MAYUR FF - KIDNAP.. ~~updated part 6 page 34.35~~ - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
Awesome part plzzzzzzzzzzz continue it.i'm wating for update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
hi.
I like it
its too different.
that's why i enjoy it.
Plz PM me ur update.
thanx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
Update soon re!!.im waiting
and ive edited my comment on pg-2!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
ok gals... thank u so much for ur responses.... here i go updating ma part 2 in a few minutes...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: palak5

Heya Priya..i know im super duper late..but please forgive me coz i cudnt come online for so many days..i know u understand!😉

Hailllaaaa!!!!..Haiiiccchhii!!...when you told me you are thinking of starting a FF ..i really (i swear i was)..i was wondering whether are you about to write the same lovey dovey start for mayur?..not that i mind such FFs..but i knew that your start would be diferent ..something off beat and unusual..and there you go..!!!...amazing priya..(missin you..have not met for long)..!!
All the best..i loved the first part..and where my name in the pm list???..u forgot me.!!!!LOL..

Palku dear.. missing u too jaanu... and thanks for ur valuable comments... ... i wanted ur confirmation to add in PM list.. tatz y... now tat u confirmed u are straight there in ma list... how can i forget ma dadiji.. 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Ok guys.. I think enuf of suspense.. I shall jus introduce all the names. Character introduction will come on the later episodes'.

G1 - Mayank

G2 - Ranvijay (RV)

G3 - Samrat

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Ok now we shall start on with the episode'

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At the coffee table

All the 3 guys are seated and having their sandwich with utter silence' then suddenly speaks up samrat.

Samrat ' Abhey tum dono ko kya lagtha hei???

Mayu & RV ' (in a single tone) kiske bare mei bol rahe ho samrat.

Samrat ' Jo kam humne aaj kiya, uske bare mei

RV ' mujhe pata nahi. Tab jo suja maine bola. Par'.

Mayank ' (cuts RV half way) Par kya RV.. tumhara idea hi tha na' Abhey tum dono ko mujhe support karni hei.

Samrat & RV ' Haan yaar support toh karenge hi karenge par'..

Mayank ' (cuts them half way) Par ab kya???

Samrat & RV ' hume ab thora darr hei'

Mayank ' sach bolun toh, mujhe bhi darr hei.. Itna dere hua, aur who abhi tak hosh mei nahi aayi'. Extra dose toh nahi hua hoga na'

Mayank, Samrat & RV ' (in a single tone) Ab kya hoga.

All three are worried now. They dnt understand wat to do now. But in a few minutes they hear a dragging noise from the next room.

Samrat ' Mayank dekh toh sahi. Woh hosh mei hei lagtha hei.

Mayank - tum dekho.. mei khaa raha hoon.

Samrat - hey dude.. tum bhi na. chal mei hi dekh kar aata hoon

Samrat goes to the other room.

Samrat - hey nupur. Sab teek toh hei na??

Nupur - uhmmm hmmmmm'.

Samrat - yeh kya hei nupur.. kuch samaj mei nahi aaya,' teek se kaho na

Nupur ' hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm '.

Samrat - Mayank idhar aao' kuch problem hei dude.

Mayank & RV comes running to the room to see wat has happened..

Mayank - Ab kya hua samrat??

Samrat - Who kuch bol nahi paarahi hei.

Mayank ' usske muh toh kholo. Nahi toh who kaise bolegy.

Samrat opens the cloth tied around nupurz mouth. All 4 look at each other. Rv & samrat leaves the room to have their sandwich. Mayank stands there in the room where nupur is tied holding his sandwich.

Mayank keeps staring at nupur. She jus looked too cute with that single ray of light falling on forehead and the twinkling sweat drops.

FB: This is the first time tat mayank has seen nupur in this angle. They always used to have fights and ego-clashes. Clashes over studies, about friends, any issue ended up in clash. And this was the main reason of this kidnap move.

Mayank - (eating his sandwich) teek ho na.. ?

Nupur - Mujhe yahaan kyoon lekhe aaye ho?? Kya problem hei tum logon ko? Mujhe ghar wapas jaana hei. Mujhe sab ke saat picnic mei jaana hei.. Chodo mujhe.

Mayank - Chodenge tujhe magar ab nahi. Jab rite time aaye tab chodenge. So uske bare baat karke mera time waste mat karo.

Nupur - Mujhe bhook bhi lagy hei.. sirf tum khaoge ya mujhe bhi khilaoge???

Mayank - Sandwich khaogy???

Nupur - Haan.. Usme beetroot, cucumber, onion, tomato gool gool khatke dalna. Aur cheese bhi. Extra cheese daalna.

Mayank - Tum yeh mat bhoolna ki humne tumko kidnap kiiya hei. Aur tere yeh demand fulfil nahi hoga. Jo mei lekhe aaonga use hi khana padega.

Mayank goes to the next room, makes the sandwich for nupur and gives it to her.

Nupur - Wah. Thank u. Itni jaldi lekhe aayeho. Bahut bhook lagi hei.. Abhi khilao.. Mere haath baande hei.

Mayank - Ophs sorry nupur. Abhi khol detha hoon. (Opens up nups handcuff of cloth and gives her the sandwich and sees the way she has it)

(she starts eating the sandwich with gr8 feel, by then she starts to hiccup)

Mayank - tum haule haule nahi khaaogy kya??? (Takes the bottle with water) Yeh piyo.

Nupur drinks the water and carries on with the sandwich whereas mayank is in all stares seeing her expressions.

After having the sandwich and drinking water, nupur feel too bored and hence plans to walk. By her forgets that her legs are tied. She starts to walk tat she trips-off and is about to fall by then mayank holds her by the waist and looks into nupur's eyes.. They have a eye-lock and '''..

' To be continued

ok gals.. i knw its a high dose of such stuffs.. but u will have to bare with me as the further updates will bring out the actual reason for kidnapping... till then enjoy this...

Gals if u want me to PM u all, pleasae add me to ur friendz list... thank u for ur support...
Edited by little_dragon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

hey yaar plz update soon na

im waiting to know why he kidnap nups

i will be letting u knw dear... wait for a while... in the next next episodes reasons will come up

Originally posted by: nikki028

promo bhi dikhaadi....update kab dikhaaogi yaar???????i really really wanna knw y mayu kidnapd nups?????????????????😳

haaa... suspense enjoy karoji... surely it will b reealed..

Originally posted by: ch0c0lates

Ok you are keeping me on my toes....i am wondering why did Mayu Kidnap Nupur....please update soon!

suspense kills dear... i love to kill...

Originally posted by: preethis

y did mayank kidnap nupur??????????????

suspense dear.. keep waiting...... coming soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

How can Mayu kidnap Noops?

tatz the fun dear... mayu kidnapping nupz...

Originally posted by: -Neelam-

Plzz continue soon waiting to see why he kidnaped Nups!!!!

will b letting out soon...

Originally posted by: sweetgalFats

hey yar! gud! i m waitng for ur update! thanx for the pm!

few more episodes to reveal the reason....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
hi
i'm jassica really like ur ff
plzz continue soon
i'll be waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
Kya baat hai priya, ye angle tho sahi hai..!! 😃

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