3rd episode of MJMM FFF updated...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Guys and Girls,
am back...If the previous episode was not faltoo enuff I have some more stuffs lined up for you...


Episode 2-

M wakes up the next morning with an aching body....he feels baffled and with a strange tingling feeling in his head.
He wonders what he is doing near the pool, looks around and sees no one...

M-yahan is waqt ... mein kya kar raha hoon??

Then he remembers the happenings of the previous night...and eventually about magarmachhii..

M-kya meine sapna dekh raha tha? kya sachmuch woh sab mere saath hua jo mujhe yaad hai?

At that time Dodo comes from behind and taps mayank on the shoulder.

D-mayank, tum yaha akele baithey fishing kar rahe they kya? by the way mein tumhe keh doon yahan fishing allowed nahi hai, samrat is an animal lover...

M gives D an ugly stare

D-mein toh bass puchh raha tha.... okk then mein chalta hoon..(to himself)- ye
Mayank mujhey aise dekhta hai jaise ki mein koi bakra hoon aur woh shere...par nupur ke saamney toh woh kuchh aur hi ban jata hai...makes a foolish expression, goes away..

M is left all alone sitting by himself...he starts talking to himself,

Tum kaun thi? itnee khoobsoorat...itnee komal..itnee masoom...itnee nazook.
tumse milke mujhe kuchh hone laga hai, jaise ki koi chemical reaction jo irreversible ho...

then he cups some water in his hand and says....

Is paani se tumhaari khooshboo aati hai (smells the water) kya tum sachh ho?
par yeh mujhey kya ho raha hai?
woh mujhey pyaar kartii hai yeh sunke mujhe itnee khushi kyun ho rahi hai???


COMMERCIAL BREAK for 15 minutes-kabz haar ki add, soap ka add,floor cleaner, bathroom cleaner add etc...

Viwers all wondering why is M falling in love so fast??usey lagi hai kya??


Episode resumes


Scene shifts to Nupur and Gunjan

Gunjan is shown crying.. she has already cried 30 buckets,
they all are getting donated to a free hospital(as saline) but the cause for her sadness is not shown cos the director herself has no track of it....

N-gunjan mat ro... mein sheena se kal baat karungi aur usey pata chal jayega ki
nupur bhushan ke behen ko rulana usey kitna bhari padne wala hai....

G- di pls yeh meri galtii thi, mein hi uske aur samrat ke beech aa gayi

N- nahi gunjan tuu bahoot bholee hai, sade ladke ek jaise hotey hai..

G- Par Sheena toh ladki hai !!!!

N- JO BHI HO... tu bata is baar usne kya kiya??

G trying to change the subject says-Di tumhare aur mayank ke beech sab theek ho gaya na??

N-tu toh uska naam hi mat le.. woh mujhey 1000000 times sorry bolne se mana kar raha hai.par main bhi nupur bhushan hun usey Insaan se Superman na banaya toh Morena ka naam badal de na..

G-di U are the best...

N and G have a warm hug and go to sleep...

Episode finished.

MN fans-wondering
sajan fans-yawning
Magarmachhi fans- crying,cos there was no magarmachhi scene today...

The title track plays and the Title becomes clear-Miley Jab MAYANK ur MAGARMACHHII.....

Written,directed,created by- Rinky(inspired from Mtv,Animal Planet,Hindi movies,serials etc...)
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-Rinky- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sorry guys and girls i made a separate post.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hahahahahahahaha i am enoying this yaar...
keep up the good work...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey rinky! u r too gud yar! tumhari jai ho! u r a rockstar! Very cool update! cool kyunki mayu is sitng near the pool! hahaha! rhymng bhi aa gaya! Nywz very nice yar! plz do continue! Thanx for the pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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fultoo fundooooooooo
🤣🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣 🤣🤣🤣🤣
loving ur ff's
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Posted: 16 years ago
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That's darn funny....i simply needed this laugh right now...keep on writting hun and don't forget to PM me :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rinkyyyyyyy...too good man... hilarious..esp the gunjan crying and mayank romancing parts cracked me up..Keep it up.. plsss do continue writing..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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again it was so funny
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Posted: 16 years ago
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the most fresh of the lot.i am loving & laughing @ it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hilarious!
my smile is just not going from my face!

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