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Posted: 16 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: mjhtac

ff part 8 shukla sir married:shushee in a cave continued
shukla explains they have to destroy the cell and the evidence to stay alive.a frantic search of the cave follows.the skies suddenly start a heavy downpour.shushee are stuck in the cave now due to the unrelenting rains."oohhhh this is soooo romantic" cooos sheena."imagine,being stuck here for ever?"
shukla shudders at the idea.he wonders aloud if any one with an iota of brains would find the notion of being starved and scared at night and the presence of bloodsucking mosquitoes romantic.
sheena raises an eyebrow.
shukla then remembers sheenas pathetic results in class and comments on it.
"stay on topic shukla ji!" retorts sheena."there are many ways to be sarcastic and respectful at the same time.everyone is entitled to their opinions at large.i dont know whats over the top with my idea of this being romantic.please donot call me brainless okay?"

shukla is irritated now.this woman looked like she had one brain cell in her entire body and it had gone on a siesta.

"hum aapke vichaaron ka anaadar nahi kar rahein hain mahodaya"shukla says looking scared.
"aww shukla ji,do I
intimidate you?"asks sheena playfully
but at that point a voice rings from above...
"this topic is considered flaming/inciting and will be closed.change topic now".
sheena resumes munching her biscuits.

__________________________________________________

its early morning.sheena is asleep.her mouth stretches wide and shuts with her snores.shukla makes a mental note to take sleeping pills before he went to bed that night.last time he had watched the jaws and had broke up with a cold sweat every hour.
shukla had resumed searching for the cell in the dead of the night.he had tried exploring some more cave graffiti,but gave up after an attempt to decipher any text in the jungle of huge smileys covering most of the walls.these smileys were on every wall,and after every alternative graffiti.

the rains had entered the cave and the floors were slippery now.a sound alerts shukla and he wakes sheena up.sheena slides on the grimy floor and shukla stumbles on a rock.the aftermath is that shukla is perched at a precarious angle of 60 degree and supported by the solid rock and sheena is bent at 30 degree supported by shuklas arms.they stare into each others eyes[here I fulfil the pgs request for a hot bubbling pass-on-ate scene].a red dupatta descends from heaven and covers both their heads.both of them try to get rid of the dupatta at once. sheenas frizzy locks tangle in the dupatta.shukla quickly tries covering his bald patch, cursing the dupatta profusely,for exposing it.

both wonder about the origin of the red dupatta and look up.turns out the dupatta was only gunjans harebrained scheme to pull out shushee from the predicament.

Unfortunately the dupatta is completely oily and stinky now,thanx to the chameli ka tel shukla religiously uses.

"sir,isine mujhe cave mein push kiya" sheena's tears are back and so are her hiccups."sir main to bas woh" gunjan starts explaining.shukla stops her "mahodaya'aapko vistaar mein varnan karne ki koi avashyakta nahee"

"yeah gunjan,no need to explain.we all know you are stupid" cackles sheena.shukla gives her a look that says "die sheena die"

"gunjan,u don't have to explain.no one believes sheena here.sabko pata hai tum aisa kar hi nahi sakti.tum mein itna dimaag hi nahi hai." Says a third voice.everyone looks up to see mayank standing on the ledge. "sheena whats the secret behind the endless supply of tears?"asks mayank. "oh that?shuklaji is standing on my foot since eternity" replies sheena

gunjan explains that she was only trying to get sheena and samrat together.she had overheard dia planning a night out by the caves with friends and had felt bad that sheena wasnt invited,so she went ahead and did the honors.only the plan was dias scheme to get rid of sheena.

Shukla is enraged.he threatens gunjan that he would give her a zero on her assignment.gunjan starts crying.sheena is very happy.shukla threatens sheena with her assignment too.sheena is still laughing.shukla looks puzzled.then he remembers sheena hasn't submitted her assignment at all.he threatens sheena with banning shorts from college.that wipes the smirk off her face.

Anyways,mappu man comes to the rescue again.with one solid kick,he breaks down the cave entrance and comes out with shukla and sheena. "Shukla ji,fansne mein kya aapne PhD kar rakhi hai?" shukla doesn't like the remark and goes "aaj kal ke vidyarthi'hmph" and smoothes his hair.

Shukla closes his eyes at mayank attire.he was wearing his slimy black CK ugs again.only this time over a spangled semi transparent sky blue spandex body suit,emblazoned with stars.he had accessorized it with a heart locket for special effect."mayank why arent u wearing a red cape?" asks sheena "all superheroes wear one" "I was wearing it."replies mayank indignantly "Gunjan was using it as a rope to pull you two out of the cave."

"Isnt this rakhi ji's welding day dupatta?"' "well yes"replies mayank sheepishly.recession time calls for drastic measures. "recycling clothes is a good idea".


credit : the mausi who haunted nehas thread is my inspiration for this section.😊😊😊
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1227699&TPN=9&#23589501



oh LORD!!!!.....🤣my stomach hurts...i loved this part....

sorry for reading and commenting on it sooo late......i was a bit distracted and a bit busy....a bit lazy.....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: mjhtac

ff:part 9:shukla sir married..is jungle se mujhe bachaooo

the group decides to search the forest on their way out.

The oh so fragile clothes of mayank catch on jungle bramble and tear.Mayank is mortified.His izzat is at stake.mayanks eyes fill up.

In true chivalrous style,shukla takes off his shirt and covers mayank with it.

Mayank gives a grateful smile[and adis wish of shukla topless is fulfilled.again]

Mayank cant take his eyes off shuklas body.

Shukla goes out into the sun and stretches out.he shows off his pink chest hair,pink mole on his back and a pink heart tattoo on his chest.his chest is covered with pink and purple feathers in a rather flamboyant fashion.vaguely,mayank is reminded of a flamingo.

Mayank exclaims "you look beautiful"[spoofofied from the twilight series].

shukla is annoyed..."this is the skin of a killer okay?"he says."iv killed many ladies with my looks during my days". some bird in a nearby tree takes offence to this and attacks shukla with her flock,pecking every inch of him.
"shukla ji do something" mayank talks to shuklas chest.shukla catches mayank staring and suddenly becomes conscious.

Shukla covers his chest with his hands.

Two rather bizzarely clothed people rush out of nowhere and chase away the birds.
one of them is wearing a donkey costume and the other is wrapped in a gift wrapping paper,with a pacifier in her mouth and is taking turns to gape at everybody.
"who are you?" asks mayank

"We are from the neighboring pool cum fancy dress party;we booked the farmhouse."

"And whos this?"

"Im thweety"'says the girl

"Say it again?"

"Thweety ..thweety"

"Shes sweety"'explains the donkey girl."she has bit of problem with pronunciations.she cant say c,d,f,g,j,k,l,m ,n,p,q,r,s,t,v,x, and z."

"Pretty extensive list" comments mayank

"thay thorry and cake chose words hack or I cell pappu god"

"eh?"

"Shes asking u to take ur words back or she will tell gaggu mod" explains donkey girl

"Oh.really?"

"yeah.she compensates for her lack of speech with her special powers with reporting and driving people crazy"

"u shtop it or I cell?"says sweety "pappu is a good fraiind of mine" "I dazzle coz of her"says sweety[in honor of a recent thread in which she celebrated her promotion on IFs]

"how?" asks mayank

"pappu god bullies and locks up people who talk more sense than her" explains the donkey girl

"Why would she do that?" asks mayank ,confused.

"Coz sweety sends 11 sms es to pappu in a span of 3 mins and generally is a nuiscance around pappu.there was no way one could not honor her requests.more than anything,pappu loves to get rid of her."

[character spoofofyied on snehu's demand...this character isnt a figment of my overactive imagination,she actually exists and is one of the most juvenaal characters haunting IFs..anyone who wants the link to her profile,pm me,il gladly oblige]
"right,thank you donkey.we are little busy at the moment"

"Don't call me that just coz im wearing this costume"retorts donkey girl,irately."my name's Stinky"

"Anyways.i have written a fan-fic about u.u fall in lowweee with a crocodile in it.i want u to blush, faint ,cry and drool when u read it."

Mayank gives an incredulous look "are you serious?"

"Want to hear it?"

"NO!!" they all shout collectively

"Ok"'says Stinky and she starts reading her fanfic

"Stinky,fudge off ok?" says sheena

Sheena,whats "fudge off?" asks stinky

"something you should google out" smirks sheena

Okay,exclaims Stinky happily and continues reading out the fan-fic for benefit of anyone who would listen

[spoofofied from my recent converstaion with ahem ahem in snehus thread]

"Stinky,what will u take to shut ur mouth?"

"Actually id like an admission in excel"

"Not possible sistah.u need an entrance test to clear for that".says mayank

"What entrance?"asks sheena."i paid 12 lakhs for admission"

"Mahodaya,apne atirikt buddhi ka zyaada upyog na kare" shouts shukla

"Shukla ji,sarcasm galore" says sheena

"Sarcastic?who?me?i genuinely think ur smart sheena..i have my utmost respect for ur opinions"

"Shukla ji we both know how u meant it.what u said is not important.if u choose to ignore the manner,then good day".says sheena[by now everyone is familiar with sanu's bff,do i need to explain more?]

"Shukla ji,theres my cellphone"'points sheena to a nearby tree.everyone looks up.a crow had decorated its nest with a multitude of objects ,including the phone[ok,I must say,I had to include this jungle task on adi's demand]

"Climb on my back mayank".sayas shukla.i ll give u a ride of a lifetime"[true twilight style].

Mayank climbs.

Shukla flaps his arms

"What are u doing,shukla ji??" asks mayank,scared.

"Trying to fly"Shukla gives a non-commital shrug .He climbs on a nearby boulder.the tip of mayanks nose touches the branch

"Aur thoda upar shukla ji"

Shukla stands on tiptoes

"Aur upar"

"Mahoday,agar aur upar gaya,to bilkul upar pahuch jaayenge"

Mayank rummages in the nest

"Mila?"

"Ha mil gaya"

Shukla heaves a sigh and hoists mayank off his back

Mayank is back with an armload of stuff and is looking cross

"Niche kyon utaara,shukla ji?"

Shukla goggles at the stuff in mayanks arms

"what?" says mayank defensively "these are my stuff,the bird nicked loads of my stuff"

"The lipstick and the mascara too?"aks shukla incredulously

"Right now mayank and the crocodile share a passionate eyelock"'continues stinky

"Stinky,cut it out"..everyone looks up at surprise at gunjans voice.gunjan temporarily shocked by her own confidence resumes her nervous chewing of nails and staring at the ground

"Where is sheenas cellphone mayank?" asks shukla

mayank scratches head.he had forgotten all about the cellphone.
"Wo dekho"'gunjan points out

The cell had just fallen from the nest to the nearby swamp.

Everyone looks at mayank

"Don't u guys think I ve been doing this too many times??on top of it I have taken a bath today." implores mayank.

Mayank asks shukla ji to do the honors.but shukla is still clutching his chest and refusing to meet mayank's gaze

Finally they collectively kick the donkey into the swamp



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Aditiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii........Damnnnnn.....u r a GENIUSSSS!!!!!!!!...GENIUSSSSS..... i tell u.....THIS is creativity .....pure creativity........i loved every word...yes every word...of this part....i m impressed out of my wits here..........oh...God!! you literally lapetofied everything from twilight to MJHT characters to MJHT forum characters as well.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: mjhtac

ff part 8 shukla sir married:shushee in a cave continued
shukla explains they have to destroy the cell and the evidence to stay alive.a frantic search of the cave follows.the skies suddenly start a heavy downpour.shushee are stuck in the cave now due to the unrelenting rains."oohhhh this is soooo romantic" cooos sheena."imagine,being stuck here for ever?"
shukla shudders at the idea.he wonders aloud if any one with an iota of brains would find the notion of being starved and scared at night and the presence of bloodsucking mosquitoes romantic.
sheena raises an eyebrow.
shukla then remembers sheenas pathetic results in class and comments on it.
"stay on topic shukla ji!" retorts sheena."there are many ways to be sarcastic and respectful at the same time.everyone is entitled to their opinions at large.i dont know whats over the top with my idea of this being romantic.please donot call me brainless okay?"

shukla is irritated now.this woman looked like she had one brain cell in her entire body and it had gone on a siesta.

"hum aapke vichaaron ka anaadar nahi kar rahein hain mahodaya"shukla says looking scared.
"aww shukla ji,do I intimidate you?"asks sheena playfully
but at that point a voice rings from above..."this topic is considered flaming/inciting and will be closed.change topic now".
sheena resumes munching her biscuits.

__________________________________________________

its early morning.sheena is asleep.her mouth stretches wide and shuts with her snores.shukla makes a mental note to take sleeping pills before he went to bed that night.last time he had watched the jaws and had broke up with a cold sweat every hour.
shukla had resumed searching for the cell in the dead of the night.he had tried exploring some more cave graffiti,but gave up after an attempt to decipher any text in the jungle of huge smileys covering most of the walls.these smileys were on every wall,and after every alternative graffiti.

the rains had entered the cave and the floors were slippery now.a sound alerts shukla and he wakes sheena up.sheena slides on the grimy floor and shukla stumbles on a rock.the aftermath is that shukla is perched at a precarious angle of 60 degree and supported by the solid rock and sheena is bent at 30 degree supported by shuklas arms.they stare into each others eyes[here I fulfil the pgs request for a hot bubbling pass-on-ate scene].a red dupatta descends from heaven and covers both their heads.both of them try to get rid of the dupatta at once. sheenas frizzy locks tangle in the dupatta.shukla quickly tries covering his bald patch, cursing the dupatta profusely,for exposing it.

both wonder about the origin of the red dupatta and look up.turns out the dupatta was only gunjans harebrained scheme to pull out shushee from the predicament.

Unfortunately the dupatta is completely oily and stinky now,thanx to the chameli ka tel shukla religiously uses.

"sir,isine mujhe cave mein push kiya" sheena's tears are back and so are her hiccups."sir main to bas woh" gunjan starts explaining.shukla stops her "mahodaya'aapko vistaar mein varnan karne ki koi avashyakta nahee"

"yeah gunjan,no need to explain.we all know you are stupid" cackles sheena.shukla gives her a look that says "die sheena die"

"gunjan,u don't have to explain.no one believes sheena here.sabko pata hai tum aisa kar hi nahi sakti.tum mein itna dimaag hi nahi hai." Says a third voice.everyone looks up to see mayank standing on the ledge. "sheena whats the secret behind the endless supply of tears?"asks mayank. "oh that?shuklaji is standing on my foot since eternity" replies sheena

gunjan explains that she was only trying to get sheena and samrat together.she had overheard dia planning a night out by the caves with friends and had felt bad that sheena wasnt invited,so she went ahead and did the honors.only the plan was dias scheme to get rid of sheena.

Shukla is enraged.he threatens gunjan that he would give her a zero on her assignment.gunjan starts crying.sheena is very happy.shukla threatens sheena with her assignment too.sheena is still laughing.shukla looks puzzled.then he remembers sheena hasn't submitted her assignment at all.he threatens sheena with banning shorts from college.that wipes the smirk off her face.

Anyways,mappu man comes to the rescue again.with one solid kick,he breaks down the cave entrance and comes out with shukla and sheena. "Shukla ji,fansne mein kya aapne PhD kar rakhi hai?" shukla doesn't like the remark and goes "aaj kal ke vidyarthi'hmph" and smoothes his hair.

Shukla closes his eyes at mayank attire.he was wearing his slimy black CK ugs again.only this time over a spangled semi transparent sky blue spandex body suit,emblazoned with stars.he had accessorized it with a heart locket for special effect."mayank why arent u wearing a red cape?" asks sheena "all superheroes wear one" "I was wearing it."replies mayank indignantly "Gunjan was using it as a rope to pull you two out of the cave."

"Isnt this rakhi ji's welding day dupatta?"' "well yes"replies mayank sheepishly.recession time calls for drastic measures. "recycling clothes is a good idea".


credit : the mausi who haunted nehas thread is my inspiration for this section.😊😊😊
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1227699&TPN=9&#23589501


@Black----🤣
Adiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii I love man this awesome Phun!!! god bless u for making us laugh like this!!!!!!!
Edited by monishanemo - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: mjhtac

ff:part 9:shukla sir married..is jungle se mujhe bachaooo

the group decides to search the forest on their way out.

The oh so fragile clothes of mayank catch on jungle bramble and tear.Mayank is mortified.His izzat is at stake.mayanks eyes fill up.

In true chivalrous style,shukla takes off his shirt and covers mayank with it.

Mayank gives a grateful smile[and adis wish of shukla topless is fulfilled.again]

Mayank cant take his eyes off shuklas body.

Shukla goes out into the sun and stretches out.he shows off his pink chest hair,pink mole on his back and a pink heart tattoo on his chest.his chest is covered with pink and purple feathers in a rather flamboyant fashion.vaguely,mayank is reminded of a flamingo.

Mayank exclaims "you look beautiful"[spoofofied from the twilight series].

shukla is annoyed..."this is the skin of a killer okay?"he says."iv killed many ladies with my looks during my days". some bird in a nearby tree takes offence to this and attacks shukla with her flock,pecking every inch of him.
"shukla ji do something" mayank talks to shuklas chest.shukla catches mayank staring and suddenly becomes conscious.

Shukla covers his chest with his hands.

Two rather bizzarely clothed people rush out of nowhere and chase away the birds.
one of them is wearing a donkey costume and the other is wrapped in a gift wrapping paper,with a pacifier in her mouth and is taking turns to gape at everybody.
"who are you?" asks mayank

"We are from the neighboring pool cum fancy dress party;we booked the farmhouse."

"And whos this?"

"Im thweety"'says the girl

"Say it again?"

"Thweety ..thweety"

"Shes sweety"'explains the donkey girl."she has bit of problem with pronunciations.she cant say c,d,f,g,j,k,l,m ,n,p,q,r,s,t,v,x, and z."

"Pretty extensive list" comments mayank

"thay thorry and cake chose words hack or I cell pappu god"

"eh?"

"Shes asking u to take ur words back or she will tell gaggu mod" explains donkey girl

"Oh.really?"

"yeah.she compensates for her lack of speech with her special powers with reporting and driving people crazy"

"u shtop it or I cell?"says sweety "pappu is a good fraiind of mine" "I dazzle coz of her"says sweety[in honor of a recent thread in which she celebrated her promotion on IFs]

"how?" asks mayank

"pappu god bullies and locks up people who talk more sense than her" explains the donkey girl

"Why would she do that?" asks mayank ,confused.

"Coz sweety sends 11 sms es to pappu in a span of 3 mins and generally is a nuiscance around pappu.there was no way one could not honor her requests.more than anything,pappu loves to get rid of her."

[character spoofofyied on snehu's demand...this character isnt a figment of my overactive imagination,she actually exists and is one of the most juvenaal characters haunting IFs..anyone who wants the link to her profile,pm me,il gladly oblige]
"right,thank you donkey.we are little busy at the moment"

"Don't call me that just coz im wearing this costume"retorts donkey girl,irately."my name's Stinky"

"Anyways.i have written a fan-fic about u.u fall in lowweee with a crocodile in it.i want u to blush, faint ,cry and drool when u read it."

Mayank gives an incredulous look "are you serious?"

"Want to hear it?"

"NO!!" they all shout collectively

"Ok"'says Stinky and she starts reading her fanfic

"Stinky,fudge off ok?" says sheena

Sheena,whats "fudge off?" asks stinky

"something you should google out" smirks sheena

Okay,exclaims Stinky happily and continues reading out the fan-fic for benefit of anyone who would listen

[spoofofied from my recent converstaion with ahem ahem in snehus thread]

"Stinky,what will u take to shut ur mouth?"

"Actually id like an admission in excel"

"Not possible sistah.u need an entrance test to clear for that".says mayank

"What entrance?"asks sheena."i paid 12 lakhs for admission"

"Mahodaya,apne atirikt buddhi ka zyaada upyog na kare" shouts shukla

"Shukla ji,sarcasm galore" says sheena

"Sarcastic?who?me?i genuinely think ur smart sheena..i have my utmost respect for ur opinions"

"Shukla ji we both know how u meant it.what u said is not important.if u choose to ignore the manner,then good day".says sheena[by now everyone is familiar with sanu's bff,do i need to explain more?]

"Shukla ji,theres my cellphone"'points sheena to a nearby tree.everyone looks up.a crow had decorated its nest with a multitude of objects ,including the phone[ok,I must say,I had to include this jungle task on adi's demand]

"Climb on my back mayank".sayas shukla.i ll give u a ride of a lifetime"[true twilight style].

Mayank climbs.

Shukla flaps his arms

"What are u doing,shukla ji??" asks mayank,scared.

"Trying to fly"Shukla gives a non-commital shrug .He climbs on a nearby boulder.the tip of mayanks nose touches the branch

"Aur thoda upar shukla ji"

Shukla stands on tiptoes

"Aur upar"

"Mahoday,agar aur upar gaya,to bilkul upar pahuch jaayenge"

Mayank rummages in the nest

"Mila?"

"Ha mil gaya"

Shukla heaves a sigh and hoists mayank off his back

Mayank is back with an armload of stuff and is looking cross

"Niche kyon utaara,shukla ji?"

Shukla goggles at the stuff in mayanks arms

"what?" says mayank defensively "these are my stuff,the bird nicked loads of my stuff"

"The lipstick and the mascara too?"aks shukla incredulously

"Right now mayank and the crocodile share a passionate eyelock"'continues stinky

"Stinky,cut it out"..everyone looks up at surprise at gunjans voice.gunjan temporarily shocked by her own confidence resumes her nervous chewing of nails and staring at the ground

"Where is sheenas cellphone mayank?" asks shukla

mayank scratches head.he had forgotten all about the cellphone.
"Wo dekho"'gunjan points out

The cell had just fallen from the nest to the nearby swamp.

Everyone looks at mayank

"Don't u guys think I ve been doing this too many times??on top of it I have taken a bath today." implores mayank.

Mayank asks shukla ji to do the honors.but shukla is still clutching his chest and refusing to meet mayank's gaze

Finally they collectively kick the donkey into the swamp



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ADI U ROCK DUDE EVERTHING WAS STUNNING ABT THIS ONE RITE FRM D BEGINING TO D END!!!!
Loved it!!!:)
ouch my stomach hutrs u had twilight, mjht n forum characters in one ff *claps*

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Posted: 15 years ago
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FF:PART 10:AFTER THE CELLPHONE IS FOUND:
the retrieval of the phone did little to boost the teams spirits.they had run out of time already and there were seconds remaining until they all died.mayank checked his watch. "theek 8 baje hum uss cave se nikle the.....8:30 pe hume woh cellphone mil gaya.....8:45 tak we retrieved it.....its 9:15 and none of us have been able to switch it on yet"

"ooooh.......mayank ur sooo intelligent" ...nupur batts her lashes. "mayank is on his detective mode now.he will totally crack this code"
mayank preens.
"mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aaya"..says samrat with a confounded expression.
"thats ur bachpan ka problem samrat,uska ab kuch nahi ho sakta"
"par mayank,iska matlab to yeh hua ki"...gunjan stares wide eyed at mayank,then samrat[who gives her a reassuring nod],then at nupur[who gives her a thumbs up],then at dodo[whos snoozing] and finally back at mayank

"haan gunjan" says mayank with an exasperated sigh."iska matlab yeh hua ki hum me se cellphone chalana kisi ko nahi aata."
samrat gapes at gunjan.....gunjan ignores him.he has that expression on ever since she put on her new braces.

"but mayank,all this calculation doesnt explain why none of u died yet" asks dia

shukla picks up a stray piece of straw nearby and tickles mayank's nose with it.ACCCCHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOO!! sneezes mayank. the breeze blows of a portion of shukla's hair and reveals his bald patch.

"ILU ILU...ILU ILU"amarjeet enters.
"amarjeet ji,are u stalking us?" asks sheena
"what was that word again??"amarjeet asks enthusiastically
"err,stalking"
WORD FOR THE DAY:stalking
"main rakhi ko stalk kar raha tha" explains amarjeet "im just back from the hospital...and think i know why none of u died...see ,rakhi cursed everyone who had seen her real face that they would die in 7days..the doctors who fixed her nose are dead already."

"what!!the curse worked then???"

"dont know.might have.im rooting for death due to shock of seeing her real face"
"i see....what about those poor visitors she has at the hospital?"
"them??"scoffs amarjeet"bunch of stalkers..they dont even feature in the metered zones.they simply visit her there coz they want a piece of the media pie."

scene shifts to rakhi at the hospital

plastic surgery recovery ward

rakhi is moaning on her bed.the patient next to her on the bed is covered from head to toe in bandages and is making incomprehensible sounds.

"mujhe jaan boojh ke aisa patient kyun diya in hospital waalon ne??kabhi sota hi nahi hai.din bhar sirf rota rehta hai.balti bhar bhar ke"

"main yahan se jaa rahi hoon...i quit this place" packs her bag and prepares to leave. sigh of relief heard from corner.

3mins back "im not going to quit...media ko bulao...i wanna make a public announcement.main yahaa se kahi nahi jaa rahi...iv talked to other personnel in the hospital,they all want me to stay"

"dont go rakhi" pleads a phan
"rakhi if u leave,ill quit working here" says another
"sweety,u dont work here.ur just stalking rakhi" says amarjeet calmly.
a baby starts wailing aloud in the commotion

rakhi screams "shut it!!i hate babies"

the patient on the next bed looks scandalized .. a sightly nasal feminine singsong voice speaks up "i love children...i find jesus in children.children love jesus juice"
rakhi recognizes the voice and quicky kisses her cross.
"i meant to say...main ek acchi maa ban sakti hoon...mujhe bacche bahut acche lagte hain...kaun yeh shoot kar raha hai...cut out this scene will u?"




Edited by mjhtac - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Adi..... I am having hard time to choose words to express so....

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I have never seen this many characters in one piece.....Marvel of creativity.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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^^LOL AJ u actually liked it??i thought it wasnt worth posting and frankly iv run out of ideas...i was thinking of taking suggestions from u guys before i put together this part..u know the previous parts were contributions from most of the IBL gang...sanu,adi,shamil,rama...everyone put in their ideas,which id chindified...id love it if u put in ur suggestions too😊😊
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^Adi, Lemme think... I am working and I needed a break so...LOL....well..I am pretty sure I will be saturated and start getting chindi ideas...will post in IBL....look up there....or I can put it here too..........😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sure...post wherever u want...if its an idea i can chindify,ill surely do it😉
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"mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aaya"..says samrat with a confounded expression.
"thats ur bachpan ka problem samrat,uska ab kuch nahi ho sakta"
"par mayank,iska matlab to yeh hua ki"...gunjan stares wide eyed at mayank,then samrat[who gives her a reassuring nod],then at nupur[who gives her a thumbs up],then at dodo[whos snoozing] and finally back at mayank

"haan gunjan" says mayank with an exasperated sigh."iska matlab yeh hua ki hum me se cellphone chalana kisi ko nahi aata."
samrat gapes at gunjan.....gunjan ignores him.he has that expression on ever since she put on her new braces.

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AWEFOME adi!!.🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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