MAYUR FF - KIDNAP.. ~~updated part 6 page 34.35~~

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: ranjana_c

Hey, great ff. I love the different concept. It's simply WOW! Plz update soon and add me to ur pm list plz.

hey thank u so much... will add u to ma PM list... .

Originally posted by: adi_gupta
awesome awesome
and a lot of awesome

pehle to kaam karo phir daro

wow now they trio are affarid one thing nups is kidnaped and picnic

well they seriously kidnaap her or all r joking for some prank

very nice part

maynk has some feeling for nupur

im curious and want to read more so soon update

and thx for pm me the update

sorry for ur trouble

its sorta cool story... u all will enjoy the roller coaster ride...

Originally posted by: robinblue91
first ov all sorry for late reply...
was kinda lil buzy..!!
um.. very interesting part...!!
i m luvin every word ov it..!!
now curious abt the kidnap thing..!!
update soon..!!

kidnap made me too curious to write more... thank u so much for liking.

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg
wow...plz add me2 d pm list
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sure not a problem...

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
Loved the update on pg. 7.
Sorry yaar i am so late.
Mayu, Sammy n RV kidnapped Noops but y is she so relaxed n not worried. Finally Mayu found time to look her n feel something for her. She was ordering just like she is in a cafe but Mayu fulfilled her dersire n made her eat with his hands, so cute.
Mayu held her too when she was about to fall, lovely.

they are college friends... so all chill...

Originally posted by: mjht_fan
hi dear
when is the next update

i can't wait this long

Jassica update coming soon...

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: fiona
hey, ur FF looks interesting, want to read more. plz PM me when u update, i have also added you to my buddy list.😊

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Nirjhor thanks a lot... added u to ma buddy list..

Originally posted by: ananya_s
plz pm me wen u continue......i loved ur story alot!!!

sure dear... u r in..

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plz pm me when u continue

sure yaar,...

Originally posted by: rkmnkp
Plez Priya di
don't forget me.

I loved it.

Iam waiting 4 the next part

Love Lina😊

sure LINA.. how to forget u... ur in...

Originally posted by: hasiii
Very Interesting FF. Please pm me when you update. Please!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Ok Gals.. .Here goes todayz update... I enjoyed it.. Hope u all toooo enjoy..

Idea for this part given by PREETHIS (Priti - My SBG Sis)

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PART 3

This eye-lock went for sometime, until Samrat called for Mayank. It was evening and they had to go home. Mayank stayed back as Nupur was tied-up and had to be back alone. The other 2, RV & Samy left to home.

After sometime Nupur calls for Mayank, as she was all left alone and Mayu was in the other room. She wanted some1 to accompany her. Staying alone was never a character in her blood.

Nupur : Mujhe bhook lagi hei.

Mayank : Abhi toh tum Sandwich khayi ho.

Nupur : Voh kya hei na mera mouth bandh nahi rehta. Agar mein kisse se baath karti rahi toh koi problem nahi.

Mayank : Mujhe tumhari baaton par koi interest nahi.

Mayu goes to the other room makes sandwich for her. Jus as she had told earlier, the same way he prepares it.

Mayank : Yeh lo tumhari sandwich tumhare swaad anusaar...

Nupur eats her sandwich. Kuch dinon ke liye aisa hi chalta raha. RV & Samy used to come in the morning, stay out with mayank until evening and get back home at night. They used to get new cloths for Nupur and for Mayank too. Only after this kidnaping Nupur started to mingle well and get friendly with RV & Samy.

But Mayank aur Nupur ke beech mei aisa hi Nokh-Jhok, cute eye-locks and some nice nice talks chalta raha.

Ek din raat ko Mayank bahut bore ho raha tha toh socha Nupur ke saat time pass karein.

Nupur : Aa gaye ... Roz ki tarah meri sandwich kahaan hei??

Mayank : Aaj sandwich nahi le aaya. Tum khake bahut motti horahi ho.

Nupur : Nahi, tumhari khilaane ka asar hei. By God !!!!

Mayank : Teek hei. Aaj hum kuch baatein karte hei.

Nupur : Toh mei shuru karty hoon. Yeh batao tumne mujhe kidnap kyoon kiya?

Mayank : Tumhe yaad hei, tumne sare college ke saame bet lagaai thi ki mein tumhari enjoyment ko rokh nahi saktha. Tumne mere dance rehersals aur competition ko chod kar college tour mei concentrate karithi na....

(Mayank is the cultural Rep of the college)

Mayank : Dekha ab kya hua. Tumhare ghar mei sab soche rahe hoonge ki tum tour gayi ho aur tour mei tumhare friends ko laga hoga ki tum bhimaar ho aur ghar pei ho. Par afsos, tum nahi ghar mei ya tour mei enjoy kar rahi ho.. Yahan pade pade bore ho rahi ho... Dekha mei bet jeetgaya...

Nupur : (expression & thoughts) is taken by surprise or shock.. Mixed feeling.. shez glaring mayank giving a asking look for y?? y such a step????