to say.....

Armaan " Mera pyarra sa bacha.....aacha daddy aapke liye shamko chocolates le aayenge okay.....ab muski ko phone do......"

Rehaan like an obedient son gave the phone to muski.....

Muski " Haan bol...."

Armaan " Woh...."

Muski " Yaar.....phone rakh na.....episode shuru ho gaya....."

Armaan " Okay then.....bye....."

Muski " Bye....."

And she immediately cut the phone n got hooked to the T.V........

Armaan " Hmmmmmmm..............DILL MILL GAYYE........" He said with a smile on his face....but soon it got vanished......n again got lost in his files..........

*FLASHBACK*

Nikki n ridz both reached the hotel where armaan had called ridz to come.....they were lookin very beutifull....but riddhima was just looking like an angel....and also that she was dressed in white....perfect...

While here armaan was pacing in the hotel.....he was not understanding why he called riddhima for a date.....

Armaan " Ye maine kya kar diya.....abhi subah hi toh main usse pehli baar mila.....aur maine usse coffee ke liye bhi pooch liya.....oh how silly of me.....woh bechaari kitni confuse ho gayi thi.....i mean ye maine kya kar diya....ab jab woh yahan aayegi toh main usse kya baat karunga....come on dude.....tu pehle toh aisa nahi tha....just talk to her like you talk with other girls.....but no yaar she is not like other girls....." And he was lost in his thoughts....he remembered how riddhima crashed with him out of nowhere....n her beautifull face....with her big green eyes......how could he forget that..... "Now what ????" He asked himself.....

Just then aryan came in the room....

Aryan " Sir....that girl has arrived...."

Armaan " Thanks...."

And then aryan went away.....

Armaan took a deep breath just to assure that he is normal.....then he went out n reached to down.....armaan was wearing a black suit n pant in the morning but right now he was dressed casually....just in his t-shirt n jeans....but he didn't found riddhima in the hall....so he called aryan n asked him about her.....aryan said that ridz was waiting outside the hotel....armaan was confused at this....but still he went to the entrance of the hotel.....n was shocked at the scene.....nikki was also there wirh ridz.....first he got a bit confused then he thought that might be riddhima wouldn't feel comfortable with him so she bought nikki also with her.....but then he took a look over riddhima....he looked at her from bottom to top....n was just mesmerized by her.....she was looking gorgeous.....she can't stop himself from smiling......but then he came out of the thought went to the girls.....

While here riddhima was feeling uncomfortable when she saw that armaan was starring at her continuously....she was feeling weird.....in her life ever no boy had looked at her....while this guy in front of her was starring her.....why ????....was the question comming on her mind now n then.....

Armaan " Hi....." He said politely.....

Nikki " Hi....." She said going exited.....

But ridz didn't responded....then nikki noticed the confudsed look on armaan's face to why wasn't riddhima replying....to this nikki beat riddhima's hand with her elbow.....n ridz came out of her thoughts.....

Ridz" Woh....ummmm......hello...." She finally spoke up.....

Armaan was once again impressed by her....." ummm....why are you girls standing here....come inside...." He asked.....

Nikki " Sure...." She said

And then nikki n armaan started walking towards the entrance.....but not feeling riddhima behind them armaan looked around n found that ridz was still standing at the spot where they were talking.....nikki also turned around.....n she immediately went to ridz.....

Nikki " Ridz......ridz....ye tu kya kar rahi hai ??? chal na....." With this nikki pulled riddhima's hand....

Ridz " Nikki.....ruk...." She said leaving nikki's hold.....

Nikki " Kya....kya hua ???" She asked....

Ridz " Dekh nikki.....i think this place is not for us.....i mean i don't like to go inside...."

Just then armaan as if heared what riddhima said, came towards them.....

Armaan " Any problem girls ????" He asked...

Nikki " Ummmm....no....no...." She said ignoring the question.....but riddhima spoke up....

Ridz " Ummmm....i was saying that i would not feel comfortable here.....i mean...." She was stopped when she put her head up to look at armaan n was forced to look into his eyes n they had an eye lock session......armaan was feeling so good....that he was glad that riddhima spoke out what does she feel....he was really greatfull to her....he didn't wanted to force her to join him for a coffee at the place where she woudn't feel comfotable......but then riddhima just blinked her eyes n came out of the eye lock session.....

Ridz " Ummm...woh...i mean....." she was not getting the exact words....

Armaan " Then where will you like to go for the coffee ???" He asked in the same polite tone....

Ridz " Huh ???" She was so much confused....she never thought that he would say this....she thought that he would force her to come with him in this 5-star hotel....

Armaan " I am just asking you...." He said confusingly.....

Nikki looked at ridz n ridz looked at nikki.....

Nikki " Ab bol bhi......" She forced ridz to speak.....

Ridz " Umm...haan....woh....would you mind going to the Breganza's cafe ???? I mean it's nearby only.....if you don't mind...." She said with fear....she was scared.....how could she ask him come to a middle class cafe.....but she was confident enough that she will not enter that luxurious hotel.....but she just wished him to say yes.....she didn't knew why ???

He looked into her eyes which were just waiting for his answer....n how could he say no to her...." Why would i mind.....i mean i just want to have a coffee with you....that's it....." He said with his million dollar smile.....

Ridz " Really ???" She was still confused at his answer...

Armaan " Of course....now come let's go.....but you'll have to guide me to the cafe....if it's okay for you ???" He said the last few bits giglling....n now ridz was normal....

Nikki " You don't worry about there...i am there na so no worry...." She said with over confident....

Ridz " That's the only thing to worry sweetie...." She murmered looking at nikki who was smiling dreamily.....

Nikki " What ??? Tune....tune kya kaha....dekh maine abhi ghar pe hi tujhe bola tha na ki....." She said with anger....

Ridz " Okay...okay baba......tu gussa kyun ho rahi hai ???" she said teasing her......

Nikki " Main kaha gussa ho rahi hoon ??"

By now armaan was giggling at their funny talk....n couldn't stop himself from interfearing....

Armaan " Arre....tum toh bahut gussa ho gayi....hai na ridz ??" He said riddhima as ridz...but even riddhima didn't realize it.....

Ridz " Ya.....dekh.....tera naak (nose) kaise laal ho raha hai....."

Armaan " Just like a tomato...."

Nikki " What ????" She was shocked...and tried to look at her nose through her eyes....n her eyes came in the corner.....n his made riddhima n armaan laugh out.....they were laughing holding their stomachs.....

Nikki " You ridz....i am not going to leave you...."

With this ridz ran n hide behind armaan holding his hands from behind trying to save herself from being hitted by nikki......while armaan once again smiled at her innocent side....she was just like an 8 year old girl.....she was giggling out....finally nikki gave up....n she stood in fron of armaan putting her hands on her waist....then riddhima also came out from behind armaan n stood besides him.....

Nikki " Fine then....i will not talk to you...." She said pouting n crossing her hands over her chest.....

Ridz " Awweee.....i am sorry...." She said just like a small kid.....n went to nikki n gave her a side hug.....

Ridz " I am choooooo.....chooooorrryyyy......" She said while hugging nikki....with this nikki could never remain angry she also smiled.....

Nikki " It's okay...." She said smiling.....

Ridz " You know nikki....you're the sweetest friend till now....."

Nikki " And you are the most careless human being ever...."

Ridz " Why ???" She asked pouting....

Nikki " Come on yaar.....we are here for a coffee with armaan n we are busy in our never ending talks....."

Ridz " Oh.....i am sorry....." She said realizing what nikki said n looked at armaan.....

Armaan " It's okay....now can we proceed...."

Nikki " Sure....come...."

And then they all started walking towards the cafe.....n aryan was also there with armaan so that armaan would not have problem......also armaan's bodyguards were following them....ridz was really feeling awkward at this.....while armaan n nikki were busy talking and laughing.....but ridz can't resist this.....

Ridz " Ummm.....exuse me...." She said to armaan.....

Armaan looked at her...." Ya...."

Ridz " Ummm....why are they following us ??" She asked like a small kid....

Armaan " Because they are my bodyguards...." Armaan said confidently.....

Then she again asked...." Can't they leave...."

Armaan " No honey....it's their job...."

Riddhima first was shocked on hearing the word 'honey' but then realxed on the thought that he might have called many other girls by this name.....

Ridz " So what.....i don't like all this...." She said commanding....

Then she turned towards the bodyguards....there were 4 of them....everyone of them had a good body....n gr8 height....so that riddhima had to look a bit up.....

Ridz " Ummm.....u can leave....." She said to them.....

Armaan was confused....but nikki was shocked.....she had never seen ridz commanding on anyone.....

Ridz " I mean...you also have a life.....n for the time we're with your sir....just go n enjoy yourselves..." she said with a cute smile on her face....

B.G " But maam.....sir...."

Ridz " Don't worry about sir....i am with him....okay...." She said assuring.....while armaan was once again confused when she said that she was with him.....he was happy...he didn't knew why...but he thought that there was something in this girl....which was pulling him towards her......

Ridz " Right...Mr.Mallik....." She asked looking at armaan....while armaan didn't understood why she called him by mr.mallik.....

Armaan " Haan.....guys you may go...n aryan is also there....so don't worry...okay...." He said taking riddhimas' side....n riddhima gave a smile to him....which in return he also smiled.....n then the B.G also went away.....

Ridz " Pheewww.....(taking a deep breath) Now i feel like normal....." she said.....
At this armaan giggled.....n then they reached the cafe.....nikki n ridz were regular customer of this cafe....n so they very well knew the owner of the cafe.....ridz nikki n armaan went n sat on a table near the corner....

Ridz " Hello uncle....hello aunty.....kem cho ???" She said to the uncle n aunty who were sitting near the counter.....they were gujarati pople so riddhima asked 'how are you' in gujarati.....she was trying to learn gujarati from them.....as soon as the uncle heard ridz voice he turned around.....

Ridz " Majama ne ???" She again asked in gujarati that 'all's well na'....at this the uncle came to their uncle....

Nikki " Hello uncle....." She said as she saw uncle proceeding towards them....."Helllllooooo aunty....." She screamed so that aunty could hear her.....

Uncle " Aare dikra....tame aavi gaya ??...(you've come)

Ridz " Haa...uncle....amme aavi gaya...(yes uncle, we've come...)

Uncle " Tumhari gujarati toh bahut aachi ho gayi hai...."

Ridz " Thank you uncle..."

Uncle " Aacha ab batao....tumhare liye kya le aao...."

Nikki " Ummmm.....uncle mere liye coffee...with extra cream...."

Ridz " Mere liye milkshake...."

Uncle " Chocolate right ???"

Ridz " Yes...."

Nikki " Aur armaan....tum kya loge ???"

The uncle looked at him.....he couldn't recognize him...but thought that he had seen him.....

Armaan " Hot chocolate....for me..."

Uncle " Thik hai....main abhi lata hoon...."

Ridz " Don't worry uncle....main le aaoungi....ab aap jayiye...."

Uncle " Thik hai..."

And then he went away.....just then nikki's mobile rang up.....and she excused herself from there.....while ridz n armaan were left alone....what to talk ???....finallly ridz broke the silence....

Ridz " Ummm...actually i am sorry.....woh aap kabhi aisi jagah par nahi aaye honge na....i mean i thought you won't like coming here....i a really very sorry...."

Armaan " Hey....instead i should be thankfull to you...."

Ridz " But why...."

Armaan " Ummm....i know it's only been some hours since we'he met....but you know what i feel that i am a normal human being when i am with you both...."

At this ridz starts laughing.....

Armaan " No....i am serious.....whenever anyone is with me they pay all their attention on me only....."

Ridz " Ohhh.....so you have problem that everyone pays attention to you...."

Armaan " Exactly.....i am also like you guys....everyone sees me armaan mallik....the gr8 bussinessman....but no one sees me like me...."
At this riddhima became serious....

Ridz " But we have just few hours ago....."

Armaan " But still.....you are different from others.....you treat me like normal.....you know i like to be normal.....just like you all....i also like laugh.....n i also like to tease my friends....but i know that you might have always read in the newspapers n magazines that i am a very proudy n arrogant type of boy...."

Ridz " Ummmm....a playboy tooo....."

Armaan " Yes....that too....but believe me i am not a bit like that.....i don't want to be successfull on the condition that i have to leave myself behind.....i sometimes think that you would like to be my friend....cause everyone is having a fals expression in their mind....."

There was a total silence then....just then the waiter came n put their coffees on their table.....still nikki hadn't come......

Armaan " Ummm.....i am sorry maine tumhe bore toh nahi kiya na ???" He asked with a sad face....

Ridz " No....no.....i am actually glad to know that you are not the one that the magazines n newpapers say....you are different from that armaan mallik....." She said with a cheerfull smile.....

Armaan " Thanks.....umm......would you like to my friend......i mean i am new here in mumbai......n i have to pass 4-5 months here.....so if you don't mind....."

Ridz " But...."

Armaan " I know.....you might be feared that friendship with me.....then media n all.....but don't worry i will always prevent you from the media okay...."

Ridz " But you know na.....they always print the things which are not actually there...."

Armaan " Who could know it better than me ???" he said with a very sad face n looked down.....

Ridz " Okay.....fine....i would like to be your friend...." she said to cheer him up.....she could never see anyone sad.....

He immediatey looked up with a smile.....he thought that she would not accept his proposal.....but he was glad she did.....

Armaan " Sachi ???"

Ridz " Muchi....." With a confused look....she never thought that he could speak like this also.....

Armaan immediately took out his hand..."So friends ???"

Ridz " Friends..." She said excepting his friendship n gave her hand in his.....

Armaan " Thank you so much...."

Ridz smiled....n then took her hand.....and they armaan started drinking his hot chocolate n ridz started drinking her chocolate milkshake....


While on the other side nikki is talking on her mobile.....

Nikki " What.....tum pagal ho kya..............no........i can't do this........pls understand.......maine kaha na.............tum na hamesha mujhe fasate ho.........aur pata hai ridz ko hamesha mujhpe shak ho jata hai.......................i can't..........................okay fine..............i will try.................but mujhpe itna bhi bharosa mat rakhna okay..................i am just trying.............fine............bye............thanks................"

Then she starts walking towards armaan n ridz......
Nikki " Nikki......calm down......kuch nahi hoga....okay......bas tujhe ridz ko kuch bhi nahi kehna hai......calm down......"


And she reached the table n took a deep breath n sat near ridz........


Ridz " So nikki.........kya kaha SEXY ne ?????" she asked taking a sip from her milkshake.......while nikki was totally shocked......her eyes were wide open........armaan was also shocked......agree that they have met just few hours ago.....but he had never imagined ridz saying the word 'SEXY'......he thought that she was sooo simple......but what's this ???????

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

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Originally posted by: loyal-kashian

oh my goodness..

that was a super long and a super fabulous update...

thanks a lot for the update...

luv

deepu :)

Hey deepu....

Thanks a lot for the comment....

Well....frankly saying.....this was the first time i've updated sooo late.....so thought of updating a long part......

Am glad you liked it.....

Take care...

Love

Ria