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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

hey!!!

simi.(shona)..

this the unique ff i must say...

diffrent concept...

and now i hope AR will meet each other,,,,

and will discover their background..

update soon dear am eger to read more...

and plz add me in your pm list...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: amruta04

hey simi

awesome parts
so sorry for late reply,actually i was busy in studies so couldn't came online from many days
continue soon and thanx 4 d PM.
Luv
Amruta

hey amruta
its ok sweety i can understand that you r busy.well thanks for your comment i loved theat you atleast commented even when you r soo busy
well wll countinue with the part soon...
may be tonight or tommorow
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: dipu

hey!!!

simi.(shona)..

this the unique ff i must say...

diffrent concept...

and now i hope AR will meet each other,,,,

and will discover their background..

update soon dear am eger to read more...

and plz add me in your pm list...

oh my god sweetu its you..
oh i dont believe it .i m soo happy to get you here too sweetu ....gosh i missed you soo much .well wellcome to IF too.....
ohhhhh. thanks a lot sweetu for that sweet sweet comment .........
and you find my ff unique ........oh thanks a lot for that ..
well i m updating it soon and now you know what i m too happy to get you here..will get to you soon.....
and haa thanks for calling me that ..you know i missed being called by that name
love you lots
your shona........
simi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
PART 5
RECAP:
RIDDHIMA CAME TO INDIA WITH HER FAMILY........SETTLED IN DELHI....
HER NIGHTMERES AND FLASHES INCRESED AND SAME WAS WITH ARMAAN
RIDDHIMA BEST FRIEND NIKKI..WANNA MEET HER NET CHAT FRIEND ...THAT WAS DEV ....AND SHE WANT RIDDHIMA TO MEET HIM AS NIKITA
ON OTHER HAND...DEV ASKED ARMAAN TO MEET HIS CHAT FRIEND NIKITA ....AND ARMAAN BEING AS DEV
riddhima and nikita are still standing near the main entrance.......and on the other hand......armaan and dev just reached the hotel and r coming towards the main entrance

riddhima: soo plan successful ...now rahul and muskaan will be busy together and wee can easily have aur meeting with dev......

[as she was happily talking to nikita ......and looking at the direction where muskaan and rahul went.....she by chance take step back and bumped with armaan........and was about to fall when armaan hold her .by her waist and .......there eyes met........

[armaan deeply looking in her grey green eyes and soo riddhima .....lost in his blue once]

and THE WORLD STOPS THERE FOR A WHILE

they just dont wanna look away from each other ...they were just soo busy looking in each other eyes dont know why but they became unaware of the world te place ...anythink ...

dev and nikita both were moving inside the main entrance unknown of the fact that there friends were not there with them .but they realised after a while and dev came towards armaan and kept a hand on his shoulder .....and it breaked there eye contact and they came back to the real world

armaan helped riddhima in standing properly
riddhima lowered her gaze feeling uncomfortable but armaan just cant get his gaze away from her he dont know why but he kept on looking at her

riddhima noticed him staring at her and in order to break the silence she spoke

ridd: i m sorry .i didnt saw you

armaan: [ geeting out of his own world] its ok.....r u ok miss

ridd: yaa thanks ...

and then dev came in between

dev: [to armaan ].....lets goo in wee r getting late
and he took armaan from there ....
but armaan kept on looking back ....seeing her still standing there ....fitting her dupaataa properly .....

and then he went in ...to there reseved table in the cofee shop

nikki: [still outside]....r u ok ....

ridd: yaa i m ....lets goo in your dev would be waiting for you. i mean mee

and riddhima and nikita went in riddhima just cant get out her thoughts from armaan ....thinking to herself....."oh he was too cute and his eyes i feel like drowing in them...they looked soo similar ,as if i had seen them earlier and his voice was too familier .oh he was too handsome to resist...what what am i thinking get a hold on your thoghts riddzs and remember your mission ....ya mission 'judging dev' "

on the other side ....armaan and dev just sat on there reserved table waiting for the girl they came to meet .....but armaan was just soo lost on his own thoughts ......" oh . i saw a girl in while salwar kameez and that green eyes .....oh she was soo innocent and .she was beutiful .......but who was she and her eyes .her voice ......her touch ..why was that soo similar ....what am i thinking get a hold on your thoughts .man .....and remember your mission..........yaa mission 'judging nikita' "

here riddhima and nikita also enterred the place....and went towards the same reserved table....

nikki: i think he is allready here [pointing towards dev and armaan sitting on that table].... hey they r the same people wee met outside .....but i wonder who is dev from both of them

riddh: [looking at them and then praying to god .....'oh god please he should not be dev.please he should not bee dev ....'

and same with armaan and dev ...they saw the girls aproaching them

and armaan praying ......"oh god she should not be nikita ..she should not be nikita please "

ridd: [acqwardly] hi ....r u dev ...? [hoping that he should say noo]

armaan: nikita? [conforming and hoping that she should say noo]...

but both felt highly dissapointed with each other nodds in approval

ridd: yaa i m nikita ....and she [pointing towards nikita] she is my friend riddhima

armaan: hi ..i m dev and he [pointing towards dev]...he is my friend armaan

after hello and hi they all 4 settlled there and there was a complete acqward silence

dev preffered to break the silence

dev: what will you ladies like to have

ridd: well i will have a cold coffee

dev: [confused as he is considerring riddhima as his net friend]...coffeee but you hated them

ridd: [tensed to bee caught and then surprised why he asking and not dev[armaan ] as he was nikita net friend] how did you knew that .i mean

dev: [realised the mistake ] oh actually ........dev [pointing towards armaan ]..he told mee ...that

armaan: [controlling the situation ]. yaa yaaa i told ...de [about to say dev but stopped] ...i mean i told armaan that you hate coffee

ridd: ohh...[now it was ridd turn to take care of the situation.]...yaa i hate coffee .but i have heard that they serve the best coffee soo i thought of trying it

armaan: oh ...fine ...let me order

they all just have started with mere chatting of what they studied and where they studied and when they came india and all..general talkings.when riddhima cell buzzed up

ridd: [seeing the call it was muskaan] ...just excuse mee [ picking the call]

conversation

ridd 'yaa muskaan'

muskaan: 'ridzy r u through with your work.i mean rahul is saying mee that wee shall go back to you girls i cant hold him for more time.'

ridd: [whisperring] 'muskaan please handle him for 5 minutes wee r comming in the parking area .in 5 minutes ..you bring him there please '

muskaan ' ok i will try '


after ending the call riddhima immediately asked the guys for a leave

ridd: i m sorry but wee need to leave now its somethink urgent and dev [to armaan] .you can call me later you allready have my number [actually nikita have dev number and vice versa]

after making a valid excuse nikita and riddhma walked out of the shop to the parking area and tried to act normal soo that rahul don't get suspicious about anythink

later
riddhima's room

nikki: [very excited] oh my god riddzs i don't belive this i actually met my chat friend oh hee was too good looking ..oh man he was actually very handsome even more than what i expected [talking about armaan as for them he is dev]

ridd: [sounding not soo interested].yaa he was

only them muskaan enterred the room

muskaan: ok girls.now will you mind giving an explanation why i had done all that keeping rahul away from you too and all

nikki: actually muski ...you wait i will explain you everythink

and after that nikita told muskaan everythink

musk: my god. you both r too much...well now what doo you think was hee a nice person or you still need time to judge him

nikki: i dont know ..... what do you think riddzs?

riddhima : i dont know i found him ok.i mean hee was very polite nice but still how can you judge a person in one meet..

nikki: you r right on that riddzs...ok we will think about that later now i m tired and its late also i think wee shall leave

ridd: where r you going .why dont you both stay over here only and by the way your parents are also out of town and you have to stay alone at your place

and soo the 3 girls started with there girls chat and after that retired there in riddhima room only


ON THE OTHER HAND

ARMAAN-DEV

they both dont felt like driving back 5 hours to there haveli soo they preffered to stay in the hotel only they booked a room for there stay

In the room

dev: gosh i never though that my chat friend would be that nice i mean dont you think she was domm beutiful

[talikng about riddhima aka nikita for him]

armaan: yes she was .[sounding lost ]

[ thinking-- why am i feeling bad ..i mean she was dev's net friend i know and she thought i was dev but her looks her eyes ..she was soo sweet innocent ...why she sounded soo similar too mee .why is she affecting mee soo much ...she was a girl i met her for the first time in my life still i found her soo familier to mee ....why]

dev: armaan ....i m talking to you where r u lost buddy

armaan: nothing .....i m a but tired wee will talk later,

and then they both retired in there dream world

ARMAAN DREAM......[a sweet dream]

he agian saw the same dream...of her dream girl....

a girl standing there cold breeze flowing .....on her face her duppattaa flying in air her face covered with her hairs .her eyes visible her green eyes the same eyes.....
but today he saw more than just eyes,
he saw the face clearly.all her hairs went away from her face ....same eyes,,same lips...same nose...it was RIDDHIMA [NIKITA FOR HIM
]...

and he got up with a jerk

armaan: gosh what was that, why i saw her she cant be my dreamgirl....she is NIKITA .SHE IS DEV CHAT FRIEND AND DEV IS MY BEST FRIEND..oh god what the hell i was thinking.gosh i need to sleep and get all these thought out of my mind


SAME TIME
RIDDHIMA

she was not able to sleep soo she came out in the balcony....she sat on the swing....there...

ridd: why am i thinking soo much about him. why had he affected me soo much ...
why was he sounding soo similar....why i felt soo secured in his arms when he hold me from falling...what the hell is happenening to me
why am i thinking soo much oh god he is dev nikki's chat freind and i have t just judge him that is he right for nikki ..my best friend yes i can doo this.i will doo this ...


and with that they both kept there thougts aside and leaving everythink to god
and rested the night for wellcomming a new morning

and mee to need a rest for tonight
next part tommorow for sure
Precap: armaan riddhima dev and nikita meet again still with changed identity
AR feelings getting stronger
and then riddhima and armaan went to a astrologer who confued the both of them a lot with his predictions

HOPE YOU ALL LIKED THE PART TILL NOW

WILL TRY AND UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON
TAKE CARE TILL THEN AND PLEASE DOO COMMENT .THAT MEANS A LOT
TAKE CARE
LOVE YOU ALL
SIMI
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
Hey Simi,
that was amazing how they were lost,
i hope this identity changed to real one soon to Armaan and Riddhima,
can't wait for the next meeting again wht will happen so please continue the next one so finally in Armaan dreams he saw her face cool,
thanx for the pm please continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
Hey Simi Awesome part...continue soonnn
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
hey dear...
amazing update....
sooooo Armaanz gets flashes of her face....
nd he also dreams about her,,,,
really interesting hun....
cant wait for them to realize their true identities....
soooo plzzzz do cont. soon!😃
Luv SAZ!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: tzahra

Hey Simi,

that was amazing how they were lost,
i hope this identity changed to real one soon to Armaan and Riddhima,
can't wait for the next meeting again wht will happen so please continue the next one so finally in Armaan dreams he saw her face cool,
thanx for the pm please continue soon.

hey tzahra
thanks a lot sweeety for your lovely response
yaa there identity gonna chane to real soon you dont worry
and you r wellcome sweety i will pm you with the next part soon
take care till then
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaziArmaan

hey dear...

amazing update....
sooooo Armaanz gets flashes of her face....
nd he also dreams about her,,,,
really interesting hun....
cant wait for them to realize their true identities....
soooo plzzzz do cont. soon!😃
Luv SAZ!

hey saz
thanks a lot for your lovely reply
yaa they will realise there true identity soon...
will countinue the part soon and will pm you with the update
take care till then
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
woah Simi its really an awesome one mind blowingso cuteand AR meet but think as opposite couple but nice to know both like each other plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


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