FF: Milan (based on MJHT)NOTE on PG 26 - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey i tried in other way it opened

But cool update

Hop Mayur becoms frnds soon

After all Mayu is helping Nups

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
HI GUYS!!
THIS FF IS AWESOME!!
JUST READ THE 4TH UPDT!!
FANTASTIC
FINALLY KISI NE SHHEEEE-NAAA
KI BAND ACHCHI TARAH SE BAJADI!!
REALLY LOVED THIS PART!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowowow i love your all 4 parts plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 5:

Scene Shift- Excel University

Samrat is walking in the hallway lost in his own thoughts. All of a sudden sheena comes in front of him. Samrat gives her a look full of arrogance, ignores her and leaves. "uff samrat! Itna bhi kya gussa!", Sheena says holding his hand. "choro bhi na ab' i m sorry I didn't come'" Samrat looks her angrily. "aa.. aa. I mean I came per tum nahi the.. I was late coz mom wasn't feeling well.. and..I.. I left her to meet u but u went, its not my fault now!" she says the last line with attitude and her arms folded. "ohh' acha so ur mom wasn't well huh?!!" samrat says sarcastically. "umm.. haan.. she wasn't well." "enough is enough sheenaa!! Kitna jhoot bolo gi!! Ab to mujhe lagta hai ke tum hamesha se hi jhoot bolti aai ho mujh se!! what else to expect from you!"Samrat was getting angry now and couldn't control his anger! "what are you saying Samrat! I m not lying!" "acha!! Agar aisa hai to when I went to pick you up from your house.. there was no one! If u were at home why u were not opening the door! Huh?! Jawab hai koi?!" " umm.. samrat.. dekho." Sheena was now getting confused. She was running out of excuses now as Samrat's anger was also boiling up.! "so u don't have any excuse' huh! Kahan se hoga..saari sachai samne jo agayi hai!!" "you knw I love u baby' why would I lie?!" "if u love me then what's this!" He throws the pictures at Sheena's face and keeps staring at her. Sheena looks at the pictures and is completely SHOCKED! " yeh.. yeh to' kaise.." "dekho.. achi tarah se dekho!" "samrat this is not true.. I mean.. aa.." " oh come on Sheena! Now don't say that its not you! Nupur sahi thi!! yo don't deserve me!! Just go to hell! From now onwards I don't know you!! this is THE END!" and he angrily walks off from there! Sheena tears off the pictures and smiles. "Who cares' Agar samrat gaya to kya hua.. Mayank to hai na.." She smiles evilly and walks off.

Scene Shift 'Classroom

Gunjan and Nupur are sitting in Chemistry class and both were seriously concentrating on the lecture and even Gunjan this time. Suddenly Nupur's cell phone vibrated. As she saw the number nervousness appeared on her face. Gunjan noticed. " are you ok Nups?? Kya hua??" Nupur looked at Gunjan and was trying to express her feeling. "again??!" Gunjan understood that it was the same guy. The bell rang and both of them went out of their class. "aaj to chal! Khair nahi us ladke ki! Choron gi nahi use mein!" Gunjan said as she was frustrated now with this mystery guy! " nahi gunjan. Mujhe buhat dar lag raha hai' kaise hoga.. Samrat ko pata chal gaya to! Ya mom dad ko' I will be dead yaar!" "kuch nahi hoga' don't worry I will handle." "per gunjan'" " IDEA!" "Kya??" "Mayank!!" Gunjan looked at Nupur excitedly! "KYA??!! MAYANK?? MATLAB??"

Gunjan smiles. (she told her the plan). "nahi gunjan! Mujhe us kharoos Mayank se help nahi leni! Never ever!" "oh come on Nups!! you have too! We have no other option yaar!"

After a while Nupur agreed.

Scene Shift ' Basketball court

Mayank and Benji enter the court laughing and cracking jokes on random things. They go and sit on the bench and start chatting. A ball comes and stops under Mayank's feet. Mayank looks at it and then looks up. He sees a fat and cute (which doesn't really exist in Mayank's world) boy from first year. He is wearing glasses with a funny smile on his face. Mayank picks up the ball and looks at Benji. Both of them look at each other and exchange a naughty smile. "umm.. can I get the ball please" the fat guy says. "kya?? Ball?? Tumhara hai??" Mayank asks him as if he doesn't know. "ji.. yeh mera hai.. can I get it! I have to play!" Mayank starts laughing and so is Benji. "haha!! Tu khele ga!! Size dekha hai! Haha!! How do you run dude?!" then Benji added "haha!! True true mayank!" and they both hi5ed!

The fat guy was sad and looking around for someone to support him.

Then Mayank's cell phone rang and he went to the side to receive it. Then a girl came. She had a slim physique and was pretty. "Excuse me!" the girl says, "Excused!!" Benji replies. "You cant insult him like this! What do you think of your self?!" She said this to Benji. "hello!! miss whatever you are' look" She interrupted and said, " Vidya' Vidya Malik" "whatever! Junior ho! So junior hi raho samjhi! Haha! Aur tum basketball khel rahi thi! wow!! Gosh! You r so thin! Hawa aayi na to ur jao gi! Kuch weight pakad ke chala karo!!!" Mayank came there, and Vidya was gone.

"Kaun tha?" Mayank asks. "Aise hi nasamajh juniors" Benji replies making fun of them, they both share a little laugh.

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Finally!!!
We apologize for posting it late.
Hope you enjoyed, Thank You for reading=)
Edited by blushpink13 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
yup enjoyed reading ..:) it was good to c sheena go...! it ws a nice part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
really nice update
i really love this ff
it's just so good
but the update was really short
please make a longer update next time
this is one of my fav ffs
btw u forgot 2 pm me
Posted: 15 years ago
nice part
loved reading it
continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice part
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 1 aww cheating n mayu!!!!!
part 2: sam thinkin of gunjan!!!

n nupurs dimaag usee karne ke liye hota hai awwwww

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