FF: Incomplete Life - Ch 21B on PG 76 & Note PG 78

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suwas

@suwas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#461

very unexpected pleasant surprise.

Jai overreacting to Bani's accident shows wht she means to him now.

HE hasn't talked to her about his concerns after meeting Pia......he should .

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Purnima

@-purnima-

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#462

not too dull part 😆😆............... it was a good1 😃.........
will wait 4 next ...continue soon 😃😃

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nema123

@nema123

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#463

Hey Dil.... wonderful update... this update was pretty quick... quite a surprize... 😉

Loved it..

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Shreshta

@ducky_euro

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#464

i think it was very sweet

we now atleast see how much jai cares for bani

cont soon

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Isa_de

@Isa_de

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#465

Great part.....very touching......pl zplzzzzz update soon ..........veeeeerrrrrrryyyyy Soon..

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Ramya

@iloveserials

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#466

Dil, That was fast......I didn't expect such a fast update from u though it's most welcome. (Touch wood)...keep up this speed of updating....Real good
Coming to the update, I can feel Love Is In The Air......for Jai. He got so worked up and tensed on seeing the minor fracture of Bani. He simply over-reacted because he was scared if something else major happened....of losing her....the last scene in the study was wonderful. It's high high time Jai admits to his feelings, clears all the misconceptions of whatever crap Pia told him and moves to the next ahem...ahem...level of their relationship. I agree he has come out from the denial mood to the next phase but now let's c how's he going to talk to bani and tell her his feelings?

He is so supportive of her in front of his family...he just did not let Krishna talk any further and silenced his mom sternly...Hmm....Wow..I'm impressed.

Awaiting the next part eagerly....

Cheers
Ramya

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#467

Thank u Dil for a beautiful update i just loved it. It is good to c that jai has cum out of his shell. It is a nice to c that their relationship is progressing slowly, loved the way he reacted from the time of the hospital were he yelled @ her & da punch to ranveer , his family right up to the end in the study. Keep up da good work

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#468

soo cute...

jai many u are too angry han... - kya punch mara hai ranveer ko....

but chalo finally alls well... between JB...

good to see their relation grow....

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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Rockyy_

@Rockyy_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#469

What can I say Dil. The last two chapters was just super.

Hope Jai talk to Bani seriously about Pia before things get out of hand.

It was too cute how JW behave when he found out Bani was learning to drive and broke her hand.

Continue with this happy writing mode you're in, take care.